Luki

https://discord.gg/XPKaPzr My bad!

That really makes no sense at all… he never knew a super saiyan, you mention his dad, and the royal family … so they weren’t killed technically! Try to rewrite it with a little more sense please

Wait… why did he fear the super saiyans ? And … How did he appear on earth? I don’t get it

OH silly me! I forgot to tell you to ad substancial things! Like an Story, name and of course your discord… My bad !

you didnt write the discord sir! I can’t add you otherwise! (you are in!)

You didnt mention the sealing, or how they did it, or what demon was it

And what happened after that? what was the beast? What is their goal?

Someone would have to be stupid to not get you 2 in… Please! have a well earned spot!

Hey! I am okay with keeping your character a mistery but i cant accept someone with NO story at all . The story feels too weak and you even dont really say much about the character

I understand you. Learning english can be difficult. I’d like to speak with you in private

It was going good until “he mastered god and Kaioken” that kinda breaks the story into pieces

This is goku’s story with another name. Please stop. If it’s a joke it’s not funny. It’s just sad

you must be joking right?

it’s still king kai with mod-model. Sorry XD I can’t accept that

I need the full discord name! (name and numbers)

Uhm… this is a bit better but if we remove godly ki (at least the skill to fight at god-level) you should be good

I LOVED EVERY SINGLE PART OF THIS!!! ABSOLUTELY IN! Congratulations! Dbz and dbs are not-cannon … but we can fix that!