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Dragon Block C Roleplay!
Hello everyone, I’m bringing to you a Dragon Block C server that is strictly role play. This server is going to allow you to create your own Dragon Block C Character. If you want to be evil, you can be evil and be a villain. If you want to be a good guy, you can be a good guy. The choice is yours. There is no definitive story to the server (Although all the characters from the anime will be in the roleplay).The server is white-listed to prevent people from ruining the experience for all those who want to role play.
First and foremost, you will be making an application that I will judge to determine whether or not you will be on the server. You can choose between 6 races.
Races:
Saiyan: There are restrictions on your transformations, which you can rid yourself through a roleplay reason and having a high enough bp. Hardest race to apply for. disadvantages include; Not being able to become a super saiyan without a genuine reason, pride doesn’t count as a reason.
Half- Saiyan: There are restrictions on your transformations, which you can rid through a roleplay reason and a high enough bp. Second hardest race to apply for. Can become a super saiyan slightly easier Disadvantages: considered inferior by saiyans, lack of pure fighting drive.Human: Most well balanced, have Buff Form. Most well accepted, most lenience in back story The application still has to be good, but it doesn’t have to be as ridiculous as other races. (You can use mostly any skin of your choice as long as it fits the lore)
Namekian: Can fuse with another Namekian(npc) once for a power boost, otherwise similar traits to humans. Namekians will also start with the ability to fly
Majins: You start off with fly and endurance. You must choose human with a skin that is a majin.
Arcosian (Frieza’s Race): : The Frieza race is an agile race, There are also restrictions on when you can go up in a transformation, which you rid yourself of through getting a high enough bp.
– Template for Submission Application –
Name: Self-Explanatory
Gender: Male or Female
Race: Choices from above
Age: Self-Explanatory
Personality:What is your character like? How does he act to others?
General Appearance: You can either describe the gi outfit you would like, battle armor outfit and scouter color you would like if you are saiyan or arcosian, or your minecraft skin you’ll be using, plus hair styles, hair colors, tail or no tail, etc… Do not copy people in the show, you can use gi and armors from the characters from the show and make custom outfits with your gi please.Please try to come up with a creative story from scratch rather than copying dbz and saying something
Backstory: This is your characters history. If you are a saiyan or an arcosian, you can get battle armor and a scouter if you the correct cardServer Rules: Please do not curse an obscene amount. Some cussing is okay, but don’t go over board using extreme swear words. (Ex. F#*!&)
Griefing is ONLY ALLOWED if you have a feud that the other person knows about and it’s their house. Otherwise, no griefing, it can get you banned.
Play nice. You’re character can be unlikable, but don’t be unlikable yourself.Dragon Blocks are very rare for some custom wishing. and will allow a lot of wishes, just nothing ridiculous.
Dying from another player in RP requires someone to summon Shenron or Porunga to revive you. Shenron can revive multiple people once, while Porunga can revive people one by one an infinite amount of times. When you die, if you would wish to make a new character rather than wait for someone, you can make a new character. So, if you’d like to switch from human to arcosian, you can do so. Staff is not needed to revive someone that died from RP.
The Schedule:
TBA (To Be Announced)Saga missions are off..
Note: I made the configs to make a realistic DBZ FeelOnce there is a decently sized group of people wanting to join, we will release the ip and mods to the group as a whole at the same time. Good luck with your application.
Note: From my personal stand point, when you are making your class please don’t all go for Saiyan/Half saiyan Get creative, try getting a little out of your comfort zone. After reading this, if you still want to be a saiyan or half-saiyan, I’m not stopping you. Go for it, but you better make a really good character. Also if your submission is accepted I’ll send you a pm with my discord. Good Luck 🙂
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Name: Rigen
Gender: Male
Race: Namekian
Age: 24
Personality: He is a very rogue person, but dosen’t boast about his achievements, he’s not the slient type either, he enjoys making new friends and he also enjoys fighting.
General Appearance: Wears Yardrat Looking Armor with a color reshade of Brown, Orange, And Purple. His Skin Color is Purple and His head is the spiky Mohawk looking due from DBXV. His eye color is red.
Backstory: He lived in poverty and famine, Due to a huge empire taking all resources from his planet, he was part of a resistance and they all gotten killed. When he became 15 he flew to earth in a spaceship and lived there…. Now he is 24 and this is where the story takes placeMy Discord is superciano#3403
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Name: Rafen
Gender Male
Race Half Saiyan
Age 10
Personalty: Born In Plant Vegeta Trains To Be As Strong As His Day Loves To Spar With people
When He was Ten Years Old Suddenly A Person Named Frieza Came With Solders He Fought Him WIth his Captain Named Yicen His Captain Was Killed In Cold Blood I Was Scared And Ran To The Space Pods There was Gonna Five Of Them I Went In One Of Them And Clicked a Random Button That sent him flying To Earth Suddenly He Was Tired Out So When He Got Out He Passed Out And A Few Humans Came To Save Him They Teached Him About Stuff In The Earth World But I Didn’t Remember Anything
And Then He Lived in A Shop Working There For Days He Always Protects It And Then He Meets Rozen
His Cuzen He Forgot Who He was He Told Him About him He Was A Kind Fighter And He Was Not A Saiyan He Was A Human That was Stronger Then Me Luckey Then Someone Came To My Shop while i was Cooking Roasted Fish and Potatos And He Used His Ki To Blast It Open He was there to Steal Stuff So I Came Up There And Tried To Fight Him He was too strong so i backed off and called my cuzen to help and we doubled teamed him and suddleny he says You Will Die In 5 Years And My Cuzen Says We Will Be Ready For Anything that happens He Trained Me To Be Strong Like him he teached me about ki and we starts Our Adventure
Discord Tag:SuperDemiro09#6825
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Name – Angel
Gender – Female
Race – Human
Age – 18Personality – She’s very friendly, and although she’s slightly shy around new people, she enjoys making new friends. She generally doesn’t like fighting, only fighting when she must, which may be considered a weakness, but she’ll do anything to help her friends however she can.
General Appearance – Her outfit resembles Gohan’s Saiyaman outfit without the cape, but a navy blue instead of green. She has long blonde hair, and blue eyes.
Backstory – Her parents passed away when she was very 4, leaving her brother and herself to fend for themselves. Living in a militaristic city, where you were either broke, or a fighter, her brother, 12 at the time, became a fighter so they could live a decent life. When Angel was 12, she demanded her brother train her, so she would be able to help him. After a lot of persistence, he agreed to train her. He trained her whenever he had time to go home, which was only a few times a month. When Angel was 14, her brother died during a war against a neighbouring city. She blamed her hometown for his death and ran away, swearing to never return. After weeks of traveling, barely surviving, she found an abandoned house in the middle of a large forest, close to a small town. She cleaned up the place the lived there, occasionally visiting the town for small jobs so she would be able to afford food and such. She continued her training at home. 4 years later, Angel had become an unofficial official hero to the town, having defended it a few times from strong bandits and such, as the town didn’t have fighters.
This is what the outfit looks like (except navy blue instead of green) – http://img12.deviantart.net/196d/i/2011/189/0/f/gohan_ssj_greatsaiyaman_by_maffo1989-d3i39ho.png
I haven’t quite made the skin yet, but it’s really late right now, so I’ll be sure to do it later!
Discord – Dream Limit#2986
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Needs to improve on his backstory. How or why was he in The Frieza Force? Why did he become a mercenary? How did he get to (whichever planet)? Who and how gave the opportunity to Leuda to redeem himself? You can still use Leuda; I haven’t denied this yet, of course. But you need to add more information to it.
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Improved, though Id be prefer if you added it to your backstory. Also I would like if you can add more to the end. But besides that it’s looking well. Although, your backstory may change slightly due to the lore of story, we’ll try not to though. Once we see an improved a final decision will be made.
Note: Use Happy Fappy’s character backstory as an example, just to get a general idea of how it may get you accepted into the discord and server.
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Name: Zik
Gender: Male
Race: Majin
Age: 150
Personality: Zik is proud majin creature, he’s not evil or good, he is neutral.
He is very proud, zik very love fight, he never run from his enemy.
General Appearance: He is purple Majin, he is using buu armor, black/red eyes, white pants, black/red boots. *skin* –> http://imgur.com/a/GAVlJ
Backstory: Zik is a detached part of Buu, when Buu destroying Galaxy, he lose part of body and thats how Zik born, Zik after this went to sleep for 150 years.sry for “bad english” and if it is only voice roleplay pls reject my application, if it is roleplay on minecraft chat or something like this then you can accept my application if you want.
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My character’s name is Cinder, of the Arcosian clans from Universe 4. She belonged to the royal bloodline, a family not unlike Frieza’s, who were feared throughout their universe. Despite being born incredibly strong, with the universe at her mercy, she wanted more. While not inherently cruel like her kin, she had a lust for a good fight, and always ended up being disappointed at the strength of her foes. Tired of the easy life, she collected the dragonballs, and wished to start a new life, far away, where she would be forced to work her way to the top, and finally have a chance to be challenged.
Cinder is Arcosian, as mentioned, but unlike most of her race, she was born in a shade of red not unlike that of the blood she has spent most of her life spilling. She has several outfits, depending on the situation, but the one she is seen in most commonly resembles that of the Supreme Kai of Universe 7. She prefers to stay in her base form, only resorting to her weaker forms to humiliate unworthy opponents.
Also worth noting is that she has a strong dislike for ki attacks; She feels that conflict is better resolved hand to hand, and that attacking from a distance is a sign of cowardice.
I should mention, I’ve never roleplayed before, this is pretty new to me. But I’m willing to give it a shot, as I really want the opportunity to flesh out my character a bit more, and have some fun with others while doing so.
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I won’t deny this, since its the first time you ever submitted a character and tried for a role-play. But I would like if you would use the character template on my first post, so you can organize your character. I’d suggest applying what I said for another character template (not saying you need to make another character just saying you should be more organize in your next post) and you might wanna add more to your background and work more on the pace. Anyhow, Good luck! 🙂
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More for the backstory? Ok
So this On the a Planet called Fitle, In the city of Riggityrog, layed a boy named Rigan. He was a namekian child with alot of talents. and was spoiled before the famine came. when the famine came all of the crops have been wiped from the land. but this wasn’t a problem for Rigan and his family. for his people didn’t need to eat. but then a drought came. they was deprived of most of their fresh war and lived in the hot sun for a long time with little water to go around. One day on the hot day of Fitle a strange ship came by. They where called the Doioxid Empire. Ruled by a evil and corrupt Majin. he was similar to Frieza, but strong, fiercer, and showed less remorse. he was a down right evil man. his name was Tea. Him and his soldiers, raided the land and capture d the planet. This gone on until Rigan was Twelve where he and a couple of friends formed a resistance. they invited over 65+ people, races of all sorts. from Saiyans to Namekians and So On- So Fourth. They fought until Rigan became 20 where, Tea wiped out all of his friends, and destroyed his planet. Luckily however Rigan was on earth and lost transportation. when he heard about it, he was devastated. He stayed on earth however, knowing that if he ever tried to fight back against Tea, he would die on the spot. To this day he remains on earth… Training so he can fianlly get his revenge against Tea.
EDIT: RIP the backstory is kinda different sorry.
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Name: Gladio
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 18
Personality:What Its a funny person with a curious personality, he likes to fight with stronger people and discover new powers, you can trust him in bad moments. normally a good person if you are it too, a very kind person.
General Appearance: similar to goku’s gi, but not orange, it is yellow and black, with tail and a spiky hair.
Backstory: Born into the saiyan planet, and sent to the earth after the saiyan’s planet destruction with others saiyans trying to save some people of the race, Gladio grew up on the earth training with his mates, having a hard training on his life, he was trying to protect all his friends, but one day, they get betrayed of the strongest of them, some of them has just died and the rage that created was enough for gladio to discover the super saiyajin’s form, now gladio is having a harder training with other saiyans that he finded on the earth to get stronger and avenge his dead friends, walking around the universe, training with new oponents to get stronger, without lose that hope of avenge his lost friendsmy discord iriome12
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Denied. This is because it just to simple for a backstory of a Saiyan, I advice you to take reference from Ginsera character submission, and then try again fleshing out your character. It doesn’t have to be as long but it has to be pretty darn good. Anyways, I’ll give you the benefit of the doubt that your from spain and only know a bit of english so I’ll give you 2 more chances. If none of the next posts are reaching the requirements, I’d suggest you try another race. Good Luck! 🙂
Note: Sorry, If I sounded a bit harsh.
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The backstory lacks content and quality. There’s too much repetition. It only talks about Gladio getting more powerful, stronger and training and it shows nothing about who your character is. Also, did you read the saiyan description? You need a genuine reason to go super sayian take Goku and Trunks for an example, they had a genuine reason to transform into Super Saiyan. Vegeta calling you weak doesn’t count as a reason to transform Super Saiyan. Also, Gladio is already overpowered and knows how to go Super Sayian and the forms above, and we really can’t allow you to start the roleplay already knowing how to do that. I still don’t think its near enough of being qualified for a saiyan. This application has potential but you have to work on it. A lot. Like, so much that you become applicable for our standards.
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This lacks content and quality. It just seems to me a copy of Majin Buu, also if your a detached part of Buu, wouldn’t you fill the missing part of his body? Zik’s birth doesn’t make sense, a body part can’t come to life. Also Zik has no general reason to fight Buu since his alignment is neutral. Most of the stuff at the end didn’t make sense to me. Except the tenkaichi budokai. Anyways, It’s too short, it’s filled with cliches, and it has no details whatsoever. If you want to be Majin, try to put more effort into it. I urge you to either make it better- and I mean a lot better- or choose a different race.
Note: Sorry, If I sounded harsh. But I’m just being honest and trying to encourage you to do way!! better than this.
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Name: Ryce
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 27
Personality: Quiet and reserved; prefers to be alone. Pretends a calm and collected, “above it” attitude, but is easily flustered and has a short fuse.General Appearance: Average Saiyan bulk, and about 5 foot eight inches in height, with black eyes and Vegeta-like black hair, as is a common hairstyle among Saiyans.. Wears planet Sadal type battle armor (reason in the backstory).
Backstory: A Saiyan baby born on planet Vegeta, with a lowly power level of eight. deemed a low-class warrior, he was sent to Earth to conquer it. However, a shockwave from a squabble between Beerus and Champa ripped open a wormhole between the universes, and Ryce’s pod was pulled into universe six, and landed on their Earth instead. From there he grew up as a normal Saiyan would, but was challenged constantly by the hostile humans that paralleled universe seven’s Earth. Being harassed by them so much, Ryce grew more powerful than his people would have suspected, to about double Raditz’s level. At an age of twenty-two he tricked the humans into starting a war that erased all life on the planet. He launched himself into space with one of the human’s ships as they destroyed themselves, looking for more planets to conquer, before landing on planet Eyce, where, after overestimating his own power, he was quickly subdued by Frost, who recruited him and sent him to Sadal to be enlisted in the Planet Sadal Defense Force. He has since cooperated with the Defense Force, but looks down on the Saiyans of universe six, believing them to be soft and weak, and dreams of a galactic empire worthy of the Saiyan race.
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Ok, I’ll go for a kind of dark-ish anti-hero backstory, since I don’t know exactly what you need, and I’m not going to ask because I don’t want the temptation to take a base template character and just paint it a different color. All I ask is for you to determine whether you can bend your standards a bit if you think that a given backstory is good enough.
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One, I didn’t restrict it in the config (obviously), I meant it in the role-play whenever you get stronger to reach the level of unlocking the transformation of whichever race you chose. Two, I could, but I don’t really see the point in showing you the configs, but maybe in the later future. Anyways, I changed the configs where I think it would makes a “Realistic” DBZ feel.
Note: If you didn’t read the feed back on your application, I asked if you could elaborate on the end, since the application is getting near our standards. 🙂
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Name: Bat
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 12
Personality: (that’s the tricky one :/) middle serious-joke-ish (a bit od Batman And Flash maybe :P) And he’s good And proud, but he van sometimes show historia evil się (bit od majin Vegeta)
General appereance: Gogeta’s Chest And boots, Android 17’s pants, Trunks’ undershirt
Backstory: On planet Vegeta there was a Saiyan, historia father nor mather were known. Few days before explosion, two bully’ies taken him when he was stilo baby, And thrown to the river. This river had frozen. Then after few days, Frieza exploded planet Vegeta and this Saiyan was pushed into space, he was flying in it for couple of years, then he landed on earth. Misterious man came to this child, he gave him food and clothes, And he left. After this young Saiyan Saiyan get up. His body was still 4 years old, but his existeance had already 8 years! He started training And rating. After 2 years he put his clothes on. After 6 more years, he begun leaving his place. And he was trqvelling always forward. He was killing every animal that can give him meat, even dinosaurs. But that will change! Later on Dragon Block C Series!-
Sorry, but no. The backstory lacks content and quality. It’s too short. The story reminds me of Goku, but with a little twist of your own. It shows nothing about who your character is. it’s filled with cliches, and it has no details. If you want to be saiyan, I urge you to either make it better- and I mean a lot better- or choose a different race. I expect quality from our saiyan applications.
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I don’t know if I can make something comparable to that, but here I go!
Name: Ryce
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 27
Personality: Quiet and reserved; prefers to be alone. Pretends a calm and collected, “above it” attitude, but is easily flustered and has a short fuse. Can use basic ki techniques like flight, but strongly prefers physical combat, believing that ranged attacks are for cowards and weaklings.General Appearance: Average Saiyan bulk, white skin, and about 5 foot eight inches in height, has crossed eyebrows with black eyes and Vegeta-like black hair, as are all common among Saiyans. Wears planet Sadal type battle armor.
Backstory: A Saiyan baby born on planet Vegeta, with a lowly power level of eight. deemed a low-class warrior, he was sent to Earth to conquer it. However, a shockwave of destructive energy from a squabble between Beerus and Champa eroded the barriers between universes and ripped open a wormhole between them. Ryce’s pod was pulled into universe six, and landed on their Earth instead. He was found by Dr. Boxer, head of a group of evil military scientists commissioned by the king of the earth to create an ultimate weapon of mass destruction. Dr. Boxer witnessed Ryce rip down a tree branch firsthand, and thought that he had been going about his task all wrong. Instead of missiles and bombs, he should start developing bioweapons! He took Ryce with him to an underground lab and immediately began tests, while commanding the rest of his group to study the Saiyan pod. Boxer studied the child closely, testing his colossal strength, taking blood samples, trying to make clones and reverse-engineer his blood in attempts to create a super soldier.
When Ryce was about six, a portion of the lab suddenly exploded. When Dr. Boxer went to see what happened, Ryce had transformed into a gigantic ape monster. He was terrified at the child’s power and dismayed that Ryce destroyed his lab and escaped, but the Doctor had already finished his work; an army of cloned Saiyan warriors and several fleets of advanced fighter ships based on the Saiyan pod, and spent the some years of his life following trying to figure out what caused Ryce’s transformation, but his research came up short. Ryce spent the next eight years of his life raising himself in the forests and hills, while being chased and fought against by the humans who, on top of being very unfriendly, believed him to be one of the clones, as well as some of the clones themselves who could recognize him as foreign. The constant fighting and wandering strengthened him beyond what his own people would have suspected, to about twice Raditz’s level, while also increasing his bitterness and hatred toward others and his desire for power.
After eight years, making Ryce fourteen years old, he began to realize that the humans and his clones had stopped hunting him, and discovered gradually that life on the planet had grown non-existent. Instead of being mortified, Ryce was overjoyed and took pride in that it was he who caused it in the end, with his only concern being his own well-being. Some days later, he stumbled upon the ruins of the lab where he was kept as a child, and knowing that there should be some ships inside, entered to investigate. When he entered the hangar, he saw who else but Dr. Boxer himself, the last human alive, disengaging the clamps around one of the ships. When he saw Ryce, Boxer tried to convince him to join him to join him in his travel across the stars, promising him more planets to conquer. But Ryce’s hatred for Dr. Boxer was greater than it was for anyone else, and Ryce killed him with one backhanded strike. He then entered the ship meant for the Doctor, and found coordinates for a planet pre-uploaded in the launch code, coordinates for what would have been planet Vegeta, transferred from the original pod. He activated the auto-pilot and the ship launched into space.
A year later, the distance between the planets being so great, and all the while killing whoever he saw on the way, he finally touched down on what should have been Vegeta, but he found the Saiyans on this planet to be peaceful and kind. Thus believing them to be easy targets, he began his terrorizing of the planet’s people, finding them to be stronger than he thought, but still pushing them back. However, in only a week’s time, a large ship touched down near his location, and one hundred soldiers emerged from the top, preceding their leader, Frost. Frost implored him to stop this violence, offering him a pardon for his crimes in exchange for his cooperation. Instead, Ryce rushed Frost with a flurry of attacks, which were deflected with relative ease. Frost’s aura flared up, and without even transforming, beat Ryce back with terrible force, such that he was sent to his knees with a few short blows.
Overwhelmingly frustrated with his opponent’s power, Ryce’s own power level skyrocketed, his aura burned red and his eyes went blank; he had transformed into a False Super Saiyan! He became mindless and relentless, and began to overpower Frost with vicious attacks. Frost commanded his men to take point while he powered up, and began a transformation. As Ryce was beating Frost’s men, he was suddenly knocked down by an attack he didn’t even see, before looking to Frost again and seeing that he was in his second form. He let out a mighty scream, powering up and charging once more, but Frost used his increased speed and power to get behind him and deliver a knock out strike to the back of his neck. Ryce powered down and fell unconscious, and Frost ordered his men to take him into custody.
A month later Frost confronted Ryce in his cell and told him that if he would stop his senseless destruction, he would be set free and given something to do. Ryce admitted that anything would be better than staying in his cell, so Frost brought him to the Planet Sadal Defense Force academy, where he would be trained to hone his power and skills and use them for good. Under their tutelage, in the four years he spent there Ryce grew much stronger, eventually climbing to a level of 60,000, while also developing and mastering the power ball technique, though never again tapping into his true potential since his fight with Frost.
He has since continued to work for the Defense force for eight years, and actually enjoys the amount of fighting he gets to do, although his brutality has gotten him in trouble on several occasions. He looks down on the Saiyans of Sadal, believing them to be weak and soft and with no tails to speak of, letting them know that fact in no uncertain terms, and especially despises their battle armor, stating more than once that they look more like dresses than armor, and dreams of a true Saiyan empire, of which he is on top.
His current mission from the Force is to hunt down a parasitic alien that can possess people to bring out their innermost evil and give them outstanding power while feeding off of their life force. This elusive creature has fled across the universes, and evidence has led Ryce to believe that somewhere in universe seven is where it is hiding.
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This is all I’ve got, I think. Dr. Boxer is universe six’s Dr. Brief, and the parasite that Ryce is hunting is actually Watagash, the same alien that Jaco was looking for in Super, though this is some time before those events. Personally, I place Ryce’s birth as twenty or so years before Goku’s.
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It’s great, I really liked the originality and thought put into this. Although, there is still some cons on the backstory. Like, the cloned-saiyans,and when Ryce transformed into a false super saiyan, and we really can’t allow you to start the roleplay already knowing how to do that, also I’m still conflicted if that form is gonna in the roleplay (or even in the mod). And his power level is over the rate I was looking for, but that can be fix in due time, and also we can make an arrangement. But besides that, everything is looking great. Although, this is the only time I’ll allow to bend the standards for saiyans, since I saw potential in your character submission. ( I expect quality from the saiyans character submission)
Accepted
Note: I would like for you to explain; what happened to the cloned-saiyans. Also, I wanna point out your character backstory may change slightly due to the lore of the role-play.
Also, whats your discord tag/username.
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I added the part about him not transforming again to imply that he didn’t know how to transform again, and false super saiyan is only a fluke transformation, and nothing that permanently changes the user in a way that the real super saiyan does. Thank you for pointing out the cloned saiyans, that was an enormous oversight on my part. I’d like to add this to the backstory: that the clones were unstable and volatile, and so mutated over time, like Bio-Broly, but at a much slower rate. As such, I’d change the story slightly regarding Ryce, that he observed that the cloned Saiyans that were hunting him seemed to be melting away and turning into slimy monsters, instead of having them disappear completely from the story. Their power levels dropped as a result of their radical mutation, allowing Ryce to eradicate them over the eight year period. As for his power level, I wanted him to be strong enough to be trusted with Watagash, but after considering Jaco a bit more, and how even he was trusted with this mission, I think Ryce’s power level can be reduced.
Also, do I need a discord? I don’t have one, but I think I can make one if need be. It’s a free service, right?
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No. It’s a new character but it’s not better from your old one. There’s a gravely amount of grammar errors, and the backstory didn’t make much sense, Zeke escaped for no apparent reason from planet vegeta. The backstory shows nothing about the character. I don’t think its near enough of being qualified for a saiyan. You should know this is the hardest race to apply for, so I expect quality for the saiyan race character applications. Try to do better next time or I suggest to try some easier race.
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Announcement:
I would like to keep the ratio of Saiyans to other races relativaly low, Since actual surviving Saiyans are supposed to be rare (this may change due to the lore). So we won’t be accepting much more Saiyans until we recieve more applications of the other races. Reason being is due to the fact that we need diversity within the role-play.Although, you may still apply for them. But you have to work on it. A lot. Like, so much that you become applicable for our standards. If they’re darn good, you may get a reply and possibly accepted.
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Name: Alex or Al as his friends called him
Gender: Male
Race:half-Saiyan
Age: 17
Personality:he is a kind person who always holds back in a fight not wishing to hurt anyone, but if someone hurts one of his friends he give it 100% and does not play around. He is scared to lose anyone close to him, but when he lets out his full power he becomes full of himself.
General Appearance: A black Gi that has a white mark around the lower chest area which is a mark of his rank from his farther school white meaning he has finished his training. His hair is normally down covering some of his face.
Backstory: Alex full name Alexander Leo Cfer He was born on a world far away his mother a saiyan was called away for a war when Alex was just a baby. His father Leo a human taught at a school for martial arts training Alex in several different fighting styles. Alex was trained at Leo’s school and began as being one of the most untalented students at the school. He was constantly bullied by the stronger students. His father was always kind to Alex, making him feel better when the students were bullying him. after a few years at his 14th birthday his father had decided to build a fighting style for Alex since he was not able to master the ones that already existed. His father knew that Alex Specialized in Speed. After about a month of learning this new fighting style he began to climb his way up in the school’s student ratings system. The students began to respect him when he started to show some talent, they began to treat his as an equal. Shortly after his 15th birthday Alex took place in the finals tournament where the graduation event occurs it is the final testing ground for students in their final year of training. Alex made it to the final round of the tournament by using a technique that his father taught him to control, Leo called it power multiply, it allows him to multiply his power by up to 10 times. By multiplying his power, it leaves his body exhausted. One day some pink creature came to the school. Leo called it a New Born majin. It looked just like a child, but the power coming off it was making Alex worried that his father could beat him. The majin raised its hand and with a white flash the school and all of Alex’s friends inside were gone all that was left was Alex and Leo. Leo lost it after he saw that the majin had killed the students. Leo Rushed him whirl Alex was Breaking down feeling useless. Leo was Beaten brutally before being killed, whirl Alex just watched on feeling powerless. Alex was seeing his life flashing before his eyes and something broke in him as he realized he had nothing left. His power spilled out he had no control over it. His hair began to spike as if he was going super saiyan but his base power was not high enough to achieve the form. He temporally became a false super saiyan it burnt out his body leaving him with no energy left, but he was able to get of a single attack to destroy the majin a single black wave flew out at the majin and as the majin screamed it was destroyed. Alex was rushed into a hospital to heal it took over a month for his body to heal after he burnt it out. Now he spends his time training and perfecting his power multiplication technique. His focus is on his speed and defense he never wants to feel powerless to save someone.
Note he does not know he is half saiyan he thinks he is human
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Name: Alex or Al as his friends called him
Gender: Male
Race: Half-Saiyan
Age: 17
Personality: He is a kind person who always holds back in a fight not wishing to hurt anyone, but if someone hurts one of his friends he gives it 100% and does not play around. He is scared to lose anyone close to him, but when he lets out his full power he becomes full of himself.
General Appearance: A black Gi that has a white mark around the lower chest area which is a mark of his rank from his farther school white meaning he has finished his training. His hair is normally down covering some of his face.
Backstory: Alex full name Alexander Leo Cfer He was born on a world far away his mother a saiyan was called away for a war when Alex was just a baby. (she never came back it is assumed she is dead) His father Leo a human taught at a school for martial arts training, and taught Alex in several different fighting styles. Alex was trained at Leo’s school and was one of the most untalented students at the school in those fighting styles, because of his foot work he likes to keep moving in a fight but the styles that were taught were made so that you would stop and have a moment to take in the situation, whereas Alex would watch the situation whirl moving. He was constantly bullied by the other students, because of this. His father was always kind to Alex, making him feel better when the students were bullying him. After a few years on his 14th birthday his father had decided to build a fighting style with Alex since he was not able to master the ones that already existed. His father knew that Alex Specialized in Speed. After about a month of learning this new fighting style he began to climb his way up in the school’s student ratings system. (the top 10 students get to fight in the yearly tournaments) The students began to respect him when he beat the 10th strongest student in the school, they began to treat his as an equal after that. Shortly after his 15th birthday Alex took place in the graduation tournament where the graduation event occurs it is the final testing ground for students in their final year of training. Alex made it to the final round of the tournament by using a technique that his father taught him to control, Leo called it power multiply (its true name is the Kaioken), it allows him to multiply his power by up to 10 times. (Leo learnt it from his master who learnt it from king kai after he had died protecting the Earth against some creature (no one knows much about). Leo’s Master was able to teach Leo the basics of the technique allowing him to multiply his power. Leo’s master was able to come back for 3 days because of what he did for the Earth. By multiplying his power, it leaves his body exhausted once it wears off. One day some pink creature came to the school. Leo called it a New Born majin. It looked just like a child, but the power coming off it was making Alex worried, because the power out classed his father. The majin raised its hand and with a white flash the school and all of Alex’s friends were gone all that was left was Alex and Leo. Leo lost it after he saw that the majin had killed the students. Leo Rushed him whirl Alex was Breaking down feeling useless. Leo was Beaten brutally, before the majin crushed his skull, whirl Alex just watched on feeling powerless. Alex saw his life flashing before his eyes and it was if something broke in him, as he realized he had nothing left to lose. His power spilled out he had no control over it. His body was bursting with power as he went beyond his limits he leaped at the majin and the ground he was standing on broke apart, with a sudden stop he hit the majin with the full extent of his power a black purple white and blue wave flew out from his hands and it was over. it burnt out his body leaving him with no energy left, but from what he saw it seemed like the majin was destroyed little did he know that the majin survived the attack. Alex was rushed into a hospital by his friend kai who somehow managed to get out of the building as it was being destroyed, but he was injured he lost one of his hands, but was determined to save his friend. Alex when into a coma from using up so much energy, it took him over a month to come out of it. His body had mostly healed and when he woke up the first thing he wanted to know was what happened to Kai the hospital told him that Kai was still in a coma. Alex likes to visit Kai whenever he is not training or helping someone out. Alex lives in his father’s house that was left to him when Leo died. Alex wants to start a school to train people to become stronger and to pass on the fighting styles his father created and learned.Note he does not know he is half saiyan he thinks he is human. He does not know that the majin is still alive. He does not know what happened to his mother. Leo learnt what a majin was from kingkai who talks to him from time to time. King kai explained how dangerous a majin can be.
Things he likes to do: Help others out, Teach, spar with others, Work on the house his father left him and he likes to make friends.Discord: JamesCfer#4722
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BackStory: Resoza was born on the planet Erieza, He was the weakest from his older brother and was always a outcast as a child because of being born weaker than most. But he never gave up to become a fighter even if everyone said he could never be one. Them saying that would just fuel Resoza’s determination to prove them all wrong and he will aim to become the strongest. When he was around 8 he started training strength and speed by using weights and doing basic training such as pushups and gravity training intil he hit 10, Then he started training endurance by fighting people on his planet and doing sit ups when he hit 12, He soon learned his brother was accepted into the Freiza force. He never really hung out with his brother because his brother was always hanging around others, training, and just busying sleeping and by now he will never get to really truly know his brother, because they never really hung out. The times they hung out were only to fight he respected his brother, just because he didn’t think of him as a joke like the others did, because of being born with a weak power level. But he will never give up on trying to find his brother so he could understand why he was so different from the others that had thought of him as a joke. He decided to steal a space pod at the age of 16, because at the time it was forbidden for him to leave the planet because he wasn’t strong enough to face the universe, but still he did it anyway and went to other planets to try to track down his brother, find stronger opponents and find better training, he found many planets and fought many foes, such as Saiyans, Robots, Bounty hunters, and the strongest fighters of their planets they were tough to fight because of the difference in techniques and skills but he won most of the fights and barely lost because of most of the planets had primitive beings. When he turned 17 he soon found out that there were stronger people at a planet that he inspected they seemed so much stronger than him, he would think that his brother was there too so he decided to go train and make his brother impressed of the strength he has gained over the years. He found a planet that was seemingly gravity strong and had no inhabitants it was around x750 the gravity of normal, He was slower than a snail at this gravity but he still had determination in him to go on and persevere. Once he was able to move a bit he started doing simple training such as sit ups, push ups, and running around the planet over and over. So he trained like that in till he was 20 He became really strong but every once in awhile he inspected the planets warriors and had seen that they were also getting strong and he saw that he was just keeping up with their strength. He was equal with one of the strongest warriors on the planet so he finally decided to land on the planet and fight them, learn their ways train beside them, and look for his brother. But if he had to he would destroy them if they tried to kill him or injure him badly.
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Name:Zadrick
Gender:Male
Race:Saiyan
Age:75
Personality:An Honest Person Calm Determined Courageous Impulsive Etc …
He likes to work alone, he does not like people to help him.
He does not have any type of fear against the enemy He also likes children and he is very proud.
General Appearance:Wearing a black suit. He has a hood (He has his Super Saiyan 1) Black shoes Black hair (He’s a little old) He has muscles all over Body he likes to Train.
Backstory:Her Story Begins When her mother is killed by a Saiyan, her mother was a saiyan so she was very weak,
His father became super saiyajin when his wife died …
Zadrick spent 10 years .. He was no longer afraid of anything He arouses his super saiyajin when he loses to Kraka a friend / rival, Kraka became Casey because he was weak, pass the fight he would die when it is near the end he arouses a Fury of a Super Saiyajin and He Defeats Kraka with His KameHameHa .. And He Is Alive Till Today!
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First off, in the backstory you refer Zadrick as a “Her” many times. The backstory lacks content and quality. It shows nothing about who your character is. Also, did you read the Saiyan description? This is the hardest race to apply for, it’s not gonna be easy to join the role-play as a Saiyan. Anyways, this story didn’t make sense at all. It has so many plot holes, that got me lost. I don’t think its near enough of being qualified for a saiyan. This application has potential but you have to work on it. A lot. Like, so much that you become applicable for our standards or I suggest to pick an easier race.
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I decided to repost my application with my fixed backstory.
Name: Resoza (Res-o-wa)Gender: Male
Race: Arcosian
Age: 20
Personality:Is a determined warrior and stubborn fighter who will never give up till death, he gets angered really easily and doesn’t like being made a fool of, he has a soft side but doesn’t show it when in a fight. He can be cold hearted at times and can be confusing at times but isn’t the worst guy to be friends with, he really loves training and competition.
Appearance: No clothes, But his colour scheme is Gold, Grey, PurpleBlue, Grey in that order through creating a Arcosian, His eye colour is Red, He has no mouth in appearance and has a white aura.
Backstory: Resoza was born on the planet Erieza, He was the weakest from his older brother and was always a outcast as a child because of being born weaker than most. But he never gave up to become a fighter even if everyone said he could never be one. Them saying that would just fuel Resoza’s determination to prove them all wrong and he will aim to become the strongest. When he was around 8 he started training strength and speed by using weights and doing basic training such as pushups and gravity training intil he hit 10, Then he started training endurance by fighting people on his planet and doing sit ups when he hit 12, He soon learned his brother was accepted into the Freiza force through multiple of his brothers friends talking about it. He never really hung out with his brother because his brother was always hanging around others, training, and just busying sleeping and by now he will never get to really truly know his brother, because they never really hung out. The times they hung out were only to fight he respected his brother, just because he didn’t think of him as a joke like the others did, because of being born with a weak power level. But he will never give up on trying to find his brother so he could understand why he was so different from the others that had thought of him as a joke. He decided to steal a space pod at the age of 16, because at the time it was forbidden for him to leave the planet because he wasn’t strong enough to face the universe, but still he did it anyway and went to other planets to try to track down his brother, find stronger opponents and find better training, he found many planets and fought many foes, such as Saiyans, Robots, Bounty hunters, and the strongest fighters of their planets, they were tough to fight because of the difference in techniques and skills but he won most of the fights and barely lost because of most of the planets had primitive beings without much skill. When he turned 17 he soon found out that there were stronger people at a planet that he inspected they seemed so much stronger than him, he would think that his brother was there too so he decided to go train and make his brother impressed of the strength he has gained over the years. He found a planet that was seemingly gravity strong and had no inhabitants it was around x750 the gravity of normal, He was slower than a snail at this gravity but he still had determination in him to go on and persevere. Once he was able to move a bit he started doing simple training such as sit ups, push ups, and running around the planet over and over. So he trained like that in till he was 20 He became really strong but every once in awhile he inspected the planets warriors and had seen that they were also getting strong and he saw that he was just keeping up with their strength. He was equal with one of the strongest warriors on the planet so he finally decided to land on the planet and fight them, learn their ways train beside them, and look for his brother. But if he had to he would destroy them if they tried to kill him or injure him badly.
If there is still anymore things you need to know about my character then please tell me so I can add it in. But I believe that this is enough detail for a Arcosian application and backstory.
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This has improved, But I’m gonna point out a few things you missed. Like, you forgot to say how does Garagin looks like. What was the reason he joined the Frieza Force besides training. What did he do in his spar time, besides getting money for the ship. You may want to add a bit more of content and show more of who your character is.
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Name: Lyme
Gender: Arcosian’s have no gender. (But I will refer to him as he)
Race: Arcosian
Age: 23
Personality: He is a monster who only likes to have power and control, but he has the patience to wait and plan out what his next move is.
General Appearance: He has an advanced version of the armor frieza and his men, and the saiyans had, it comes with no shoulders. He has a version of the armor that is like pants. The color of his armor is Pink on the pecks and around the belly area, and brown on the belly. His sleeves are brown and is the same as his pant’s. His skin color is red where Frieza’s pink and purple be. And white on the other part of his body.
Backstory: He is in the same clan as Frieza, but he wasn’t given any control of the universe because of his lack of power. Once Frieza had died (at least I believe in this story line he would already be dead) Lyme had went into action by first aggressively taking command of a small part of Frieza’s old army. Once word got out about Lyme’s actions, there was a revolution against him, and again because of his lack of power he had to back down, he had gone missing because of that but rumors say he is on a small planet known as Earth. He had lost his scouter but his armor is still intact. He has been plotting, to come back into control. Right now he is silently training, Getting stronger as the days pass. (I am hoping that in this story line in this server doesn’t make Arcosian training stupid op like in super) So far, he hasn’t come into contact with any particularly strong beings.
Alignment: (Just thought it should be added) Evil
Bp: (Again just thought it should be added) before training: 7,403. After training: 11,402 (and still slowly growing) -
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THIS IS THE EDITED VERSION OF LYME
(Sorry just wanted to make sure you could see the difference)Name: Lyme
Gender: Arcosian’s have no gender. (But I will refer to him as he)
Race: Arcosian
Age: 23
Personality: He is a monster who only likes to have power and control, but he has the patience to wait and plan out what his next move is.
General Appearance: He has an advanced version of the armor frieza and his men, and the saiyans had, it comes with no shoulders. He has a version of the armor that is like pants. The color of his armor is Pink on the pecks and around the belly area, and brown on the belly. His sleeves are brown and is the same as his pant’s. His skin color is red where Frieza’s pink and purple be. And white on the other part of his body.
Backstory: He is in the same clan as Frieza, but he wasn’t given any control of the universe because of his lack of power. He was born into the Frost Demon Clan expected to be one of the strongest of the clan. He was born with a power level of only 4,603. He had a lack of power because he was born an abnormal, and also because he wasn’t close to blood, to Frieza and the others in the clan. Once Frieza had died (at least I believe in this story line he would already be dead) Lyme had went into action by first aggressively taking command of a small part of Frieza’s old army. Once word got out about Lyme’s actions, there was a revolution against him, there was a great battle that lasted for days, he had to run away because he was exhausted, he had gone missing because of that but rumors say he is on a small planet known as Earth. He had lost his scouter but his armor was also broken. He has been plotting, to come back into control, to get his revenge on those who had revolted. Right now he is silently training, Getting stronger as the days pass. (I am hoping that in this story line in this server doesn’t make Arcosian training stupid op like in super) So far, he hasn’t come into contact with any particularly strong beings. But he believe’s that on Earth he will find someone who isn’t as weak as dirt. He has been on planet Earth for a few years now, around 4 years to be exact.
Alignment: (Just thought it should be added) Evil
Bp: (Again just thought it should be added) before training: 11,402. After training: 23,392 (and still slowly growing)
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Name: Ikari, Shinji
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 24
Personality: Shinji is quiet and contemplative, a reflection of his harsh training to become a master samurai, he generally spends time alone and is generally passive. He is respectful towards others and a complete lone wolf.
Looks: Wears black and red armour with white linen on the left side and unpainted metal to the left of the chest piece.
Backstory: A 13-year-old Shinji strolled down the barely lit alleyway he always did to get to and from school. He enjoyed seeing the art people drew on the sides of the buildings. There was a painting of a soldier that always drew his eye, Shinji would wonder what it would be like to be out of the front lines fighting for his country. Shinji slowly made his way down the long alleyway without a care in the world, observing the art closely until someone came up behind him. “Hey kid, what’ye lookin’ at?” The mysterious person asked him. “I was looking at the one of th—“ Shinji was stopped by a boot planted wholesomely in his back. The boot kicked forward and Shinji flew directly forward, his face scraping against the asphalt. “HEY! What was that for?” Shinji barked at him. “Oh, that? That was because I WANTED too!” He replied. The figure malevolently walked up to Shinji and placed his boot on his phase, gradually increasing the downward force. Shinji’s body stressed in pain, and tears ran down his cheek as the man tortured him. “Stop this madness Kitako!” A voice roared out from the edge of the alley. “And why should I do that old man?” Kitako smiled as he replied. At the edge of his vision, Shinji saw a flash fly towards him and blood hit the ground in front of his eyes. Shinji’s eyes shook in shock of what he just saw, his innocence, wiped from him in mere seconds. The old man who appeared to had saved him grabbed his collar and pulled him up with ease. “What brought you here boy?” He spoke in a grouchy tone. “I…I walk this path every day…I…I walk it to get home, I like the art…” Shinji stuttered. The old man dinted his brows and stared at Shinji. “Hmm, you will come with me boy…Don’t argue, just follow!” He ordered. The old man marched to the edge of the alley and signalled for Shinji to follow. Shinji was almost entranced to follow him, he stood up slowly and marched towards the man. Shinji clasped his hand and they both disappeared from thin air.“Where am I?” Shinji asked, taken back by how he was instantly moved from his home city to a secluded place hidden away by tall trees atop a secluded peak. “This is Satsuma, an ancient Samurai school for the Bushido ways, here, I will teach you the ways of the Samurai, you will be my successor and you will continue the samurai way, after I am gone.” The man said convincingly to Shinji. Shinji gazed at the man. As young boy would to his own father. “Yes. I will do this, I will continue your legacy.” Shinji said almost in a trance like state.
11 years later
“That man was like a father to me…He taught me all I know and more…He fed me, watered me and sheltered me…all…all so I could be the one to inherit his power…his skill.” Shinji thought to himself looking over the recently buried body of his master. “I will continue your legacy master, I will bear this power, and this secret with my life.”
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Name: Ikari, Shinji
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 24
Personality: Shinji is bright and bubbly, but for the time being, quiet and contemplative as his master, who was like a father to his just died. He generally spends time alone and is generally passive. He is respectful towards others and a complete lone wolf.
Looks: Wears black and red armour with white linen on the left side and unpainted metal to the left of the chest piece.
Backstory: A 13-year-old Shinji strolled down the barely lit alleyway he always did to get to and from school. He enjoyed seeing the art people drew on the sides of the buildings. There was a painting of a soldier that always drew his eye, Shinji would wonder what it would be like to be out of the front lines fighting for his country. Shinji slowly made his way down the long alleyway without a care in the world, observing the art closely until someone came up behind him. “Hey kid, what’ye lookin’ at?” The mysterious person asked him. “I was looking at the one of th—“ Shinji was stopped by a boot planted wholesomely in his back. The boot kicked forward and Shinji flew directly forward, his face scraping against the asphalt. “HEY! What was that for?” Shinji barked at him. “Oh, that? That was because I WANTED too!” He replied. The figure malevolently walked up to Shinji and placed his boot on his phase, gradually increasing the downward force. Shinji’s body stressed in pain, and tears ran down his cheek as the man tortured him. “Stop this madness Kitako!” A voice roared out from the edge of the alley. “And why should I do that old man?” Kitako smiled as he replied. At the edge of his vision, Shinji saw a flash fly towards him and blood hit the ground in front of his eyes. Shinji’s eyes shook in shock of what he just saw, his innocence, wiped from him in mere seconds. The old man who appeared to have saved him grabbed his collar and pulled him up with ease. “What brought you here boy?” He spoke in a grouchy tone. “I…I walk this path every day…I…I walk it to get home, I like the art…” Shinji stuttered. The old man dinted his brows and stared at Shinji. “Hmm, you will come with me boy…Don’t argue, just follow!” He ordered. The old man marched to the edge of the alley and signalled for Shinji to follow. Shinji was almost entranced to follow him, he stood us slow and marched towards the man. Shinji clasped his hand and they both disappeared from thin air.“Where am I?” Shinji asked, taken back by how he was instantly moved from his home city to a secluded place hidden away by tall trees atop a secluded peak. “This is Satsuma, an ancient Samurai school for the Bushido ways, here, I will teach you the ways of the Samurai, you will be my successor and you will continue the samurai way, after I am gone.” The man said convincingly to Shinji. Shinji gazed at the man. As young boy would to his own father. “Yes. I will do this, I will continue your legacy.” Shinji said almost in a trance like state. The old man placed his palm on Shinji’s forehead and bleached his mind of his old memories of his family and old life.
Shinji’s intense training began at the age of 15, his master at first teaching him how to use his Ki. “Shinji, can you feel it? The life force that binds us all together, you and I?” His master spoke to him. “What do you mean? I don’t feel anything other than the usual wind, the blazing sun, that sort of thing. “Reach within yourself Shinji, find your Ki! You must do this to begin your training.” The old man said attempting to encourage Shinji. “rrrrr!” Shinji tensed his muscles in an attempt to unleash his Ki, but it was all for nothing as he ultimately failed. “Shinji! You’re going at it all wrong! First, you must sense it, THEN! You must unleash it. You have a long way to go as my apprentice. You cannot begin your training until you find a way to unlock your Ki. Speak to me again when you have done this, until that day, dinner is at sundown.”
Long months went by as Shinji tried everything to find his Ki. He sat, for hours at a time, meditating, trying to sense this inner power his master spoke of. Until, one, fateful day. Shinji sat out, among the trees on the mountains peak, on a ledge, overlooking the open fields bellow. Shinji sat, meditating, and then, he felt something within him. At first Shinji wasn’t sure what it was, but then, within moments, he felt it. Shinji jumped up. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” He roared at the top of his lungs, and small amounts of energy began to pulsate from his palms until eventually his whole hands were engulfed in this silver energy. His master heard this and appeared miraculously in front of Shinji. “you have done it Shinji, you have unlocked your Ki! You don’t know how proud I am of you…now, take my hand, and begin your training.”They appeared in front of Satsuma, the master having used instant transmission. “Shinji, your first lesson, is too learn how to manipulate your Ki. You must learn to send it to different parts of your body. You don’t have much Ki, some would say this is a disadvantage, but, if you master this technique, it will not be so, it will be an advantage over any foe, no matter how strong.” The master told Shinji. “But, how can it be an advantage, they’re more powerful than me, so therefore they would win…right?” Shinji questioned “Shinji, once you master this technique, these questions and more will be revealed.” His master explained. And so, Shinji trained day and night for three months before he even got to a point that he could hold his key in one spot. “Now, Shinji, let me explain, you can hold your key in one spot…Now you must master the ability to use it to add strength to your blows.” The master explained. “Try punching me.” He commanded. Shinji clenched his fist and punched his master with all his strength. “How’s that!” Shinji asked with a cheeky tone. “Good Shinji, you are strong, but! Try now, punching me with your Ki released in your fist.” The Master suggested. Shinji released all his key and smashed his master. The master was staggered… “HA! See what I’m talking about now?” He asked. “HOLY SHIT!” Shinji was amazed at what strength he truly had. “I…I have that much power? You’ve got to be kidding me! This…this is amazing!”
“Yes Shinji! YES! I think you are ready to begin your training to become a true samurai. Do you think you are ready?” The Master asked out of pure amazement at how strong Shinji had become. “I…I…YES! I am ready!” Shinji roared back. “We begin tomorrow at dawn, prepare yourself Shinji, this is no easy task…”Dawn struck and the Master waited in the courtyard for Shinji. “You’re 10 seconds late Shinji…tomorrow it will be 0 seconds.” The master sternly told him. “Yes Sir.” Shinji replied. The Master, holding a wooden katana in each hand, through the left blade to Shinji. Shinji reached his arm out to catch but it slipped from his grip and landed on the ground. “Tomorrow you will catch it.” The Master told him. “The art of the blade is one of old times, but unlike to popular belief is far from outdated, now, block!” He told him. The Master struck blow for blow, each strike staggering Shinji and breaking his guard. “Eventually, you will use your Ki to strengthen your arms and eventually my strikes will not stagger you or break your guard…understood.” The Master spoke. “Yes Sir.” Shinji replied. The two trained until the end of the day. This training continued until Shinji mastered the art if the Katana. “Good Shinji! Yes! GREAT! You have become an excellent swordsman! And now that you have mastered the art of the Katana, I will teach you how to use your Ki to quicken and strengthen your blows, it’s only taken you three years after all. You are 18 now correct?” The Master questioned. “That’s right master, I am 18, it’s only taken me five years to get this far…Now! Teach me this way to make my attacks faster, I’m eager to learn.” Shinji insisted. “Alright, slow down there kiddo, now. You must focus your Ki in your power arm and use it speed yourself up, making blows faster, and as you are about to hit, put all your Ki into your hands and strengthen the blow by however much you can. Try it on me.” The Master instructed. Shinji did as he said, he focused his Ki on his arms and his strike became almost eight time faster. Their blades clashed in a spark of power. “Holy shit!” Shinji exclaimed. “How can I put all my Ki into my fists and strengthen my strike in that split-second window, it seems almost impossible.” Shinji complained. “Patience is Ki young Shinji…” “….” “That was a bad pun sir.” Shinji cringed. “BUT! It is true, it will take much patience to master this technique, but once you have, your training will almost be complete, and there will be only one more thing for me to teach you, now, can you master this technique?” The Master questioned “You’re on old man!” Shinji extatically replied.
Each day for two more years there was a clash of blades and an exchange of trash talk and laughter in the courtyards. Shinji doing his best to master this almost impossible technique and the Master making some smart wisdom filled comment after Shinji failed another 1000 times. But there came a day when the Master fell ill. He insisted on continuing to train with Shinji even with his illness, and after another three years of training, there came a point when he could not even walk. Shinji took care of his Master and continued to practice the technique, although for half the time he would have usually. “Shinji…” The Master whimpered. “Come here…” Shinji made his way to his master’s bedside. “Help me up would you.” Shinji place his masters arm around his shoulder and helped his up. “I’ll be alright for now, go fetch my katana.” The Master ordered. Without saying a word, Shinji went and found his masters old Katana and brought it to him. “You have one shot at this Shinji, I only have enough strength left to grant you this one chance, this one chance to prove to me that you are a true Samurai.” His Master speaking in a soft voice told him. “but, Ma-“ Shinji was interrupted. “Do this Shinji, show me, you are a successful apprentice, give a dying man his wish, would you?” The Master spoke and readied his guard. Shinji readied his blade, took a deep breath…he could hear his heart beat as the room fell dead silent. And then…Shinji struck.His Master was thrown back, smashing through ten walls and landing on his back in the courtyard. “MASTER!” Shinji screamed and ran to his master, reaching him in less than a second. “Shinji, *cough* you did it, you mastered the technique, and you even used your Ki to run extremely fa*cought* *cough*st…You don’t know how proud I am of you Shinji, now come close, there is something I must tell you before I die.” The Master spoke.
He told Shinji his secret and Shinji reeled back. He fell to his knees and cried as the only family he ever knew died before his very eyes. Shinji picked up the body of his master and carried it to the peak of the hill. Shinji dug a deep grave and placed his masters body with his Katana in hand in the grave and filled it.
“That man was like a father to me…He taught me all I know and more…He fed me, watered me and sheltered me…all…all so I could be the one to inherit his power…his skill.” Shinji thought to himself looking over the recently buried body of his master. “I will continue your legacy master, I will bear this power, and this secret with my life.”His Power is his Ki and the techniques taught to him by his master
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Name: Bat
Gender: Male
Race: Arcosian
Age: 12
Personality: middle serious-joke-ish (a bit of Batman And Flash maybe :P) And he’s good And proud, but he can sometimes show his evil side (bit of majin Vegeta) and sometimes he likes researching, like scientists.
General appereance: Arcosian’s body 3 fully Black with White crystals and red eyes
Backstory: He was born on a planet named Zaburu. His parents left him on this planet alone, so there wasn’t anyone who knew his father nor mother, but there always has been a guy that was caring him, this man’s name was Wint. Wint was like a father for him, because Wint knew how it is, his parents also left him on this planet, so he knew that pain. Wint was always helping Bat, in training, getting food, etc. Bat was training everyday, in morning, midday and in evening, he didn’t ever stop training. Arcosians on this planet always liked to destroy other planets, or just kill people on those. People from this planet were in war with planet Entorn, so they wanted to send to this planet their most skilled arcosian. They thought that Bat is the most skilled one, so they sent him. Bat had just 6 years and he did get a mission to kill everyone on planet Entorn, he was sent to this planet with spaceship that was in military base. But he sadly landed on military base of planet Entron, when people of this planet found him then they froze him, because they knew that there isn’t anyone on their planet to fight with arcosians, and they sent him to a random planet trough his spaceship, and this planet just happened to be earth. He landed on a mountain. When he landed, he was in ice. It was years before it unfroze, Bat left his spaceship, he started to think what’s is this planet, he checked trees, grass, water and sky, after all of that he found out that he’s on planet earth. He also found out that steering pannel of his space ship was broken and he didn’t know how to repair it. So after this little research, he started training, gathering materials, and living a peaceful life on lanet. He travelled a bit and he found perfect terrain to build his house on, so he builded this house and he made a wheat farm. His house was made on plains, near river, so he had his farm next to his house, he also made farm of pigs, cows, sheeps, and he made a secret laboratory under his house, so he can experiment with everything that he will find, to be sure what it is, there wasn’t anything more that he did, just he made a farm of wheat, carrots and he also found potatoes. All of that taken him 6 months. When he had some free time then he was training (his training is mostly pounching and trying to dodge own ki blasts, but sometimes it’s just meditating), and researching more about this planet. But his peaceful life can change! Later on Dragon Block C Series!Discord: BatVenomPL#7017
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After reading through your application, I’d like thank you for improving your old one. I’d suggest going through and fixing some grammatical errors.
I’d like to ask, how did he find out he was on Earth? You just said that he checked “trees, grass, water, and sky”. How did that tell him he was on Earth? Many planets have “trees, grass, water, and sky”.
How come he built a laboratory under his house? What was the need for it? Why was it specifically there?
How old was he when he went to Entorn? How long was he in space? Why did they not launch him into the nearest star?
What made him the most skilled fighter? Why was he the best for his mission?
What made him, as an arcosian, a very large threat to the people of Entorn? Why would a specialist be needed to handle his kind?
My most important, and solid question: If nobody there was able to handle him, how did they freeze him? If he was too powerful, or dangerous for him, what did they do to freeze him? What stopped him from breaking free? This is the largest of plot-holes in his backstory. It leaves a feeling of question, on how he even managed to survive.
If you explain this information, it might improve your chance of acceptance.
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1. He knew it by colors
2. “he made a secret laboratory under his house, so he can experiment with everything that he will find”
3. “Bat had just 6 years and he did get a mission to kill everyone on planet Entorn,”
4. for couple of days
5. Ships have auto protection from flying onto a star
6. “Bat was training everyday, in morning, midday and in evening, he didn’t ever stop training.” unlike other arcosians from this planet
7. They froze him just when he landed so he couldn’t even leave his spaceshipIf there are grammar errors then tell me where, because I can’t find those
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1. He saw it’s name on the spaceship screen (?)
4. Ok this can be two years 😛
and how do you know how far from earth was planet Entron?
5. They froze only Bat, not entire spaceship
6. ok he trained 5/7 days in a week
Also he was risking his body to make it more resistant
Arcosians from planet Zaburu were making tournaments to check who’s the most skilled and it was always Bat
7. They froze him with special freezing beam, not only from cannons and guns, but also from ki, and this ice was ki powered from everyone who was in this base (you remember all spirit bombs? so something simmilar)P.S. Please let me in, I’m the one who made the most applications!
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1. You stated the control panel was broken, and usually, at least in any space ship I’ve heard of, the control panel is where you can find the name.
4. Planet Entorn cannot be within the Sol system. Even at the speed of a Saiyan pod, traveling from an inhabited planet to Earth in a couple of days is impossible. That is how I know.
5. Once again, this too convenient for Bat to have a “no flying into stars function” built in, and if it did, why did they not disable it?
6. Why would they have tournaments? They have scouters? And making his body more resistant is fine, but once again, you’re just making this up as you go, without thought.
7. Ki powered freezing beams?.. Now we all know you’re pulling this out your ass. Ki is a form of energy. Ki is generally known as a VERY hot energy. This is literally impossible.
P.S. The most responses doesn’t mean the best. Your responses lack quality, and break lore quite intensely. We will let you in, if you can fix these problems.
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Name: Ikari, Shinji
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 24
Personality: Shinji is bright and friendly, but for the time being, is quiet and contemplative and spends all of his time alone as he is grieving the death of his master who was the closest thing to family he ever had after his mind was bleached.Looks: Wears black and red armour with white linen on the left side and unpainted metal to the left of the chest piece.
Backstory: A 13-year-old Shinji strolled down the barely lit alleyway he always did to get to and from school. He enjoyed seeing the art people drew on the sides of the buildings. There was a painting of a soldier that always drew his eye, Shinji would wonder what it would be like to be out of the front lines fighting for his country. Shinji slowly made his way down the long alleyway without a care in the world, observing the art closely until someone came up behind him. “Hey kid, what’ye lookin’ at?” The mysterious person asked him. “I was looking at the one of th—“ Shinji was stopped by a boot planted wholesomely in his back. The boot kicked forward and Shinji flew directly forward, his face scraping against the asphalt. “HEY! What was that for?” Shinji barked at him. “Oh, that? That was because I WANTED too!” He replied. The figure malevolently walked up to Shinji and placed his boot on his phase, gradually increasing the downward force. Shinji’s body stressed in pain, and tears ran down his cheek as the man tortured him. “Stop this madness Kitako!” A voice roared out from the edge of the alley. “And why should I do that old man?” Kitako smiled as he replied. At the edge of his vision, Shinji saw a flash fly towards him and blood hit the ground in front of his eyes. Shinji’s eyes shook in shock of what he just saw, his innocence, wiped from him in mere seconds. The old man who appeared to have saved him grabbed his collar and pulled him up with ease. “What brought you here boy?” He spoke in a grouchy tone. “I…I walk this path every day…I…I walk it to get home, I like the art…” Shinji stuttered. The old man dinted his brows and stared at Shinji. “Hmm, you will come with me boy…Don’t argue, just follow!” He ordered. The old man marched to the edge of the alley and signalled for Shinji to follow. Shinji was almost entranced to follow him, he stood us slow and marched towards the man. Shinji clasped his hand and they both disappeared from thin air.
“Where am I?” Shinji asked, taken back by how he was instantly moved from his home city to a secluded place hidden away by tall trees atop a secluded peak. “This is Satsuma, an ancient Samurai school for the Bushido ways, here, I will teach you the ways of the Samurai, you will be my successor and you will continue the samurai way, after I am gone.” The man said convincingly to Shinji. Shinji gazed at the man. As young boy would to his own father. “Yes. I will do this, I will continue your legacy.” Shinji said almost in a trance like state. The old man placed his palm on Shinji’s forehead and bleached his mind of his old memories of his family and old life.
Shinji’s intense training began at the age of 15, his master at first teaching him how to use his Ki. “Shinji, can you feel it? The life force that binds us all together, you and I?” His master spoke to him. “What do you mean? I don’t feel anything other than the usual wind, the blazing sun, that sort of thing. “Reach within yourself Shinji, find your Ki! You must do this to begin your training.” The old man said attempting to encourage Shinji. “rrrrr!” Shinji tensed his muscles in an attempt to unleash his Ki, but it was all for nothing as he ultimately failed. “Shinji! You’re going at it all wrong! First, you must sense it, THEN! You must unleash it. You have a long way to go as my apprentice. You cannot begin your training until you find a way to unlock your Ki. Speak to me again when you have done this, until that day, dinner is at sundown.”
Long months went by as Shinji tried everything to find his Ki. He sat, for hours at a time, meditating, trying to sense this inner power his master spoke of. Until, one, fateful day. Shinji sat out, among the trees on the mountains peak, on a ledge, overlooking the open fields bellow. Shinji sat, meditating, and then, he felt something within him. At first Shinji wasn’t sure what it was, but then, within moments, he felt it. Shinji jumped up. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” He roared at the top of his lungs, and small amounts of energy began to pulsate from his palms until eventually his whole hands were engulfed in this silver energy. His master heard this and appeared miraculously in front of Shinji. “you have done it Shinji, you have unlocked your Ki! You don’t know how proud I am of you…now, take my hand, and begin your training.”They appeared in front of Satsuma, the master having used instant transmission. “Shinji, your first lesson, is too learn how to manipulate your Ki. You must learn to send it to different parts of your body. You don’t have much Ki, some would say this is a disadvantage, but, if you master this technique, it will not be so, it will be an advantage over any foe, no matter how strong.” The master told Shinji. “But, how can it be an advantage, they’re more powerful than me, so therefore they would win…right?” Shinji questioned “Shinji, once you master this technique, these questions and more will be revealed.” His master explained. And so, Shinji trained day and night for three months before he even got to a point that he could hold his key in one spot. “Now, Shinji, let me explain, you can hold your key in one spot…Now you must master the ability to use it to add strength to your blows.” The master explained. “Try punching me.” He commanded. Shinji clenched his fist and punched his master with all his strength. “How’s that!” Shinji asked with a cheeky tone. “Good Shinji, you are strong, but! Try now, punching me with your Ki released in your fist.” The Master suggested. Shinji released all his key and smashed his master. The master was staggered… “HA! See what I’m talking about now?” He asked. “HOLY SHIT!” Shinji was amazed at what strength he truly had. “I…I have that much power? You’ve got to be kidding me! This…this is amazing!”
“Yes Shinji! YES! I think you are ready to begin your training to become a true samurai. Do you think you are ready?” The Master asked out of pure amazement at how strong Shinji had become. “I…I…YES! I am ready!” Shinji roared back. “We begin tomorrow at dawn, prepare yourself Shinji, this is no easy task…”Dawn struck and the Master waited in the courtyard for Shinji. “You’re 10 seconds late Shinji…tomorrow it will be 0 seconds.” The master sternly told him. “Yes Sir.” Shinji replied. The Master, holding a wooden katana in each hand, through the left blade to Shinji. Shinji reached his arm out to catch but it slipped from his grip and landed on the ground. “Tomorrow you will catch it.” The Master told him. “The art of the blade is one of old times, but unlike to popular belief is far from outdated, now, block!” He told him. The Master struck blow for blow, each strike staggering Shinji and breaking his guard. “Eventually, you will use your Ki to strengthen your arms and eventually my strikes will not stagger you or break your guard…understood.” The Master spoke. “Yes Sir.” Shinji replied. The two trained until the end of the day. This training continued until Shinji mastered the art if the Katana. “Good Shinji! Yes! GREAT! You have become an excellent swordsman! And now that you have mastered the art of the Katana, I will teach you how to use your Ki to quicken and strengthen your blows, it’s only taken you three years after all. You are 18 now correct?” The Master questioned. “That’s right master, I am 18, it’s only taken me five years to get this far…Now! Teach me this way to make my attacks faster, I’m eager to learn.” Shinji insisted. “Alright, slow down there kiddo, now. You must focus your Ki in your power arm and use it speed yourself up, making blows faster, and as you are about to hit, put all your Ki into your hands and strengthen the blow by however much you can. Try it on me.” The Master instructed. Shinji did as he said, he focused his Ki on his arms and his strike became almost eight time faster. Their blades clashed in a spark of power. “Holy shit!” Shinji exclaimed. “How can I put all my Ki into my fists and strengthen my strike in that split-second window, it seems almost impossible.” Shinji complained. “Patience is Ki young Shinji…” “….” “That was a bad pun sir.” Shinji cringed. “BUT! It is true, it will take much patience to master this technique, but once you have, your training will almost be complete, and there will be only one more thing for me to teach you, now, can you master this technique?” The Master questioned “You’re on old man!” Shinji extatically replied.
Each day for two more years there was a clash of blades and an exchange of trash talk and laughter in the courtyards. Shinji doing his best to master this almost impossible technique and the Master making some smart wisdom filled comment after Shinji failed another 1000 times. But there came a day when the Master fell ill. He insisted on continuing to train with Shinji even with his illness, and after another three years of training, there came a point when he could not even walk. Shinji took care of his Master and continued to practice the technique, although for half the time he would have usually. “Shinji…” The Master whimpered. “Come here…” Shinji made his way to his master’s bedside. “Help me up would you.” Shinji place his masters arm around his shoulder and helped his up. “I’ll be alright for now, go fetch my katana.” The Master ordered. Without saying a word, Shinji went and found his masters old Katana and brought it to him. “You have one shot at this Shinji, I only have enough strength left to grant you this one chance, this one chance to prove to me that you are a true Samurai.” His Master speaking in a soft voice told him. “but, Ma-“ Shinji was interrupted. “Do this Shinji, show me, you are a successful apprentice, give a dying man his wish, would you?” The Master spoke and readied his guard. Shinji readied his blade, took a deep breath…he could hear his heart beat as the room fell dead silent. And then…Shinji struck.His Master was thrown back, smashing through ten walls and landing on his back in the courtyard. “MASTER!” Shinji screamed and ran to his master, reaching him in less than a second. “Shinji, *cough* you did it, you mastered the technique, and you even used your Ki to run extremely fa*cought* *cough*st…You don’t know how proud I am of you Shinji, now come close, there is something I must tell you before I die.” The Master spoke.
He told Shinji his secret and Shinji reeled back. He fell to his knees and cried as the only family he ever knew died before his very eyes. Shinji picked up the body of his master and carried it to the peak of the hill. Shinji dug a deep grave and placed his masters body with his Katana in hand in the grave and filled it.
“That man was like a father to me…He taught me all I know and more…He fed me, watered me and sheltered me…all…all so I could be the one to inherit his power…his skill.” Shinji thought to himself looking over the recently buried body of his master. “I will continue your legacy master, I will bear this power, and this secret with my life.”His power is his Ki and the techniques taught to him by his master.
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Thanks for the quick response!
To elaborate:
1. After making so many failures and aging, one would just get tired after a while, plus, he was getting old, too old for his own good, those tendencies slowly faded away experiment after experiment and he was getting weaker and weaker.
2. We are never truly told where babidis/bibidis homeworld is, but because babidi had an underground base with many floors in it, I just kinda assumed that his home wouldn’t be too far, I guess I should’ve elaborated on that sooner, just felt like out of all nearby planets Earth would have a lesser chance of killing Lisonja.
*Lisonja is a Portuguese word that can mean sugar.
*I meant to elaborate on where she lived, guess I forgot, but it is near a village, similar to the one Oolong was terrorizing.
*I didn’t mean that the bandits were a threat to her, just that they tried to hurt her, but her power is at most somewhere above Raditz, below Nappa. If that’s too weak, I will gladly change it.
*Once again, I should’ve used a different term, however, I suppose it could’ve been ruptured from the impact(think of a Saiyan pod crashing) while Kibefeus’ magic prevented any wounds.
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Hello! I’d like to start off saying that this is my first time doing something like this, but I’d like to use this opportunity to better my storymaking skills and have fun at the same time.
Name: Shin
Race: Half-saiyan
Age: 11Personality: Acts polite, but not too friendly. Shin is the opposite of naïve, and not very trusting of others, but if you manage to befriend him, he would easily entrust his life to you.
General Appearance: Black hair, wears a brown jacket with a dark green undershirt. On his left wrist, he has a special dark green wrist guard, like what Goku wears sometimes. The wrist guard has a metal lever with a mechanism that, when pulled, releases a large explosion of ki that is slowly siphoned from Shin to act as a last resort.
Backstory: Shin’s father was an alcoholic deadbeat saiyan who always had other women with him. Shin’s mother loved him very much, but Shin’s dad was the opposite. He regularly abused Shin. Shin’s father initially arrived on Earth because he had heard from scouts that the planet had people that looked like saiyans, but were much weaker. He would proceed to take advantage of his own strength to have his way with anyone and everyone. One day, Shin grew tired of his life and left. In the dead of night, Shin, age 7, ran and ran and didn’t stop. By the time he had stopped running, hours had passed, and he had no idea where he was. He decided that he would get stronger, as the only thing he had ever learned from the countless abuse sessions was that strength was everything. He raised himself in the woods, fending for himself, and stealing from nearby villages and landfills when necessary. He was never officially trained in martial arts, but instead learned in a way similar to Gohan when he was four.
So, I’m sure there will be questions for me to answer. I will respond to them as soon as I can. I hope I’ll be accepted, or able to change anything needed to be accepted.
Discord: shinyrayquaza1 #3253EDIT: Shin yearns for the day he can finally meet his father again, and give him the beating of a lifetime. He also regrets running away and leaving his mother behind, but knows that the only thing that kept his mother with his father was himself, and since he was gone he believed his mother would leave as well.
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Alright! So, I’m not even gonna bother pushing with my old character, because that would probably be a waste of time! Here goes!
Name: Kori
Gender: Male
Race: Frieza’s Race
Age: 21
Personality: Somewhat harsh and not afraid to get violent, but is trusting of friends. Kori is cunning, and will try to get himself out of bad situations where he knows he can’t win with violence, however if it comes down to it, he will always be ready to fight. Generally much nicer than most of his race, but that isn’t saying much.
General Appearance: Skin tone similar to Frieza’s, but with an orange complimentary color rather than purple.Backstory: Kori was born to Emperor Toketsu of the South Galaxy. He ruled with an iron fist, and Kori grew up with a lavish lifestyle, where he was sheltered and told that none compared to him and his father. However, the empire commanded by Toketsu was filled with hunger, strife, poverty, and suffering. Kori didn’t know of the suffering outside of his sheltered life until one fateful day. Kori was 10 at the time. A group of rebels had become so massive that they started to believe they had a chance against Toketsu in a fight. They broke into Toketsu’s luxury home on the Capitol planet Groden. Kori was in a nearby room, and saw every single rebel killed at the hands of Toketsu. Because of the attack, Kori caught a glimpse of the outside world. Kori was shocked at the state of the city around him, as he had grown up within the walls of Toketsu’s luxury mansion. Toketsu did his best to make Kori forget about what he saw, but when Kori turned 14, he decided to leave. He was already at the age of rebellion, 14, and he was living a mentally troubling life in the mansion. He had had enough, and knocked out all of the guards at the front gate of the mansion. When he broke outside, he saw that the state of the city had worsened. Filled with mixed emotions that he couldn’t figure out, Kori ran. He flew off, beyond the atmosphere of Groden. By the time Toketsu had discovered that Kori was missing, it was too late. Kori flew through space, being able to survive as an arcosian. Eventually, he encountered a black hole. It was a weak, small black hole, but it was still a black hole. Unable to escape the pull of the black hole, Kori was pulled in. It then transported to the opposite side of the universe, the North Galaxy. He just so happened to be near Earth, and saw that it looked like it had life on it. Perplexed as to how he was in a completely different place from where he was mere moments ago, he decided he would settle down on Earth for the time being. The time being ended up being seven years. Kori met a small village in the deep woods. He somewhat assimilated into the village, making a few friends and getting an education, but he never truly become one of the villagers before disaster struck. The village was raided by bandits while Kori was off in the woods, gathering food for himself. When he came back, it was too late. The bandits had killed everyone and set fire to the village. In a fit of rage, he murdered the bandits not just in self-defense, but in cold blood. He was 17 at the time. From that day onward, Kori decided not to make friends so easily. He lived in the woods off of the land for the next four years, until… (This is the part where I pray that this is good enough to get me accepted, even if I have to change it a bit. If so, then this is where the backstory ends and the story begins)
Well, I hope this is good enough! If not, I am happy to edit it!
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Name: Cleric
Gender: Male
Race: Half-Sayan(lab experiment)
Age: 15
Personality:Cleric is a person with deep rage for the lost of his dear teacher and brother.,he has a strong determination,to be strong enough to fight his creator.(reason in backstory)and also,after his teacher death,he is a hard bonder.
General Appearance: In the past he used to wear a purple gi,but now he wears a dark gi,with dark pant’s and white shoes.He has Green medium long hair,and brown eyes.,his skin color is white,.
Backstory: After the deafeat of Cell,the Z Fighters thinked that was the last threat to the earth,that there were no more android or experiments,but that’s wrong,there were just a single experiment left.The Project HB.Named by the Genius : Doctor Gero.After his own son’s death,at the hands of Goku.Doctor Gero,fell in a depression,he just wanted revenge,more than that he just wanted his son back.But he couldn’t do that.After the many battles Goku has fought on earth,Doctor Gero nano bot’s took samples of the blood of Goku.Until he he could rewrite the dna of a fetus.After many tries.His creation finnaly gave him heart beats,he knowed that he succeded,he knowed that he could finnaly have his son back.But before that,he must get his revenge back,so he initiated the android plan.
Fasforward 10 months ( the child is in a human incubator)
After his failure,he knowed he couldn’t do anything else,so before he realesed #16 #17#1
He pressed the button that ejected his son,in a well calculated area where he could live.
-Live my son,live and get my well deserved revenge!
That’s what he thought
The Beginning of Cleric’s life.
After being ejected in that ,,safe’’ area,cleric finnaly opened his eyes,to see the sun,the sky,the land.
To feel the wind,the grass…
But Cleric’s eyes widened after seeing a large creatures groaning at him.Clleric beggined to cry.
But why?Why that creature exist’s?wasn’t that area safe?Well it seems after his fight with Vegeta and Goku.The large ki blasted thrown,created earthquake’s that,distrupted the A,I of the Tank,and the location was changed,
Resuming
After he beggined to cry,the creature were more closely to cleric,with every move he took….
But wait,what was that sound….a swoosh..!
A cut in the wind maybe?No that was a sword sound someone killed the creature.
It was a white haired Woman.He looked at the baby who was crying,and he reminded her of her own child.
Without a single explanation,he took that baby,he raised him,he trained him,as her own child.
After 15 years later,a pink monster beggined terrorizing people,he was out of control.And some Yellow haired guys were fighting him,what a mess,thinked Cleric.
After a surpisingly sudden earthquake,he,his mother and brother were scared,about what happened,
After some time later,they saw a big pinked ball made from energy coming at the earth,oblirerating them to pieces,but after a moment.He woke up.thinking where his mother and brother are,he had a reflex to look in the sky,it was her mother face.
He hear only few words.
-Be brave,we are good here
And her face,vanished in the air as the same with her voice.
After that Cleric…beggined to cry in sadness.But he stoped,he found another task to do.To find his past.
He took upon him a journey,so he will get stronger.After some time,he heard a rumor about a witch who could reveal someone’s past.He thinked that this is his chance,so he searched and searched about this witch.Until he found her.But wait,there is a price to pay,if you want know your past.Cleric didin’t have a choice so he payed his home land.The witch look upon her crystal ball,and what he saw,what he saw is unbelievable,he gave Cleric the ball to see for itself,after he saw that Clerc fell in his knees and he beggined to scream….at the moment….his aura bursted out of him.
What is this !?
He aksed himself….after he told the witch what happened,the witch kindly explained him the meaning of Ki.Then he found a way to know more about this.To go to the kami’s lookout.Well this is how I end it,the rest with the lookout,I will do it if I will be in roleplay !
Discord : Cleric#1848
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You might wanna apply for namekian, majin or maybe human, since we have had a large influx of saiyan/half saiyan applications recently. Also, about you being a bio-saiyadroid, you might wanna do some research before suggesting all this. Make sure people can believe your story/it doesn’t warp any KNOWN dbz facts.
Just a couple suggestions. Best of luck for your next application!
Peace out.
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Ok if the problem was race for my character I will re-apply as an Arcosian and change the backstory
if I need to be another race for diversity and change other subjects in his story please let me know and I’ll gladly change what I need to.Name: Arctyc
Age: 16
Race: Arcosian
Alignment: Good
Gender: Male
Appearance (1st form I’m assuming): Black “skin” with white bio armor and icey blue to complement it
Personality: Caring, Funny, Determined, Has a gentle heart and will not kill or do harm for no reason.
Backstory:
Arctyc was never determined to try and be the tyrant ruler that his father Yce ruler of part of the East Galaxy (That had not been destroyed by Broly and closer to the North Galaxy where a trip there is slightly more feasible) had wished, this had turned into a rift in their relationship from when Arctyc was young. Arctyc also was a “late bloomer” in terms of being able to transform. He was stuck at his minimal form while his peers were near mastering the second form like most did at the age of 13. This disgusted Yce and only wished to push his son more and more, hoping that once he transformed he would gain a bloodlust and thirst to get stronger, he refused to let his son be a disappointment.
Not seeing progress and not wanting to lose momentum in helping his son grow into a soon to be ruler, one day Yce took Arctyc on a trip to a planet on the other side of the North Galaxy called Earth. Yce took a Human and told Arctyc to “Make waste of this disgusting Earthling!” Arctyc stood dejected of the whole situation and refused saying that “He’s done nothing wrong, why must I hurt him father?” Yce demanded Arctyc once more to “Kill this horrid creature!” Arctyc responded with “Father, you are being the horrid creature, he has done nothing wrong, I refuse to hurt any being that has not done something to me!” Yce let the Human go and the two left and went back to the wasteland where they had left their space pods. As Arctyc was about to get in his space pod, Yce shot the pod with a ki blast blowing it up. Arctyc responded with “But why father!?” Yce said “If you are not willing to rule with an iron fist, you are no son of mine and you are not worthy to even return home.” Yce backhanded Arctyc sending him flying into a boulder nearby.
Yce abandoned his son and flew back to the Northern part of the Eastern Galaxy. Arctyc, once he got his bearings knew that it was futile to fly through space and get back home, his father no longer wanted anything to do with him, so he went back to the village with the human his father threaten named Kato. Kato was a martial artist in his late thirties who agreed to let Arctyc stay with him and train him as much as possible since Arctyc had spared his life. Arctyc has spent the last year getting custom to life on Earth and training so he never felt as weak as his father had made him feel as well as vowing to protect the Earth that had now, for the most part, had accepted him.
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In order to allow people to see another Majin application, I am posting my character I’ve switched to on here. The following took me about 3 hours to create the initial idea, and another 5 hours to come up with a backstory for. By no means does any applicant need to have this length, or level of content. We simply ask for a coherent, believable, and creative story. We also ask that you do not make your character insanely powerful to start. There was one character, Icey, who was accepted. We decided that the x1 mil gravity isn’t feasible for the start of our RP.
Anyways, here goes:
Name : Genjin Dakuhato
Gender : N/A (Refer to as He, since it is masculine looking)
Age : “Records state that Dakuhato first began appearing about 4500 years ago, but evidence leads to suspect that it is actually at least 10 thousand years old.” – Guide to Unknown Beings
Race : Majin variant – Genjin (Shadow Majin – Examples include Hirudegarn)
Alignment : Pure Evil
Personality : Dakuhato is a trickster by definiton. He enjoys making everyone suffer. He will torment anyone he pleases, and is a extremely threatening being. His very presence is able to send chills down your spine. He will not refuse a fight, and is keen to kill those he battles. If he is in danger, he is not afraid to vanish and escape.
Origin of Dakuhato : To understand Dakuhato, we must first jump back to roughly 5 million years ago. This will take us to the first moment where Majin Buu (Kid Buu) was reining terrorupon the universe under control of Bibidi. With every planet that Majin Buu destroyed, he would absorb some of that energy. He would then leave. However, after many millenia of destruction, this leftover energy began to build up. Although not much from an individual planet, the combined energy of some 200 million planets, and their people came together. This power alone was incapable of forming anything on it’s own. This energy would sit here and condense for nearly 5 million years, eventually starting to form some semblance
of a living being. The being began to take shape about 11 thousand years prior to the events of Dragon Ball. Within 1 thousand years of Dakuhato taking shape, he finally formed into his first state of existance. A Human-Like being that wasn’t entirely ethereal. This being was filled with the ultimate level’s of hatred, and malice. A sense of grief, and anger filled the being. The being had no physical properties, making it impossible for it to fight. The being did notice however, that it could inhibit the bodies of living beings, and take control. Dakuhato enjoyed this freedom to jump from body to body, but eventually grew bored of it. It had been 6500 years since it first formed. Dakuhato knew he was able to communicate without a
body, and so it began to torment the greatest scientist it could find. Dakuhato demanded the scientist and his team to construct a body for him. The scientist began to construct the body, knowing that he would die if he didn’t. After about 30 years of development, the first prototype was ready. The entire body was made of a Katchin skeleton, which could be turned into gas if willed by Dakuhato. The flesh was an Ooblek-like substance (Ooblek is a non-newtonian substance that is liquid like until force is applied, his flesh is similar to Ooblek, but retains
it’s solid state unless he needs to deform into a gas). The eyes were made with a similar crystal to the one shown in DBS, which was meant to power the time machine. Dakuhato was filledwith delight, as he inhibited the body. His first action was to test it out. Dakuhato vanished to a nearby city, and began to slaughter the people. The militia of the city quickly arrived to take him down.The militia pumped thousands of rounds into Dakuhato’s body, but to no avail. Each shot would fly to the center, and then out the other side. The holes would reform, leaving no trace. Amused, Dakuhato began to deform and reform next to his many opponents. With each time he reappeared, another person would die. Eventaully, Dakuhato began to notice an error in the body.The seemingly perfect material his flesh was made of began to harden. His flesh was turning to stone, and eventually crumble. Dakuhato was enraged. He rose to the sky and poured a large
amount of energy into a blast. The blast crashed into the city, leaving it a ruin of what it was before. He returned to the scientist who developed his body for him. He demanded a new material for his flesh. The scientist once again delved into study to form a new flesh. After another 20 years of research the new body was developed. The scientist discovered that the Katchin was causing the flesh to solidify as the bullets that struck would bounce off. The scientist removed the Katchin skeleton, and opted out for the entire body being made of the same
material, minus the eyes. Dakuhato once again tested this body out, and was delightfully surprised with his results. The body was perfect for Dakuhato, and thus, the scientist was useless. Dakuhato destroyed the man, and his lab, preventing anyone from learning of his body’s composition.We now jump to about 4400 years into the future.
Dakuhato largely remained in the Eastern Galaxy. Each year a new planet would fall under his control. This would continue until around age 730. In age 730 Dakuhato was faced with a large force of enemies. The combined power of these enemies would reach a power level of around 900 thousand. Dakuhato wasn’t very strong compared to this force, with a powerlevel of around 150 thousand. The enemies quickly defeated Dakuhato, and forced him to flee. They chased him to the edge of the Galaxy where he decided to flee away from the Eastern part of the Universe. Dakuhato would continue to flee until around age 735, where he would make his way into the Sol System (Our star!). Dakuhato crashed down onto the planet Earth, after doing some far out investigation. He concluded that the Human race would be a great start of his new found empire. He would control all of North Galaxy, starting with Earth. If it was the last thing he did. Dakuhato would go into hibernation until age 760 where he awoke after 25 years of sleep. He would then begin his conquest of planet Earth in age 761 – after figuring out where to start.
Power Levels (In Order): (5 Million Years Before Age) 4,000, (11000 YBA) 12,000, (4500 Years Before Dragon Ball) 100,000 due to the gathering of power from many different species. (100 Years Before DB) 150,000 which then drops to 3,500 after using most of his power to flee. (Age 760, post hibernation) 7,500.
General Appearance : Dakuhato’s flesh-like material is a dark purple (according to a Chakra guide purple represents extrasensory perception, inner wisdom, and evokes intuition). His crystal eyes are yellow (in the Chakra guide yellow is representing “mental activities, itillect, personal power, and will”). He wears white pants, with a green belt. No shoes.His Aura is black (Black represents anger, hatred, malice, etc… Hence why pure-blood saiyans have black hair. That is a trait of the species.)
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Name: Cleric
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 15
Personality: He has a very strong determination to achieve his dream,shy|(reason in backstory)and if he need’s to,he would play the hero.
General Appearance: He has a Black leather Jacket,black pant’s and white shoes.He has green hair and brown eyes,and he has a sword.
Backstory: Year 772
It all started when Cleric was just seven years old, in the Hill Village Holgar.
The Village was full of prosperity,and the people who lived in it,were living a decent life.
Cleric’s family was composed only by him and his mother,since his dad left him,and he didin’t have no brothers or sister,and because of that he needed to help his mother more than a 7 year’s old kid would.
His mother was a calm,and lovely person.He loved Cleric more than anything,and she didin’t want her child do that much work,but even if she tried to stop Cleric from doing work,she couldn’t because Cleric was a very stubborn kid.
In a Sunday,where every villager was relaxing,Cleric was out in the Village,in his favorite place : The Tavern.Why you ask?
Well for Cleric,he just liked the company of The Adult’s Especially a Man,since his dad left him when he was just 3.
As Cleric entered the Tavern,he was greeted.As he is their special ,,guest” .
Cleric stood at his usual chair,where he could see everything that is happening.
The bartender,as usually offered Cleric some juice.
Cleric Kindly accepted that offer.
After some time,a group of 2 individuals entered the tavern,the seemed odd.
One of them was a small ,,child” with a simple white face,and 2 red dot’s on his cheeks.
The other one,was a tall man,with white skin,and…what is that,another eye?Cleric thought for himself.
As the 2 strangers aproached the bartender,they asked gently,where they could buy some food,and clothes.
The bartender wanted to tell them,but Cleric rushed in their conversation.
He offered to help them,as he knew the village.
The two of them agreed to be helped by Cleric and they carry on.
Cleric asked them who are they,and where they are from.
Cleric heard another 2 odd names,Chaotzu and Tien….hm Chaotzu..that sounds like food to me,Cleric Taught.
They told Cleric they were training for most of their lives,and that they travelled the world,to seek new methods of training.
After Cleric showed them the market,the 2 strangers thanked Cleric.And they beggined to look for their needs.
Cleric leaved the strangers with a goodbye,and run off home,to tell his mother everything about these strangers.
His mother at first didin’t believed him,three eyes?I would like to see that!his mother said.
Now it’s night,so Cleric went to bed.He needs to have energy for tommorow.
After he woke up,his mother gived him the breakfast,and told him to eat it fast,because they are going to check their Fruit Trees.
Cleric joyfull eated his meal and he put his shoes on,and was the first to go out of the house.
After some time,they arived at their Field,where plenty of Fruit Trees were planted.They seemed to grow pretty good.Cleric wanted to take one apple from his favorite tree,but he was stoped by his mother seeing a hill on fire,that was the signal if bandits were to attack the village.Both of them run as fast as they could back to the village,only to be captured.
The bandit’s took control of the village,as Cleric saw a old man,beaten up by the thugs,he rushed to his aid,but he was stoped by one of the bandit’s grabed him,and throwed him in the ground,he was pretty hurt,but thanks to working since a early age,he didin’t took lethal damage.
The bandit,laughted and pointed at his mother.And he said,to his leader if he could take her as his woman.
The woman looked horrified at the laughting of the bandit.As the bandit aproached,in a flash someone punched him in the stomach,making him to faint.It was this tall stranger from yesterday.The bandit leader looked at him and said.
-Boys end this freak.
After the thugs rushed at the tall stranger,he beated them,in a mere second.He then told the leader,if he wanted to try what the fainted thugs did.The leader backed off,and rushed to the exit of the village.But this stranger,appeared from nowhere in the face of the leader and punched him,making him faint.
The Stranger then leaved the villagers to take care of the bandit’s who layed on the ground.
Cleric with all his power,stood up and thanked him.The stranger looked at the child,and said to him that he has potential,and he shouldn’t waste it being a farm boy.Then he leaved the village for good,never being spoted again.
In that moment,Clerc’s perspective of Life Changed,and since that day,his dream was to be strong like that man.
Time-Year 779
Time passed,and when he reached 14 years old,he and his mother,argued that,when Cleric will have 14 years old,he would leave the Village,to train..
This was the moment Cleric was the most happiest person in his life,but the saddest too,because he could follow his dream,but he will leave everything he cares here,in this village.
His mother told him to do not worry about that,and he gave him a backpack,with all Cleric will probably need in his Journey.
Cleric,leaved the village,making Some of the villagers to cry,but not his mother,his mother was happy that he could live his dream.Cleric,wanted to search a place to train,a place to learn everything about what did that man did.
Early his journey was hard,running from creatures,hiding from bandits,he didin’t lived the life he used to in Holgar.After crossing alot of new villagers and cities,he found a House in the top of a hill,wich was 1 killometer away from a village.He didin’t had much food left,so he wanted to see if he could ask from the fammily of that house.As he wanted to enter,somone stoped him,and asked him,what he was doing there.He turned his back,and saw an old man.He told the gezer that he only wanted to ask for food,since he didin’t had much left.The old man invited him,in his house.The two of them beggined a conversation.And Cleric Told his dream,of being as strong as that strange warrior.
The Old Man,spaced out for a moment.Cleric asked what happend,and he told him,that he knows what that man did,he explained Cleric,that the stranger was using his life energy knowed as Ki.Cleric asked him,where does he knows that.The Old Geezer told him that from his old deacesed master,Mutaito.A shocked Cleric,standed up,and begged him,if he could train him.At first the old geezer refused,so he throwed Cleric out of his house,but Cleric stayed in front of his house for days,and finnaly the old man,accepted him as his pupill and since that he trained him.After a year of training,he told Cleric that he doesn’t have anything to teach him,so if he want’s to know anything more,he should go to his next destination,The Talking Cat Korin.
Cleric,was shocked and sad at same time,realising he would leave his master,and he would talk to a talking cat.
The master wished Cleric good luck on his next journey.
The journey to be more powerfull
The journey to Korin.Sorry for my grammar,it’s not my first language,and i try to be better at it.
Discord Cleric#1848
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Announcement
The descriptions for Shinjins and Demons, are done. You may now apply for either race.
Shinjin: are the beings born in the world of the Kai’s, born from the fruit of a Kaiju tree. Those who are born from a golden fruit can live for millions of years, while those who aren’t, live for around 75,000 years. Their powers range from levels of King Kai, at 3,500, to the power of beings like Zamasu who are closer to the limits of Goku and Vegeta. They’re also able to use maagic similar to Majins and Demons, unlike other races.
Demons: Members of the Demon Realm race tend to be more powerful than average, and are generally shown to possess exceptional potential skill in magic, and fighting power. The inhabit the Demon Realm, living for thousands of years. They are pretty much 100% evil in nature, however not all are violent.
Good Luck, to the applicants applying for these two races
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Mosan, told me you were gonna apply sooner, or later. Anyways, as I see you misspelled “since” with “sense”, the story is very original. Which I like, but their somethings I would like you to answer and work on.
Start with some with elaborating on some stuff, like
Who are his parents, What was they’re legacy.
How come he had no room for himself to explore and earn his own way in life, what did he do?Also, elaborate more on his training. I doubt he would’ve reached 800 BP doing sit-ups,push-ups and squats only. Then that would mean his around Mr.Satan’s level of strength,or even Videl at beginning of The Buu Saga.
Elaborate, more on the person who wronged Bet, and spread lies about Bet.
Add more what he did throughout his life in school before he turned 17, and moved to Orange Star City (this takes place in Dead Zone which is way before they re-name the city).
I know, this is your first time. But, that doesn’t mean you can’t improve your applications. Anyhow, Good Luck!
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I’d say add a bit more content to your backstory, and as Lyme stated. I understand, that you and Mosan, have similar names irl. But you can still make your name original, it just sounds to me you added “do” in Mo”do”san, you don’t necessarily have to reflect your characters to you guys in real life. But, if you wanna keep that name, you may. Anyways, thats my point of view on it.
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Denied
This was god-awful, and Human’s are the easiest application to apply for.
Zero’s Backstory didn’t make sense at all, and wasn’t understandable, there’s too many grammatical errors . His friend tried to fight him for the most idiotic reason, and Zero killed everyone out of nowhere, and for no reason. Plus you didn’t follow the character submission template, you made your own.Now, for my favorite part out of all of this. You pulled shit out of your ass writing this honestly. The “Original SSG” was reincarnated into a Human. Ha-Ha, No. that doesn’t make sense , am sorry. But, it just doesn’t, I assume this was an attempt to get away being a Saiyan. But, like we previously said No, we’re no accepting any saiyans. Or any Saiyan God Reincarnated into a Human.
This application, was plain awful. I’d suggest make an effort like everyone else, or don’t even try at all.
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Name: ichiko
Age: 14
Personality: fun,outgoing,and determined. He’s pretty friendly of others but only respects his people that look strong.
General apppearence: gi or my Minecraft skin that consists of pants,jacket with red lightning symbol on back,and shoes.
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Name: Oozak
Gender: Male
Race: Namekian
Age: 28
Personality: Oozak is quite social for a namekian but does still like meditating alone. He is seen a trust worthy person who can be seen as being very noble. He similar to a saiyan enjoys fighting and training in order to become stronger. Although Oozak can be ignorant at times tending to only use his own ideas in order to further his goals.
General Appearance: His whole body is gree, with the lumps being dark yellow and outlined in red. He wears the demon clan trousers and shoes and the namekian shirt.
Backstory: Pixar was born into the Dragon clan and was a warrior type Namekian, something being very rare among the name koans as they lived peaceful lives rarely having to fight. But over the years since the passing of Nail fusing with Piccilo a squadron of warrior type name namekians were built up and trained in case an event similar to Friezas arrival were to occur, because of this these few individuals were trained in the early years of their childhood in order to make sure they could face most of their enemies. Oozak although one of the most keen, was slow when it came to training an improvement, this meant out of all of his fellow warriors he had to train the hardest to keep up. One day when he was training by himself by the edge of the village he thought to himself, “Why am I doing this, what purpose do I have to keep training, we have not had a single disaster on the planet since Frieza invaded our original home, is this all for nothing.” Seeking wisdom and a purpose he went to the elder of the dragon clan and asked for his wisdom on the subject. The elder lowered his hand and placed it gently onto Oozak’s head. “Why do you train my child? Why in this era of peace and prosperity?” Oxalis replied, “I just don’t see the point in wasting my precious time on training in order to face something that may never come.” The elder replied with a clam tone, “This is not about you Oozak, this is about the fate of our people, back when Frieza invaded our people could not predict that it would happen. We were not prepared and because of that our people suffered. Until you can accept that your purpose is to protect the good and innocent against something that may never come. You will never have a purpose and never show growth in strength my child.” Oozak left the elder and walked out into the vast fields of names, but then hearing a scream in the distance he flew over to see what had happened, a young namekian dangled by a cliff screaming for assistance, the child slipped and fell but as quickly as he heard the scream Oozak caught the young child bringing him back to the village. After letting the child go, a smile shone over his face, “This is what I am meant to do, prepare my self for anything that could happen, I feel it, a sense of purpose.” Rushing back to the elder he shouted, “I think I realise it now, why I’m hear what I’m doing, not just for our people but for all the good people in the universe.” The elder placed his hand again gently on Oozaks head suddenly a bright white aura surrounds Oozaks body and a overwhelming pool of energy spills out of him. “I have unleashed some of your hidden potential my child, your strength has increased greatly, but this is at a cost, I will send you to earth in order to experience all that the two namekians Kami and Piccilo once did in order to show to you that your purpose is not just meant for hear and that there will always be evil lurking in the dark corners of the universe. This strength I gift to you will help you combat that evil, you were not meant to just protect us Oozak, but the universe, I can see it within you, the burning passion of fighting and protecting those of good, now go experience the true dangers out there and know what it truly means to be a warrior namekian.” Oozak then left planet Namek in order to go to earth and to gain a better sense of his purpose and in order to grow stronger in order to defeat the evil that tries to envelop the world as we know it and to train and to become stronger in order to combat that evil. -
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The reason for him wearing demon clan trousers and shoes and being part of the dragon clan is simply because the only namekian clothes on earth were either styled after or found to be part of the demon clan as they were styled after Piccolo’s clothes which he has worn since the early days of his existence.
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Name: Pyro
Gender: Male
Race: Demon
Age: 17
Allignment: Neutral evil (Kills only when he wants to)
Personality: Pyro is not a crazy killer but, If you do anything to make him angry he will kill you in an instant. Pyro is very anti-social so he doesn’t talk much or like alot of social things. He doesn’t like the fact he is a Demon so he tries not to embrace it but when he gets angry his demon side fully comes out.
General Appearance: Pyro has human colored skin, Red eyes, and Deep black horns. He has white spiky hair. He has a Black trench coat and a ripped gray scarf. Pyro has black marking on his Chest and Shoulders. He has scars down his back, legs and arms. He carries a scythe on his back everywhere he goes as saftey.
Backstory: A King Demon by the name of Abaddon was feared most demons. He Chose Astarte a queen of spirits to have a child with. He arranged a marrage and soon had a kid. After the kid was born Abaddon Killed Astarte. Abaddon chose to name the kid Pyro as a fit for being his successor. Pyro tried to play with the other demons but got rejected as Pyro was feared because he resembled his father and people wanted nothing to do with him. Pyro soon got used to people picking on him at the age of 6. He trained most of the time while he was in the demon realm because, he has nothing to do. Pyro had no one that wanted to be his friend so he was alone all through out his life. At the age of 7 Pyro gain a incredible hate for his father relaising what he did to his mother. Pyro was beat by his father everyday giving him scars as training to get used to pain. No one would stop him because no one wanted to mess with his father. Pyro kept trying to find friends but there still was no luck. As soon as people saw him they ran in terror hoping his dad wouldn’t come. Pyro attempted to kill his father at the age of 10 but failed and put in a cage as a way of punishment. He was given a thing of food every 2 weeks to get him by. Pyro broke out of the cage about a year later. He hated everyone for not helping him for when he needed it. He soon grew murderous towards everyone that tried to stop him. People seen him coming down and ran away. Pyro ignored them and ran. He soon found a exit leading to a place called earth. Pyro didn’t want to look like a demon. He found a guy with a scarf and a trench coat. He killed them for it and ran to the exit. Pyro got blood on the scarf so he ripped the pieces with blood out. He put on the trench coat and scarf hoping no one would recognize him in the place he was going. He tried to hide everything that shown he was a demon but could not hide his horns as much as he tried. He kept running and later got to the exit. There was a teleport pad. He stood on it and pressed the button. He was transmitted to earth.
Pyro Started his journey on earth at the age of 11. No one really seemed to recognize him they just thought it was a little cosplay he was doing. Pyro found a weapon shop in village called Orham. He looked around and seen a weird scythe that was glowing. He asked the man about it and the shop keeper said it was a cursed scythe that was found years ago. Anyone that tried to use it was found dead. Pyro asked the man if he could have it and the man replied saying it was suicide. Pyro insisted he would take it because he has seen a scythe almost like it but a different color in his fathers room. The Shop keeper later let Pyro take the scythe but hated to do so. Pyro was testing the scythe and it showed huge amounts of power. Pyro found a weapon trap that was hanging the scythe up and took it. He put the scythe on his back and started out of the village. He walked to a mountain a few miles away and found a little cave he could hang out. Pyro wanted to try out the scythe so he took it off his back and started using it. It cut straight through the stone in the mountain. Pyro seemed to be able to use the scythe pretty well. Pyro was walking wandering around for about a year learning to use the scythe of his until he found something that caught his eye in a town. He found a man talking about Ki to his friend. Pyro ease dropped on the conversation trying to get to know as much as he could. He soon figured out how to use his ki. He made a black ki ball about the size of his hand. It exploded making the men run knowing they were getting spied on. So Pyro wandered around kept trying to use ki. He lied down in random places just to sleep. He would sleep in a tree, on the grass, in a cave, on a rock, wherever. He could only make little Ki blasts at the beginning. He soon was able to make a beam and a wave. He was so excited that he learned this new power it was almost all he did. At the age of 14 Pyro made a little fort out of trees. He used his scythe to cut them down and picked them up. He gathered tons of logs over time and later grew tons of strength doing it. Pyro decided to train. Pyro trained his strength, Endurance, and Ki control. At the age of 15 Pyro soon discovered a way of flying. Some Hikers tried to talk to Pyro trying to get him to have a house. Pyro ignored them and kept training. He trained Ki control and could now form Lasers and Disks as well. He held out a finger and gave a deadly small laser a try. He shot a black laser out of his finger making a whole all the way through the mountain. Pyro was impressed by what he was accomplishing. He loved being out and not bothered by anyone. He hated life in the Demon realm and wish he had ran away sooner. Pyro soon developed a skill from his mother which allowed him to see spirits. He became aware of the dead without even knowing them. He could see them but not interact. He could switch the ability on and off but he never knew where it came from. Pyro tried not to worry about it too much but he could use it if he really needed to as it cost alot of his stamina. He kept training til the Age of 17. He decided he should go out and see what he could discover instead of being cooped up in a tiny place. He destroyed his house and started off on his Journey.Discord Client #3476
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Name: Oozak
Gender: Male
Race: Namekian
Age: 28
Personality: Oozak is quite social for a namekian but does still like meditating alone. He is seen a trustworthy person who can be seen as being very noble. He similar to a saiyan enjoys fighting and training in order to become stronger. Although Oozak can be ignorant at times tending to only use his own ideas in order to further his goals.
General Appearance: His whole body is green, with the lumps being dark yellow and outlined in red. He wears the uub chest, the hercule legs, namekian shoes and the #6 white bodysuit.
Backstory: Oozak was born into the Warrior clan as he was a warrior type Namekian, something being very rare among the namekians as they lived peaceful lives rarely having to fight. But over the years since the passing of Nail fusing with Piccolo the warrior clan warrior were built up and trained very intensely in case an event similar to Frieza’s arrival were to occur, because of this these individuals were trained in the early years of their childhood in order to make sure they could face most of their enemies. Oozak although one of the most keen, was slow when it came to training an improvement, this meant out of all of his fellow warriors he had to train the hardest to keep up. One day when he was training by himself by the edge of the village he thought to himself, “Why am I doing this, what purpose do I have to keep training, we have not had a single disaster on the planet since Frieza invaded our original home, is this all for nothing.” Seeking wisdom and a purpose he went to the elder of the dragon clan and asked for his wisdom on the subject. The elder lowered his hand and placed it gently onto Oozak’s head. “Why do you train my child? Why in this era of peace and prosperity?” Oozak replied, “I just don’t see the point in wasting my precious time on training in order to face something that may never come.” The elder replied with a clam tone, “This is not about you Oozak, this is about the fate of our people, back when Frieza invaded our people could not predict that it would happen. We were not prepared and because of that our people suffered. Until you can accept that your purpose is to protect the good and innocent against something that may never come, you will never have a purpose and never show growth in strength my child.” Oozak left the elder and walked out into the vast fields of namek away from the village, but then hearing a scream in the distance he flew over to see what had happened, two young namekians were cornered and trapped in a cave by a dinosaur and were both screaming for help, one child decided to run out and quickly fly away but would not be fast enough to escape the dinosaurs teeth. But then suddenly Oozak grabbed the young child bringing him to the top of a cliff well away from the beast. But in the distance the other child in the cave tried to fly away from the dinosaur as well as he had not seen Oozak rescue the other child and therefore thought that his friend has been able to escape by himself successfully. The dinosaur managed to snatch the child with its bare teeth, bringing him into its mouth killing the child and ending its life. Dropping the other child off quickly at the village Oozak fell to the ground stricken with grief and anger, about how he wasn’t quick enough to save that child from death, about how he wasn’t prepared enough to face that event. A tear slipped down Oozak’s eye while he gritted his teeth in anger. But then he face turned from anger to a neutral painless expression. He had now figured out what his life of training was meant for, in order for him to be prepared enough to face these kind of events, to train to be quick enough to save that child, “This is what I am meant to do, prepare myself for anything that could happen, I feel it, a sense of purpose.” Rushing back to the elder he shouted, “I think I realise it now, why I’m hear, what I’m doing, not just for our people but for all the good people in the universe.” The elder placed his hand again gently on Oozaks head suddenly a bright white aura surrounds Oozak’s body and a overwhelming pool of energy spills out of him. “I have unleashed some of your hidden potential my child, your strength has increased greatly, but this is at a cost, I will send you to earth in order to experience all that the two namekians Kami and Piccolo once did in order to show to you that your purpose is not just meant for hear and that there will always be evil lurking in the dark corners of the universe. This strength I gift to you will help you combat that evil, you were not meant to just protect us Oozak, but the universe, I can see it within you, the burning passion of fighting and protecting those of good, now go experience the true dangers out there and know what it truly means to be a warrior namekian.” Oozak then left planet Namek in order to go to earth and to gain a better sense of his purpose and in order to grow stronger in order to defeat the evil that tries to envelop the world as we know it. In the ship Oozak looked out of the window back at his planet gripping the side of a chair. “I will become stronger, and I will make sure I can face any problem head on, because that is my purpose.” Oozak then put on his weighted clothing and then begun his training aboard his ship, wasting some time for him as he traveled to earth and to help him grow in strength. As he begun to train a smirk appeared on his face which turned into a smile, showing his excitement on arriving at earth and finding out what it truly means to be a defender of the universe.Discord client #6933
This is my fourth time posting this and I have taken all the criticism and corrected accordingly. Hopefully this time will be the last.
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Name: Bonito
Race:human
General appearance: a jacket with the symbol of his master on the back of it. He has dark hair and red eyes and black pants.
Personality: cheerful,slacking,determined,and grudgefull.
Backstory: Bonito was born into a clan of warriors called the Mizuki. They were known for they’re reflexes and ocular techniques. Bonito has a normal childhood,considering that his clan were nomads. At the age of 10, he started training in the ways of ki, so he could help his clan fight other clans. Bonito was very talented and never even tried to improve. At the age of 12, he finally got a chance to prove himself when another clan attacked. Bonito quickly defeated 2 members of the opposing clan. Bonito’s minute of fame didn’t last long because when he looked around he saw his whole entire clan slaughtered. Walking through wreckage that was once his clan, he heard a voice calling to him. Following the voice, bonito found his old teacher laying on the ground impaled by a metal pole. Bonito started to cry, his teacher was his only real family after his parents abandoned him to fight for the clan at birth. His teacher told him to hide his tear and be strong, and put two fingers to bonitos forehead. bonito felt his eyes tingling and he realized his master had gave him the power of the mizuki clan before he died. After this,bonito promised he’d bring his master back and 3 years later he became a mercenary -
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Name: Ryuni
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 21
Personality: A bit of a loner, shy person, but will interact with people if spoken too. He is a neutral type of person who acts on his own accord whether if it’s bad or good, he does what he thinks is right for himself and to find his lost mother. He has long white hair resembling his dad’s hair color. He is a bit on the short side and uses the turtle hermits gi. He will do anything to further his own power to find the answer to find his mom, like becoming a android.Backstory: When Ryuni was a kid around age 10ish, he loved watching the world martial arts tournaments with his parents. He was amazed to see all the fighters participating in the tournaments, that’s where he discovered ki for the first time. He was shockingly in disbelief on how much power it gave off and the destruction of it. He wanted to practice it and use it for himself, but didn’t have the drive to do it.
A few years later have passed, when he was 16 he heard in horror that 2 space aliens crashed and destroyed a city. This city is where his dad worked, his dad worked for a tech company in another city away from Ryuni lived. Ryuni remember that’s where his dad worked and broke down mentally, his mom hugged him lovely trying to calm him down. After a few hours that have happen he came back into reality and remembered the days he spent with his dad at the martial arts tournament, all those good times and he also remembered “ki” and how it brought hugely amount of power and destruction. This is where he knew, this is the moment his life changed, the spark, the drive. He decided to leave home to find these masters of using ki he saw in the tournaments so he can protect his mother.
A few weeks later, he found someone asking around the tournament area about the people who fought in the tournaments. He found out through the Tournament announcer, their was a master called master Roshi. He only knew that he lived in a island in the sea, Ryuni thanked him and left to find more clues where to find Roshi’s island. Ryuni traveled the world asking in cities and villagers about the whereabouts of Roshi’s island and finnally found a tip from a girl named launch in a bar, who was very angry about Roshi for very certain reason. Ryuni thanked launch and slowly backed out of the bar with a little bit of fear from launch and went on his way to Roshis.
Another week later, Ryuni found the island and talked to Roshi about training in the way of ki and martial arts. Roshi would gladly train Ryuni only if he found Roshi some dirty magazines, and Ryuni agreed to it. Ryuni stayed with roshi training for 4 years under the Turtle hermit tutelage mastering the way of the martial arts and chi. Ryuni decided to travel the world furthering his mastery.
1 year later, Ryuni went back home to visit his mother. When he went back home he found nothing was there, no city, no life just emptiness, vast emptiness. Ryuni now travels the world to find his missing mother and city, to find what was taken from him, to find something. Who and what did this, Well you just have to find out on the next installment of Dragonball z!
Hopefully that’s good enough haha
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I do not know if they still accept people here but here I leave my character (I hope you understand my English, I speak more Spanish than English, anyway, here goes)
Name: Son-Goeru
Gender: Male
Race: Half-Saiyan
Age: 16 years
Personality:
His way of being is a combination of that of his great-grandfather Son-Goku and Vegeta’s. Still they say he looks more like Vegeta when he’s serious.
But when it is not serious it is a bit similar to that of Son-Goku
History:
Son-Goeru is the son of Goku Jr.
When Goeru was 7 years old he was attracted by the martial arts of his father Goku Jr. This one began to train with his father for 4 years in these 4 years and Goeru was good in the martial arts. When Goku Jr, his father, sees the potential that his son has, he tells him
Goku Jr: Hey Son! And if we go to the martial arts tournament?
Goeru with doubts answers him
Goeru: Sure, but … What is a martial arts tournament?
Goku Jr tells him
Goku Jr: It is a tournament where people compete to see which of them is the strongest, of course that has a great Zenis reward
Goeru to hear from his father the phrases “It is a tournament where people compete to see who is the strongest” they wanted to participate and to show his father that he is the strongest.
When arriving at the tournament and after registering and that Goeru has won a few battles, someone arrives … It was an Arcosiano (Of course that Goeru did not know what an Arcosian was) the Arcosiano falls towards the position of Goku Jr about 6 meters ahead Of him, Goku Jr puts his son behind him to protect him since he knew that if something happened to him, Goeru could not do something. The Arcosian tells Goku Jr
Arcosian: Hehe … I will avenge the death of my great Grandfather … Lord Freezer! THE EMPEROR OF THE UNIVERSE! HAHAHAHAHA (malevolent laughter)
The Arcosiano raises his left hand and kills Goku Jr with a lightning that struck his heart, causing the death of Goeru’s father …
Goeru could not do anything, all he did was run and hide like the spectators did …
The Arcosian leaves the place
Goeru already hidden in a place, explodes in anger screaming
Goeru: DEMONS! WHY?! WHY MY FATHER !?
Goeru unleashes a ki that shakes the place, unleashing 100% of his power at the time, but without him can transform into SSJ.It’s been 6 years and Goeru is still looking for the one that killed his father and will continue to look for him. But he still does not know about SSJ.
Goeru: I will not stop looking for that unhappy man, until I kill him …Goeru to honor his ancestors and his father wears a Gi that he himself made http://imgur.com/a/wLqfq To honor his great grandfather Bardock. He uses a Blue Bandana, to show that despite how weak he was, he was not afraid to face a freezer.
A Gi to honor his great-great-grandparents Son Gohan and Son Goku mean that a weak person can become the most powerful person in his universe. And Some Black Shoes and Pants because … Because he thinks he looks cool on him xD
Abilities: Kamehameha, He knows how to fly a little but he has not mastered itI will wait patiently for your response, here is my Gmail and Discord, Goodbye, Adiós 😉
Gmail:joeljesus99@gmail.com
Discord: It’s on the Discord server of Jingames, you can find me as “THJGames” -
I knew I should redo my story, because I am from the GT Universe and the Sv accepts Universe from DBZ and DBS, not bad, keep this in mind for those who want to enter this sv. I’m going to use something from my old story, it will not have many changes, but I hope this one is valid. There goes the other story.
Name: Toeru
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 10 years
Personality: The personality is normal, it can be serious and fun, but you can not mess with your loved ones, because it explodes in anger (Still can not be transformed into SSJ)
Aspect: He looks like his father, Turles, in the physical aspect, His skin is like his mother’s, light color, not like his father’s that is dark, Dark hair. And a saiyan armor http://imgur.com/95TLgFe
Story: Toeru is the son of Turles. In the year 749 Toeru was born having 4 months of birth, at 5 months of age Turles left his house, since he mistreated the mother of Toeru and wanted to conquer planets, passed the time and the Day that someone destroyed the planet Kabocha where they inhabited, before this, Toeru’s mother quickly grasps it and puts it in a space capsule to escape to the earth, this happens in the year 758, in the year 760 Toeru turns 10 Years in the earth 1 year before the arrival of Raditz, its power of fight is of 4,500 goes by the earth exploring until finding someone with whom it becomes strong …
Toeru is walking through the Garlick Jr Fortress (this one without knowing what the place was defined as Orange Sky) and sees 3 people fighting, a human and 2 greenish-skinned men http://imgur.com/vHD0711 . Toeru knew he did not could stay in the place because he would die, but from fear he could not move, suddenly an expulsion of air suspends him through the air, and he reacts and leaves, since then he knew that he had to become strong to be rival with these people. -
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Sorry that character kind of sucks that back story i will do new one.
Name: Kazuto
Race: Halfsayian
Personality: Kazuto likes to have fun but hes still serious type of guy and he likes to have people around.
Age: 17
General appereance: I would like to have yardrat clothes if thats okay or gohans clothes from cell saga.
Backstory: There was one sayian who survived the vegeta planets explosion like goku and vegeta he moved to earth and had baby with one of the peoples who lived on earth that baby was kazuto. Kazuto was born in small village, but then thing started to happen acrosian like frieza killed the whole village leaving one behind that was kazuto all others was killed because he was looking for the sayian (he could turn to supersayian 1-3) so kazuto was left behind he did grow up like goku (didnt know anything about girls and etc) But he always had that one thing that he couldnt stop it was in her mind fight and train to become fighter so he started to train he found master named master Masert he was strong human on earth so he started training kazuto and he discovered that kazutos power growth every time they fought and trained and kazuto catched her master in one year and then master told kazuto about tbe dragon balls and now kazuto is looking for them and the legendary fighter named Goku. thats my story sorry about the text errors if theres some but hope you like my character see ya! -
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Name: Frigid
Gender: None, but I’ll call him ‘he’.
Race:Arcosian
Age:17
Personality: Rough and harsh to many people. If he trusts you, he’ll be friendly…if not, watch your back…
General Appearance: He’s green on most of his body, but his heads dome is red. He has electric blue eyes and a long tail. There’s a cut on the left side of his chin, and another right above his right eye. He’s covered with minor cuffs and scrapes all over his body, owing to his tough life.
Backstory: As soon as he was born, it was determined by all his relatives that he would join the Frieza Force as soon as he was old enough. A cousin of Frieza’s, he did not like the way Frieza heartlessly destroyed, conquered and enslaved planets. As soon as he was able to land a punch on his father (age 2) he was enrolled in the Force’s training program. There he was taught how to kill mercilessly and without any regret, how to effectively escape from any tricky situation, and most importantly, how to be an obedient member of the Force. The training served him very well, and by the age of 11 he was hardened in every aspect – except his heart. He could rival many of the Force’s strongest, maybe even kill some of them. But he could not bring himself to harm even the weakest, most despicable one. One day however, he found even more reason to hate Frieza-enough to want to kill him.
Frigid’s father was a respected member of the Force, and he had never been unsuccessful on a mission. However, one day, he had to go to a planet called Arbi, to destroy it, and kill a certain person living there…
The mission was a disaster. Many of the Force died, and the planets citizens escaped. Frigid had never seen Frieza so angry, as he was that fateful day. Frieza stood up, mocked Frigid’s father for a while, then… shot him with a laser. Then he looked at Frigid and said, “Apparently there’s a vacancy at the spot of general…I’d like to promote you,unless you refuse?” Frigid knew that refusal meant ending up like his father, and even though he wanted to strangle Frieza with his hands, he accepted. The following 5 years were easy going for him. He raised many planets and oversaw many missions, the most famous one being that of Planet Vegeta. But Frigid never forgot his desire to kill Frieza, and waited for his chance patiently. Finally, it came. He was a few months from his 17th birthday and he had been on Planet Vegeta many times. The Saiyans were innocent, but Frieza had decided to destroy them all…
As Frieza fought the Saiyan named Bardock, Frigid saw his chance. As soon as Frieza was done with planet Vegeta, he’d be exhausted. And then, he’d strike. Everything went according to plan until he punched Frieza. Frigid’s cousin turned around chuckling, and said, “So eager to die, cousin?” ” You killed my father, the Saiyans and countless others. You must die!” shouted Frigid. Frieza’s eyes showed a glimmer of amusement as he ordered the Force’s members to lock away Frigid for the rest of his life. 10 years Frigid spent banging at walls, trying to break down his cell door, and being beaten up for it. His dinner was the scraps from a dog’s(metaphorically) and he was treated like plumbing. At last, one day, the jailer opened the door completely while giving him food, which was when Frigid jabbed him in the stomach. Though it was successful, Frigid was shocked that it had HURT. He’d been weakened in this cell to the extent where he was an infant. -
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Honestly, To say I’m not the official owner, is just a false claim. I payed for the server with my own money which makes it mine, and I’ve worked hard on it with my good set of staff members. Anyways, I really don’t hate none of you don’t know why you’d say that since lets be real is nonsense, but everyone is entitled to their own perspectives and opinions. I’ve left for my own personal reasons. I said to Alex, that he can continue being the owner of you guys. Which shouldn’t be a bother to you guys, He asked me to join up with you guys, I didn’t burn anything, I’ve still have contact with some of you, just not all of you. I’ve shown no hatred with any of you, so I kindly ask If you could stop pulling shit out of your ass. As, I will still help Alex out with whatever he needs. He’s a one of my considerate friends that helped out a lot in the server, So for that I will help with whatever he needs. As, for you guys being so desperate of Alex making a new DBC Server, Is not a problem with me at all. I even gave Alex the same map we we’re using. And, I’m pretty sure I’ve apologized to people, in my frustrated moments. Now, for the part that really disturbed me the most. You say, I blocked one of my staff members…Let’s not twist the truth here. I didn’t block you, You blocked me after our heated discussion and differences. We’ve probably exchanged words that maybe we should’ve kept to ourselves. Also, I was trying to get you back into the server, but it didn’t work.If you needed to say something that you didn’t like, You know I wouldn’t have lashed at you. Hell, I even made you Head-Admin. You did some many great damn things for my server. Kinda Disappointed, that your trying to take me down, As If I were your enemy. Anyways, This where I’m gonna leave that situation at and Hopefully, this is settled with.
Also, If you wanna go make a better server, than mine. Go ahead, that has nothing to do with me nor does it concern me.
Note: Sorry For the inconvenience, for those who want to apply.
Edit: Amai, I didn’t block you. I have no reason to block you. The thing is I didn’t have you added, and since we’re not in the same discord anymore we can’t DM.
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Hm?, I thought you had better things to do. Well seems like your having fun with this drama.
Anyways, This is gonna be my last response to this. And I suggest you do the same too. Grow Up, calling me a “little bitch” was unnecessary and immature. Like I previously, stated I didn’t block Amai. The reason due to him not being able to contact me was, that we aren’t in the same discord. So, stop letting you anger blind you and think I blocked him, Which I obviously didn’t nor do I have the need to. Care about myself? That’s funny, When this whole thing started, I dedicated my time to each of your characters, and make the characters fit into the story, and even go as far make their homes which I didn’t have too. With help give a better productions to you guys, so you can have a good roleplay experience. But hey, I only care about myself. Right?
Well honestly, its pretty pointless. You could’ve just simply made a new thread, and didn’t have to waste time of your life to post here. We could’ve simply avoid this and go our own ways. But no, you decided to go the other way which leads to a problem. Okay, un-white-listed is one thing, and another thing is banning, try not to get those things mixed up next time. My reason is…Well 1. I’m not the owner of that roleplay, 2. You think I’m gonna keep paying for a server, that I wouldn’t be using at all and letting people with whom I don’t speak to get on? No, If I’m gonna keep paying for the server, I’ll be using it for what I want to do with it.
Confusing?, to you maybe. Bullshit? not really.
Personally Attacking who and for what for? I’d really like to know, Oh wait you mean you and some others, that I don’t feel they should be brought up? Bringing people, who aren’t accepted and didn’t have a good application worth our standards. messing with them in discord, and then kicking them off. After, I told you guys to stop. You guys kept doing it various of times. You shouldn’t have been concerned. I simply left Alex in charge with the roleplay, because he has had experience hosting his own server, and from what I heard he has done it pretty well.”If you’re going to accuse someone of something, at least know what you’re actually talking about first. Otherwise you’re not going to win anything in life.” Likewise.
” I never said the server wasn’t yours. I said the original group wasn’t yours. But once again, assuming.”I wouldn’t be too sure about that, I’ll make it bright enough for you to read, and at no point in my post did I talk about the group. Heck, I didn’t even notice it was in your post
“Zyph; the current owner of this RP, is no longer the official owner.”
You see it?
“Go to hell, I’m done with your bullshit.”
No, Negative. I’m done with YOUR bullshit, so you can simply have your dumps back and shove it right up your ass.Don’t come back and post something else your wasting my time, your time and everyone else.
Again, I want to sincerely apologize to those who want or wanted to apply. But unfortunately, someone wants to keep going with this. But Hopefully, this is all done with right now.
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Actually, I posted it along with an explanation. So, ya know, go fuck yourself. Because I even told people what the difference was, but you of course only care about the fact that I linked it there, not the details behind it.
Heaven forbid I also state I built a decent number of the houses! Oh no!
I never declared us “the roleplay”, at least not intentionally. You have your group, we have ours. Not to mention, we never said were the “official” we said we were the “original”. Major difference.
Bring up some actual facts, and maybe, just maybe, you can actually win the argument. Because right now you’re just declaring me to be a “prick” and “idiotic”, even though I’m the one providing facts, and even am willing to provide evidence. As for the word “bullshit”, I use it because it gets the point across. So, yeah, you’re the one who can’t think straight. And, you obviously don’t know me too well, since you don’t understand that I love a good debate.
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I’m pretty sure, your not superciano.
Anyways, you need to use the whole application format. Add More on your personality, add the general appearance. Your backstory is too bland, you need to work on it more. The role play takes place during the tree of might/ namek saga, so you’ll need to change the time period I’d advice you to look at the applications that’s have been accepted in the past. And have some idea of how a good application should look like. Anyways, Good Luck!
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Name: Aran (Has no meaning, pronounced similarly to Aaron)
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: Sixteen
Personality: Aran doesn’t appear to be as laid back as the average person due to the constant desire to better himself. He doesn’t believe that he’s any weaker than Saiyan’s and other alien life forms, even with the obvious power difference. He’s a proud young man with a lot to prove.
When he does get the chance to relax around others, Aran is generally quiet as he doesn’t have much to contribute to the conversation. Those who’re close to him know that on the inside, he’s a nice boy with a slightly dark outlook on life. He can be described as Chaotic Good.
General Appearance: Aran sports a red Gi which appears to lack any symbols, indicating that he isn’t a member of any schools, being taught by his father. Beneath this Gi he wears a dark gray t-shirt. Aran’s hair is slightly unkempt, long strands fall from his head with his bangs brushed to one side to keep it out of his eyes; Aran’s eyes are blue.
Back story: To talk of Aran, one must first mention his parents. His mother was average in most regards, slightly exceeding the normal standard of beauty. His father was an oddity, having been in control of his Ki from a young age. The two met by chance and gradually began to develop a close connection, eventually getting married before deciding to have their first child.
Their love only grew stronger as their child developed. Once he was born, however, his mother passed away due to complications. Left without the love of his life, he could only raise their child in her memory. He grew up in seclusion, sharing a small home in Mount Paozu with his remaining parent. At the age of four, Aran developed a slight control of Ki under the tutelige of his father. Alongside his combat training, Aran also learnt how to read/write and perform simple equations.
The years passed by in a flash, following the same routine day-in and day-out. Aran’s strength was kindled in to a roaring flame! He was twelve years old when his father disappeared. Without warning, without indication, he had left in the night and didn’t return. The first few weeks were tough, being forced to hunt for himself with no-one to talk to. Over time, he became used to seclusion. He passed through his hormone-fueled years relatively quickly, able to be described as ‘mature’ to a point.
His life wasn’t as eventful as most, finding security in his daily routine. Wake up, hunt, eat, train, eat a bit more before settling down for the night. Even at the age of sixteen, Aran’s schedule persists.
(Despite Aran being unaware of this, I think you may deny this application based on the father’s random disappearance. His father left so Aran could develop on his own. If he held his hand throughout life then Aran’d never amount to anything. Rather than taking the easy approach, he left his son completely. I also realize that the back story’s short, sorry. I just didn’t want to try and force something out which’d be much harder to read.)
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This, looks really good. Though, I’d like if you could elaborate in some areas.
For Ex.
You should add more about who your parents are, and how didn’t they meet. When did the connection between them started?
Explain what kinda training did Aran go through, to get where he’s at now.
Anyhow, you’d most likely get to join seeing as your application fits our standards. And its pretty well written. Once you add what I’ve asked you’d most likely get in immediately.
Also, I’m a bit skeptical about your personality, you say that he doesn’t consider himself weaker than saiyans. Are you implying he knows of them?
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Name: Aran (Has no meaning, pronounced similarly to Aaron)
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: Sixteen
Personality: Aran doesn’t appear to be as laid back as the average person due to the constant desire to better himself. He doesn’t believe that he’s any weaker than Saiyan’s and other alien life forms, even with the obvious power difference. He’s a proud young man with a lot to prove. (The trait where he thinks he’s no weaker than Saiyan’s/Aliens is for when he’s found out they exist. I just wanted to throw it in there.)
When he does get the chance to relax around others, Aran is generally quiet as he doesn’t have much to contribute to the conversation. Those who’re close to him know that on the inside, he’s a nice boy with a slightly dark outlook on life. He can be described as Chaotic Good.
General Appearance: Aran sports a red Gi which appears to lack any symbols, indicating that he isn’t a member of any schools, being taught by his father. Beneath this Gi he wears a dark gray t-shirt. Aran’s hair is slightly unkempt, long strands fall from his head with his bangs brushed to one side to keep it out of his eyes; Aran’s eyes are blue.
Back story: To talk of Aran, one must first mention his parents. His mother was average in most regards, slightly exceeding the normal standard of beauty. His father was an oddity, having been in control of his Ki from a young age. When his father turned sixteen he entered the World Martial Arts Tournament, and as if by fate, his final opponent was Aran’s mother. The two fought hard, but she couldn’t stand up to his Ki control. She lost relatively easily. After their bout, they decided to exchange contant information. One thing lead to another as they went out on ‘friendly dates’, both of them too shy to initiate the relationship. They matured and grew, eventually getting married before deciding to have their first child.
Their love only grew stronger as their child developed. Once he was born, however, his mother passed away due to complications. Left without the love of his life, he could only raise their child in her memory. He grew up in seclusion, sharing a small home in Mount Paozu with his remaining parent. At the age of four, Aran developed a slight control of Ki under the tutelige of his father. Alongside his combat training, Aran also learnt how to read/write and perform simple equations.
His training consisted of rigorous activities. Despite being gifted with Ki, it wasn’t to the same extent as his father. Each day’d begin with a spar, proceeded by a race around the Earth’s circumference with the use of flight. If that wasn’t enough, he’d by forced to do push-ups with heavy weight pushing down on his back on his back. It reached the point where he was forced to do the exercise one-handed with a giant boulder resting upon him. It was safe to say that his childhood wasn’t normal.
The years passed by in a flash, following the same routine day-in and day-out. Aran’s strength was kindled in to a roaring flame! He was twelve years old when his father disappeared. Without warning, without indication, he had left in the night and didn’t return. The first few weeks were tough, being forced to hunt for himself with no-one to talk to. Over time, he became used to seclusion. He passed through his hormone-fueled years relatively quickly, able to be described as ‘mature’ to a point.
His life wasn’t as eventful as most, finding security in his daily routine. Wake up, hunt, eat, train, eat a bit more before settling down for the night. Even at the age of sixteen, Aran’s schedule persists. His training normally consists of sparring with a ‘split form’ created of his own energy, honing his technique.
(Despite Aran being unaware of this, I think you may deny this application based on the father’s random disappearance. His father left so Aran could develop on his own. If he held his hand throughout life then Aran’d never amount to anything. Rather than taking the easy approach, he left his son completely. I also realize that the back story’s short, sorry. I just didn’t want to try and force something out which’d be much harder to read.)
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The application has been improved by a lot.
You added more than I expected which I like very much. Though we might need to some tweaks to it later on to fit into the story. But regardless this a really good application.
Accepted
Note: Leave your Discord here so, I’m able to contact you.
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if u were rejected by zyph join this discord
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guys if you want to be in an rp and you were rejected by Zyph join this discord
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Name: Nunk
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 24
General Appearance: http://imgur.com/WVfrHB6Personality: Very calm, likes to fight. Knows when to quit in a fight however. Doesn’t try to be the strongest but definitely tries to at least keep up with everyone else. Doesn’t like to kill his opponents after a battle despite the crane school teaching him to finish his enemies. Hates being helped in a battle. Very honorable.
Backstory: Nunk was born into a lower class family and was raised by them for the first couple years of his life. Shortly after he turned 3 however, his mother and father were killed by Mercenary Tao on a bounty. After killing them, he spotted Nunk sitting watching him slaughtering his parents, and in that moment, decided to take the boy back to the crane school where he would be trained in the Crane Fighting Style. His life training under Master Shen was a rough one, but he enjoyed being able to control his ki and get stronger. He decided he would go to the 22nd World Martial Arts to root for his school. He heard about the events that took place with Tien at the tournament, and decided he would not return to the crane school ever because of this. He decided that he would go and start his own farm and took a break from martial arts. After the attack of the saiyans, Nunk decided that he would try to train again in martial arts, but he had to find a new master to teach him. Nunk looking for a master is where he comes into the RP story.
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Sorry if it is not good at all, I am new doing these kind of things.
Name: Pawer
Race: Namekian
Age: 20
Gender: No-gender
Personality: Likes to battle and train, is not good making relationships because of his past, has a cold way of thinking. is a really proud warrior, is smart and knows when to stop fighting, does not speak too much, he is sometimes arrogant.
Appearance: Like a normal namekian, wears Tien’s Gi and Demon Clan Boots
Backstory: He was born in Namek, he grew up there training with his primogenitor even though he was the weakest in the place. His dad always said that he was going to be a strong warrior, so he kept training even after his father died from a suspicous accident when he went to do something in another village when Pawer was 8 years old, he was never told what really happened or why he left, he did not really ask anything because he was shy and did not know anyone in the village. Pawer kept training alone for the next years, nothing much happened after that. He actually resides in Namek, he never left the place he was born, so he is really ignorant about the universe.
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Honestly,
This application isn’t very bad but isn’t very good either. Its way too short and bland doesn’t really tell me who the character is at all. I’d suggest you look at other Namekians Applications that have been accepted. Try to apply the same effort they did, to your own application.
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Hm, odd I could’ve sworn we responded to you. If not sorry about that then.
Well, first off there’s barely anything in your backstory. It doesn’t really explain who your character is. Doesn’t really have anything interesting in particular, also I would like to point out that the shock-wave came out of nowhere, So If you wouldn’t mind elaborating where it came from that’d be nice.
Anyways, I’d advise you to put way more effort into your application. This isn’t really near close our standards. So, I advice you to look at previous accepted Saiyan Applications. And apply the same kind of efforts they did to your own application.
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No.
This application has little effort into it, Hawks Personality and General Appearance is vague and bland.to yourYour Backstory is too short..I’d advice you to add WAY more to your backstory. For ex.
Who was his GrandFather and Parents?
How is Hawks life through out the years?
Explain who were these group of bandits and why did they destroy the village.
What kind of training did he go through?
How was Hawk able to find their base so easily?
How does he know Roshi? Why does He know him? and why does he training with him?
Anyhow, If you wanna be accepted as a Half-Saiyan. I expect a better application from you.
Note: Take examples from previous Half-Saiyan Applications that have been accepted.
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I don´t know if this is still active, but I hope so. Here I leave my character.
Name: Toeru
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 10 years
Personality: The personality is normal, it can be serious and fun, but you can not mess with your loved ones, because it explodes in anger (Still can not be transformed into SSJ)
Aspect: He looks like his father, Turles, in the physical aspect, His skin is like his mother’s, light color, not like his father’s that is dark, Dark hair. And a saiyan armor http://imgur.com/95TLgFe
Story: Toeru is the son of Turles. In the year 749 Toeru was born having 4 months of birth, at 5 months of age Turles left his house, since he mistreated the mother of Toeru and wanted to conquer planets, passed the time and the Day that someone destroyed the planet Kabocha where they inhabited, before this, Toeru’s mother quickly grasps it and puts it in a space capsule to escape to the earth, this happens in the year 758, in the year 760 Toeru turns 10 Years in the earth 1 year before the arrival of Raditz, its power of fight is of 4,500 goes by the earth exploring until finding someone with whom it becomes strong …
Toeru is walking through the Garlick Jr Fortress (this one without knowing what the place was defined as Orange Sky) and sees 3 people fighting, a human and 2 greenish-skinned men http://imgur.com/vHD0711 . Toeru knew he did not could stay in the place because he would die, but from fear he could not move, suddenly an expulsion of air suspends him through the air, and he reacts and leaves, since then he knew that he had to become strong to be rival with these people. -
Is the server still up and am I still able to make a app for a character..?
Name: Lazarus
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 16
Personality: Lazarus has a pure mind and heart, Loves to eat loads of food. but he also loves a good fight and believes in honor instead of pride. Lazarus believes in a fair fight, sometimes drop his guard a few times at the wrong time. He is not very good with interacting with others due to a cruel history that he has had in the past.General Appearance: Lazarus is aleast 5’8 in height, and has short looking hair along with a scar that looks like a X. this scar is on his right cheek and has been with him for several years.
Backstory: Ten years before the planet vegeta or otherwise known as planet plant, two saiyans gave birth to a young baby boy. thus Lazarus was born and brought in to this world a few months later. during the birth his mother passed away due to the stressful pain coming from her body which she had gave birth to him. Sadly enough after the death of his mother. His father was pissed about this, but none the less his father took care of him for the next few years.When he hit the age of five, his own father would begin his training as a saiyan, each day things become more difficult as time passed by on the planet of vegeta. Lazarus started to grow older and more skilled out combat thanks to his own father. over time his father begin to notice that his own flesh and blood was becoming more talented in their sparring match and he could see in his own son’s eyes that he was going to be very clever and talented in hand to hand combt. but all around him other saiyans that watched and came by begin to dislike the child due to his personality.
Two full years passed before Lazarus’s problem begin on the planet vegeta, his own father was killed during a mission. now both of his parents was gone and no one could stop the other saiyans from attacking him. eventually three older saiyans at the age of twelve approached him and begin to assault him, but as he defended himself. the older saiyans gained a advantage over him and begin to beat him into the ground repeatly and breaking his limbs one by one. he screamed in agony as he felt his bones breaking and them beating the tar out of him. Eventually they stopped believing him was dead. Luckly for a few hours, he begin to threat his own wounds from being beaten on and after a few months after cleaning and threating his wounds. He eventually recovered and stronger then before.
After about three years or so. Lazarus was captured by a few saiyans and brought In-front of the king of Vegeta. the Saiyan king slowly begin to walk up to Lazarus before staring down at him before speaking directly towards him. “You are banished from vegeta.. you will be casted into space and sent to a planet.. You are a disgrace to your people..” From those words. Lazarus was forced into a space pod and sent to a distant planet that was known as earth. the young saiyan’s pod crashed into the snow lands of a random location causing his pod to open up after the impact. once he was awake the young saiyan climbed out and traveled south.
Once he traveled south. he found a home that was abandoned and took shelter on it.. along with finding a cloak with a hoodie to cover his face. the young saiyan took the cloak and left after resting. for the next five years. he traveled, eat, exploring and resting. the saiyan begin to grow more and more taller over the next few years, keeping his origins a secret and keeping a close eye out for anyone or anything that might cause problems.
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RP name : Rai
Minecraft name : ImJustRai
Gender : Male
Race : Sayain (Or Half Sayain if possible)
Age : Mentally 13.5M+ Years Old | Physically 11 Years OldPersonality : Rai (Main Personality) Nice, Neutral, Mostly mannered | Darkai (Second Personality) Angered Easily, Crazy, Megalomaniac
Backstory : A time God ,that was formed before Maj-in Buu’s first appearance, had took a part of himself and implemented a manipulative effect ,which was Time itself, and was placed into a Multiverse, The Dragon Ball Multiverse, which consisted at this time of 18 Universes, which were eventually destroyed by Zen-oh. After this about 72 Millennia later in all 18 Universes each one had “Big Banged” almost at the exact same time. Year 41 of the Divine Calendar, the Super Dragon Balls were created and spread through Universe 6 and 7. 75 Million years before Age, the 15 generation of Supreme Kai, Old Kai, in the Z Sword by the God Of Destruction (Who will now be known in this as G.O.Ds since its an acronym) Beerus. Circa 238 years before age Yamoshi appeared and had wreaked havoc on universe 7 until he was banished by the Time God. Age 691, The Hyperbolic Time Chamber was created by the Time god who, by zen-oh, had decided on the name “Rai”. Age 779, Future trunks is warned about Zamasu and Goku-Black. Age 789, Future Trunks and Rai work together to bring Dragon ball GT to an end but due to “the Ripple Effect” GT was restored by that timelines Grand Priest, during Rai’s time in GT he gained the ability of Super Sayain 4.
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Real Name: Marcus
Character: Ezra
Gender: Male
Race: Half-Saiyan
Age: 22
Personality: He is not opposed to sparing with others, but prefers to train on his own time. Other than that he is a relatively calm person.
General Appearance: He is slightly taller than an average human, normally wears a blue hoodie. He has dirty blond, side-swept spikey hair.
Backstory: Born on earth, he had been raised by his human father, after a freak accident during a training session with his Sayian mother. His father left after he turned 12, after this, he had been training to master god ki on his own to surpass his father and do what he could not. -
Before anything, i’d like to state:
1. Im not creative
2. Minecraft costs 125 bucks for me, so i have cracked (i live in brazil and dollar is expensive here)
So without further ado, let me begin my applicationName: Frostbite
Gender: Male
Race: Arcosian
Age: Late 20’s, maybe 26-30
Personality: I’d say neutral, but he’s more evil than neutral, kinda psychopatic
General Appearance: Picture below.
Backstory: Frostbite is one of the few lasting of the arcosian race. He was one of the Freeza Force warriors. He joined the Freeza Force on his youth, with the thought of helping Freeza, the Emperor of the Universe, on his mission to become Immortal. He quit the Freeza Force later on, knowing that he would be killed by Freeza if he stayed being there. He now lives in planet Earth, with the will to become stronger to kill the rest of the Saiyans and to become the supreme ruler of the galaxy! He knows he will be later noticed by Freeza, so he keeps on the watch. He’s currently trying to form some kind of an group, till now no success on adquiring people.
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Name:Frigid
Age: 17
Race: Arcosian
Gender: Male
Personality: A young lad with good intentions but terrible methods. He will go to any lengths to fulfill a goal even going so far as to torture his enemies
Apperance: A short man with navy skin and black bio armor. His eyes are a gleaming gold shade
Backstory: An arcosian with a love for adventure. He enjoys traveling planets looking for any thrills he can find. His parents are unknown.
Discord:
strikingSarcophagus#3086See ya!
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Name: Turrip
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Age: 19
Personality:Cocky, Dumb, Friendly
General Appearance: 1.55 Meter, Normal Body type, Tail, Short Dark hair, Saiyan Battle Armor, Red Scouter
BackStory: Was exiled to earth because of the low power level compared to other Saiyans on planet Vegeta. Has just arrived on Earth.
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