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October 17, 2015 at 20:50 #9418
CalveronGamingParticipantFinally the long awaited chapter sorry it took soooooo long i was just working on other stuff then i got really involved and wrote the other chapters but here you go this wil also be reenacted on my youtube channel https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCc3Bo8lhw9N4IeWGo0p3mhw
“GALACTIC CANNON!!” A white beam shoots out from behind the mountain tops and covers the area.
“Shit”, Crimson states. He charges up to kaioken times 20 and starts to fire a kamehameha to counteract the beam that was headed for him.
“KAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAMEEEEEE HAAAAAAAAAAAAA”, he fires at the beam and they both clash, sending shockwaves throughout the planet. “I, I can’t hold it back” Crimson says nervously, pushing with everything he has. His muscles grew tense and finally he pushes it back. “YAH!!” The two beams burst into a huge explosion. The smoke cleared out and Crimson’s clothes are tatter and his arm were broken. Blood runs down his face and he can hardly breathe.
“Shit, you win again Kulele.” A namekian flies in front of crimson. He is 98 years old. His skin is dark green and his patches are a dark purple. He wears blue gladiator armor. His only shoulder pad was covered in spikes. He had x straps going across his chest connected by a buckle. His gloves were long and fingerless. They have three metal implants in the middle of each knuckle. He wore white gi pants and his belt was a brown sash. His boots were very similar to one named Future Trunks.
“Yeah Crim. What is that, 1-5 now?” He smirks and extends his hand. Crim grabs his hand and pulls him up. “Here take this” Kulele says as he hands Crimson a senzu bean. As Crimson eats it, he sits down on a rock and takes a look at the area. “You did a hell of a lot better than last time, Crim.” Kulele says. He proceeds to use his magic materialization to pull up water and make it into a glass. He takes a sip and keeps talking, “But you still need to learn how to master kaio ken.”
“Yeah I know Kulele, I am still a human mind you.” Crimson replies.
“Don’t use that as an excuse. Listen, if you came into the hyperbolic time chamber with me you could get so much stronger.” Then a voice starts talking to Crimson.
“Hello, can anyone hear me?”
Crimson jumps up, “Eraser is that you? What’s wrong?” Crimson replies.
“It’s Earth, We are under attack.” -
October 18, 2015 at 02:03 #9425
CalveronGamingParticipantt
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October 18, 2015 at 15:51 #9437
CalveronGamingParticipantSeriously my two post are the most popular and as soon as i post the first chapter no one reads
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October 18, 2015 at 17:54 #9439
DobbyWithAQ
ParticipantPeople most likely did, but just didn’t feel the need to comment.
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October 18, 2015 at 16:27 #9438
Zaephon
ParticipantI did
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October 18, 2015 at 19:27 #9443
Zaephon
Participantgud job fam
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October 18, 2015 at 20:45 #9447
AkaSoraParticipantsoooo Avalanche is attacking earth already…
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October 18, 2015 at 20:45 #9448
AkaSoraParticipantgood job btw
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October 18, 2015 at 21:19 #9452
CalveronGamingParticipantNo not avanlanche not yet >:)
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October 21, 2015 at 20:46 #9556
SüńGòd EDParticipantYES FINALLY!! So far not bad on the story, I am really excited for the next parts, I hope its longer btw.
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November 2, 2015 at 01:09 #9948
TacoboyParticipantwait where is sewar in all of this!?
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November 2, 2015 at 01:26 #9950
CalveronGamingParticipantSewar is off training on namek
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November 2, 2015 at 01:30 #9951
TacoboyParticipantseems logical but he’s training alone?
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November 2, 2015 at 03:27 #9969
CalveronGamingParticipantNo he isnt
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November 2, 2015 at 03:28 #9970
TacoboyParticipantwho is he training with?
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November 2, 2015 at 03:29 #9971
CalveronGamingParticipantakasora first oc submission forgot the name
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November 2, 2015 at 03:32 #9972
TacoboyParticipantyou mean tanip?
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November 2, 2015 at 03:57 #9973
CalveronGamingParticipantmhm you guys hit it off
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November 4, 2015 at 09:59 #10127
SüńGòd EDParticipantAnd I am where.
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November 4, 2015 at 23:10 #10164
CalveronGamingParticipantYou are in the hyperbolic time chamber
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