Dragon Ball:The End Chapter 1

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    • #9418
      CalveronGaming
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      Finally the long awaited chapter sorry it took soooooo long i was just working on other stuff then i got really involved and wrote the other chapters but here you go this wil also be reenacted on my youtube channel https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCc3Bo8lhw9N4IeWGo0p3mhw

      “GALACTIC CANNON!!” A white beam shoots out from behind the mountain tops and covers the area.
      “Shit”, Crimson states. He charges up to kaioken times 20 and starts to fire a kamehameha to counteract the beam that was headed for him.
      “KAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAMEEEEEE HAAAAAAAAAAAAA”, he fires at the beam and they both clash, sending shockwaves throughout the planet. “I, I can’t hold it back” Crimson says nervously, pushing with everything he has. His muscles grew tense and finally he pushes it back. “YAH!!” The two beams burst into a huge explosion. The smoke cleared out and Crimson’s clothes are tatter and his arm were broken. Blood runs down his face and he can hardly breathe.
      “Shit, you win again Kulele.” A namekian flies in front of crimson. He is 98 years old. His skin is dark green and his patches are a dark purple. He wears blue gladiator armor. His only shoulder pad was covered in spikes. He had x straps going across his chest connected by a buckle. His gloves were long and fingerless. They have three metal implants in the middle of each knuckle. He wore white gi pants and his belt was a brown sash. His boots were very similar to one named Future Trunks.
      “Yeah Crim. What is that, 1-5 now?” He smirks and extends his hand. Crim grabs his hand and pulls him up. “Here take this” Kulele says as he hands Crimson a senzu bean. As Crimson eats it, he sits down on a rock and takes a look at the area. “You did a hell of a lot better than last time, Crim.” Kulele says. He proceeds to use his magic materialization to pull up water and make it into a glass. He takes a sip and keeps talking, “But you still need to learn how to master kaio ken.”
      “Yeah I know Kulele, I am still a human mind you.” Crimson replies.
      “Don’t use that as an excuse. Listen, if you came into the hyperbolic time chamber with me you could get so much stronger.” Then a voice starts talking to Crimson.
      “Hello, can anyone hear me?”
      Crimson jumps up, “Eraser is that you? What’s wrong?” Crimson replies.
      “It’s Earth, We are under attack.”

    • #9425
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      t

    • #9437
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      Seriously my two post are the most popular and as soon as i post the first chapter no one reads

      • #9439
        DobbyWithAQ
        Participant

        People most likely did, but just didn’t feel the need to comment.

    • #9438
      Zaephon
      Participant

      I did

    • #9443
      Zaephon
      Participant

      gud job fam

    • #9447
      AkaSora
      Participant

      soooo Avalanche is attacking earth already…

    • #9448
      AkaSora
      Participant

      good job btw

    • #9452
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      No not avanlanche not yet >:)

    • #9556
      SüńGòd ED
      Participant

      YES FINALLY!! So far not bad on the story, I am really excited for the next parts, I hope its longer btw.

    • #9948
      Tacoboy
      Participant

      wait where is sewar in all of this!?

    • #9950
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      Sewar is off training on namek

    • #9951
      Tacoboy
      Participant

      seems logical but he’s training alone?

    • #9969
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      No he isnt

    • #9970
      Tacoboy
      Participant

      who is he training with?

    • #9971
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      akasora first oc submission forgot the name

    • #9972
      Tacoboy
      Participant

      you mean tanip?

    • #9973
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      mhm you guys hit it off

    • #10127
      SüńGòd ED
      Participant

      And I am where.

    • #10164
      CalveronGaming
      Participant

      You are in the hyperbolic time chamber

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