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November 6, 2015 at 21:35 #10249
super4321master
Participant3222 September 16th
Boten: Huh ha! HIA!
Boten stops for a second.
Raidin: What’s wrong Boten?
Boten: Do you sense that energy too?
Raidin: Yeah it seems to be coming from within the forest.
Boten: Let’s go see who it is!
The boys wonder off to the location where the sensed energy is located. The boys now both are 12 years old. And were training a bunch today! Their powerlevels have risen since last time from 350 to 1050 now the boys sense an energy about as strong as theirs. They find 2 children with a battle power of 950. The kids look ready to charge right at boten and Raidin.
Raidin: Hey who are you two? We’ve never seen you in this forest before.
???: My name is Irdain. We are from a village far away from here. We came to fight some losers who thought they ware strong enough to beat us! But their punny levels of 410 ware so bad! We immediately beat them to till they needed to get to their village quick!
Boten: Hey Raidin weren’t 2 kids beaten to near death in the forest like an hour ago?
Raidin: yes do you think these guys did that?
Irdain: Ofcourse we did! You see we’re from the warrior village! We are destined to become guards! We are both just 14 and we already have powerlevels of 950 we would like to fight you! By the way my friend here is called Migrano he doesn’t talk at all!
Irdain: Now how about we start beating you to near death! It will be a pleasure! More crybabies!
Raidin: Let’s just start already!
Everyone goes in their fighting pose ready to jump right at each other any second. Then everyone immediately starts moving at incredible speed. Raidin and Boten both dodge the other boys attacks fairly easy.
Irdain: (thinking) If we’re gonna beat these guys we have to find a tactic! I can’t believe I’m saying this but it seems like they’re stronger then us!
Then Irdain launches a powerful ki blast that splits in 2 hitting both Boten and Raidin. Both of them seem barely harmed and jump sky high and drop down with their fists forward, aiming on Irdain and Migrano their faces. They both land the punches. And it almost knocks them out.
Raidin: Hey Boten seems like we’re beating them!
Irdain: Oh don’t be so sure of that!
Then Irdain launches an incredible amount of punches but only some of them hit and don’t do any real damage. Then Boten and Raidin both use an afterimage to confuse them. Then they launch an amount of punches from behind and knock them out. Then the boys go out training again. As they have proven to be stronger then Irdain and Migrano.-
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November 6, 2015 at 23:40 #10253
jehopoly
Participantnice story dude
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November 7, 2015 at 01:44 #10257
NightmareAssassin
ParticipantA cool story and nice insight about Boten :). I’m still working on my Characters backstory :P.
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November 7, 2015 at 07:26 #10262
jehopoly
Participantimma do my over since i dont like the now i put anymore
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November 8, 2015 at 16:57 #10349
super4321master
ParticipantToday we start off at the saiyan attack, a horrible event in the universe that triggered even more chaos.
Boten and Raidin went and did some chores the had to do from their mother and father. They went to get berries that they could eat for lunch, and specific plants that their mother could use to make a delicious meal. But then something happened.
Guard 1: Hey! Do you see that?
Guard 2: Yes it seems like 4 space pods are heading to our planet. We must get to them once they land. We can’t shoot them out of the air, you know how strong those pods are. And they will most likely not even hit.
The guards first informed the other guards and the lieutenant. Then 15 guards with powerlevels of 5000 are commanded to look who’s in the pods. And If they are dangerous or not, if they are they will take them as prisoners. But if they are too strong then they will kill them. The guards had scouters with them equipped. They sensed 2 powerlevels at first. One was 52,000 and the other one was 60,000. These 2 men were saiyans. One was short had spikey hair and the armor that Prince Vegeta wore with the gloves too. The other one was a big brute having average saiyan armor, except where the color is brown it’s red and he has a kind of Mohawk style of hair. Then 2 other high powerlevels are read, it’s coming from the other pods. 2 saiyans with both a powerlevel of about 80,000 one of them is just a bit stronger. One of the too, the weaker one has the hair of prince goku otherwise known as kakkarot to saiyans and had average saiyan armor but instead of brown spots he had dark blue. The other one has long spikey hair, and average saiyan armor. These 2 were also saiyans. The look in the eyes of the guards. They were afraid, they knew these were saiyan. Then the guards all fired everything they had at them. The saiyans dodged it easily and then appeared behind the guards. One by one the guards fell within mere seconds.
Saiyan Leader: Come on let’s go! We need to go to villages and destroy them. And we have to look for the saiyan Boten too.
The saiyans then go to the first village they see. They easily destroy it withing a minute killing everyone in it. More guards ware sent to stop the saiyans. But all the guards easily got killed once again. It looked as if these saiyans ware absolute immortal monsters as they had fun in breaking the bones of everyone of the guards, they faced.
Lieutenant: We have to find a way to beat them!
Then the saiyans come to a certain village. It’s the village were Raidin and Boten live. This village seems special, it’s one of the biggest villages on the planet.
Saiyan 1: Hmmm it seems like there are strong people here!
Then immediately a powerful guard shows up, he has a powerlevel of 32,000. It’s the strongest creature on the planet.
Saiyan Brute: Please let me have this one! He seems strong.
Saiyan Leader: Ok you can have him he’s weak anyways. Well compared to me.
The villagers are immediately alarmed. Then boten and raidin look out of the window seeing the saiyans. The saiyan leader notices this. And immediately notices him. He then blasts trough the wall of the house and steps in.
Boten: P-p-please! Leave us alone.
Raidin sitting next to him has never seen Boten fear anyone in his live. But here he was frozen in fear. It was like he knew the man.
Saiyan Leader: Boten, we are here to pick you up!
Raidin: Who are you?! And why do you want to pick up Boten?
Saiyan Leader: Hmmm let me introduce me and my squad! My name is Boddock and the long brute guy is called Draco. The short guy with that blue armor and those gloves is called Bira. And the guy with those blue spots on his armor, is called Biddock. He is my brother otherwise as you could say. BOTEN his uncle.
Raidin: Does that mean you are his Dad?Will be continued next part.
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June 16, 2016 at 21:14 #20131
super4321master
ParticipantAlright heres a preview of the next chapter:
Our story continues from where we left off
Irdain and Migrano have came to meet up with the saiyan crew and Boten and Raidin.
Saiyan Leader: ”Boten, do not hesitate! Kill them! Then we’ll blast this weak half assed planet to dust”’
Boten: ”No! I’ve lived here my entire life! They are like family to me!”
The saiyan leader sighs
Saiyan leader: ”Don’t make me”
Boten: ”Make me wha-”
Boten gets interrupted as one of the saiyans punches him in his guts critically wounding him.
The other children are standing there in despair. Thinking that they might’ve had a chance if only they ware stronger. Raidin seems the most one in despair
Suddenly something fires up in his mind. It seems like he’s disturbed by something… But what could it be?-
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June 16, 2016 at 21:57 #20141
super4321master
ParticipantChapter 3: The water of gods part 1
Our story continues from where we left off
Irdain and Migrano have came to meet up with the saiyan crew and Boten and Raidin.
Saiyan Leader: ”Boten, do not hesitate! Kill them! Then we’ll blast this weak half assed planet to dust”’
Boten: ”No! I’ve lived here my entire life! They are like family to me!”
The saiyan leader sighs
Saiyan leader: ”Don’t make me”
Boten: ”Make me wha-”
Boten gets interrupted as one of the saiyans punches him in his guts critically wounding him.
The other children are standing there in despair. Thinking that they might’ve had a chance if only they ware stronger. Raidin is the one who seems to be in despair the most
Suddenly something fires up in his mind. It seems like he’s disturbed by something… But what could it be?
Irdain looks at him curiously, but then starts talking
Irdain: ”GUYS GRAB BOTEN THEN WE MAKE A RUN FOR IT!!!”
They grab Boten and quickly run away. Sadly the saiyans quickly follow them, them having Boten with them makes them even slower and easier to catch up to. As Irdain accidently drops Boten a blast instantly launches at him and Migrano
They both get it, a cloud of smoke fills their place. Once the smoke clears 2 lifeless body seem to be laying there. Irdain and Migrano had not survived the blast… But Boten gets grabbed by Raidin and they make a run for it. Raidin throws Boten as far as he can.
Boten lands on a ship. He goes in there he leaves as he thought this was a sacrifice of Raidin.
Raidin: ”Wait Boten no!! Don’t leave without me!! Boten!!! BOTEN!!! BOTEN!!!”
Raidin kept screaming but Boten had not heard it and has left the planet. Later the saiyan crew decides the planet is no longer useful. They blow it up… With everyone of the people on Raigon perishing…
In deep space a body is floating. It’s Raidin’s body… He wakes up on another wild no intelligence alien planet.
Irdain: ”W-Where am I? Am I dead? Is this what they call hell?”
Irdain’s strenght has suddenly increased. Not by a small bit… But HUGELY almost beyond what he could imagine… Is this… Because of something he did? Irdain suddenly has a flashback
”One who drinks this water gets 3 lives. Each time they die their strenght shall increase x 1,000,000,000 but. Ofcourse only the one true warrior or Raigon can drink this. And become a god”
Irdain thinks about it. He drank the water and didn’t die. Instead he was reborn. So… This ancient myth was true? Is he a god? What is this power?-
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