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November 11, 2015 at 15:55 #10934
super4321master
ParticipantHello there, if you are here you’ve seen the topic title and you may think what it’s gonna be about. Or you have a character that you want to write down so it maybe can be accepted. So yes that is already answered I will need characters from you by the end of the week. If I don’t get one I most likely won’t write the fanfic, if you want your character to be part of the fanfic you will need to tell these basic things for ex
Name:
Age:
Race:
Alignment:
Backstory:
Training:
Ki techniques/Normal Skills (like using a move from an opponent or ki draining or something like that)
Powerlevel: (if you want to be in at the beginning of the fanfic your bp must be between 100 and 1500, I will start out easy because if we already get into the millions it would be plain boring)
And ofcourse!
Personality:
How he/she looks: (doesn’t need to be explained if you already know how to place a picture or if you already have a picture you can put in the link.)
Gender:Alright everyone goodluck.
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November 11, 2015 at 17:05 #10949
MasterScythe11
ParticipantName: Masutā Kama
Age: 17
Race: Scythian
Alignment:Good
Backstory: Masutā Kama is the most powerful Scythian to ever live he’s been known as a demon on his planet of Scythia, because of his strength, but he’s really a good person. But eventually there was a murder, and he was framed, the sentence was death he was a fugitive for a while after escaping the prison. he soon found a saiyan space pod near his home town. he investagated and when he got close he saw an oozaru destroying it, he went to kill it to save his town and prove he was good, all the warriors were dead on the ground and Masutā Kama wasn’t looking to good, but when his family was crushed he got so mad and blasted the oozaru with a power ki wave. he then knew he had nothing to live for on his planet and took the space pod. he ended up on Earth.
Training: He trains in the woods punching trees and using a type of multi form that doesn’t weaken your power, to fight himself.
Ki techniques/Normal Skills: Black Luster Grenade (Blast) Green Soldier (Wave) Light Ball (Blast) and Light Disc (Can you guess?)
Powerlevel: 1250
Personality: Quiet, calm until enraged, strategic.
How he/she looks: He’s medium height, Gohan (Ultimate) Hair, And Vegeta Buu saga clothes (If you don’t know just google it)
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November 11, 2015 at 17:06 #10950
MasterScythe11
Participantalso I might post a full back story for him
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November 11, 2015 at 17:21 #10953
Harpor(Hp)
ParticipantBoten you mind taking Harpor from dbzfans fanfic. I really dont like typing that much
Well the choice is urs take harpor from dbz fanfics or from dbz rpg
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November 11, 2015 at 18:03 #10961
MasterScythe11
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November 11, 2015 at 18:32 #10989
super4321master
ParticipantI can’t find that page.
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November 11, 2015 at 20:41 #11040
SEAGULLKING
ParticipantHere is a character use him if u want
Name: IcarusAge: 40
Race: Arcosian
Alighnment; good
Backstory: unknown
Training: Gravity training (like goku)
Ki techniques/Normal skills: Can copy an move after seeing it be used once
move he made called death cannon fire time of galic gun but as powerful as the kamehamehaPL, 12,00
description: tall thin white in colour like feiza small beady blue eyes
Gender: male
Personality: Antisocial, Mysterious,
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November 11, 2015 at 20:43 #11041
SEAGULLKING
ParticipantSory forgot the clothes has arcosian battle armour google it and im changing his face coulour to red
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November 11, 2015 at 21:03 #11044
super4321master
ParticipantCan you please just copy and paste the link to here? trough the link thing when you write a reply
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November 11, 2015 at 21:06 #11045
jehopoly
ParticipantName: Saitama Uga
Race: Half Saiyan half human
Alignment: good
backstory: a kind saiyan boy living peacefully yet training every day to surpass those around him Saitama wanted to be a super saiyan.He had learned the legend and talked to his best friend Sara to get her father to make him a device capable of gravity training while being in space. From there he pushed himself harder every day from a power lvl of 10 to a power lvl of 1,400 in 1 yr of hard work but he did not acheived the legend yet so he trained more.He came back to earth and got scolded by his parents for leaving but yet no punishment. He was allowed to continue.
Training gravity training
ki moves: Masenken
pl: 1,400
description: looks like gohan when he first became super saiyan with a blue and red gi
Gender: male
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November 11, 2015 at 22:59 #11058
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November 11, 2015 at 22:59 #11059
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November 11, 2015 at 23:00 #11060
SEAGULLKING
ParticipantMy link wont post whatever here it is in text “https://i.ytimg.com/vi/oBwor25aU1c/hqdefault.jpg
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November 14, 2015 at 17:01 #11513
super4321master
ParticipantAccepted
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November 11, 2015 at 23:19 #11061
CalveronGaming
ParticipantWhat have i started
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November 14, 2015 at 17:03 #11514
super4321master
ParticipantNothing I already planned to do this years ago… Do you really think you ware the only one who was planning to write a fanfic
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November 11, 2015 at 23:32 #11064
SEAGULLKING
Participant?
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November 12, 2015 at 00:44 #11066
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November 12, 2015 at 00:57 #11070
MasterScythe11
Participantwait
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November 12, 2015 at 00:58 #11071
MasterScythe11
ParticipantI DID IT 😀
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November 12, 2015 at 16:55 #11106
super4321master
ParticipantNice he’s accepted
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November 12, 2015 at 22:17 #11165
MasterScythe11
ParticipantSweet!!! >:D
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November 12, 2015 at 22:19 #11166
MasterScythe11
Participantbtw “Light Disc” does not cut through the opponent but it does cut the out most layer of their body.
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November 14, 2015 at 21:34 #11545
super4321master
ParticipantChapter 1:
Our story starts with a saiyan pod falling from the sky slowly. In it there is a Scythian, he has spikey hair that is all the way up except for one spike that hangs above his face. As for clothing he has dark blue clothing with white gloves. His skin is pink on almost every part of his body except for some parts where it is black.
Someone has noticed the saiyan pod crashing down and he heads there to investigate what it is. This person has red and blue gi and has very long hair. He is young but strong for his age, his name was Saitama.
He goes to the saiyan pod and looks who comes out of it. He decides not to engage him directly if it is an enemy. An alien comes out of the pod.
Saitama: That power is lower then mine it seems. I think I can win from this guy if it would be an enemy.
The Scythian notices Saitama
Scythian: Hey you! Why are you hiding behind those bushes?
Saitama: Well I didn’t know if you were friendly or not so if you were stronger then me then I would be in real trouble. But since you’re friendly I don’t need to, also please tell me what your name is.
Scythian: My name is Masuta Kama. I am the strongest Scythian ever. Back on my planet they called me a demon cause of my strength. Sadly there was a murder where I got blamed for so I went to prison. I escaped and went to my village where a saiyan pod was located. Ofcourse a saiyan arrived on our trough it, and then I saw an oozaru attacking my village. I fought it it was hard but I beat him. Then I went to this planet with the pod.
Saitama: Well hello Masuta my name is Saitama Uga I train every day to surpass those around me and I want to become a super saiyan I had learned the legend and I talked to my friend who had a father who could make a device capable of gravity training while being in space. From there on I pushed my self harder everyday.
Saitama: Now that we have both told who we are. How about we spar?
Masuta: Sure. Where dough?
Saitama: Here.
Masuta: Well then ok I’m ready.
Saitama: Ok! 3 2 1! GO!
The fighters both fly at eachother with saitama being a bit faster he lands the first hit on Masuta. Masuta then proceeds to punch back with a heavy hit.
Saitama: Ouch that hurt!
Saitama tries to hit Masuta again, when Masuta dodges the attack.
Saitama: (thinking) Huh I don’t get it. How did he dodge it so easily this time when last time he couldn’t even see it coming.
Masuta: That was pretty good. But are you really gonna do the same thing again?
Saitama: No ofcourse not!
Then Saitama immediately jumps at Masuta with his fist balded.
Masuta: (thinking) Is he really gonna do the same thing again? That’s not very smart for a fighter.
Saitama then tries to punch Masuta again but at the last second he launches a kick against Masuta his neck.
Saitama: Haha! Didn’t see that one coming did you?
Masuta: … That wasn’t that bad. Let me show you how to punch dough!
Masuta then storms right at Saitama using his tail to go even faster. He then launches another heavy punch in his gut then proceeds to punch him into the air. He then uses his tail to jump quickly and knock him to the ground again.
Saitama: Ouch! Ok that’s enough! How about we quit the warmup and get to the real work!
Saitama starts loading a strong ki blast.
Saitama: I call this technique Masenken!
Masuta: Hehe I got some tricks up my sleeve too!
Masuta starts loading a green wave attack really fast.
Saitama: (thinking) He loaded it too fast that means it takes a lot of energy from him. I got this if I load this fully up.
Masuta decides not to fire his blast yet, he wants to see the technique that Saitama has created.
Saitama: It’s ready! MASENKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!
The ground starts shaking a little bit and Saitama fires his ki blast directly at masuta
Masuta: Alright then! GREEN SOLDIER!!!!!!
Masuta fires his ki blast immediately. The two beams clash against each other, with Saitama seeming to win easily. Masuta gets overpowered but quickly knows to dodge Saitama’s ki blast. Masuta and Saitama take a pause.
Saitama: This was the last warmup we had! Now we get to the real fight right?
Masuta: Hehehe yes I can’t wait for round 2!To be continued
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November 17, 2015 at 14:36 #11979
MasterScythe11
ParticipantAWESOME I LOVE IT 😀
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November 17, 2015 at 22:29 #11987
MasterScythe11
Participantan also i have another technique, He charges the green soldier but then puts all the energy into a powerful punch, it super strong but very draining. the name of the attack is Green Soldier Punch. Also another one is the StarDust Scatter Burst it shoots one small beam from each finger that get bigger and surrounds the opponent, while it also shoots a giant beam from the palms. (Shoots like the kamehameha but the fingers are not curved).
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November 25, 2015 at 04:23 #12253
SuperSaiyanCosmic6
ParticipantJust wanted to let you know Super your character has been approved and I made a group on kik the search should be #DBURP you should be able to post there since its public or atleast msg me from it
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December 3, 2015 at 01:38 #12589
MasterScythe11
ParticipantMasutā Kama
Chapter 1: Mount Bushi
Here’s the story of how Masutā Kama, got to Earth… Once upon a time, 30 Earth years, or 17 Scythian years ago there was a family who had a new addition to it, Masutā Kama, named after an ancient god on the planet who saved them from a terror that struck, an ancient clan of warriors had attacked the peaceful planet 1017 (Scythian) years ago. The ancient Masutā Kama had defeated, and scared away them. Anyways fast forward 1007 Scythian years and we have our Masutā Kama training with his 14 year old brother,
“Come on! Don’t hold back Kamasenshi!” said our powerful little Scythian who was influenced to be like his ancestor.
“I don’t think you can handle that yet little guy.” his big brother said taunting him to strike harder. “Besides if I were to hurt you, I’d get in huge trouble… although… there is a magical bean on the top of Mount Bushi, it’s said that if you eat it, you won’t need to eat for a few days, it will heal all wounds, and revive your stamina… But that’s too dangerous and there’s no way mom and dad will let us go.”
“aww…” pouted Masutā.
Senshi didn’t want to devastate his little brother so he came up with an Idea. “Hmm… how about we say we are going on a camping trip just the two of us?”
“REALLY!?!?!” asked Masutā excitedly.
“Yeah sure I’ll go ask them now!”
As Senshi asked, Masutā decided to keep training, so he did. He told his brother to meet him at their campsite before they left for Bushi. While he was training for the trip, his brother was getting everything packed and ready to go. He foraged tons of food from the cabinets, and the fridge. He also grabbed clothes as he knew, this was no ordinary mountain, but he also knew his brothers determination to go was extreme, so he was fine with going.
As Masutā was punching rocks, trees, and other things to test his power and resilience, he knew it was crucial for his training to get these beans. If it means being able to go toe to toe in an all out battle with Senshi, he would do anything! But, even he knew that this expedition would be no easier than running up a cliff. He then punched as fast as he could to test his speed, but if anyone were watching they would say it looked like he was flailing. A few minutes later they started the trek up the mountain.
“So what’s the big deal about this mountain anyways? Why’s it so dangerous?” Masutā asked curiously.
“Well, for starters there’s the fact that it’s extremely tall. But… also it’s said there are many trials of the mountain, testing your strength, speed, kindness, etc.”
By the time they were about 10 miles higher they saw someone sitting by a tree and knew it was a test, but what they did not know, was which test it was.
“It may be a test of kindness, he kind of looks like a derelict.” Senshi said as if questioning himself.
“A what?” asked Masutā, confused.
“A homeless person.”
“Ohhh, ok…”
Masutā then pulled out a sandwich from him backpack, set down the bag and stood up.
“You stay here.” Masutā said as he walked towards the man by the tree. He noticed the man shivering, and wondered what was wrong.
“What’s wrong sir?” Masutā asked kindly.
“Huh? Oh, well you see, I’m hypothermic, meaning I have a colder body temperature than normal.” The man replied.
“Oh, I can help! here take this I’ll be right back.” Masutā said giving the man the sandwich. He then ran back to the bag and pulled out a big blanket. He gave the man the blanket and they kept moving up the mountain. Masutā felt bad deserting the man, but the man said it was fine and he wanted to stay there. They offered him to come with them but he still denied but thanked him for the blanket and sandwich.
As they reached the 350 mile mark they set up camp on the mountain with tents, and sleeping bags. They ate food, and talked about how they were training by just ascending the mountain. They then spared for a few minutes, did some individual training, ate again and then went to bed.
In the middle of the night Masutā had to go to the bathroom so he got up but went silent when he saw it… bright yellow eyes in the dark, looking right, at, him he was terrified, had no clue what to do, his brother is sleeping and making a noise would make the wolf attack. so he stood there thinking about what to do. He thought about it and realised this was another test, a test of bravery. So… HE CHARGED THE WOLF! Punching at his fastest, but somehow the wolf was dodging.
“What what are you?” he asked terrified. but suddenly the wolf turned towards his brother. He was mad when the wolf took just one step towards him. The wolf pounced, but Masutā teleported in front of him and decked him in the snout. The wolf howled and more of them came out. But Masutā just stood there, not in fear or shock, but in absolute rage. He would not see his brother perish today, or ever. But this rage was weird.
He started to glow with a blue aura, the glow was blindingly bright and woke his brother. When the glow faded, he was no longer the red skinny Scythian. But a green one with huge muscles that teared his clothes a bit, his tail was not red with a black spike, but green with a light blue spike matching his now bright blue hair. His iris is red with a yellow pupil.
When his brother saw this he was breathless. His little brother, has inherited the powers of their ancestor. The wolf’s all pounced at once, but he was too fast teleporting behind them, and blinded with rage he yelled:
“BLACK LUSTER GRENADE!!!” He then threw a small black energy ball that had formed in his hand. It exploded taking his brother with the wolfs. But his brother was fine, just a little hurt. Masutā then started falling to the ground, while turning back to his normal self. The impact made a crater. Senshi rushed to his brothers side. He was still breathing, he just fell asleep. His body couldn’t handle the intense energy that transformation gave him. The aftermath of the transformation must have been intense energy compulsing out of him, taking all of his energy, causing him to sleep. Senshi brought his to his bed and let him sleep.
In the morning Masutā woke up with only remembering the wolf, him defending his brother, and a bright light. Senshi thought it best to not tell him. They ate and continued up the mountain. This transformation somehow made Masutā’s metabolism higher, causing him to eat a lot more then usual.
There was the strength test where his brother had to break a giant boulder to gain access to a cave. Where Masutā did the speed test by punching buttons as fast as possible. They had made it to the last trail.
“Hmmm… How are we gonna get up there?”
“(This must be the test of generosity)” Senshi thought to himself. “I’ll hoist you up then you jump from where we reach.”
“Huh? Why?”
“Well umm… (Think fast) It’s most likely the only way. I’ll wait here for your return.”
“Umm… Okay…”
“(It should be generous for me to let him do it, after all it is his mission).”
Masutā walked a few feet and saw something going on by a huge beanstalk. he walked towards it and he saw the wolves and the old man. He thought the old man was being attacked so he hurried over to help.
“(Hmmm… Wait… We already did the generosity test). OH NO!” Senshi said as if something were wrong that he knew of. He looked around for a way up he knew one thing and one thing only: His brother is in danger!
“Ahh!” Yelled Masutā, surprised that the wolves and old man are teaming up on him. But he managed to dodge them all. The wolves pounced him but he let some of his energy out in a small explosion. He fought as hard as he could, but… There was no hope. Not yet.
Senshi had finally found a way up when he heard his brother screaming. The ground slightly started shaking and floating above the peak of the mountain, was a blinding light.
Masutā was yet again, green, buff, had blue hair, his eyes were red and yellow… he… has ascended.
Senshi hears a huge explosion that shakes the mountain. This causes the mountain to crumble, the mountain considered a god, by his people, destroyed by his brothers absolute power. Masutā managed to catch the beans, and put them in a small sack just before it happens again, he goes back to normal. Unconscious, he and his brother are falling from 49k miles. Plummeting to their demise.What do you think?
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December 3, 2015 at 01:43 #12590
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December 3, 2015 at 23:59 #12616
Tacoboy
ParticipantSewar:
Age:he is 4 years older than gohanRace:saiyan
Alighnnment good like goku
Backstory a saiyan born one day before vegeta the planet exploded he was sent with another saiyan(check my fanfic if you want know more)then he landed on earth and bla bla bla just check it out if you want to know
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December 4, 2015 at 00:07 #12617
Tacoboy
ParticipantHe looks just like in my profile picture his attitude is mostly like gokus and sometimes like piccolos he is male
And his ki teaqcniuques are kamehameha cosmic bullet where he makes a small energy ball with his fingers and then he fires it like it was a bullet and there’s cosmic bullet barage and also in the cell saga he reaches super saiyan and he will probably reach super saiyan 2 and 3 in the majin buu saga time
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December 4, 2015 at 04:46 #12627
MasterScythe11
ParticipantMasutā Kama
Chapter 2: The TournamentMasutā: Ugh… huh? where am I?
Senshi: We’re in the hospital.
Masutā: How did we get here?
Senshi: I don’t know… last I knew we were Plummeting from the mountain…
Masutā: Then how are we alive?
Shīsu: I caught you too just in time from getting yourselves killed. Let me ask you… WHY IN THE HELL DID YOU CLIMB THE MOUNTAIN?!?!?!
Masutā: For training, and for the beans at the top.
Senshi: Speaking of which, can I have one real quick dad?
Shīsu: Sure eat up.
*Crunch crunch, Gulp*
Senshi: WOOOOO HOOOOO!!!
Shīsu: ??? WHAT… JUST… HAPPENED!?!?!?!?
Masutā: The, beans are magical, they heal you. Can I have one?
*Crunch crunch, Gulp*
Masutā: EWW! It’s bitter :{
Senshi: Yeah.
Shīsu: Anyways, in a few days the world martial arts tournament is starting, do you guys want to enter this year?
Masutā & Senshi: YEAH!!!~Later~
Masutā & Senshi are training in the woods. Jumping from tree to tree, while attacking each other. They like to fight like this because it makes a game out of it. Masutā jumps at Senshi with a powerful barrage of punches. But Senshi is one step ahead of him, dodges him teleports behind him and grabs his arms to hold him back.
Masutā then elbows him hard in the gut.Masutā: Come on, we got the beans, you can go all out now.
Senshi: You sure?
Masutā: YES! Now come at me with full force!Senshi powers up then charged him at full speed. At this point they are both using their full power. But Senshi has a bit more strength than Masutā, while Masutā is a bit faster. Their punches collide causing a force to shake the trees they are fighting in.
Senshi: Stop!
Masutā: Huh? Why?
Senshi: I want to try something… Put your right arm straight up above you head with your palm straight up as well.
Masutā: O..Kay… Now what?
Senshi: Now put all of your energy into a ball floating above your palm.As Masutā charges his energy Senshi hears something.
Shīsu: Hiya!!
Senshi: Ahh!! Dad!
Shīsu: What?
Senshi: I’m teaching here!!!
Shīsu: Oh sorry, I didn’t know this was a private club.
Senshi: You can watch if you want.
Shīsu: Sure.
Masutā: I did it!
Senshi: Great!! Now… THROW IT!!! Hard!!!Masutā then throws the energy ball as hard as he can. He is completely drained of energy. The ball explodes upon collision with a boulder.
~The Tournament~
Masutā: Who else is super excited?
Senshi: ME!!
Shīsu: alright guys go sign up I’ll wait here.
Masutā: Race you!!!Sign Up Man: Name and age?
Masutā: Masutā Kama, age 7
Sign Up Man: Next!
Sign Up Man: Name and age?
Senshi: Senshi Kama, age 14
Sign Up Man: Ok thank you. Next!Shīsu: All signed up?
Masutā: Yup!
Shīsu: Good.~The Preliminaries~
Announcer: All right, #17 vs #12, May the fight begin!
Masutā charges his opponent, and rapidly punches him in the gut. He blocks the Barrage and uppercut kicks Masutā in the jaw.
Masutā: Owth!
Opponent: Huh?
Masutā: You made me bite my thongue!
Opponent: Umm… sorry?Masutā charges again but this time, teleports behind him and trips him. He then waits for him to get up. His opponent charges him and with a full force punch to the gut falls back down, clenching his gut.
Masutā: You thun yet?
Opponent N-No!His opponent teleports behind him and kicks him forward, teleports in front of him and punches Masutā in the gut. But Masutā is not done yet though. He blocks the next punch and Knees him in the gut hard. and keeps kicking him until he falls out of the ring. Masutā then walks over to his dad and eats a bean.
Announcer: Ok, Masutā moves on to the tournament. Next up for the last preliminary round we have #45 vs #68, May the fight begin!
Senshi bows to his opponent and gets in stance. His opponent instantly rushes him, but Senshi just stands there, waiting. He throws punches that Senshi easily dodges. Senshi scoffs at him and punches him in the gut so hard he flies out of the ring.
Announcer: Ok, Senshi moves on to the tournament. WE HAVE ALL FIGHTERS!!!
~Round 1~
Announcer: First up we have Masutā Kama vs Warucama. Fight!
Masutā dodges an almost instant punch that crushes the wall behind him. He knows that this guy has all strength, but his speed is not as good as his. Masutā teleports behind him and rapidly punches him in the back with full force. But he’s not done yet, he jumps up.
Masutā: BLACK LUSTER GRENADE!
Warucama: AHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhh…Announcer: The winner in Masutā Kama!
~Senshi’s Fight~
Announcer: Next up we have Senshi Kama vs Kowa! BEGIN!
Senshi rushes, not wanting to waste time, and knees him in the gut. Kowa punches Senshi in the face so hard he bleeds a little. But Senshi just smirks. Kowa gets mad. he punches Senshi as hard as he can right in the gut! But it does nothing. Senshi has had enough from him, so he kicks him out of the ring.
Announcer: The winner is Senshi Kama!
~Skipping to the Semi Finals~
Announcer: next up we have Masutā Kama vs Senshi Kama! The fight between brothers! Who will win? Begin!
Masutā: So, we get to fight once more. This time don’t hold back brother.
Senshi: I won’t, this is for the finals. The winner of this gets the chance to win it all.Masutā gets in his fighting pose, as does Senshi.
Masutā: Let’s put on a show.
Senshi: Quite the show.Masutā teleports behind Senshi and kicks but he blocks it, punches him in the gut, teleports behind him and hammers him down to the stadium. Masutā stands back up, wipes the blood from his face and jumps up.
Masutā: BLACK LUSTER!
Senshi: Oh no you don’t!
Masutā: GRENA…Senshi hammers him to the ground yet again, but this time with full force. he then shoots rapid blasts of energy at his brother. But Masutā foresaw that and teleported and hammered HIM to the ground. He then flew at him with full speed and punched him in the gut. And while Senshi was stunned temporarily, Masutā jumped and charged a different attack.
Masutā: Star Dust! Scatter! BURST!!!
From Masutā’s fingertips, shoots small golden-white beams that surround Senshi. And from his Palm shoots a large one that hits him directly. After this attack the crowd goes crazy.
Senshi, expecting his brother to be drained from the attack, flies out of the smoke to knee his gut, but Masutā beats him to it.Senshi: Congratulations Masutā…
Masutā: For what? It’s not over yet.
Senshi: That’s what I mean… You get to feel my full power!!
Masutā: Finally!Senshi powers up to his full power. For about a minute they stand there just staring at each other. Senshi then blasts him, tearing off his navy blue cutoff shirt. Senshi rips his own of as well. But Masutā had blocked it, thus not taking the full damage. He charges him with the intent to punch him, but Senshi blocks it and hammers him to the ground yet again.
Senshi: GREEN SOLDIER!
Masutā: Ugh..
Senshi: HAAAAAAA!!!The green bean hits Masutā directly and he takes the full damage of the attack. Both Masutā and Senshi stand on the destroyed stadium. Both out of breath. Masutā takes this time to secretly charge his energy into another Star Dust Scatter Burst. Now is his time to finish this. But Senshi has the same plan as Masutā.
Masutā: STARDUST!
Senshi: GREEN SOLDIER!
Masutā: SCATTER BURST!
Both: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!The golden-white beams strike the powerful green one, this causes the arena to shake violently. The green soldier pushes the scatter burst back. But Masutā Has a plan. He changes where some of the fingertip blasts go, not all of them because that wouldn’t give him enough time to do his plan. Two of them his Senshi violently. another two push the middle of the Green Soldier attack to weaken it at the full force. This gives Masutā time to push the main Stardust Scatter Burst from his palm to have all of the energy and push the green soldier back.
But Senshi will not have the be the end.Senshi: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
A huge explosion rocks the stadium, sending both fighters flying back. Masutā manages to catch himself before he falls off. But Senshi doesn’t.
Announcer: WE HAVE A WINNER!! For the final match tomorrow, We have Masutā Kama vs Okubyōna Kawādo.
Okubyōna: Uuuuuummmm… I FORFEIT!!!
Masutā: Heh. That’s good. I’m done, I did it. I WON!!Masutā goes to his dad and gets two beans. He eats one, and gives the other to his brother.
P.S it was Senshi who made the move “Green Soldier” but I’ll Get into that later 😉
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December 16, 2015 at 21:46 #13106
MasterScythe11
ParticipantI kind of feel like this is my story now… :T
anyways im working on chapter 3 now -
December 16, 2015 at 22:02 #13107
super4321master
ParticipantScythe I will take over the story again after chapter 3 I thought everyone forgot about and no longer cared but I already had something planned!
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December 16, 2015 at 22:57 #13113
MasterScythe11
ParticipantWhat happened to 2 and 3?
this was just what happened before he got to Earth…
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December 16, 2015 at 22:04 #13108
Tacoboy
Participantwee do care about your story and i think everybody forgot my fanfic but nobody cares about BUTT we care about UR FANFIC
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December 16, 2015 at 22:22 #13109
super4321master
ParticipantHere’s a preview!
Chapter 4:
A spaceship lands on earth, out of the ship step 15 people 12 of them are wearing basic saiyan armor and have masks on their faces the other 3 are different one of them looks like a human sized frog he is the leader of the group another one has red skin with no hair but a scar close to his eye he laughs with a set of yellow disgusting teeth he has armor like (zarbon’s) he is tall and very muscled the last one has yellow skin with pointy teeth long hair and blue battle armor
Leader ???: Come on, we have to search for the wish orbs quick. Kill anything blocking your path. Except for us ofcourse, because we all know what happened last time! -
December 16, 2015 at 22:24 #13110
Tacoboy
Participantwait..is my character being added or nah?
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December 16, 2015 at 22:53 #13112
MasterScythe11
ParticipantMasutā Kama
Chapter 3: Crime?A few Scythian years passed since the tournament and Masutā is now 15. He continued training with his father and brother. But, something bad was heading their way.
Masutā: Do you feel that?
Senshi: Yeah… What is that power?
Masutā: I don’t know… It’s not stronger than us though.They then continued training. Little did they know it was a saiyan space pod heading their way, and the saiyan inside was asleep. His real power was crazy, a power level of 2,700, with the Oozaru transformation thats 27,000!
~A Few days later~
Masutā: Ya know… they say a meteorite hit and destroyed an entire town…
Senshi: Weird…
Masutā: Maybe we should check it out.
Senshi: No… not gonna happen.
Masutā: Whatever… I’m gonna check the bean plant real quick.
Senshi: Ok.As soon as Masutā was finished with picking the beans he sensed another power. This one was plenty times stronger than the one he sensed a few days ago. He looked around to make sure nobody was around. He then flew towards the power.
Senshi: Is that… it is! Grr…
Senshi then followed a few miles behind him.
~At the power~
Masutā: HEY! WHO ARE YOU!?!
Saiyan: Hmm? Oh another one? You come to fight me correct?
Masutā: IF YOU WISH!Masutā gets into his fighting position.
Saiyan: Is that all of your power? HA! You’re weak! But… if you wish to die… come at me!
Masutā charges this mysterious saiyan. He teleports behind him and hammers him to the ground. The saiyan looks up.
Saiyan: Did you need backup?
Masutā: WhatMasutā turns around.
Masutā: SENSHI!?! (Oh god!)
Senshi: HEY YOU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!!?
Saiyan: Just some business.Senshi teleports behind him and punches his back.
Senshi: Just leave!
Saiyan: Fine. But! I shall be back.The saiyan then leaves the planet.
Masutā: We will be ready for whatever he’s up to then.
~A month later~
Shape Shifter: Heh I now can turn into them. After research on their biology I can use them… but how? Oh I know! The younger one was the strongest and I sensed it was a fraction of his full potential power…
~Training~
Masutā: Well the saiyan never showed up yet. What could he be up to?
Senshi: I don’t know but we have to stay on our toes.~Later that night~
Senshi: Masutā {He’s whispering}
Masutā: Huh?
Senshi: Follow me.
Masutā: Ugh~At a nearby town~
Masutā: Sooo… what are we doing here?
Senshi: Just wait here I’ll be back. Also stay out of sight!
Masutā: O…Kay…~In the bathroom of a store~
Senshi: HAHAHAHAH!!! I shall be rid of that, fool!
Senshi starts to morph into Masutā. He is actually the shape shifter!
Fake Masutā: Muahhahhaha!!! Now then…
~At the store~
The shape shifter leaves the bathroom and looks around.
Fake Masutā: Hmmm…
He then shoots a powerful red wave at the floor. Killing everyone but him in the explosion. He teleports to Masutā, and teleports him to the building. But he only teleports him. While he takes his leave. The cameras are still working.
Masutā: Huh?
Police: FREEZE!
Masutā: Ahh!
Police: PUT YOUR HANDS AND TAIL UP!
Masutā: What did I do?
Police: SHUT IT!~Meanwhile~
The shape shifter goes to Masutā’s town.Shape shifter: Hmm.. full moon? Great!
He then morphs into a saiyan and looks at the moon. His chest starts to pump as he turns into an Oozaru! His power level, 27,000… He then roars an ear shattering roar.
Masutā: Huh? Could… it be? THE SAIYAN RETURNED!
Masutā blows up the wall of the prison to stop this great ape. He runs for a few minutes then flies the rest of the way. Once there he sees his dad and Senshi both struggling to stop it. Masutā then kicks the monster in the eye.
Senshi: Masutā! What happened!?!
Masutā: This beast framed me! killed a dozen people and teleported me in there so it looked like I did it! HE’S A SHAPE SHIFTER!
Senshi: DAD!
Masutā: FATHER!!
Shīsu: AHHHHHH!!!Their father was crushed by the beast.
Masutā: NOOOOOOOOO!!!
The great ape grabs Senshi and crushes him in his hands… all the fighters in his town… dead… his family… dead… he’s the only one left…
Masutā: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!
Masutā starts to glow bright. He is no longer Red and small, but green And buff. He glares the monster in the eyes. Flicks in his direction. This sends the Ape flying. This boost is about 80 time his normal power. He normally has no control over the form, but his rage is too much and he has complete control.
Masutā: AS A TRIBUTE TO MY BROTHER! GREEN SOLDIER! HAAAA!!!
The extremely powerful green beam dominates the might of the monster, killing it for good.
Masutā now has nothing for him on his planet. he looks around and sees the space pod. he opens it and sees preset coordinates. He gets in and presses launch. As he flies through space, he turns back to normal and falls asleep. it takes him 2 scythian years to get to the planet… Earth. Where he meets Saitama Uga. And the real story begins. -
December 18, 2015 at 06:18 #13156
Tacoboy
Participantwow thats so cool
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January 21, 2016 at 04:42 #14386
MasterScythe11
ParticipantWhat happened?
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