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  • #33921

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Hay everyone.
    My name is AlexCfer. Currently I have an rp going we just finished the namek saga. We current;y have 11/25 players and we are hoping to get some more players.

    To join us this is the lay out your character submit must be.

    Name:

    Race:

    Age:

    Back-story:

    How he/she/it acts:

    Fighting style:

    Alignment:

    What they wear:

    Saiyans; The saiyan race, usually uses vegetable puns for names. We currently have 1 full saiyans, but please don’t flood us with low-quality applications. Of course all races will be able to transform, Saiyans have the primarily strongest forms, excluding SSJ3 Vs. Golden. (Hardest to get race)

    Half-Saiyans; The hybrids of saiyans and humans, or possibly other races (who knows?!). Half-Saiyans posses greater potential than a full blooded saiyan does, however most lack the will to fight. Of course just as strong as a Full Saiyan! We have 2 Half-Saiyans. (.1% easier than saiyans!)

    Humans; The most basic race of them all! They are well balanced and keep up with Saiyans in most places! We have 1 human. (Easiest alongside namekian!)

    Namekians; The people of Namek, strong willed and have two types. Dragon clan known for their ability to create dragon balls, and the warrior clan known for their great power. They are very powerful, especially in Ki. We have 1 namekian. (Easy as humans)

    Arcosian (Frost Demon); The people of Freeza’s race. They are generally a cold-hearted species (haha puns). They are very domination focused and tend to be fairly powerful. They are very few in known numbers. We have 1 arcosian. (About 10% Easier than a saiyan is to be).

    Majin (Boo race to be proper), however variants such as the Shadow Demons and such are also here); The Boo race, known for their extreme endurance and the ability to manipulate their shape. They are fast learners, but not generally the most intelligent. They are rather strong fighters. We have 1 Boo/Majin. (They are the same as arcosians in difficulty)

    Shinjin/Core People/Supreme Kai; These are the people coming from the world of the Kai’s. They are rather powerful, and very intelligent. Only 80 can live on a planet at a time. They are born from the golden Kaiju fruit. We currently have one Shinjin (me). (They are similar to Saiyans in difficulty).

    Demon (Dabura); People of the demon realm. Rule by Demon King Dabura, also features a large variety of special powers. They are adept at magic, and are decently powerful. We have 0. (About like Majins and Arcosians).

    Android; as you would expect a human who has been modified to posses unlimited ki. Such as android 18 and 17.(Around the same difficulty as a half saiyan.)

    Please apply if you’re interested! We will help you if you need help forming your ideas, or fixing issues with yours! Thank you for reading!

    • This topic was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  JamesCfer. Reason: New race
    • This topic was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  JamesCfer.
  • #33924

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    We currently need 14 Characters.

    • #34007

      Exobrine2
      Participant

      Name Kabage
      Race: full blooded Sayain
      Age: ???
      Personality:Nice Strong
      Forms:ssj1 ssj2 ssjg with the ritual ssjb and kaioken
      clothes: vegito clothes and sayain armor

      • This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  Exobrine2.
    • #34247

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      For a saiyan application, this is far too little all you have told me is the forms nothing about the character herself.

  • #33925

    Phoenix C. Smith
    Participant

    Name: Arlic
    Gender: male
    Race: saiyan
    Age: 15
    Personality: Nice, jokeful, can be very powerfull if you anger him , loves eating (one of my favorite hobbies irl it keeps me alive)
    Clothes: saiyan armor ( idk what color i want XD)
    BackStory: An weak powered saiyan warrior sent off to do a mission 3-4 days before planet vegeta was blown up. He was going to a planet far away from planet vegeta so he was put into cryosleep so he could preserve his body and not get any weaker from lack of training. during the flight the shockwave from an explosion from a distant planet hit his ship and made it malfunction and set a new course, earth.
    discord :phoenix41612 #4729

    • #33927

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      I like what you have so far. Can you add a bit more to the back story such as what he did on the missions. Also could you add a small story of one of the missions?

    • #33928

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      What type of training did he do?

    • #33929

      Phoenix C. Smith
      Participant

      k ill make some changes

  • #33930

    Phoenix C. Smith
    Participant

    Name: Arlic
    Gender: male
    Race: saiyan
    Age: 15
    Personality: Nice, jokeful, can be very powerfull if you anger him , loves eating (one of my favorite hobbies irl it keeps me alive)
    Clothes: saiyan armor ( idk what color i want XD)
    BackStory: An weak powered saiyan warrior usually sent off to do missions easy compared to normal saiyans (like namek level planets) almost always but sometimes having to rely on great ape at this point he has small amounts of control over it on a few of his missions he has experienced rage unlike most saiyans of his time. 3-4 days before planet vegeta was blown up. He was going to a planet far away from planet vegeta so he was put into cryosleep for about 24 years so he could preserve his body and not get any weaker from lack of training. during the flight the shockwave from an explosion from a distant planet hit his ship and made it malfunction and set a new course, earth.
    ok I think this is a little better

    • #33931

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Could you give a bit more information on what he did in his spare time. if he has any friends. Does he have a squad? Please add some more information at least a paragraph or 2 since you are going for a saiyan which is the hardest to go for. Thanks

    • #33949

      Phoenix C. Smith
      Participant

      k

  • #33938

    BladezFox
    Participant

    Name:Blaze

    Race:Saiyan

    Age:18

    Back-story: Blaze Mom Emily was a kind saiyan warrior when she was sent to do missons that had to do with killing people she only kill the evil people.She would try not to kill only if she had to and one day she found a man on a planet very injured,she try to help me.She saw that he was a saiyan like her but she saw that he was not wearing Saiyan armor like her.But she try to help him still and the man woke up said where I’m,who are you and she said I’m Emily I treated your injures you had.The Man said thx for that,my name is Broly and she said what happen to him,he said I was blast from a planet to the one he is(goku used kamemahaha and that why he was Blast off to that planet).Emily said do you need a place to stay and Broly said sure and I won’t stay to long I don’t want to bother you and she said it’s fine stay as long as you want.
    Five years latter she was pregnant with Broly baby and one day Broly got angry out of no where and before Broly turn LSSJ he told her run Emily get away from me fast!!!She went in the Space Pod and saw Broly going LSSJ and destroying two planet and the planet he was on when he was transforming.She and her baby escape and when she woke up she was on earth and she try to fix the space pod because it was not turning on and what she didn’t know she was next to kami lookout and she saw it.She when up and flew up and told kami what happen kami said he will help,and she told him one last thing pls make my son strong so he can defend himself if anything happens to me and keep that monster away from him.Then 6 months latter Emily give birth to Blaze but she die at child birth.
    For the past 17 years kami,Mr.Pop, and korin train Blaze to be the strongest on earth.He had to train in some bad climate and more,sandstorm,snowstorm,standing in the middle of a activate volcano,and swimming in freezing water.Train the the hyper time chamber fight against Mr.Pop and he learn powerful moves that can destroyed mountains.Also for some reason kami saw when Blaze got older he had like the fight style of warrior a saiyan warrior when their was no saiyan training him.When he turn 18 he told kami he wanted to explore the world and get stronger and kami said ok sure it won’t hurt(what I’m saying, Mr.Pop stop me)and Blaze packed up and stayed ok I’m off and lefted.
    After Blaze left kami told Mr.Pop why didn’t you stop me and Mr.Pop answer you never tell a god what to do.Plus you can see everything on earth if Blaze is doing fine and if Broly has to gotten to earth and if that day comes we will be ready.You can also call Goku to help protected Blaze from Broly and kami said you right.And has night fall comes Blaze kill farms some animals for food and cooks them in cave he found and the story continue on as Blaze trains long for weeks and what will happen in the story of Blaze will he meet Broly.You will find out if you accept me in your server.
    How he/she/it acts:Blaze is more of the long wolf person he is very serious,is smart kami and Mr.Pop tech him many thing about the world if he ever wanted to fit in,he is powerful,he can show a kind side if the right person comes and will not leave the weak be hurt by others,tries to help people.
    Fighting style:Saiyan Warrior

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:Demon clan clothing with the weighted cape
    and P.S can I get LSSJ when Jin finish it because of my back story,discord:Blazefox

    • #33947

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      I like the concept but the timeline doesn’t add up. For your character to be Brolys kid, Broly would needed to of had a kid at the age for 3. you may want to remove the Broly part and add that his father was a legendary warrior. This would make sense, because of the current timeline setting. Last thing we do not know how LSSJ will work and it will be given at random to a player (as well as the legendary super saiyan form is not passed by genetics). So far it is a 4/10 you need a 7/10 or higher for a saiyan. Good luck. One last thing a fighting style is how your character fights so does he keep moving in the middle of a fight or does he stop to see what the person he is fighting is doing.

  • #33945

    Alex
    Participant

    Ok… I’m just looking at this now and… Seriously? LSSJ? Broly’s baby? No, that ain’t gonna get accepted by a long shot. Not unless you remove the Broly and LSSJ stuff and change it by a big bit.

  • #33948

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Then next event is this weekend

  • #33951

    Phoenix C. Smith
    Participant

    Name: Arlic
    Gender: male
    Race: saiyan
    Age: 15
    Personality: Nice, jokeful, can be very powerfull if you anger him , loves eating (one of my favorite hobbies irl it keeps me alive)
    Clothes: saiyan armor (Black)(black body suit #1) (yellow t2 scouter)
    BackStory: A weak powered saiyan warrior usually sent off to do missions easy compared to normal saiyans (like namek level planets) almost always but winning easily but sometimes having to rely on great ape at this point he has small amounts of control over it on a few of his missions he has experienced rage unlike most saiyans of his time.He was never given a crew because of his low rank. and he had alot of free time due to not many planets in that free time he mostly just slept and trained so he could move out of the low ranks.3-4 days before planet vegeta was blown up. He was going to a planet far away from planet vegeta so he was put into cryosleep for about 24 years so he could preserve his body and not get any weaker from lack of training. during the flight the shockwave from an explosion from a distant planet hit his ship and made it malfunction and set a new course, earth.
    ok I think this is a a lot better XD

  • #33954

    Alex
    Participant

    Okay, nearly right. Just change the age a bit because Planet Vegeta

    • #33959

      Phoenix C. Smith
      Participant

      that’s why I have the cryo sleep part he doesn’t really age

    • #33988

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Good point Nearly there. Though i will be helping make some small changes. Please just add some more information so we can get to know your your character a bit more. That is all it needs at this point. I can’t wait to read the it once you have fixed it.

      • This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  JamesCfer.
    • #33990

      Phoenix C. Smith
      Participant

      ok

    • #33993

      Yan
      Participant

      Race: Pure blooded saiyan kinda

      Age: Your best guess is as good as mine at this point

      Back-story: (prepare for the long haul) Our story first begins in a massive amounts of woods with a teenage saiyan named Yan. He was training his super saiyan form that day. By meditating over the lake. As, he felt a great and dark evil appear killing the lives of millions in near by towns. Yan smirked at this chance to have some fun. So, he stood up floating above the water and takes a breath dropping out of super saiyan before raising his fingers to his head and instant transmissioning to the great and powerful darkness. To his eyes he was shocked at the beauty that was before him. Her name was Sel the daughter of perfect cell. She not knowing who this boy was but looking at his face alone goes. “you there are you the man who destroyed my father?”

      Yan tilted his head. “No I have yet to kill any green people on this planet though did kill some humans a while back”

      Sel then moved like a blur ramming her fist straight into yan’s gut. Now, yan being very cunning then upper cuts her sending her to space where yan meets here there with instant transmission. Punching her down making sure to hit her in the chest. Sel goes flying back to the planet at speeds faster then lighting. Birthing a asteroid sized crater where she laided. Sel slowly arise back to her feet and begged yan to allow her to go and heal up and transform into her stronger sat so, he might have a fair fight. Yan smirks at her grabbing her by the forehead. “hold still” he then instant transmissions the two to outer space. “eat this” he said as he then hands her a senzu bean.

      Sel looks at the bean then quickly eats it. “thank you… now only if my dad was alive so I might become even stronger then perfection” she said as she then transformed from her current stat to perfect Sel. “Now that I am perfect let me show you how I will kill you.” she then starts throwing valleys of ki blast at point blank at yan.

      Yan lets out a loud yell as he then powers up to his max power level at the time 40 million then transforms to super saiyan to block out her attachs. (btw do 40×50 and you got his ssj pl.) “right Perfect Sel with a pppperfect body~ let me show you why I am the most powerful saiyan” he then continues to block sel’s attachs.

      Sel growls at yan’s power, while at the same time admiring the fact that he did notice her. She then flies back several feet. “alright yan, eat this and take that planet with you… KA…ME…HA…ME..” A large Green orb appears as she did the hand gestures.

      Yan smirks as he raises his hand forward. “bring it!!!” he yells with a smile forming.

      Perfect Sel then Screams out “HA!!!!!!!!” as her massive green ki blast fires right at yan.

      Yan then catches the end of her ki blast in his bear hand stopping it where it was in his palm then throwing it at mars. “sorry but my turn” He then goes Super Saiyan 2. Then starts laying down a beating of a live time on sel. After ten hours of combat the two come to a stop. Yan falls out of super saiyan and slowly falls towards the planet. Sel who had grown attached to yan flies down and grabs yan and flies back down to the planet and flies yan back to his home.
      4 years later, Yan who had married sel had two kids with her. But, that did not last as his live was turned upside down as a god of destruction destroys his entire universe but, Yan is spared only by seconds as he is sent to a universe by his loving sel before her and his families death..
      This starting when yan is 22 he meets a saiyan named Gohan, who is from another universe as well. The two quickly grow a father son like bound. Gohan trains yan from the emotionally and even powerless saiyan he was at the time though. Yan was a easy train since his power was not destroyed like he thought instead it was only locked away from him.. the power of a god. Gohan saw this and instantly got to work putting yan through hellish training routines making sure that yan would one day be able to protect everything. This eventually failed and the two left that universe for another. This would be the last Yan would see of his master gohan as he would eventually disappear amd leaving alex his son. Now, alex and yan would go through hell in this universe. As yan learned what he called beyond god forms that yan had learned and mastered from gohan. Though over time these would take a toll on yan’s live force even though he was immortal at the time. This is when alex had helped him and then went into a coma. Which after that yan got sad and then found a weird police of the box and things got all timey wimey and broken and yan got bored one day opened the boxes door and looking into the heart of the time vortex which fucked his shit up for a couple of weeks. Though after a quick recover in a medpod he was fine though learned he had two hearts after that and figured he was a part timelord after reading some books about them and how they traveled space and time. Now at the end of that universe yan said fuck im not dying yet and smashed his tardis buttons like a madman and then got ejected from the thing. Which shot him into what ever universe this one is, with pretty much all his powers locked away once more.

      abilities: can regenerate, has two hearts, his hair is blood red, can breath in the vacuum of space, trains at the speed of well a god

      How he/she/it acts: It’s complicated

      Fighting style: Close and personal

      Alignment: It matters how he feels. Some times he is pure of heart sometimes he is as evil as the darkess voide

      What they wear: A black and red gi

      • This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  Yan.
    • #33995

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Few small issues with the character. We are looking for your character up to present meaning at this point your character can not have super saiyan. However he can begin to unlock it. next issue is, Alex is not the son of gohan in this he is the son of Leo.(this was changed because of timeline issues).3ed i like the idea of sel she could be added as a mini event after the cell saga.4th after reading over your post most of the information would work in the future timeline meaning other then going super saiyan the rest could work if your character came back from the future with trunks instead of existing in the present. This would allow for some small changes one of which being how your character has IT

    • #33997

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Denied due to being a “broken” character at this point in the saga

  • #33962

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    Name:Tekhan
    Age:6
    Race: Half Sayian
    General Appearance: Red Teen Gohan hair and has tail. He is naked because of crash right no
    Personality: he is trusting of everyone since he lost his memory and he is kind of a prodigy so he can do most of things he sees once, but he forgot how to use Ki. He really wants to know who he was before he lost his memory and he just wants to protect his friends. Also he has dreams of shadowy figure.
    Alignment: Good
    Fighting Style: He fights until his opponent is K.O or rendered unable to fight. He doesn’t stop unless they say stop
    Short Backstory: in his universe sayians were hunted down by acrosians because they survived the destruction of planet Vegeta.An elite sayian named Namtek was going out for a mission when he witnessed planet vegeta’s destruction. The explosion from the planets destruction sent Namtek’s pod on a trajectory to earth. When his ship got to earth he wasn’t awake because his Space Pod turned on life support systems and put him in stasis.Namtek woke up in a farm naked and threatened to kill the farmer until the farmer explained that he found him out in a field. Namtek declared peace with the farmer and started living and doing work at the farm. The farmer was murdered by bandits and namtek murdered them all until they were wiped out. He met the farmer’s daughter at the funeral and since he killed the bandits, they grew very close over the years and made a family. One day the acrosians found tekhan and his family. They murdered his mother while he and his father were hiking in the mountains outside they’re house. Namtek sensed her ki fade away and he went to find who killed her, but got Tekhan to a spaceship just in case he didn’t survive the encounter.Namtek went back to avenge her death and after a long battle, the acrosians finally beat him.As the acrosians tried to kill Tekhan, he escaped to a random planet and his spaceship crashed there .During the crash tekhan lost his memory and his ship exploded leaving him far from the spot he crashed.
    Discord TheBest27#8599

    • This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  God's Flame.
    • This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  God's Flame.
    • #33970

      Phoenix C. Smith
      Participant

      oh HEY BEST 😀

    • #33973

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      A few honest pointers on this.

      1. Your character is honestly a bit young and I’m not sure how that will play out with the roleplay.

      2. Your character is very cliche, per say, with the whole “prodigy”. Not gonna say it’s impossible, just saying it’s cliche.

      3. Namtek’s name breaks the lore. Saiyans have Vegetable puns as names. Also, explain Tekhan’s name some. Where does it come from?

      4. Give us a full backstory. We’re not going to accept you for just putting a “Short backstory”. We need something that more than what was written, maybe grammar issues fixed, and all that.

    • #33979

      Inoka
      Participant

      You know BITCHKamehameha, I’ve seen you try applying to roleplays again and again, and every time I see you improve more and more, so I wanna try and help you out with getting into this one.
      But I think you, and a lot of people don’t understand what we’re looking for in a Saiyan applicant.

      We don’t need people are miracle children who are the strongest, or who’s backstories could basically start a series of their own.
      Truth be told, the actual contents of your story don’t matter at all.

      Of course they establish who your character is and their motivation, but truth be told, we don’t need people to try and reinvent the wheel here with a Saiyan who’s strong and troubled or whatever.

      What we’re looking for in Saiyans is the signs that the person who made the post will be a good person to play with.

      If I had to list the things you’d need in order to prove that, well…

      One, you need good grammar.
      Part of being able to roleplay is to be able to get your message across coherently, we don’t want to have to spend time away from playing or fight in order trying to decipher what you’re talking about.

      Things like punctuation, sentence formatting, even choice of words all make up the bulk of the RP, while for some people it might be hard to put things into words, the fact is that we need it for the sake of creating a good environment to play in.
      We’re not asking for perfection, everyone makes mistakes here and there, and that’s fine.

      Two, you need to show understanding of how your character fits into the world.
      Things like describing how your character acts, behaves, and functions is vital because it shows that you aren’t just making a concept, but an honest character.
      It’s easy to say your character is strong, or that they did things that are important, but the RP is a journey and not a destination.

      You don’t have to give your entire life’s story, but a portion of it that shows who your character is in relation to an environment can help us build an impression of the character beyond what you tell us to see him as.
      It goes without saying that people interpret things differently, being able to have your character give off the idea that you want it to give to other people who are playing is critical in the experience, what might be deep and brooding to the maker can just be edgy to others.

      Three, you have to think about what you and your character brings to the table.
      In an RP everyone contributes to the overreaching plot that progresses.
      To better help progress that plot, we need a variety of characters who can see things in a different light, which can potentially change the course of things.
      As our RP stands currently, half our playerbase are Saiyans, and I’ll say it, things become stagnant because of it.

      They’re all thinking “How do I become Super Saiyan?” or “I don’t want to hurt people as a Saiyan”, I’ll go ahead and say that at times, they’re most the plain characters to see.
      Even if you did get accepted as a Saiyan, you’d just fall to the same curve, your character wouldn’t stand out, and you would wind up dancing to the same beat as the rest.

      No one is saying that if your character is Human or Namekian, you’ll just get weak and fall behind, in fact your struggles as one will just make your character shine more as they keep fighting on.

      You might’ve realized that what started as a list of how to get accepted as a Saiyan turned into me telling you not to be one, well, that’s what this all boils down to.
      If you come in deciding that you must be a Saiyan and will accept no substitutions, well, that just shows that you’re not who we’re looking for.
      The people that we do want, the ones who are looking for a place to train, fight, and live in a DBZ setting are the ones who want to contribute to it by being the wildcards, because they’ll be the ones who will put their all into it instead of playing it safe.

      If you all absolutely want to be in this, then challenging yourself and picking something other than Saiyan is your ticket in.

  • #33968

    gohanssj120
    Participant

    Name: Rick Anderson (drachen)

    Race:Half-Saiyan(Half-Demon)

    Age:21

    Back-story: They were born into a wold of hate and violence, but their saiyan side only fueled the aggression they harbored. Once wished out of other world by their saiyan father they trained for many years wishing and fully willing to fight the strongest the universe has to offer

    How he/she/it acts: Very quick to anger and shows no mercy when fighting an enemy

    Fighting style:mostly melee

    Alignment:neutral waning towards evil

    What they wear: whatever he feels like

  • #33974

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    ok he will be normal and his name came from his dad

  • #33976

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    Name:Tekhan
    Age:6
    Race: Half Sayian
    General Appearance: Red Teen Gohan hair and has tail. He is naked because of crash right no
    Personality: he is trusting of everyone since he lost his memory and he is kind of a prodigy so he can do most of things he sees once, but he forgot how to use Ki. He really wants to know who he was before he lost his memory and he just wants to protect his friends. Also he has dreams of shadowy figure.
    Alignment: Good
    Fighting Style: He fights until his opponent is K.O or rendered unable to fight. He doesn’t stop unless they say stop
    Short Backstory: in his universe sayians were hunted down by acrosians because they survived the destruction of planet Vegeta. An elite sayian named Beeto was going out for a mission when he witnessed planet vegeta’s destruction. The explosion from the planets destruction sent Beeto’s pod on a trajectory to earth. When his ship got to earth he wasn’t awake because his Space Pod turned on life support systems and put him in stasis.Beeto woke up in a farm naked and threatened to kill the farmer until the farmer explained that he found him out in a field. Namtek declared peace with the farmer and started living and doing work at the farm. The farmer was murdered by bandits and namtek murdered them all until they were wiped out. He met the farmer’s daughter at the funeral and since he killed the bandits, they grew very close over the years and made a family. One day the acrosians found Betek and his family. They murdered his mother while he and his father were hiking in the mountains outside they’re house. Beeto sensed her ki fade away and he went to find who killed her, but got Betek to a spaceship just in case he didn’t survive the encounter.Beeto went back to avenge her death and after a long battle, the acrosians finally beat him. As the acrosians tried to kill Betek, he escaped to a random planet and his spaceship crashed there .During the crash Betek lost his memory and his ship exploded leaving him far from the spot he crashed.
    Discord TheBest27#8599

    • #33980

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      For one, you didn’t even do half of what I asked. Still “a prodigy”, still 6 years old, the names are inconsistent with the application now. The father’s saiyan name is at least correct. Everything else was just copied and pasted. If this is all you’re willing to do, than you aren’t really going to be accepted. Please expand your story some more.

  • #33977

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    what do you want me to add to story

  • #33978

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    like is the mom’s name important

  • #33986

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    oh ok
    ill revise and make it show how he lived his life

  • #33987

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    actually Ill revise it and make him older and make him confront the acrosians and I need to connect with character on a human lvl.Also,boom I’m going to do a lot more

  • #33991

    Iron Nova
    Participant

    Name:Thane
    Race:Arcosian
    Age: 15
    Back-story:A young emperor in training, this warrior has been trained ton be ruthless, powerful, and intimiadateing. He Doesent care who gets hurt and who dies unless it affects him. He leads a small empire in the far south galaxy and conquers every planet he sees and destroys everything that displeases him.
    How he/she/it acts: He acts normal and gets happy if something goes his way but if something doesn’t go his way he bursts with anger, and he always wants to be the strongest.
    Fighting style: He usually is a speedy and smart fighter who uses every advantage he has and strikes powerful blows in fights and if a fight doesn’t go his way he unleashes his true power.
    Alignment: Evil
    What they wear: regular armor if needed but usually he doesn’t need any armor.
    discord: IronHulk#1032

    • This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by  Iron Nova.
    • #34000

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      this could use some more information

  • #33998

    BatVenomPL
    Participant

    Name: Mori (From Koumori [bat in japanesse])

    Race: Arcosian

    Age: 20

    Back-story: Long ago, there was an Arcosian, that created his child, and left on planet Zaburu… alone… that child was named Mori. Someone found this child, that was another Arcosian, his name was Zeron, he took that child, and rised like his own child, showed how to train, gave food, and teached attacks (DeathBeam, DeathSlicer, DeathBall and SuperNova). Mori was mainly training with weights and in recovery time, he was meditating (Concentration minigame). After Mori became adult, he killed Zeron, and flew away, then he met Frieza… Frieza started fight, and Mori was a bit stronger than Frieza and Cooler, so Frieza said, that he can take role of Emperor of the Universe after he will die. So Mori trained even more, to become the strongest, and then take that role.

    How he/she/it acts: Proud Arcosian, ruthless, let’s his soldiers die, just a Frieza and Cooler mixed.

    Fighting style: Fast and powerful, mostly uses his deathbeam, deathslicer, and deathball (he also uses SuperNova, but not very often)

    Alignment: PURE EVIL

    What they wear: When in minimal form: (Black) Battle Armor top

    • #34125

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      This is a good start, but could you add more information to your character.

  • #34004

    Phoenix C. Smith
    Participant

    Name: Arlic
    Gender: male
    Race: saiyan
    Age: 15
    Personality: Nice, jokeful, can be very powerfull if you anger him , loves eating (one of my favorite hobbies irl it keeps me alive)
    Clothes: saiyan armor (Black)(black body suit #1) (yellow t2 scouter)
    BackStory: A weak powered saiyan warrior usually sent off to do missions easy compared to normal saiyans (like namek level planets) almost always but winning easily but sometimes having to rely on great ape at this point he has small amounts of control over it on a few of his missions he has experienced rage unlike most saiyans of his time.He was never given a crew because of his low rank. and he had alot of free time due to not many planets in that free time he mostly just slept and trained so he could move out of the low ranks.3-4 days before planet vegeta was blown up. He never really liked to kill but was made a slave by the arcosions and forced to kill his way through life one day hoping to get strong enough to defeat his arcosion captors. he was going to a planet far away from planet vegeta so he was put into cryosleep for about 24 years so he could preserve his body and not get any weaker from lack of training. during the flight the shockwave from an explosion from a distant planet hit his ship and made it malfunction and set a new course, earth.

  • #34009

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    can I have one scene happen and take it back to short story mmode

  • #34010

    AnonyHawk
    Participant

    Name:
    Karot

    Race:
    Half-Saiyan (Altough he doesn’t know about his saiyan blood)

    Age:
    13

    Back-story:
    He never knew his parents… he has raised by his grandmother which told him stories about his father which has a great warrior. He wanted to be like his father, so he trained but couldn’t never achieve anything. One day his village got attacked by bandits when he has 7 years old.
    He saw his grandmother on the floor… cried more than ever and got stronger… he didn’t notice but he had golden hair and a bright yellow aura. he was enraged. he went and killed 2 of the bandits but then he got uncoscious. He swear vengeace onto those bandits. And since he is been trying to get that golden hair again.

    How he/she/it acts:
    He is very shy and doesn’t care what people say.

    Fighting style:
    He doesn’t like to fight… only when nessecery.

    Alignment:
    Neutral (Good)

    What they wear:
    Normally Mirai Trunks Clothes

  • #34012

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    Name:Tekhan
    Age:12
    Race: Half Sayian
    General Appearance: black Gohan hair and has tail. He is naked because of the crash right now
    Personality: he is trusting of everyone since he lost his memory. And at the moment he just wants to find a good place to rest. he has dreams of a white void that claims to be his friend.
    Alignment: Good
    Fighting Style: He fights until his opponent is K.O or rendered unable to fight. He doesn’t stop unless they say stop
    Short Backstory: in his universe sayians were hunted down by acrosians because they survived the destruction of planet Vegeta. An elite sayian named Beeto was going out for a mission when he witnessed planet vegeta’s destruction. The explosion from the planets destruction sent Beeto’s pod on a trajectory to earth. When his ship got to earth he wasn’t awake because his Space Pod turned on life support systems and put him in stasis.Beeto woke up in a farm naked and threatened to kill the farmer until the farmer explained that he found him out in a field. Namtek declared peace with the farmer and started living and doing work at the farm. The farmer was murdered by bandits and namtek murdered them all until they were wiped out. He met the farmer’s daughter at the funeral and since he killed the bandits, they grew very close over the years and made a family.
    Now the real story Begins
    A boy was climbing a mountain to reach his father. As he got midway up the mountain his hand slipped off the rock his hand was resting on. As he fell, he knew someone would be there to catch him. When he opened his eyes he was in the arms of a man with rough features and glaring eyes. “What happened to not falling this time?” The man asked his son.
    “I really tried this time dad but I’m just not like you” Betek said as his father put him down
    “PROPOSTERIOUS you are a sayian, you cannot be weak like these humans” Beeto said. Tekhan did not understand why his father always went on these rants about sayians and started to find them quite disturbing. “Now I want you to climb up that mountain again until you can do it without falling”. As Betek went back to “Daily training” as his dad liked to call it, he heard a scream come from the place where they’re house was. Betek recognized the scream because it belonged to his mother. His Father looked at Betek and told him “Stay here” and he ran off to see what was going on. Betek was scared because he didn’t know if the situation was serious or not. So he stayed at the mountain and waited for his father to return. It had been half an hour when Betek wondered what happened to his Mother & father. Betek knew his father was fast enough to get to the village and back under 5 minutes . Worried, Betek started his walk towards home. When he got to the entrance he heard talking at the back of the house. As he crept to the back of the house he felt something wrap around his leg. Suddenly, he was jolted up to the roof and being looked at by a lizard like creature.
    “Where are your parents, young monkey” it says as the lizard like creature dangles tekhan from the roof.
    “What are you?” Betek asks in fear, it’s when he notices the blood on it’s horn that he makes him start to freak out.” DADDY! ” Betek Screams.
    “Shut up, Brat” and the Acrosian whips his tail and flings Betek through a fence. Betek looks at his arm and sees blood dripping from it. He stands up holding his arm and screams for his dad one more time.
    “I’m growing tired of your constant noise ,just DIE” and the acrosian fly’s at Betek. Betek closes eyes the same way he does when his father catches him.
    “STAY AWAY FROM MY SON!” and a Golden Light appears in front of Betek and throws the acrosian through the house with it’s tail.”DID IT HURT YOU?” Betek is speechless until he recognizes his father’s voice. His Father looked different with yellow spiked up hair and wasn’t recognizable until he saw his face. Suddenly, the house exploded and the acrosian stepped out with a scratched lip.
    “I finally found you monkey” The acrosian said with an dark aura radiating from it. “I was starting to think it was a mistake when we suddenly picked up a signal coming from a model-600 space pod, but now here we are with the monkey himself”
    Betek’s father had a dark expression on his face and looked at the acrosian with a look of pure hatred.
    “Are you the one who killed my wife” Beeto asked.
    ” Well… she was giving me trouble when she refused to tell me where you were. “So I had to make her show me some respect” The acrosian says with a sick smile. Beeto infuriated screams
    “I’M GOING TO KILL YOU” and charges at the acrosian. Betek who was listening into the conversation started to cry when he heard his mom was dead. Beeto was clashing back and forth with the acrosian in loud sonic booms. When Beeto tried to shove a punch at the acrosian it caught his arm and threw him to the ground.
    “I guess I’ve had enough fun with you sayian” The acrosian narrows his eyes at beeto” Now die “. The acrosian pins down beeto in an instant and puts his tail to beeto’s heart. Betek watched his father struggled and Betek was too stuck in grieve to help him. But then betek realized if his father died here, he’d never get to spend any time with him again. so he picked up a broken off board from the backyard fence and ran at the acrosian.
    “GET OFF MY DAD!” The acrosian who was distracted by his fight with beeto and thought the betek was a coward, got smashed in the head with a board. The acrosian picked betek by his leg and started gut punching him until he started coughing up blood.
    “You little brat, do you think you could’ve actually accomplished something here. Your less than a bottom feeder compared to me” Beeto gets up while the acrosian was beating his son into bleeding fluids.
    “Hey you, are you ready to die” Beeto says in a harsh tone. there is no time to react for the acrosian and beeto wraps his hand around it’s throat, lifts it up, and puts a ki blast to his face.
    “Your still going to die, did you think I was the only one who found the transmission, they’re going to be here in under 20 minutes”
    beeto said, “you took my wife, my planet, so I’m not going to let you take my son from me.” then the acrosians head exploded.
    betek asked his dad,” is it over now?”
    Beeto picked up his son and told him, “we aren’t going to always be with each other, but you most be strong because your a sayian”.
    Beeto walked his son over to the shed and started to patch him with some first aid materials. Then Beeto went to work on the spacepod so he could make a way for his son to escape. then he told his son about it, and he refused because he wanted to be with his father. Tired of arguing with him, he put his hand over his head in a chop-like gesture and knocked his son out and gently put him in the space pod. It was set leave in two minutes and the spacepods for the acrosians had just arrived. Beeto knew he had to buy time until the space pod took off or all his hard work would be for nothing.
    2:00
    he explained to them that he was a farmer
    1:50
    they didn’t believe him because any farmer would run from them.
    1:30
    they identify beeto as the monkey they are looking for
    1:10
    beeto goes ssj and the acrosians get out of minimal form
    0:30
    beeto punches first acro in the face and gets hit by the other acrosian’s tail
    0:15
    beeto is on the ground about to be executed
    0:10
    beeto punches an acrosian through the gut and it powers up to buff form.
    0:05
    beeto’s hand detaches from the pure force of muscle
    0:00
    Betekspaceship takes off
    During spaceship voyage
    Betek wakes ups in a place where everything is a white void. He starts to wonder where he is and if he his dead until he hears a voice.
    “Hello, there” betek looks around for the voice and he cannot find it.”Don’t worry about where I am, because I think I am everywhere and nowhere. Anyway, do you want to talk to me?” Betek immediately says yes and wonders why he is so trusting of this voice.”ok so first, what should I call you?” betek thinks about his name and he can’t remember it very well.
    “All I remember about my name is the word tek, mister” betek says
    “ok, how about we call ourselves tekhan” the voice recommends
    not finding any other name in his head , he decided to name himself tekhan.
    “So do you wanna be my friend, I’m kind of lonely in here” the white voice said. Tekhan thought of this person as his friend because they had just named him, so he stuck out his hand and said, “Sure”
    “hmmm…you probably should wake up now, your going to have a bit of a rough landing. But don’t worry I always take care of my friends”
    tekhan wakes up the real world.
    He’s laying in a field of grass with no clothes on. He gets up and he says he just wants to rest and walks to find somewhere to sleep with Bright blue aura shimmering in and out from view.

    • #34023

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Everything is good except for the supersaiyan part that is caused in an rp event so you would have to unlock it in the rp, but we can say that your character got a rage boost.

    • #34037

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Accepted!

  • #34016

    BladezFox
    Participant

    Name:Blaze

    Race:Saiyan

    Age:18

    Back-story: Blaze Mom Emily was a kind saiyan warrior when she was sent to do missons that had to do with killing people she only kill the evil people.She would try not to kill only if she had to and one day she found a man on a planet very injured,she try to help me.She saw that he was a saiyan like her but she saw that he was not wearing Saiyan armor like her.But she try to help him still and the man woke up said where I’m,who are you and she said I’m Emily I treated your injures you had.The Man said thx for that,my name is Rex and she said what happen to him,he said he doesn’t remember what happen to him.Emily said do you need a place to stay and Rex said sure and I won’t stay to long I don’t want to bother you and she said it’s fine stay as long as you want.
    Five years latter she was pregnant with Rex baby and one day Rex got angry out of no where and before Rex transform into a form he told her run Emily get away from me fast!!!She went in the Space Pod and saw Rex going into his transformation and destroying two planet and the planet he was on when he was transforming.She and her baby escape and when she woke up she was on earth and she try to fix the space pod because it was not turning on and what she didn’t know she was next to kami lookout and she saw it.She when up and flew up and told kami what happen kami said he will help,and she told him one last thing pls make my son strong so he can defend himself if anything happens to me and keep that monster away from him.Then 6 months latter Emily give birth to Blaze but she die at child birth.
    For the past 17 years kami,Mr.Pop, and korin train Blaze to be the strongest on earth.He had to train in some bad climate and more,sandstorm,snowstorm,standing in the middle of a activate volcano,and swimming in freezing water.Train the the hyper time chamber fight against Mr.Pop and he learn powerful moves that can destroyed mountains.Also for some reason kami saw when Blaze got older he had like the fight style of warrior a saiyan warrior when their was no saiyan training him.When he turn 18 he told kami he wanted to explore the world and get stronger and kami said ok sure it won’t hurt(what I’m saying, Mr.Pop stop me)and Blaze packed up and stayed ok I’m off and lefted.
    After Blaze left kami told Mr.Pop why didn’t you stop me and Mr.Pop answer you never tell a god what to do.Plus you can see everything on earth if Blaze is doing fine and if Rex has to gotten to earth and if that day comes we will be ready.You can also call Goku to help protected Blaze from Rex and kami said you right.And has night fall comes Blaze kill farms some animals for food and cooks them in cave he found and the story continue on as Blaze trains long for weeks and what will happen in the story of Blaze will he meet his father.You will find out if you accept me in your server.
    How he/she/it acts:Blaze is more of the long wolf person he is very serious,is smart kami and Mr.Pop teach him many thing about the world if he ever wanted to fit in,he is powerful,he can show a kind side if the right person comes and will not leave the weak people be hurt by others,tries to help people.

    Fighting style:He keeps moving in the middle of a fight and tries to find the weak points of his opponent while in the fight.

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:Demon clan clothing with the weighted cape
    discord:Blazefox

  • #34040

    AnonyHawk
    Participant

    Name: Hawk
    Gender: Male
    Race: Half-Saiyan
    Age: 13
    Personality: My character is peaceful and studies alot.
    General Appearance: White hair (Trunks Hairstyle) Usually Wears Gi’s
    Backstory: Not much is known about Hawk’s Parents. Hawk was raised by his grandfather. When Hawk has 10 his village got attacked by a group of bandits which destroyed most of the village. Hawk was the only survivor. He has since been training to get vegeance on those bandits saiyans. After 1 year had passed Hawk’s BP has a staggering 20.000. With his power he destroyed the bandits base. After his vengeace has complete. He went and trained with Master Roshi.

  • #34043

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    his dad was ssj

  • #34044

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    not him and the part with the white void was him talking to his subconscious

  • #34049

    BatVenomPL
    Participant

    what about my application?

  • #34215

    Alex
    Participant

    BumpDaBump,
    BatVenomPL. Please add more information for your character if your still interested. Then you might get accepted.

  • #34218

    BladezFox
    Participant

    what about my application?

  • #34235

    TDS Odyssey
    Participant

    Name: Zveltal or Ziv, for short.
    Gender: Male
    Race: Half Saiyan
    Age:19
    Personality: Zveltal is more personal, quite, doesn’t get along well and likes to know the people he’s talking to.
    General appearance: usually wears black and purple while not showing too much skin, while having bright purple eyes and black hair.
    Backstory: ever since Zveltal can remember, his father, Artic, has been abusing him for his weakness and lack of motivation to fight which is common for half saiyan children who live in earths society. Because of all the countless verbal abuse that Artic gave his own son, Zveltal grew soft and has had multiple emotional outbreaks and had start lacking a social life, something that he would suffer in the long run when the time comes for him to become an adult. One day while Artic was gone, he started training until he had passed out, what Zveltal forgot was that his father would come back eventually and mistake his exhaustion for being lazy and lacking motivation to fight, this is usually something that he would have to look out for. That same night Artic came back home really late and drunk, he was at a local bar with his work friends watching a tournament that was going on, Artic started hitting Zveltal and insulting him about how he’s worthless and that he was the reason why his mother had left his father. This went on until his mental state had broke. Zveltal rose up from being pushed down by his father and grab him by top of his head and twisted it, resulting in a short blood curdling scream, his father laid face down in a pool of blood, dead. After realizing what he had done, Zveltal ran away for good and since having little money after finding a place to stay permanently. Running away was no easy task for him as his guilt not only pressured him to running away further away from where he was, but he needed his own peace away from society but somewhere that isn’t too far away from any city or village, so somehow he can find a way to survive. After finding his peace of mind he got back into his passion of art and always have works that usually depict a women in a white dress, which is his way to cope for him missing his mother who was never there to save him but also this gave an opportunity to start working on art more by himself and to also manage his training. Because Zveltal was always pushed away for his art and usually being insulted for the same art style and similar ideas , he started to steal at night to survive. While keeping up with his passion to train, he learned a few tricks one of which is to shoot energy blasts which he observed some fighters in a tournament who shot some blasts and ended up learning how to do it as well, oddly though these blasts came out green, but besides that he feels like he can get stronger each day as long as he trains with the same anger that made him kill his father. However, on the mental side of things, Zveltal desperately hopes he can find his mother who left him to endure so much pain from the drunk who he called a father.
    How He acts: Shy, an over thinker.
    Fighting style: close and personal

    • #34238

      Inoka
      Participant

      We’ve given your application a look, and to be honest your writing style is very impressive, exactly what we need for a good RP!

      But the biggest issue we have is… Well, you’re just another Saiyan, that’s what it comes down to.

      We’ve got way too many Saiyans as is, eight of our or eleven players are Saiyans of some kind, which is way past the small Saiyan to other race ratio we wanted to have.

      Truth be told, your story is good enough that you might get accepted anyway, but I think it would be a waste for someone as good as yourself to get drowned out by all the other Saiyans in the story.

    • #34239

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Oh my god thanks man, I just like the feel of being a half/Saiyan so that’s what I chose.

      But I’d like to thank Negative for helping me write up that backstory, he helped me and I can’t take the credit it for said backstory.

  • #34243

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Please people no more Saiyans. You can still apply for them but their difficulty just went from 70/100 to 98/100

    • #34257

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Oh..

      Does that mean my application is invalid, and I would have to write up another one or what’s going on with that?

  • #34264

    Alex
    Participant

    Basically change your race.

    • #34266

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      I mean I would like to see if I was accepted as a saiyan or not, despite the sudden increase of difficult, so I’d like to hear it from the staff person if anything. However an android would be pretty neato.

    • #34273

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      I would like it if you changed your race to human or another, but Accepted

    • #34274

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Can you please post your discord id.

    • #34285

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Justinstbh #7774

  • #34281

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    as of right now the difficulty of a human has gone down again. It is now by far the easiest race to become.

  • #34283

    James Cfer
    Participant

    from this point onwards all new human, namekian as well as any race other than saiyan or half-saiyan will be getting a large amount of tp when they join. sorry this isn’t my normal account but it is me.

  • #34286

    BladezFox
    Participant

    Name:Blaze

    Race:Saiyan

    Age:18

    Back-story: Blaze Mom Emily was a kind saiyan warrior when she was sent to do missons that had to do with killing people she only kill the evil people.She would try not to kill only if she had to and one day she found a man on a planet very injured,she try to help me.She saw that he was a saiyan like her but she saw that he was not wearing Saiyan armor like her.But she try to help him still and the man woke up said where I’m,who are you and she said I’m Emily I treated your injures you had.The Man said thx for that,my name is Rex and she said what happen to him,he said he doesn’t remember what happen to him.Emily said do you need a place to stay and Rex said sure and I won’t stay to long I don’t want to bother you and she said it’s fine stay as long as you want.
    Five years latter she was pregnant with Rex baby and one day Rex got angry out of no where and before Rex transform into a form he told her run Emily get away from me fast!!!She went in the Space Pod and saw Rex going into his transformation and destroying two planet and the planet he was on when he was transforming.She and her baby escape and when she woke up she was on earth and she try to fix the space pod because it was not turning on and what she didn’t know she was next to kami lookout and she saw it.She when up and flew up and told kami what happen kami said he will help,and she told him one last thing pls make my son strong so he can defend himself if anything happens to me and keep that monster away from him.Then 6 months latter Emily give birth to Blaze but she die at child birth.
    For the past 17 years kami,Mr.Pop, and korin train Blaze to be the strongest on earth.He had to train in some bad climate and more,sandstorm,snowstorm,standing in the middle of a activate volcano,and swimming in freezing water.Train the the hyper time chamber fight against Mr.Pop and he learn powerful moves that can destroyed mountains.Also for some reason kami saw when Blaze got older he had like the fight style of warrior a saiyan warrior when their was no saiyan training him.When he turn 18 he told kami he wanted to explore the world and get stronger and kami said ok sure it won’t hurt(what I’m saying, Mr.Pop stop me)and Blaze packed up and stayed ok I’m off and lefted.
    After Blaze left kami told Mr.Pop why didn’t you stop me and Mr.Pop answer you never tell a god what to do.Plus you can see everything on earth if Blaze is doing fine and if Rex has to gotten to earth and if that day comes we will be ready.You can also call Goku to help protected Blaze from Rex and kami said you right.And has night fall comes Blaze kill farms some animals for food and cooks them in cave he found and the story continue on as Blaze trains long for weeks and what will happen in the story of Blaze will he meet his father.You will find out if you accept me in your server.
    How he/she/it acts:Blaze is more of the long wolf person he is very serious,is smart kami and Mr.Pop teach him many thing about the world if he ever wanted to fit in,he is powerful,he can show a kind side if the right person comes and will not leave the weak people be hurt by others,tries to help people.

    Fighting style:He keeps moving in the middle of a fight and tries to find the weak points of his opponent while in the fight.

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:Demon clan clothing with the weighted cape
    discord:Blazefox

  • #34287

    Phoenix C. Smith
    Participant

    was I ever accepted?

  • #34296

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Looking for players for any other race than saiyan or half saiyan

  • #34300

    Lyme
    Participant

    hey boyssss I am back and ready to try and rejoin the rp >:D I don’t know the power levels, and my characters wants that sweet and sexy revenge for Frieza so I’mma make this as long as possible. But, well less revenge more looking to see if he can defeat the one who beat Frieza.

    Name: Lyme

    Race: Arcosian

    Age: mid 20s in arcosian years

    Back-story: Lyme was born around the time Frieza was born. Lyme was royalty, but not in King Cold’s bloodline. Lyme was born with the power level of 200,000, and was thought to be a prodigy, until soon after Frieza was born. Frieza’s power far surpassed Lyme’s, and once Lyme was old enough to understand this, he knew that since Frieza was stronger, he was going to have to find away to catch up to him. he didn’t train much, and with all his training all he could make up for it is getting his restricted form to about 270,000, which still was too little to keep up to Frieza. After awhile, Lyme had decided that he could train his mind instead of his body, and this was when he learned how to be able to control himself in less restricted forms, like 2nd and 3rd, he still needed training to control 4th, but he was able to do something no other arcosian (except cooler but it was unknown to the race that he could do that) could do. he surpassed his 4th form. now in this new form he felt stronger, much stronger to the extent that he thought he could beat Frieza. but he thought. and he knew if he showed Frieza the new form Frieza would train for it to and all Lyme’s training would be for nothing. now many years down the line all Lyme did was control a couple, measly weak planets, mudballs that had no real value. and he only had weak men that could do nothing to help Lyme take over any planets. but news had been spreading, news that Frieza had died. once Lyme had heard this, he was saddened. not saddened that Frieza had died, saddened that Lyme wasn’t the one to kill him. he was enraged, and nearly blew up his planet. he decided to ask the higher royalty, if he could go, and see what had happened to Frieza, it was accepted, only if, Frieza was murdered, and he brought back the bodies of the ones who killed him. of course the higher ups thought that if Frieza was murdered Lyme would die without a chance of winning, but they didn’t know that Lyme had his knew form. Lyme had headed stight to where namek was, only to hear from his men that a transmission had come in, Frieza was found, but nearly dead. apparently Frieza talked about a legendary super saiyan, and was even kind enough to say that they are on earth. Lyme heard this, and as quick as he could, he gathered some of his men and headed out to earth, just before Frieza could leave for earth.

    How he/she/it acts: Lyme is a prideful arcosian, prideful in his 5th form of course, but still a prideful arcosian.

    Fighting style: he would fight like Frieza, which is just throw kicks and punches and hope they hit, but with the training he did, and all his meditation, he knows how to deal with others without just throwing punches.

    Alignment: chaotic neutral.

    What they wear: he wears an armor that has a cape, which shows he is royalty, like King Cold. the armor has basic colors, that normal men are issued.

  • #34301

    Lyme
    Participant

    straight*
    sorry if there are some more misspelled words, I haven’t been typing a lot lately

  • #34310

    Lyme
    Participant

    notice me senpais

    • #34313

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Noticed you
      Discord.

  • #34314

    Lyme
    Participant

    Idioticdemon105
    #3847

  • #34326

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Player info updated.
    We have:
    Saiyans/half saiyans- 8
    Humans-1
    Frieza race -2
    Namekian-1
    Majin-1

  • #34420

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    There is one saiyan slot open

  • #34421

    BladezFox
    Participant

    Name:Blaze

    Race:Saiyan

    Age:18

    Back-story: Blaze Mom Emily was a kind saiyan warrior when she was sent to do missons that had to do with killing people she only kill the evil people.She would try not to kill only if she had to and one day she found a man on a planet very injured,she try to help me.She saw that he was a saiyan like her but she saw that he was not wearing Saiyan armor like her.But she try to help him still and the man woke up said where I’m,who are you and she said I’m Emily I treated your injures you had.The Man said thx for that,my name is Rex and she said what happen to him,he said he doesn’t remember what happen to him.Emily said do you need a place to stay and Rex said sure and I won’t stay to long I don’t want to bother you and she said it’s fine stay as long as you want.
    Five years latter she was pregnant with Rex baby and one day Rex got angry out of no where and before Rex transform into a form he told her run Emily get away from me fast!!!She went in the Space Pod and saw Rex going into his transformation and destroying two planet and the planet he was on when he was transforming.She and her baby escape and when she woke up she was on earth and she try to fix the space pod because it was not turning on and what she didn’t know she was next to kami lookout and she saw it.She when up and flew up and told kami what happen kami said he will help,and she told him one last thing pls make my son strong so he can defend himself if anything happens to me and keep that monster away from him.Then 6 months latter Emily give birth to Blaze but she die at child birth.
    For the past 17 years kami,Mr.Pop, and korin train Blaze to be the strongest on earth.He had to train in some bad climate and more,sandstorm,snowstorm,standing in the middle of a activate volcano,and swimming in freezing water.Train the the hyper time chamber fight against Mr.Pop and he learn powerful moves that can destroyed mountains.Also for some reason kami saw when Blaze got older he had like the fight style of warrior a saiyan warrior when their was no saiyan training him.When he turn 18 he told kami he wanted to explore the world and get stronger and kami said ok sure it won’t hurt(what I’m saying, Mr.Pop stop me)and Blaze packed up and stayed ok I’m off and lefted.
    After Blaze left kami told Mr.Pop why didn’t you stop me and Mr.Pop answer you never tell a god what to do.Plus you can see everything on earth if Blaze is doing fine and if Rex has to gotten to earth and if that day comes we will be ready.You can also call Goku to help protected Blaze from Rex and kami said you right.And has night fall comes Blaze kill farms some animals for food and cooks them in cave he found and the story continue on as Blaze trains long for weeks and what will happen in the story of Blaze will he meet his father.You will find out if you accept me in your server.
    How he/she/it acts:Blaze is more of the long wolf person he is very serious,is smart kami and Mr.Pop teach him many thing about the world if he ever wanted to fit in,he is powerful,he can show a kind side if the right person comes and will not leave the weak people be hurt by others,tries to help people.

    Fighting style:He keeps moving in the middle of a fight and tries to find the weak points of his opponent while in the fight.

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:Demon clan clothing with the weighted cape
    discord:Blazefox
    tell me if I’m accepted or not

    • #34423

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Accepted

    • #34444

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Could you please post your Discord Id.

  • #34459

    AlexKJ
    Participant

    Before I apply I’d like to ask a few questions.
    So first off me and my friend are planning to apply as brothers, so should we make one long application with two sections (one for each person) or two different applications?
    Second, I know that you said that the namek saga was just finished, but does this take place in a different namek saga than the one in Dragon Ball Z or is it the same but in a parallel universe with different people where Goku and the Z Fighters never existed. Also if it is the first one does it take place before or after DB/DBZ/DBS?
    Also, if we apply for androids can we come up with someone that created us or does it have to be Dr Gero?

    • This reply was modified 2 months, 1 week ago by  AlexKJ.
  • #34521

    AlexKJ
    Participant

    Welp, it’s been a little over a day since I posted the question so I’m just gonna start working on my application and hopefully it doesn’t have too many things that might not go along with the server.

    • #34531

      Inoka
      Participant

      So sorry we didn’t see your post sooner, with the way the server flares up sometimes, it can hard to see if the thread got posts.

      Anyway, our story takes place in normal DBZ with the cast, however, we kind of upstaged them to the point that some of the cast aren’t as strong as they would be normally.
      To give you an idea, right now, we’re preparing for the Cell Games on Saturday, with Broly happening tomorrow.

      We had a few things happen that are different, like Goku dying and not being able to be revived because some of our players are really keen on abusing the hell out of the Dragon Balls for dumb things…

      If you want to apply as brothers, you should both make two different applications so we can know how you two are different from one another.

      As for if you apply as Androids, you’d need a good backstory for it… But frankly we’re so overrun with Saiyans that the fact alone that you’re not Saiyans would be enough to get you in.

    • #34539

      AlexKJ
      Participant

      Thanks for responding,I have a feeling that our back stories will be good enough to get accepted but who knows, so far it’s two paragraphs that are around 20-30 sentences each (At least thats what an online sentence counter says) but it might be a few more days before we apply since we’ve only worked on the backstory and appearance so far.

      • This reply was modified 2 months ago by  AlexKJ.
  • #34537

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    We are still accepting.

  • #34574

    FinalChoas
    Participant

    Discord: Konetitos#7055

    Name:Atlas

    Gender: Male

    Race: Android

    Age:16

    How He Acts:Aloof and light-hearted, can be very analytical

    Fighting Style: Atlas fights with heavy and hard-hitting kicks, with very few punches thrown into the mix. The fighting style relies on waiting for his opponents to make errors in their form. Put simply, he fights defensively. In serious situations, His core activates and reinforces his body giving him greater strength and endurance. He can also project a strong force field. (similar to android 17)

    Appearance: Atlas is tall, standing at 6ft. He is a larger man, with broad shoulders and a wide frame. He has a somewhat plain face without any defining features. He is incredibly fit due to being an android. He has normal length light brown hair that spikes slightly. His skin is caucasian, slightly tanned due to his travels, He boasts a four inch scar running down his forearm. He wears normal pants (C-17’s pants) and a Grey T-shirt (bodysuit), but during fights he wears looser more breathable clothing

    Backstory: Born to the same mother, both not knowing their father’s, half-brothers Atlas and Hyperion live in a broken home with nothing but torture awaiting them each day. That’s how I’d describe our life anyway. When I was young, our mother was cold and unloving, refusing to let our fathers into our lives. Somehow she won total custody over us, how I don’t know, since she was obviously far from stable. We both lived in terror. Being to loud or not following her order could result in beatings and benign punishments. Food was a rare treat, given to use only to prolong the torture. Missing spots of grease or grime on the floors was taboo. I was taught nothing from my mother but the harsh crudeness of reality, and even then my older brother took the brunt of it. He always felt the need to protect me, and I always respected and thanked him for what he’s done to me. The child support checks sent to her from our respective fathers were spent on alcohol and drugs, rather than the needs of her “Children”. To avoid prison, she homeschooled us, teaching us nothing and fabricating test scores to show the government to prove I was learning. I was becoming sick. Sick and tired of her treatment, Sick at her actions towards me. Anger welled inside me and was barely contained by the fear she instilled in me, but it wasn’t enough. One morning I awoke to violent screaming. I dragged myself out of bed and walked towards the sound. It turns out I had forgotten to wake her, and she was late for work. I responded with, “Not my problem”. Which was mistake one. She raised her hand to strike me. That same anger welled within me, and i thought, I refuse to be treated this way. As her open palm came at me, I slapped it away. She stood there, mouth wide agape. Her mouth opened to release a disgusting torrent of insults and curses. Suddenly she became silent and left the room. Not sure what to do, as I’d never stood up for myself before, I wasn’t sure what to do, and fell back into habit and waited for her return. Mistake number 2. She returned, charging into the room. Before I knew it she was right in my face, knife angled towards me. I panicked and raised my arm to defend myself. As a result I received a 4 inch long wound across my forearm. In shock I fell onto my back as blood spray from my arm. She said these three words, “It’s your fault.” and walked away.

    I couldn’t remember much after that, it was a mashed up blur. I seemed to teleport around as my brother found me, somehow treated my wound on the basic level, and in within the hour i had been stumbling out the front door of the house, and on my way to my new life.

    I woke up, a stinging sensation in my arm. That’s when my brother filled me in, and it’s also when i learned we were homeless. So, to survive we resorted to the usual tactics of the homeless man, begging for zeni, offering services for small amounts of currency. We kept moving from building to building in need of shelter, my brother taking the lead. He was always an aggressor towards any unknown people. He felt he must protect me at all costs, and i was extremely grateful to him for it.
    After several months of this lifestyle, my brother came to me one day, with a shady man, an elated gleam on his face.
    Apparently some private “company” was offering shelter and food to the homeless, and the unwanted for some kind of price. We accepted, feeling that we’d give almost anything to get us out of the slums of West City. We accepted, aware of how shady this man was. He escorted us to an ally with several busses filled with Bums and other street rats. We lined up, boarded and began to move.
    My brother said to me, “It’ll be okay” as I drifted to sleep, the shaking and humming of the bus lulling me to sleep. Once we arrived at our destination they assigned gave us A gray set of clothing, and code names. I was endowed with Project: Atlas. My Brother Hyperion. We had no idea what this meant, but we went along with it. Food and water beats a weird nickname after all. The “Staff” were very hospital, saying if we needed anything to contact them. They fed us. Cleaned our clothing at least twice a week, and provided showering and bathroom facilities. However, we notice that people began going missing from this “Location”. We thought nothing of it at the time. Maybe they left voluntarily? Or at least that’s what we wanted to believe. However, two weeks later, I became aware of the dark truth as a black nylon bag was draped over my head and was quickly incapacitated.

    I woke up, dazed, my head muddled as if all my thoughts had deciding to cling together into a ball. My whole body racked with agonizing pain. So much so that I wasn’t able to scream, only sit there in agony. Worst of all, a pain unlike any other sizzling right in the center of my chest. I struggled against my restraints, my efforts futile, as they seemed to be made of some kind of ungodly metal That’s when I heard his voice. I couldn’t comprehend his words at the time but he was shouting. Suddenly relief flooded through me as narcotics flooded my system. My vision cleared and my thoughts became coherent once more. He looked at me. He wore a full black outfit with a small emblem which was embroidered with two R’s. He spoke, “So it seems you’re body hasn’t fully accepted the technology yet, but that’s too be expected.”. I sat there and contemplated my choices. I had only one, sit here and listen to what this man has to say. As i analyzed the room I saw 15 men, armed with various weapons all directed at me, reinforcing my decision. The “Doctor” as he called himself adjusted his glasses. “YOU!”, he exclaimed, with a finger aimed at me. “Are one of the two only people to survive such a procedure.” What? I don’t understand? “What “Procedure””,I croaked.
    He explained it to me, slowly. The words still engraved into my mind to this day. “You are now, an android.”. And it all clicked. That’s why people were given names starting with project! Anger welled in my throat, but using my better judgement, and with some help from the narcotics I stifled my outburst. He spoke, “ You’ve been gifted with mastery of several Martial arts, such as Brazilian Jiu Jitsu and Muay Thai, but beyond that, you can control your internal life force energy, thanks to some help from me that is.” I wanted to scream, turn me back to normal, but no words came out. Even then it seems he read my mind. “You didn’t think the food and shelter would be free did you”. Suddenly, An explosion occurred, rattling the inside of the room and making the men stumble. The scientist started running in its direction, most of the men followed him, 3 staying behind to guard me.
    I removed the IV from my arm, and began standing up the guard grabbed me and forced me down. In self defense I extended my hand and pushed him directly in the center of his chest. Hard. My palm sent him flying into the wall, the plaster crumbling under his weight as he lay incapacitated in the other room. The other two guards raised their weapons towards me, and The burning in my chest returned. As they unloaded their clips at me I braced myself for the worst, except it never came. I opened my eyes, my mouth agape as a force field surrounded me, the bullets falling to the ground like raindrops. Seeing my abilities, filled with confidence, I charged the first guard, who was taken down by a quick muay thai knee strike to the skull. As he fell to the ground, the other soldier panicked and rapid fired his rifle in my direction. I avoided, the bullets moving slower than molasses as I quickly closed the distance between me and him. The feel of the fight was exhilarating, as if all the steps were laid before me and all I had to do was follow them. I delivered a swift downward punch to his head sending him straight into the floor, unconscious. I felt wonderful, better than ever, and most of all, I felt confident I could find my brother and Escape.

    So that’s what I did.

    I exited the room and ran to the source of the explosion, theorizing that that’s where my brother was. Suddenly I felt a cold sharp fear. What if he wasn’t the second survivor!? No, that couldn’t be true. I pushed the thought into the back of my mind. Soon I reached the room which I had estimated the explosion had occurred in. The was nothing but Shrapnel and a trail of small dots of blood and footmarks, oddly enough, mixed with sulfur. I followed the trail obediently, and traveled the long marble hallways of this unknown until I felt the heat of fire singe my face. I turned to see my brother, in a room filled with flames, standing triumphantly.

    And to this day i’ve never been more relieved.

    We ran up to each other and Hugged, relieved to see each other alive and well. After celebrating our re-union. We noticed that the fire began spread, engulfing the door. Panic welled inside me again, neither of us knew the way out. To us this place was a winding impossible labyrinth, with no exit. My brother turned to me, his face focused, and determined. He explained to me how he was the source of the explosion, and how he thought he could replicate it again to make an exit. He turned, facing north. He opened his palm, Green radiant energy collecting in it. He placed his left hand on his wrist and the Energy Swelled In Size, atleast double the size of his fist. HIs arm kicked back, as a torrent of green energy blasted through seemingly never ending walls until the outside world was revealed. By Now the fire had tripled in size, the head now nipping at our clothing, threatening to ignite us at any instant, so we fled. As we sprinted away from the building, hiding within the forest adjacent to West City I realized, i’m no longer the scared child I used to be, no longer could anyone, much less my mother could hurt me. No longer was I a weak Human. As I dragged my feet through the mud of the forest, I accepted the person who I am now.

    I am Atlas.

    • This reply was modified 2 months ago by  FinalChoas.
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  • #34579

    AlexKJ
    Participant

    Name: Hyperion

    Race: Android

    Age: 17

    Backstory:
    Me and Atlas are half brothers that each only briefly knew our biological fathers until our mother gained custody over both of us even though any normal person would be able to see that she was unfit and psychologically unstable. I can still remember glimpses of my father, but as time goes by that memory fades more and more. I’d say I was about 5 when I met my half brother Atlas, since my mother had gained custody over both of use we were originally separate but now had to share the same home and room. Like I said before, most of my life before my mother gained custody is just a blur but I like to think that I would’ve had a more normal and better childhood with my father, but that’s all in the past now. My mother is almost as hard to think about as my father since I have tried to shove as much of her as I could out of my memories and into the deepest darkest corners of my mind. What I do remember though is the endless beatings and verbal abuse that she used to lash out onto me and my brother. Most of the time I tried to take the brunt of it as my brother was younger and I did and still do feel a need to protect him from the harshness of the world. Day in and day out it would be horrible beatings for the slightest slip up whether it be missing a small area of dust or a little smudge on a spoon. We were home schooled and mostly kept out of the outside world so that my mother could get away with the horrible things she did and so that she could spend the child support checks that she got from our fathers on drugs or other things. My mother said that she home schooled us to the government but she never taught us anything above a 1st grade level, most of the time I had to learn on my own whether it be from instruction manuals lying about the house or things from newspapers. One day I woke up to the sounds of my crying brother, I’d say we were about 9-10 when this happened so we had only been with our mother for a few years. Immediately after waking up to the crying I dashed through the dreary hallways into the lounge, when I got in there I saw him on the ground crying and clutching his arm. His arm had a giant 4 inch gash going across it and it was bleeding horribly. I Immediately ran to the bathroom and grabbed a towel and a first aid kit. I got back over to him and unbuckled my belt, I then tied it around his bicep to slow the bleeding. After that I used the towel to wipe of most of the blood so I could see the actual wound. From reading about these types of wounds in newspapers I knew that a wound like this would require stitches so I did my best to remember what the newspaper had said about how to stitch wounds. I could tell immediately that the wound wasn’t self inflicted because I knew that my brother wasn’t capable of something like that. My first thought after that was my mom. After I knew that my brother was all good I went to the kitchen and grabbed two garbage bags, I then went to my room and began packing clothes, a few bags of chips, and water bottles for me and my brother. Me and my brother were around the same size so we shared clothes and my mother was too cheap to buy us our own clothes anyways, so it was relatively easy and quick for me to pack our clothes. After I had finished packing I told my brother we were going on a trip for a little bit. At first he was hesitant because he thought that our mom was going to hurt him even more if he left, but I assured him that I wouldn’t let her hurt him ever again. We then headed out the door making sure not to alert our mom.
    From that point on things went down hill, we ran out of food and water after the first two days of living on the streets so we had to resort to begging for food, water, and Zeni. It was one of the hardest times of our lives but we both still agree to this day that it was better than living in that hell. We began doing odd and sometimes illegal jobs for people just so that we could get by and make enough money to feed ourselves. I would’ve rather left my brother out of the jobs, but there was no where else for him to go and I felt that he was safer with me than he was alone on the streets. After a few years of doing odd jobs we ran into a man on the street who was recruiting people to join a secret project that would provide them with food, water, and shelter. You could tell that his targeted recruits were people on the streets that no one cared about and who didn’t have anything at all. To me and Atlas it seemed shady, but I was young and cocky I thought that if things went south I’d be able to protect my brother and take them out at the same time,it was stupid of me to think that looking back, but I’m glad I accepted the offer, it was a good deal anyways so we I begrudgingly accepted the offer. He then led us into a giant empty lot with a few school buses filled with other bums and street rats. By now we were 12-13 and were too blinded by this opportunity to see that this was too good to be true. At first all seemed good they loaded us onto buses and shipped us out to some desert with what looked like several abandoned warehouses. By now me and Atlas were starting to have second thoughts about this whole thing, but we were desperate and still hopeful that it wouldn’t turn out bad. When we got out of the bus people that looked like soldiers in the military but weren’t began assigning everyone names based off of Greek mythology. I was assigned Hyperion and my brother was assigned Atlas, and that’s how we got our names. After we were assigned name we were led into a ware house and given gray shirts and gray pants, we were told to ask any of the “staff” if we needed food, water, help, etc. For the first few weeks it was exactly like the guy on the street had said, but people started disappearing randomly, at first we thought nothing of it and thought that they just decided to leave on their own accord. Then one night as I was sleeping someone clamped their hand over my mouth and knocked me out. Next thing I knew I had bright white lights shining in my eyes and everything was so hazy. I had an IV in my arm and their were doctors/scientists hurrying about around me. I then looked over and saw my brother also with an IV in his arm but he was passed out. At first I thought it was a hallucination or something so I tried to go back to sleep and I did. I woke up again and this time I was in a bed in a room, not a warehouse or an old dusty room, but more like a testing room. I had on a gray shirt, gray pants, a yellow belt with a red buckle, and yellow boots. I got out of bed and immediately went to open the door and accidentally broke off the door handle. After that happened I was stunned at first and then I thought that this had to be a dream, I tried pinching myself a few times but nothing changed I was still there. Since it wasn’t a dream I was a bit confused and still a little drowsy and I started to look around the world trying to recall how I got there when all of a sudden the door opened and several scientists stepped in accompanied with guards wielding riot shields. At this point I was completely lost as to what was going on and was freaking out a little, and for once the thought of where my brother was hadn’t even occurred. The scientists said one word and after they said it I lost all control of my body, I essentially went limp but I was still standing there. They then began to explain that I was apart of an android program started by some private military and that they were trying to create the perfect human. They also mentioned that me and my brother were the only ones to survive the “transformation” so far, and that I was now an android. They also explained that I had the fighting techniques of the past four World Martial Arts Tournament champions implanted into my brain, they also mentioned that I wouldn’t be able to access these techniques at first but with training I would be able to “unlock” them in a sense. Once they finished explaining what was going on I realized that I couldn’t control my own body, whenever I wanted to talk I couldn’t and I couldn’t even walk on my own. As I was thinking about what was going on they began to lead me to what looked like one of the other warehouses except the interior was made of some type of reinforced steel. Then they placed giant steel poles in front of me and drilled them into the ground. After they were finished the scientists moved into a room with a glass window and a speaker so they could see out and give commands they than began giving me instructions on how to use the fighting styles that were implanted into my head. At this point I had control of my body and I began thinking clearly and immediately I thought of my brother. He wasn’t anywhere near me at the time and I had no idea where he was. I wanted to find them but I also didn’t want to lose control of my body so I did what they said, but I couldn’t get Atlas out of my head. At first I didn’t think I would be that good at it, but as I started something clicked in my head and I began striking the pole at insane speeds that normally would just look like a blur of movements. Though for some reason I was able to see my movements perfectly. After about 10 minutes I kept going and I wasn’t even breaking a sweat, I was astonished by what I was doing. An hour later and they gave new instructions on how to fire a ki blast. All of these commands had made me feel powerful yet weak at the same time because on one hand I had amazing strength and on the other I was trapped and didn’t want to step out of line while at the same time I wanted to find Atlas. I just did it anyways even though I didn’t want to and didn’t think it would work. So I took several steps back and then I lifted up my hand and opened up my palm. Immediately I felt a surge of energy course through my body and into my hand, then next thing I knew a giant green ball shot out of my hand and hit the pole. Right after the collision an explosion erupted throughout the warehouse and would’ve killed me if I wasn’t an android, but a piece of shrapnel caught my cheek and to this day I still have the scar.
    After the smoke clears from the explosion I look around and the glass window was shattered and it looked like all of the scientists were knocked out, but I still had control of my body so I pushed through the pain and started looking for my brother. I looked around the room for the way I had came in and found it and sprinted over to it, once I arrived I decided to test out my new found power and kicked the door down to my amazement it had actually worked. I was excited by my new power but I knew that I had to find my brother. I started racing down the hallway, running faster than I’ve ever ran before. My mind was almost racing through thoughts as fast as I was running, I needed to find my brother, if he was dead then I would never forgive myself. As I was running I noticed that on the inside of a room was a picture of me and my brother sleeping on some sort of surgery tables, for a minute I lost focus on finding my brother and let my curiosity get the best of me I went into the room and found instructions and lists of all of the things me and my brother could do, at the time some of them seemed outrageous like flying. One in particular in the list stood out though, it was some short of concentrated energy wave that I released from a core in my eyes that burned and temporarily blinded everything within a 10 foot radius of me. As I began reading more a few guards came into the room pointing guns at me and told me to drop the papers. My curiosity and cockiness got the best of me and I decided to try this new technique that the papers called “Raging Flame”. I focused all of my energy to my eyes like I had done with the ki attack and again something in my brain clicked. Suddenly all of the papers in the room were engulfed in flames including the information on me and my brother. It was horrifying seeing the guards burning and covering their eyes. They eventually ran out of the room and down the hall. All of a sudden Atlas popped his head in grinning madly, when I saw him my heart did a double take. Even at such an early age I was still ecstatic that my brother was safe and I felt a huge weight lifted off my back. We ran over to each other and hugged both clearly happy to see the other alive, once we were done hugging we noticed that the fire began to spread so I began looking for a way out of the building. I quickly decided to bust through the walls, but I wanted Atlas to be prepared first so I wouldn’t hurt him so I told him what the explosion was and that I was going to do it again to get us out of this place. After I finished explaining I began to fire my ki blast but this time it had to last and go through every wall behind it so I outstretched my right hand, opened my palm, and grabbed hold of my wrist with my left hand to steady it. I focused my energy and a mammoth wave of energy blew flew the millions of walls exposing the glistening sunlight. We then raced through the hole and outside where we could see the skyscrapers of west city towering over the entire forest that the building was encompassed by. At this point the entire building was burning and seemed like it was about to collapse. Fearing that the building might collapse we trekked through the forest. As we were running towards west city I looked back and thought of more clearly what exactly had happened in that now flaming building. I knew that now I would be able to protect myself and more importantly my brother from anyone that would try to hurt us.

    How he/she/it acts: Hyperion is very cocky even when anyone that is spectating a fight would laugh at him for even trying. Even if he’s outmatched by someone ten times as strong as him he’ll still trash talk and act like he is more powerful, sometimes it’s just a facade to stop his brother from worrying but most of the time it’s out of sheer arrogance. His curiosity is definitely one of less prominent features, but it’s still there. Sometimes if something is intriguing enough then Hyperion will lose focus over everything and investigate/analyze whatever is intriguing him. His most prominent trait would be his protectiveness, it even rivals that of a mother. His main focus even if he’s in the middle of a fight is to keep his brother safe, this can be hindering as it uses up most of his focus and he worries that if he uses too much power he might accidentally hurt his brother.

    Fighting style:Hyperion mainly uses powerful green ki attacks that explode when they come in contact with anything solid, these attacks would kill any normal man, but Hyperion isn’t worried about fighting normal men. When he isn’t using ki attacks, he’ll use a mix of quick strikes to the opponent’s sides and chest with a few kicks thrown in to add an element of randomness. Sometimes he will fake a charge and as the opponent is expecting to be attacked in hand to hand combat, Hyperion will fire off a large ki attack and then as it hits he’ll begin to actually charge the opponent.

    Alignment: Hyperion fights to protect himself, Atlas, and the world they live on. He doesn’t so much protect the Earth so that the people on it can live, but only so that they can live on it in peace and stay safe from people that would do them harm.

    Appearance: Hyperion is a white male that stands at about 6 foot two inches and is slim, but muscular. He has a scar on his left cheek and has long light brown hair. He wears a dark gray t-shirt, dark gray pants, a yellow belt with a red buckle, and yellow boots. (Bodysuit #5 dyed gray, with future pants and future boots.)

    Discord: AlexKJ101#0126

    • This reply was modified 2 months ago by  AlexKJ.
    • #34596

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Please post your discord IDs so we can add you

    • #34597

      AlexKJ
      Participant

      AlexKJ101#0126

  • #34584

    Inoka
    Participant

    Good news both of you, your applications really turned heads!
    I can safely say you’re both accepted!

  • #34601

    SonGino
    Participant

    Name apprance etc v2
    Name:ShadowWind
    Age:16
    Race:Arcosian
    Gender:Male
    Live:On Frieza Ship
    Evil
    Personality:He like Killing Namekian and saiyan when he see one Because they Killed his brother and soldiers He like videos games,Soda,He want to get the dragon ball to revive his brother and getting immortale
    Apparence:Grey and White,Black Horns,Grey tail,Blue Battle Armor,Purple Scouter,Red Weight for training
    BackStory V2:When I was Kid I lived on frieza Ship with my brother Someone trained us But someday A namekian and Saiyan attacked the Ship without regret They killed so many people without regret Brother and me Dident Hear the attack cause we played video games A namekian comes in our room we tryed to kill him but he was too stronge he killed my brother I started to run and I started to hide they could’ent find me they started to leave the Ship Then I start to train for 5 year Meelee concentration Spirit I got my first transformation the 2nd form I crafted a blue battle armor I started to recruit Soldier and kill namekian Then I learn about dragon balls I started to Find them but that was too hard But someday someone comes in my Ship with a black hoodie Horns,Purple Tail that was..? he remove his hood that was Freeza he wanted to team with me to kill saiyan then He started to train me to become Stronger My bp was 30.000 Now I can go in 3nd form But someday we attacked the earth we started to kill humans the first one was yamcha he tell us about Where is Goku san and Bejita san Then the humans Tien,Krillin,Vegeta,Piccolo,Goku (Kid gohan) Started to attack us They was too strong then I go Final Form Freeza was Impressed(Done,Im french sorry for my bad english If I need Improv or Denied tell me why ^^) DiscordUsername:KawaiiPandiix #6161

    • This reply was modified 2 months ago by  SonGino.
  • #34679

    Cyan_Barbarian
    Participant

    Cyan Barbarians character
    Name: Cyan Barbarian
    Gender: Male
    Race: Half Saiyan
    Age: 25
    Personality: Cyan is a cool headed sarcastic battle loving man who prefers to go straight into fight instead of making strategies. He prefers to work alone but if he has to he will work well with others. He is able to adapt to almost any situation and not one to start an argument but he will finish one.
    Looks: Wears a black, cyan, white and grey GI has cyan hair and a cyan tail.

    Backstory: When Cyan was 5 years old his Father a Saiyan by the name of Delgo started training him in the art of battle 6 hours every day. Cyan always improving with great determination to serapes surpass his father. At the age of 10 his power level reached 9,000 and mastered his father’s fighting stile but his father was still far stronger than him but Cyan was still determined to serapes surpass his father so he can protect his family. Cyan Trained day and night with and without his father’s help he learned his clan’s signature move’s the Cyan Cannon and the Barbaric Buster. He mastered by the age of 13 and improved them as he went his father was stunned by how powerful his son has become in a mere 8 years, it had taken him 10 years of training to perfect his fighting stiyle
    . When Cyan had reached the age of 20he had finally achieved his goal to become stronger than his father. It was then his family was attacked while he was out training in his favourite place, A cave vary far away from his house which he reached by flying.
    The family home was attached By an Arcosian named Glasher he had been hunting down Cyan’s family for over 30 long years and had found them, he was finally going to destroy them.
    Cyan’s Father Delgo defeated Glasher men with relative ease even though they had overwhelming numbers.
    Delgo soon defeated all of Glasher’s underlings and only his right hand man Eragon a namekian that has gained the super namekian form. Delgo Defeated Eragon in his base form but then Eragon transformed on to a super namekian and started beating down Delgo and then Delgo used his signature transformation. The Barbaric transformation which increases the user’s power by 50% and took down Eragon with one Cyan Cannon at 60% power. Then Glasher powered all the whey to his 5th form. Delgo has defeated and killed right there on the spot when Cyan returned from training he was greeted with the rubble of his child hood home and the corpse of his father and mother Cyan was Devastated and blamed himself for what happened that day. Cyan swore on his parents grave to avenge his fallen parents and kill the man who did this. He searched all over his planet finding the strongest fighters on his planet but he soon realised that no one on that planet is strong enough to kill his father and mother. So he had to go off world to find the killer he searched fare and wide to find the killer with no leads at all. He went to planet to planet galaxy to galaxy but he could not find his parents killer. He started to lose hope that he would find his parents killer but then he over hard to people talking about an Arcosian named Glasher going around killing all the remaining Saiyan and their family’s he asked the men where they got this information that said they saw it first hand and that he was heading back to Cyan’s home planet to kill him. Cyan rushed to his ship and raced towards his home at top speed it took Cyan 3 weeks to reach his home but as he made his way home he went throw the most pain full training of his life he installed a gravity chamber to help him train. He started off at 30x earth’s gravity sins his planet was 15x that of earth as he flew to his home planet he built his way up to 100x earth’s natural gravity and became much stronger even tho he was still 1 week away from his destination he continued training but even more painful. By the time he arrived he had reached 200x earth’s natural gravity and had become powerful enough to defeat Glasher and avenge his parents. Cyan hunted down Glasher and his ship and when he found it he started picking of his men one by one so they couldn’t help Glasher fight him 2 months passed and Cyan had killed all of Glasher’s men and started to get ready to tack down Glasher but Glasher is ready for Cyan’s arrival he noticed that his men were being kill one by one and set up a trap for him with his new right hand man named Captain Rim he is fare stronger than Eragon.
    Cyan got everything he needs to kill Glasher Captain Rim which included a sword he obtained from an Ancient temple he found on his travels to find Glasher and His father’s amulet that he gave to him when he was a boy. Cyan then flew towards Glasher’s ship at top speed.
    When Cyan reached Glashers ship Captain Rim flew out and challenged him to a fight. Cyan accepted and then they began to brawl. Cyan throw punches and kicks at 50% of his power at Rim who was blocking and dogging most of the hits. Then Rim gave Cyan one powerful punch to the stomach and he fell to the floor Rim came down with a powerful elbow but Cyan dogged just in time and kicked Rim right in the gut. Rim went flying and landed on the ground with a thud then Cyan started charging a Barbaric Buster. He got it to 60% and fired it right at Rim. Cyan got a direct hit on Rim and Rim was down for the count Cyan Flew back to Glashers ship looking for him along the way. When Cyan Reached the ship Glasher Flew out at his 4th form ready to fight him. But Cyan drew his sword and charged right at him at 65% of his power.

    Cyan slashed punched and kicked Glasher landing almost every hit Glasher realising that he underestimated Cyan went to 100% on his 4th form Cyan noticed the power difference and powered up to 70% to match Glashers power. Glasher swang his tail at Cyan but he cut it off with one fell swoop of his sword. Glasher was furious that Cyan was so powerful for a pathetic monkey so he powered up to his 5th form at 50%. Cyan was shocked that he could transform but he quickly began fighting him again but he was getting beet down because the power difference was too grate so he went to 100% power but Glasher was still much more powerful than him and started to lose his cool and started to get angry and started to unleash his Barbaric transformation
    When he transformed in to his barbaric transformation he became just as strong as Glasher if not stronger. Then Glasher went 75% to overpower Cyan but he did not need to alter his power for his new form was all he needed as Glasher fought Cyan he relied that this was not a fight he could win so he hit Cyan and ran away to regroup

    Cyan flew of after him and coat up to him fairly quickly and started to beat down on him again but then Glasher grew to 100% power and started to win but then Cyan went to 100% as well and started to play with Glasher punching and kicking him all around the place then when Cyan had his fun he sledgehammered him to the ground and was about to decapitate him when Rim tackled him to the ground.

    Cyan quickly took care of Captain Rim and went back to finish off Glasher. He tried to escape Cyan but he had broken most of the bones in his body then when Cyan came back he finished off Glasher and then he clean his sword of Glashers Blood and powered down from his Barbaric form. Then he when to his parents graves to tell them that they have been avenged and he has killed Glasher.

  • #34680

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Change the part where you go super saiyan. That has to happen In character on the server

  • #34681

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Add more info aswell

  • #34682

    Cyan_Barbarian
    Participant

    he didn’t go super saiyan that is just a transformation that i made up

  • #34683

    Cyan_Barbarian
    Participant

    Cyan Barbarians character
    Name: Cyan Barbarian
    Gender: Male
    Race: Half Saiyan
    Age: 25
    Personality: Cyan is a cool headed sarcastic battle loving man who prefers to go straight into fight instead of making strategies. He prefers to work alone but if he has to he will work well with others. He is able to adapt to almost any situation and not one to start an argument but he will finish one.
    Looks: Wears a black, cyan, white and grey GI has cyan hair and a cyan tail.

    Backstory: When Cyan was 5 years old his Father a Saiyan by the name of Delgo started training him in the art of battle 6 hours every day. Cyan always improving with great determination to serapes surpass his father. At the age of 10 his power level reached 9,000 and mastered his father’s fighting stile but his father was still far stronger than him but Cyan was still determined to serapes surpass his father so he can protect his family. Cyan Trained day and night with and without his father’s help he learned his clan’s signature move’s the Cyan Cannon and the Barbaric Buster. He mastered by the age of 13 and improved them as he went his father was stunned by how powerful his son has become in a mere 8 years, it had taken him 10 years of training to perfect his fighting stiyle
    . When Cyan had reached the age of 20he had finally achieved his goal to become stronger than his father. It was then his family was attacked while he was out training in his favourite place, A cave vary far away from his house which he reached by flying.
    The family home was attached By an Arcosian named Glasher he had been hunting down Cyan’s family for over 30 long years and had found them, he was finally going to destroy them.
    Cyan’s Father Delgo defeated Glasher men with relative ease even though they had overwhelming numbers.
    Delgo soon defeated all of Glasher’s underlings and only his right hand man Eragon a namekian that has gained the super namekian form. Delgo Defeated Eragon in his base form but then Eragon transformed on to a super namekian and started beating down Delgo and then Delgo used his signature transformation. The Barbaric transformation which increases the user’s power by 50% and took down Eragon with one Cyan Cannon at 60% power. Then Glasher powered all the whey to his 5th form. Delgo has defeated and killed right there on the spot when Cyan returned from training he was greeted with the rubble of his child hood home and the corpse of his father and mother Cyan was Devastated and blamed himself for what happened that day. Cyan swore on his parents grave to avenge his fallen parents and kill the man who did this. He searched all over his planet finding the strongest fighters on his planet but he soon realised that no one on that planet is strong enough to kill his father and mother. So he had to go off world to find the killer he searched fare and wide to find the killer with no leads at all. He went to planet to planet galaxy to galaxy but he could not find his parents killer. He started to lose hope that he would find his parents killer but then he over hard to people talking about an Arcosian named Glasher going around killing all the remaining Saiyan and their family’s he asked the men where they got this information that said they saw it first hand and that he was heading back to Cyan’s home planet to kill him. Cyan rushed to his ship and raced towards his home at top speed it took Cyan 3 weeks to reach his home but as he made his way home he went throw the most pain full training of his life he installed a gravity chamber to help him train. He started off at 30x earth’s gravity sins his planet was 15x that of earth as he flew to his home planet he built his way up to 100x earth’s natural gravity and became much stronger even tho he was still 1 week away from his destination he continued training but even more painful. By the time he arrived he had reached 200x earth’s natural gravity and had become powerful enough to defeat Glasher and avenge his parents. Cyan hunted down Glasher and his ship and when he found it he started picking of his men one by one so they couldn’t help Glasher fight him 2 months passed and Cyan had killed all of Glasher’s men and started to get ready to tack down Glasher but Glasher is ready for Cyan’s arrival he noticed that his men were being kill one by one and set up a trap for him with his new right hand man named Captain Rim he is fare stronger than Eragon.
    Cyan got everything he needs to kill Glasher Captain Rim which included a sword he obtained from an Ancient temple he found on his travels to find Glasher and His father’s amulet that he gave to him when he was a boy. Cyan then flew towards Glasher’s ship at top speed.
    When Cyan reached Glashers ship Captain Rim flew out and challenged him to a fight. Cyan accepted and then they began to brawl. Cyan throw punches and kicks at 50% of his power at Rim who was blocking and dogging most of the hits. Then Rim gave Cyan one powerful punch to the stomach and he fell to the floor Rim came down with a powerful elbow but Cyan dogged just in time and kicked Rim right in the gut. Rim went flying and landed on the ground with a thud then Cyan started charging a Barbaric Buster. He got it to 60% and fired it right at Rim. Cyan got a direct hit on Rim and Rim was down for the count Cyan Flew back to Glashers ship looking for him along the way. When Cyan Reached the ship Glasher Flew out at his 4th form ready to fight him. But Cyan drew his sword and charged right at him at 65% of his power.

    Cyan slashed punched and kicked Glasher landing almost every hit Glasher realising that he underestimated Cyan went to 100% on his 4th form Cyan noticed the power difference and powered up to 70% to match Glashers power. Glasher swang his tail at Cyan but he cut it off with one fell swoop of his sword. Glasher was furious that Cyan was so powerful for a pathetic monkey so he powered up to his 5th form at 50%. Cyan was shocked that he could transform but he quickly began fighting him again but he was getting beet down because the power difference was too grate so he went to 100% power but Glasher was still much more powerful than him when this happened the amulet his father gave him started to glow giving him a massive power boost.
    When the amulet began to glow he became just as strong as Glasher if not stronger. Then Glasher went 75% to overpower Cyan but he did not need to alter his power for his new form was all he needed as Glasher fought Cyan he relied that this was not a fight he could win so he hit Cyan and ran away to regroup

    Cyan flew of after him and coat up to him fairly quickly and started to beat down on him again but then Glasher grew to 100% power and started to win but then Cyan went to 100% as well and started to play with Glasher punching and kicking him all around the place then when Cyan had his fun he sledgehammered him to the ground and was about to decapitate him when Rim tackled him to the ground.

    Cyan quickly took care of Captain Rim and went back to finish off Glasher. He tried to escape Cyan but he had broken most of the bones in his body then when Cyan came back he finished off Glasher and then he clean his sword of Glashers Blood and the amulet stoped glowing. Then he when to his parents graves to tell them that they have been avenged and he has killed Glasher.

  • #34684

    Cyan_Barbarian
    Participant

    Cyan Barbarians character
    Name: Cyan Barbarian
    Gender: Male
    Race: Half Saiyan
    Age: 25
    Personality: Cyan is a cool headed sarcastic battle loving man who prefers to go straight into fight instead of making strategies. He prefers to work alone but if he has to he will work well with others. He is able to adapt to almost any situation and not one to start an argument but he will finish one.
    Looks: Wears a black, cyan, white and grey GI has cyan hair and a cyan tail and a red amulet.

    Backstory: When Cyan was 5 years old his Father a Saiyan by the name of Delgo started training him in the art of battle 6 hours every day. Cyan always improving with great determination to serapes surpass his father. At the age of 10 his power level reached 9,000 and mastered his father’s fighting stile but his father was still far stronger than him but Cyan was still determined to serapes surpass his father so he can protect his family. Cyan Trained day and night with and without his father’s help he learned his clan’s signature move’s the Cyan Cannon and the Barbaric Buster. He mastered by the age of 13 and improved them as he went his father was stunned by how powerful his son has become in a mere 8 years, it had taken him 10 years of training to perfect his fighting stiyle
    . When Cyan had reached the age of 20he had finally achieved his goal to become stronger than his father. It was then his family was attacked while he was out training in his favourite place, A cave vary far away from his house which he reached by flying.
    The family home was attached By an Arcosian named Glasher he had been hunting down Cyan’s family for over 30 long years and had found them, he was finally going to destroy them.
    Cyan’s Father Delgo defeated Glasher men with relative ease even though they had overwhelming numbers.
    Delgo soon defeated all of Glasher’s underlings and only his right hand man Eragon a namekian that has gained the super namekian form. Delgo Defeated Eragon in his base form but then Eragon transformed on to a super namekian and started beating down Delgo and then Delgo used his signature transformation. The Barbaric transformation which increases the user’s power by 50% and took down Eragon with one Cyan Cannon at 60% power. Then Glasher powered all the whey to his 5th form. Delgo has defeated and killed right there on the spot when Cyan returned from training he was greeted with the rubble of his child hood home and the corpse of his father and mother Cyan was Devastated and blamed himself for what happened that day. Cyan swore on his parents grave to avenge his fallen parents and kill the man who did this. He searched all over his planet finding the strongest fighters on his planet but he soon realised that no one on that planet is strong enough to kill his father and mother. So he had to go off world to find the killer he searched fare and wide to find the killer with no leads at all. He went to planet to planet galaxy to galaxy but he could not find his parents killer. He started to lose hope that he would find his parents killer but then he over hard to people talking about an Arcosian named Glasher going around killing all the remaining Saiyan and their family’s he asked the men where they got this information that said they saw it first hand and that he was heading back to Cyan’s home planet to kill him. Cyan rushed to his ship and raced towards his home at top speed it took Cyan 3 weeks to reach his home but as he made his way home he went throw the most pain full training of his life he installed a gravity chamber to help him train. He started off at 30x earth’s gravity sins his planet was 15x that of earth as he flew to his home planet he built his way up to 100x earth’s natural gravity and became much stronger even tho he was still 1 week away from his destination he continued training but even more painful. By the time he arrived he had reached 200x earth’s natural gravity and had become powerful enough to defeat Glasher and avenge his parents. Cyan hunted down Glasher and his ship and when he found it he started picking of his men one by one so they couldn’t help Glasher fight him 2 months passed and Cyan had killed all of Glasher’s men and started to get ready to tack down Glasher but Glasher is ready for Cyan’s arrival he noticed that his men were being kill one by one and set up a trap for him with his new right hand man named Captain Rim he is fare stronger than Eragon.
    Cyan got everything he needs to kill Glasher Captain Rim which included a sword he obtained from an Ancient temple he found on his travels to find Glasher and His father’s amulet that he gave to him when he was a boy. Cyan then flew towards Glasher’s ship at top speed.
    When Cyan reached Glashers ship Captain Rim flew out and challenged him to a fight. Cyan accepted and then they began to brawl. Cyan throw punches and kicks at 50% of his power at Rim who was blocking and dogging most of the hits. Then Rim gave Cyan one powerful punch to the stomach and he fell to the floor Rim came down with a powerful elbow but Cyan dogged just in time and kicked Rim right in the gut. Rim went flying and landed on the ground with a thud then Cyan started charging a Barbaric Buster. He got it to 60% and fired it right at Rim. Cyan got a direct hit on Rim and Rim was down for the count Cyan Flew back to Glashers ship looking for him along the way. When Cyan Reached the ship Glasher Flew out at his 4th form ready to fight him. But Cyan drew his sword and charged right at him at 65% of his power.

    Cyan slashed punched and kicked Glasher landing almost every hit Glasher realising that he underestimated Cyan went to 100% on his 4th form Cyan noticed the power difference and powered up to 70% to match Glashers power. Glasher swang his tail at Cyan but he cut it off with one fell swoop of his sword. Glasher was furious that Cyan was so powerful for a pathetic monkey so he powered up to his 5th form at 50%. Cyan was shocked that he could transform but he quickly began fighting him again but he was getting beet down because the power difference was too grate so he went to 100% power but Glasher was still much more powerful than him when this happened the amulet his father gave him started to glow giving him a massive power boost.
    When the amulet began to glow he became just as strong as Glasher if not stronger. Then Glasher went 75% to overpower Cyan but he did not need to alter his power for his new form was all he needed as Glasher fought Cyan he relied that this was not a fight he could win so he hit Cyan and ran away to regroup

    Cyan flew of after him and coat up to him fairly quickly and started to beat down on him again but then Glasher grew to 100% power and started to win but then Cyan went to 100% as well and started to play with Glasher punching and kicking him all around the place then when Cyan had his fun he sledgehammered him to the ground and was about to decapitate him when Rim tackled him to the ground.

    Cyan quickly took care of Captain Rim and went back to finish off Glasher. He tried to escape Cyan but he had broken most of the bones in his body then when Cyan came back he finished off Glasher and then he clean his sword of Glashers Blood and the amulet stoped glowing. Then he when to his parents graves to tell them that they have been avenged and he has killed Glasher.

    As Cyan left on his journey he found an ancient temple an discovered more about the amulet that his father gave him. The amulet is called the amulet of the gods it can boost the users power 10 fooled when he or she needs it but only for 2 hours and after that the amulet must rest before u can use it again roughly 1 hour.

    Fighting style: Cyan fights much like a Barbarian and is very good with a sword
    Alignment: Good

  • #34685

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    The amount the amulet is a bit over powered. I would change the effect to adding 300 to all stats instead.

  • #34688

    Luki
    Participant

    Hi! Thanks for giving the oportunity to do this! (My grammar may not be the best and for that i apologize . Tell me if i should correct something!)

    Name: The character doesnt have real name . It has to go with her origins , but for RP purpouses someone named her Pinky (i know , is a dumb name , but is easy and hard to forget … also it sounds nice!)

    Race: Majin

    Age: Unkown but looks like a 16 years old

    Back-story: Appealing to the DBZ cannon we dont have much information about majins origin but im going to improvise a little . There once was a majin race , but thanks to their great power and destructive nature they destroyed the planet and most of the people .Many of them were sent off to space , making them on a “hibernation state”. After a lot of years this majin crashed in the earth (i hope it’s where the RP takes place) , they were covered in thick ice when they arrived (someone should unfreeze them ). She doesnt know english , so she uses her mimetize skill to learn (she speaks a few words , but later on she learns how to speak properly , she isnt one of the stupid majins , she is like an average human in terms of intelligence ) And then RP is up to you…

    How she acts: As a majin she acts childish , eats tons of candy , considers fighting as playing

    Fighting style: She has more power that she can control , she mostly fights as a kid would . Pretty destructive when it comes to ki attacks

    Alignment: Neutral-good

    What they wear: They wear majin clothes? I think? I mean … i have some pics of her in xenoverse 2 but those clothes arent in the mod… so i guess the default majin clothes should do it

    Thanks for reading! i hope i make it in! tell me if there is something i should correct . My Discord id is LukiRol#4035

  • #34694

    Stallord_
    Participant

    My grammar may not be the best and for that i apologize.
    Name: Stallord
    Race: Hybrid between saiyajin, human and demon. (Semi-saiyajin)
    Age: 16 years old
    Back-story: Stallord is the son of Garetto and Nusa. Garetto was a saiyajin whose story will later be told and Nusa was a human.
    Stallord lived happily with his parents, received training from his father every day to achieve the maximum potential of his saiyajin race.
    Then about 14 years old her parents left, they said they had to attend to an important issue, Nusa returned 3 days later, but Garetto did not return.
    Nusa told Stallord that her father had died in a fight, after which Stallord became quite depressed.
    About a month later, Stallord regained his composure and continued his training.
    In his spare time he studied physics, chemistry, biology and mathematics. In addition, his mother Nusa told him about the fantastic adventures he had with Garetto before he died.
    Two years later Nusa passed away, his heart stopped, after that Stallord left his house and left to other places in looking for luck.
    Four months later Stallord came to a town where there were many problems, such as robberies, murders and so on; Stallord did not hesitate for a second and used his training to help stop these people.
    With the passage of time the people of the town began to accept as one of them and also came more strong individuals, who wanted to stop the evil.
    Stallord formed the order of The Seven Deadly Sins, where his closest friends were both strong and strong.
    The order was formed by Stallord the dragon of wrath, Narlecks the fox of greed, Yein the bear of sloth, Gorgorita the serpent of envy, Tiago the boar of gluttony, Lushaku the goat of lust and rodrixx the lion Of pride.
    Every day, in the first hour, they worked hard to become stronger and to protect the innocent from the wicked.
    Three months later, it was a quiet town, without problems, therefore The Sins took different paths.
    Stallord returned to his old house and found in a basement some parchments with strange symbols, then he remembered that one of these symbols came out in the forehead to his father Garetto; Along with these scrolls there were also some notes, by the words of them deduced that they were his mother.
    Stallord spent some time studying these scrolls and notes and saw that it was a kind of seal that his mother was studying; The great doubt that this gave Stallord made him undertake a journey in search of the four pieces of that seal, and he would seek the help of his old friends and companions.
    And here begins the journey (role) of Stallord …
    How does Stallord have such a bizarre race?
    That goes back to the orgies of his father Garetto.
    Garetto was a sub-branch or sub-division of the saiyajin located in universe 10, on planet KOI 0204B, in the Trappist-1 system located in galaxy NGC 6822.
    This sub-division of Saiyans was stronger than normal, they lived even longer than the main branch of their race and developed unique skills, despite losing their tails.
    To acquire control of these super abilities was necessary a strong training of 14 years, at the end of such training the color of the eyes changed to gray, since one of the skills was a highly developed vision, where you could detect the most sensitive points To the pain of any individual.
    The second ability was a blow capable of killing any individual, seeing the point of pain was focused all the ki in the fist and the blow was launched in a peculiar way, By striking that blow with such force on a point so sensitive to pain, produced death for the individual, stopped his heart from being unable to bear the pain.
    That 14-year training was carried out by Garetto and later taught to Stallord.
    When Garetto was four years old, an unknown being named Yadorok destroyed his Trappist-1 system, the explosion of all the planets next to the supernova caused by the star of that system formed a wormhole; The parents of Garetto, Gael and Arichy, sent Garetto to planet Kepler 148-B, but the wormhole swallowed Garetto.
    The wormhole sent it to planet Earth, in the Solar system located in the galaxy Milky Way, in universe 7.
    Garetto appeared in a village where the village leader raised him as if he were his son.
    After the death of his “tutor”, Garetto took over the village.
    Some time later, some bandits came to steal, Garetto as leader of the village decided to kill them with their strength.
    The people of the village began to go elsewhere after that, they were afraid that Garetto will kill them as he did with the bad guys.
    Garetto being completely alone, surviving only with the crops that the villagers did, he thought that if he converted that small village into a super-developed city, people would return.
    Garetto at age 17 began studying architecture, mechanics, medicine, biology, astronomy, advanced physics, chemistry, math and mechatronics to develop his super society.
    One day a strange fellow, named Jeyked fell from the sky, Garetto rescued him and then asked who he was.
    Jeyked claimed to be a kaioshin, but that his body was stolen and his superiors seeing him so different from his original form thought he was an intruder and expelled him from the sacred planet.
    Jeyked came from a fight with Narlecks (another surviving Saiyajin from universe 10) and for that reason fell from the sky so hurt.
    Jeyked to recover he taught Garetto to use the Ki, Garetto being blood saiyajin quickly learned to use it.
    Then they went to see Narlecks, and he told them that the strongest person he knew was a human hermit who lived in the southern mountains.
    The three of them went there to see her, on arrival she greeted them very kindly and introduced herself, said her name was Nusa.
    Over time the four became very close friends, decided to live in the small village of Garetto.
    Garetto still remembered the wormhole, and with his knowledge of the theory of relativity managed to apply it by opening a portal, he thought he would return home and retaliate for Yadorok, but the portal was to purgatory.
    Garetto entered the purgatory and saw many hostile individuals, red and gray demons, were stronger than expected and managed to escape from there, returned to the normal world and closed the portal.
    One night a red demon escaped from purgatory and began to devastate everything, Garetto was and as it was only one managed to kill him; Later hid the corpse.
    Garetto secretly studied the corpse, observed that it had a great regenerative ability and wanted to make it his own, continued to try a few more techniques of study and concluded that the demonic blood and his were compatible, extracted some red demon blood and Injected it.
    Garetto’s eyes turned a very dark wine color and a brand appeared on his forehead, Garetto felt even stronger and faster than before, then he calmed down and the brand disappeared along with the attributes it offered.
    Every time Garetto felt really angry the brand appeared, along with super strength and super speed.
    Some time later, an individual named Krein arrived, teased Garetto about his race, and seemed suspicious of being involved in the extinction of the Saiyachin of the universe. This caused him so much anger to Garetto that he lost his reason and was consumed by the demonic power, there was a strong and intense fight between Jeyked, Nusa, Krein and Narlecks against Garetto.
    At the end Garetto managed to regain his composure but it was too late, he had killed Nusa, who had had feelings for Garetto.
    Garetto felt very sorry and did not know what to do to correct his mistake.
    Jeyked told Garetto about dragon spheres, on a distant planet called Kepler22-B.
    Garetto, on hearing this, started to build a spacecraft, with his knowledge he managed to manufacture the most powerful ship in history in just 22 days.
    After 22 days, Krein returned to his space station and Garetto, Jeyked and Narlecks went to Kelper22-B.
    In Kepler 22-B they found a great mechanical mass on the planet, and attacked them a great wave of robots; They destroyed the robots and followed the nearest ki they captured.
    When they arrived they found a lot of natives of that planet in a house, Garetto and the demons appeared and they told the natives that they can help them, but in return they had to give the spheres to him of the dragon.
    The natives, seeing that Garetto and the others had no bad intentions, decided to accept.
    They did a long search around the planet, and found all the spheres while destroying the robots.
    Upon reaching the seven spheres of the dragon, they asked for their first wish, to resuscitate Nusa, then the second wish, to provide them with a new ship, and their third wish was to eliminate the mechanical mass on the planet, but it was useless, by not being able to do this They told the dragon to leave.
    While Garetto and the others asked for the wishes, Gorgorita, the leader of the robots, was an arcosian, saw the dragon and headed towards him.
    Gorgorita arrived late and seeing the dream of his eternal empire shattered, he brutally attacked them all.
    After a long fight he caused very serious damage to Nusa, Garetto to think that she died, became very angry, reached a force different from the demonic, reached the super saiyajin.
    Regretfully still being a super saiyajin, Garetto lost against Gorgorita, Gorgorita used his strongest transformation and left Garetto in an equally serious condition than Nusa.
    Narlecks being so useless for not being able to help, woke up the super saiyajin that was in him, went to Garetto and gave him a special medicine, which gave him more energy to continue fighting.
    Being the two super saiyajines of the universe 10, embistierion to Gorgorita and used their secret techniques managing to destroy the body of Gorgorita of a blow.
    By defeating Gorgorita, they cured Nusa with special medicine and went to the natives to warn them about their victory.
    When they arrived, Krein was evacuating the natives, Krein informed Garetto about the mechanical mass, his name is Big Gete, and he was eating at full speed, they had 15 minutes to escape, so Garetto and the others went with Krein. Unfortunately … Gorgorita did not die …
    Upon reaching Earth, Garetto thanked Krein and returned to their homes.
    With the passage of time Garetto and Nusa fell in love and married.
    Three years later, Jeyked began to devastate the city, Garetto and Narlecks went to fight against Jeyked, and discovered that it was not Jeyked, it was the guy who had stolen the body, the thief of Jeyked’s body returned to its original body.
    The unknown thief was a saiyajin, and with the knowledge of kaioshin he gave a hard battle to Garetto and Narlecks.
    Finally after the battle between the Saiyajin brothers of the universe 10 managed to defeat the unknown thief.
    Seven months after that fight Stallord was born.
    Four years later, Jeyked having finished his kaioshin training, he began to doubt Garetto about his demonic power, saw that it was a threat and went to Earth to kill him.
    Nusa, Garetto and Narlecks went to fight, leaving Stallord alone at home.
    Nusa could not do anything in the fight more than to observe, Jeyked now was much stronger than before and gave a great problem to Garetto and to Narlecks.
    After surpassing the limits of the super saiyajin, they continued losing the battle, they decided to make the fusion, a technique that Nusa learned in the other world and that it taught to Garetto to him.
    Garetto merging with Narlecks formed a supreme being, a perfect fusion between good and evil, an individual with powers of deities … was called Garlecks, with an aura of blue fire surrounded by a dark nebula, his body emitted glitters Golden and his eyes a silver flash.
    Garlecks fought Jeyked to exhaustion, but failed to defeat him completely, the melting was over and the three warriors were exhausted by the fight.
    Jeyked barely and could move, Narlecks was unconscious and Garetto was still.
    Jeyked did not have enough power to annihilate Garetto, so he decided to seal it in purgatory, where that demon belonged, and scattered the four fragments of the seal all over Earth.
    And that’s the story of how Stallord got that bizarre race and what happened with his father Garetto.
    How Stallord acts: Stallord is very joking, it is difficult to take things seriously, and when he takes them seriously he becomes very cold.
    Fighting style: he uses muay thai techniques, he prefers melee combat, he can use his secret techniques learned in his training, although he is balanced, he developed techniques like the Dark-Rose Final Kamehameha, And the evil flow (like Black Kamehameha).
    Alignment: Good
    What Stallord wears: Gi of gray training, black clothing of long sleeve under this one, gray training pants, white boots.
    My discord is Stallord_#5734

    • #34703

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Your character seems rather over powered. I would say to change the part where he can kill anyone. and change it to he can kill anyone he is more then 4x stronger then in 1 shot. The next issue is he sounds a lot like goku black which isn’t a bad thing, but he gives off the feeling that he is over powered. BUT we can tell from your writing style that you would be something new for the RP, since you are creative in your ideas and have a unique view on a story of a saiyan/half saiyan that is not someone attacked then and they fight for that reason like 90% of the other saiyans. We will help you make any other small changes to you character through DM. ACCEPTED

  • #34696

    AW214
    Participant

    Name-Iced
    Name-Iced

    Race-Arcosian

    age-14

    Backstory- When Iced was born into a family of assasins he had to do evil things as a child. His father Tundra was an abusive father who beat Iced and his mother daily,but did it out of training.One day Iced’s father went too far and killed Iceds mother.Iced then went into a rage and said “You….YOU! KILLED MY MOTHER!.His father then shot a blast at Iced and nearly killed him. Iced ran to the nearest spacepod and pushed random coordinates. For a month he was in a spcaepod unsure of where he would end up.
    When he arrived at his destination he had a vision of his past. There was a namekian boy who he once nearly killed who he had to visit to finish the job considering he was still an assasin. He saw many earth villages that this namekian could live in. When he searched for him and he wasnt there he blew up a village and moved to the next.The cycle continued until he found the namekian. He aproached the namekian with evil intentions.The namekian wasnt frightened at all and also aproached Iced. They both attacked at the same time with the same might.Now that Iced was free from the leash of his father he could do what he wanted. So the battle between iced and the unnamed namekian got fiercer until the namekian slipped and fell and iced shot him in the head with a laser. after the battle with the namekian, Iced went to get his bounty. When he arrived his father was waiting there with a sinister look on his face. Iced aproaced his father slowly and went in for a handshake for his kill.
    Then suddenly iced said, “Bye father,” and shot him with the same laser he killed the namekian with. His father fell to the ground with blood everywhere. Now Iced got his vengence on his father and had the money to rule the galaxy.

    Race-Arcosian

    age-14

    Backstory- When Iced was born into a family of assasins he had to do evil things as a child. His father Tundra was an abusive father who beat Iced and his mother daily,but did it out of training.One day Iced’s father went too far and killed Iceds mother.Iced then went into a rage and said “You….YOU! KILLED MY MOTHER!.His father then shot a blast at Iced and nearly killed him. Iced ran to the nearest spacepod and pushed random coordinates. For a month he was in a spcaepod unsure of where he would end up.
    When he arrived at his destination he had a vision of his past. There was a namekian boy who he once nearly killed who he had to visit to finish the job considering he was still an assasin. He saw many earth villages that this namekian could live in. When he searched for him and he wasnt there he blew up a village and moved to the next.The cycle continued until he found the namekian. He aproached the namekian with evil intentions.The namekian wasnt frightened at all and also aproached Iced. They both attacked at the same time with the same might.Now that Iced was free from the leash of his father he could do what he wanted. So the battle between iced and the unnamed namekian got fiercer until the namekian slipped and fell and iced shot him in the head with a laser. after the battle with the namekian, Iced went to get his bounty. When he arrived his father was waiting there with a sinister look on his face. Iced aproaced his father slowly and went in for a handshake for his kill.
    Then suddenly iced said, “Bye father,” and shot him with the same laser he killed the namekian with. His father fell to the ground with blood everywhere. Now Iced got his vengence on his father and had the money to rule the galaxy.

    Personality:Very nice as long as he’s not angered or if you dont have a bounty

    Fighting style:martial artist

    Alignment:neutral

    What they wear:Blue Battle armor

    AW214#5817

    • #34704

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Your character seems like he has no real room to grow.

  • #34697

    AW214
    Participant

    sry it pasted twice

  • #34699

    Fuar
    Participant

    Alright, so I’ve been workin’ on this shit for like
    an hour
    it’s 2:57 am here, let’s do this.

    Name: Fuar

    Race: Arcosian

    Age: 28

    Back-story: Fuar was born on a nigh-desolate planet in a forgotten part of the galaxy into a small and also forgotten clan of his race; he speaks little of his parents or his time on that planet, only saying as much as to indicate how cruel they could be. Little after his coming of age(16, for this culture), he left behind the life he had been raised into for far greener pastures. After leaving his home planet, Fuar scoured the universe looking for anything that might happen to cross his path. In his journey he spent som time on Namek, Earth, and even Yardrat, picking up a few skills during his time on each. After his time of meaningless travelling, Fuar became a mercenary, having an already incredibly powerful (in relative terms, as the universe is a generally weak place, mind you)Battle Power in even his lowest form. After spending about half of a decade doing mercenary work and odd jobs for anyone willing to buy his services, he went back to his universal trek, hoping to find something more than he had previously been offered by life. Having searched for another three years, he found himself back on Earth, where he decided to make a permanent home for himself away from human civilization. Two years have since passed, and Fuar has become acquainted with the planet’s current protectors and now lies in wait for the next enemy that comes to threaten his new home.

    How he acts: Fuar is a reclusive person, only really talking to those he’s comfortable with, and even then he never goes into anything serious. Fuar tries to keep up a tired-but-funny facade, seeing as that’s the only way he’s decided to talk to most people. He is by no means kind, with him only doing something considered as nice for certain people, and only for certain reasons; This is most-likely because of the way he was treated during his time growing up, having suffered heavy physical and mental abuse from the harsher clan-members of his home planet, including his parents.

    Fighting style: Ki blasts, his fists, anything that can hit. Tends to try to hit then immediately block any incoming blows before trying to attack again. If he’s on par with an opponent, he’ll move very fast, but if he dominates the battle he moves very sluggish so as to instill terror into his victim.

    Alignment: Neutral-Good, previously true-neutral, doing anything he wanted without a moral compass. Settling down and growing wise with age created this change.

    What they wear: Nothing, for arcosians have their own body armour. Screw clothing.

    Discord: TheXenomorph1#6950

    I hope this was a sufficient application, took me a good minute or two to cook up.

    • #34700

      Fuar
      Participant

      that incredibly embarrassing moment when you misspell “some” and there’s no possible way to fix it so you just have to hope everything works out fine.

    • #34702

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Being reviewed now.

    • #34716

      Fuar
      Participant

      n i c e

  • #34701

    Fuar
    Participant

    Also forgot to describe appearance, I’m such a fool. Fuar, using DBC skins, has the mix between Cooler and Frieza. His shiny parts are a light, baby-ish blue, while his skin is a darker almost teal-tint. His cheeks are a dark-gray in colour, and his “bio-armour”, as xenoverse likes to call it, is standard white, if not a very slightly darker white.

  • #34720

    Luki
    Participant

    I wasn’t accepted?

  • #34721

    SonGino
    Participant

    Why i dident get respond ;-;

  • #34724

    AW214
    Participant

    what do i need to work on?

  • #34728

    Sir Shinobi
    Participant

    I was convinced to do one by Aw so here I go. Quick warning I made this character up in about five minutes and added details as I went, however all of this will be canon for him no matter how much I regret it later.
    Name: Zeref Argus
    Race: Demon (technically Debora is a Makaioshin but I’ll swing it.)
    Age: About as old as dirt due to being a demon but he could pass for a guy in his 50s.
    Backstory (The really juicy meat that you’ll actually care about): Zeref lived in the demon realm, although he was a demon he wasn’t necessarily unbelievably evil, nor was his family, they were traders and occasionally swindlers. The Argus family lived a nomadic life, never staying too long in one area due to the usually chaotic nature of other demons, selling anything they found worth in, charging whatever they determined to be appropriate. Zeref himself enjoyed this somewhat peaceful life throughout his childhood and early adulthood, branching off from his family to go at it alone with a few gifts from his family. He was fairly successful with his business, although he made quite a few enemies over the years, due to not being purely a fighter himself he failed to fend off anyone that attacked him, usually barely escaping unscathed, occasionally escaping with his life.
    Years passed and now Zeref was stable, able to fend for himself to an extent, and wanting to take his business to new heights in the mortal realm. He roams the demon realm, eventually finding someone who could forge a way to travel to the mortal realm, filled with wonder and glee he boldly enters the world we know and love, integrating into society with a fair bit of difficulty, being a demon and all. He usually reacted with violence over a simple misunderstanding but overtime mellowed out and played off his demonic appearance and behavior as nothing more than an elaborate costume and act for the sake of advertisement. While he does miss his nomadic life from his days in the demon realm, he enjoys his new static life of providing goods to aspiring martial artists.

    Personality (The soft fat on a strip of bacon, my personal favorite part): He is a man of many masks and prefers to be hard to read, one moment he’s the calm demon behind the counter trying to sell you an energy drink and the next he’s a con man trying to rob you of your shekels. When at his most honest he’s fairly blunt and crass, and selfish, helping others only when he sees a profitable result for himself.

    As for his fighting style he’s the kind of person to try and get underneath his opponent’s skin with underhanded actions and words to make them act without caution and leave them open for his own attacks.

    And as for clothing, he’ll usually wear a business suit but his demon’s realm best is a light colored shirt that hangs onto a single shoulder over a darker colored body suit and the baggiest of white pants, simple shoes to go along with it that resemble the kind namekians wear.

    As for his alignment he could be pegged as a lawful evil or chaotic neutral (if I were to go by dnd), as for the server he’d be considered evil or inbetween evil and neutral.

    And there is my hastily made application for a demon, it may not be what you expect for a demon but it suits my needs and I await your judgement.

  • #34732

    AW214
    Participant

    Name-Iced

    Race:Arcosian

    Aced-14

    Backstory- When Iced was a child him and his father were forced into slavery by a well known assasin.The assasin killed his mother after she had a bounty set on her for treason against the space pirates.She was the leader of the resistance against the frieza force. When the assasin found her he immediately killed her.For 4 years Iced and his father killed many people and went on many missions.One day when Iced and his father were on a mission and attempted escape.Iced and his father were set on trial for disobeying freiza.His father was sentanced to death and in his final breath said,”ICED RUN!!.” Iced ran to the nearest spacepod and put in the coords to earth.Iced waited 2 years in a deep sleep wondering what would happen if freiza found him. When he arrived at earth he saw a young namekian who he remembered he killed his parents. He started to shead tears and screamed,”WHYY DID I DO SUCH HORRIBLE THINGS!” When he aproached the boy he got on his knees and cried and apologized to the boy. the boy ran away as fast as he could.Even though he felt very bad he still wasnt 100% good so he screamed at the boy out of anger and said,”SAY ITS OK.” The boy quivered in fear as Iced walked away. All Iced could think of was his father and all the people he had to kill. For 5 months the rage and hurt inside of him made him do very evil things. Now the evil has taken over 50% and all he can do is make everyone die like his father,but he can still have a good heart and help people(sorta like fat buu).

    How he/she/it acts:-Can do evil things but has remorse after

    Fighting style:-fights with fists(warrior)

    Alignment-neutral

    What they wear-Blue battle armor

  • #34734

    Cyan_Barbarian
    Participant

    Cyan Barbarians character
    Name: Cyan Barbarian
    Gender: Male
    Race: Half Saiyan
    Age: 25
    What is my character like: Cyan is a cool headed sarcastic battle loving man who prefers to go straight into fight instead of making strategies. He prefers to work alone but if he has to he will work well with others. He is able to adapt to almost any situation and not one to start an argument but he will finish one. He usually can be found training in his gravity chamber or eating in his favourite restaurants (his favourite earth foods are pizza and burgers).
    Looks: Wears a black, cyan, white and grey GI has cyan hair and a cyan tail and a Cyan amulet.

    Backstory: When Cyan was 5 years old his Father a Saiyan by the name of Delgo started training him in the art of battle 6 hours every day. Cyan always improving with great determination to serapes surpass his father. At the age of 10 his power level reached 9,000 and mastered his father’s fighting stile but his father was still far stronger than him but Cyan was still determined to serapes surpass his father so he can protect his family. Cyan Trained day and night with and without his father’s help he learned his clan’s signature move’s the Cyan Cannon and the Barbaric Buster. He mastered by the age of 13 and improved them as he went his father was stunned by how powerful his son has become in a mere 8 years, it had taken him 10 years of training to perfect his fighting stiyle
    . When Cyan had reached the age of 20he had finally achieved his goal to become stronger than his father. It was then his family was attacked while he was out training in his favourite place, A cave vary far away from his house which he reached by flying.
    The family home was attached By an Arcosian named Glasher he had been hunting down Cyan’s family for over 30 long years and had found them, he was finally going to destroy them.
    Cyan’s Father Delgo defeated Glasher men with relative ease even though they had overwhelming numbers.
    Delgo soon defeated all of Glasher’s underlings and only his right hand man Eragon a namekian that has gained the super namekian form. Delgo Defeated Eragon in his base form but then Eragon transformed on to a super namekian and started beating down Delgo and then Delgo used his signature transformation. The Barbaric transformation which increases the user’s power by 50% and took down Eragon with one Cyan Cannon at 60% power. Then Glasher powered all the whey to his 5th form. Delgo has defeated and killed right there on the spot when Cyan returned from training he was greeted with the rubble of his child hood home and the corpse of his father and mother Cyan was Devastated and blamed himself for what happened that day. Cyan swore on his parents grave to avenge his fallen parents and kill the man who did this. He searched all over his planet finding the strongest fighters on his planet but he soon realised that no one on that planet is strong enough to kill his father and mother. So he had to go off world to find the killer he searched fare and wide to find the killer with no leads at all. He went to planet to planet galaxy to galaxy but he could not find his parents killer. He started to lose hope that he would find his parents killer but then he over hard to people talking about an Arcosian named Glasher going around killing all the remaining Saiyan and their family’s he asked the men where they got this information that said they saw it first hand and that he was heading back to Cyan’s home planet to kill him. Cyan rushed to his ship and raced towards his home at top speed it took Cyan 3 weeks to reach his home but as he made his way home he went throw the most pain full training of his life he installed a gravity chamber to help him train. He started off at 30x earth’s gravity sins his planet was 15x that of earth as he flew to his home planet he built his way up to 100x earth’s natural gravity and became much stronger even tho he was still 1 week away from his destination he continued training but even more painful. By the time he arrived he had reached 200x earth’s natural gravity and had become powerful enough to defeat Glasher and avenge his parents. Cyan hunted down Glasher and his ship and when he found it he started picking of his men one by one so they couldn’t help Glasher fight him 2 months passed and Cyan had killed all of Glasher’s men and started to get ready to tack down Glasher but Glasher is ready for Cyan’s arrival he noticed that his men were being kill one by one and set up a trap for him with his new right hand man named Captain Rim he is fare stronger than Eragon.
    Cyan got everything he needs to kill Glasher Captain Rim which included a sword he obtained from an Ancient temple he found on his travels to find Glasher and His father’s amulet that he gave to him when he was a boy. Cyan then flew towards Glasher’s ship at top speed.
    When Cyan reached Glashers ship Captain Rim flew out and challenged him to a fight. Cyan accepted and then they began to brawl. Cyan throw punches and kicks at 50% of his power at Rim who was blocking and dogging most of the hits. Then Rim gave Cyan one powerful punch to the stomach and he fell to the floor Rim came down with a powerful elbow but Cyan dogged just in time and kicked Rim right in the gut. Rim went flying and landed on the ground with a thud then Cyan started charging a Barbaric Buster. He got it to 60% and fired it right at Rim. Cyan got a direct hit on Rim and Rim was down for the count Cyan Flew back to Glashers ship looking for him along the way. When Cyan Reached the ship Glasher Flew out at his 4th form ready to fight him. But Cyan drew his sword and charged right at him at 65% of his power.

    Cyan slashed punched and kicked Glasher landing almost every hit Glasher realising that he underestimated Cyan went to 100% on his 4th form Cyan noticed the power difference and powered up to 70% to match Glashers power. Glasher swang his tail at Cyan but he cut it off with one fell swoop of his sword. Glasher was furious that Cyan was so powerful for a pathetic monkey so he powered up to his 5th form at 50%. Cyan was shocked that he could transform but he quickly began fighting him again but he was getting beet down because the power difference was too grate so he went to 100% power but Glasher was still much more powerful than him when this happened the amulet his father gave him started to glow giving him a massive power boost.
    When the amulet began to glow he became just as strong as Glasher if not stronger. Then Glasher went 75% to overpower Cyan but he did not need to alter his power for his new form was all he needed as Glasher fought Cyan he relied that this was not a fight he could win so he hit Cyan and ran away to regroup

    Cyan flew of after him and coat up to him fairly quickly and started to beat down on him again but then Glasher grew to 100% power and started to win but then Cyan went to 100% as well and started to play with Glasher punching and kicking him all around the place then when Cyan had his fun he sledgehammered him to the ground and was about to decapitate him when Rim tackled him to the ground.

    Cyan quickly took care of Captain Rim and went back to finish off Glasher. But by the time he got back to Glasher he had fled because Cyan was too strong for him and new that but Cyan did not care he knew that so he knew that he could defeat him if he ever had to so he would let Glasher go but if they were to meet again then Cyan would kill him on sight for what he did to his parents.

    As Cyan left on his journey he found an ancient temple and discovered more about the amulet that his father gave him. The amulet is called the amulet of the gods it can boost the users power 10 fooled when he or she needs it but only for 2 hours and after that the amulet must rest before u can use it again roughly 1 hour.

    After looking through the rest of the temple he left and then he got on his space ship to explore the universe more delicately because when he was looking for Glasher all he cared about was finding him and avenging his parents so he thought that he might just explore and take in the sight of the universe and maybe he can find some powerful opponents to fight. He found many things on his journey but what he found the most of was many children that had the same thing done to them as had been done to him those many years ago by that dog Glasher and his men.

    So on that day he thought to himself that these children are what he needs to fight for so they can have someone to believe in and know that someone is fighting for them. He decided not to fight for himself he would fight for others that can’t fight for themselves and protect the good people of the universe.

    But as he continued his journey he realized that there are many more people who are far stronger than he is and that he might need some help with his training, so as he explored the nearby planets he also looked for someone around his level of power to train with but he had no such luck, everyone on the planets where much weaker than he was and they would not have a chance against his power so he had to resort to the gravity chamber in his ship for him to train between planets.

    On his journey Cyan came across a planet called Earth when he arrived it was 2 months after the cell games where a Saiyan called Marcus killed cell and saved the planet him. Cyan decided stay on this planet for a while because It has some strong fighters for him to train with and befriend. While Cyan was on earth he tried many different things like pizza burgers and many other foods, he loved the many different places on earth and how lush and green the planet. He decided to live here for the rest of his life with the C fighters and train with them

    Fighting style: Cyan fights much like a Barbarian and is very good with a sword and other bladed weapons
    Alignment: Good

  • #34735

    FastDreams123
    Participant

    Name:Tamanegi

    Race:Half-Saiyans

    Age:13

    Back-story:Was born on June 29 the day the king died.His dad and mom were born on a planet called Ustilia.It was a very peacful planet
    until a arcosian came along a was taking over all the planet in the solar system.The people of Ustilia fought and one.After that Tamanegi
    mom and dad had a kid.His name was tamnegi.He was born on the day they won but that day the king also died.People think of him as bad luck
    and know one would hang out eith him.He would train with his father.A saiyan name Rensho.His mom was human name yogu.His dad trained him.
    He joind prince vegeta on planet vegeta.He went on 2 missions alone.He had to fight another planet.They were to strong for him and almost died
    Raditz saved him and in favor he gives him all his money.Raditz told him that your to weak and need to train.Raditz and Tamanegi train for 2 years straight.
    After that he went to earth to look for more training.He settle down there for a while.He went to train with goku to learn the super sayin.Now he goes
    off to master his super sayin

    How he/she/it acts:Is nice and kind.If seen anybody being harm for no reason he will become mad and go super sayin.

    Fighting style:???? dont understand really

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:A black and white gi.He has another pair of close thats all green.It is also a gi

    • #34736

      FastDreams123
      Participant

      If needed more i will glady do so.I didnt wanna do much so if i have to have more room to grow i can think more about.I only picked half-sayin because i like there battle side.

  • #34746

    AW214
    Participant

    Name-Iced

    Race:Arcosian

    Aced-14

    When Iced was a child him and his father were forced into slavery by a well known assasin.The assasin killed his mother after she had a bounty set on her for treason against the space pirates.She was the leader of the resistance against the frieza force. When the assasin found her he immediately killed her.For 4 years Iced and his father killed many people and went on many missions.One day when Iced and his father were on a mission and attempted escape.
    Iced and his father were set on trial for disobeying freiza.His father was sentanced to death and in his final breath said,”ICED RUN!!.” Iced ran to the nearest spacepod and put in the coords to earth.Iced waited 2 years in a deep sleep wondering what would happen if freiza found him. When he arrived at earth he saw a young namekian who he remembered he killed his parents. He started to shead tears and screamed,”WHYY DID I DO SUCH HORRIBLE THINGS!” When he aproached the boy he got on his knees and cried and apologized to the boy. the boy ran away as fast as he could.Even though he felt very bad he still wasnt 100% good so he screamed at the boy out of anger and said,”SAY ITS OK.” The boy quivered in fear as Iced walked away. All Iced could think of was his father and all the people he had to kill. For 5 months the rage and hurt inside of him made him do very evil things. Now the evil has taken over 50% and all he can do is make everyone die like his father,but he can still have a good heart and help people(sorta like fat buu).
    One day iced was walking in a city and everyone apeared to him as freiza. He didnt pay much attention to it until his vision went blank. All he saw was him skipping in the forest with his mother. This made him fell so much grief and anger it took him into a mind paralyzed state where he could only see the past unknowing of what his outside body was doing. This flashback showed him a vision of when the assasin slaughtered his mother in front of his very eyes. When Iced watched his mother get killed again he screamed,”No….No….NOOO!” When he woke up all he could see was bodies and destroyed terrain everywhere.
    Iced then ran away and hid for 5 years.All he could do was scavenge for food and train. One day he saw a vision of freiza and the things he made him do. The vision showed how he mercilessly killed a whole family of namekians exept for the boy. This enraged him and made him decide from that day foward he would train and defeat whoever he had to defeat to find and kill freiza.For the time being Iced will fight powerful foes to train and become a fighter that can defeat the whole freiza force.

    How he/she/it acts:-Can do evil things but has remorse after

    Fighting style:-fights with fists(warrior)

    Alignment-neutral

    What they wear-Blue battle armor

    better?

  • #34773

    Luki
    Participant

    Hey! It’s me once again! And this took me 3 days to write (Appearently my first backstory was too simple and with help of my dear friend Stallord I managed to write something that doesn’t suck)
    Name: Lushaku / Pinky
    Race: Majin
    Age: Billions of years.
    Back-story: During the creation of the Milky Way galaxy, a small planetary system was formed in the center of the galaxy, 500,000 million years later the volcanic activity on the planets began to decrease and the planets began to cool.
    Due to the high concentration and combination of molecules such as methane, ammonia and hydrogen, organic compounds of high molecular mass originated. The energy of solar radiation, the electrical activity of the atmosphere and heat sources like volcanoes, acted as catalysts in a process where in the oceans dissolved simple chemical compounds.
    With the passage of time in that ocean called “primitive broth” the simple compounds began to come together, forming the first form of life of that system. They were very simple cells, so they could be replicated very quickly by mitosis.
    All these produced cells began to form a more complex organism, after 2000 years of multiple attempts of infinite combinations between the cells, they managed to form the first intelligent being of that planetary system, known as Lushaku.
    Lushaku for having so simple cells, when a part of its body was destroyed it could regenerate it easily by mitosis.
    Lushaku was observing for many years how the planets of his system were finished, so much electrical activity in the planets did that it will be able to perceive the electromagnetic waves.
    Shortly after achieving “feel” the electromagnetic waves began to manipulate the electric pulses to his liking; This gave him a somewhat “telekinetic” ability, he could control minds to some extent; The synapse of neurons is a transmission of information by electrical pulses, that is why it can control minds.
    Lushaku to control a mind was necessary to touch his victim on the head, could generate nightmares, introduce false memories, and even rendered unusable several parts of the brain, and generate severe headaches, all this for a short period of 30 minutes.
    After 250 years, Lushaku got bored, he was completely alone, so he decided to enter a period of hibernation, a long period, while he was sleeping inside a giant egg with craters, the planets of the system where he was born developed all his life until arriving at the Collapse, so much energy released by explosions fused to that of the star of that planetary system formed the black hole located in the center of the Milky Way.
    That black hole, trapped that egg, hard enough to withstand the great gravity of the black hole and not crushed, that egg turned for many years in the accretion disk of the black hole causing it to reach a great speed with which its speed Of escape would be greater than the force of the black hole, thus escaping from the accretion disk and exiting towards the southwest of the galaxy.
    Its speed was diminishing by the gravitational attraction of all the celestial bodies, until it arrived at the solar system and was trapped by the Earth.
    The egg fell on planet Earth, in a forest near a small village; The impact against the earth’s crust caused Lushaku to awaken from his sleep and out of his egg.
    When Lushaku left, he was surprised to see a planet with so much life, and went to the nearby town.
    When they arrived at the village, the residents began to flee from Lushaku, soon they went to seek help to the house of a certain Stallord, an individual who maintained the order in that city.
    Stallord decided to go see what was happening, and found a pink woman with long hair, black eyes with red pupils, and naked.
    Stallord, after seeing Lushaku like this, led her to her house to talk to her; Arriving dressed her in an old vest and white pants.
    Lushaku did not understand what Stallord was saying, but he put his hands on Stallord’s head and interpreted the electrical pulses of the synapse of Stallord’s neurons to learn his language.
    Lushaku already knew how to speak, introduced himself and asked Stallord who he was and why he had put on clothes, Stallord told him his name is Stallord, and explained that clothing was necessary not to arouse lustful desires of the body.
    Lushaku despite that explanation complained about having to wear clothes and was constantly taking it off, Stallord insisted that he let her on and convinced her that if she did she would play with her.
    Lushaku accepted and left her clothes, after which Stallord considered her lustful for wanting to walk naked and baptized her as The Goat of Lust, of The Seven Deadly Sins.
    The game that Stallord and Lushaku played was: the one who stops more criminals wins, which was the work of the Seven Deadly Sins command.
    Over time, Lushaku began to be accepted as a heroine in the village, a very friendly and kind person, and began to make more and more friends.
    Little by little they were integrating more members to the order of Capital Sins, who were in that group were his best friends until almost brothers of all the life.
    One day Stallord told Lushaku that he had to leave, that they would meet again later, that it was a pleasure to meet her and he left, after that the whole group was disintegrating until she was alone.
    She alone went to the forest where she had come, and she built a small cabin where she would live quietly and from time to time visiting the village to see how she was doing.
    From time to time she went out to train her telekinetic skills, and on other days she trained the ki techniques that Stallord had taught her.
    Then he was bored by loneliness and decided to go to other villages in search of new friendships and if he was lucky, to find the members of the Order of Capital Sins.
    Fighting Style: By the immense power she holds she can not control it and therefore cant suppress it in combat leading to destructive results. She has never had combat training
    Alignment: Neutral
    How she acts: Childish, consider mostly all a game, energetic (In some times hyper active)
    What they wear: She wears the clothes given by Stallord (A vest and some short pants)
    -Thanks for reading

    • #34844

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Discord please

    • #34855

      Luki
      Participant

      LukiRol#4035 ! Thanks!!!

  • #34776

    Sir Shinobi
    Participant

    Ignore my previous post. I was recently informed of the length requirement and will correct the length, some information will remain the same except for the name.

    Name: Thresh Argus

    Race: Demon (technically Debora is a Makaioshin but I’ll swing it.)

    Age: About as old as dirt due to being a demon but he could pass for a guy in his 50s.

    Backstory (The really juicy meat that you’ll actually care about):
    Thresh lived in the demon realm, although he was a demon he wasn’t necessarily unbelievably evil, nor was his family, they were traders and occasionally swindlers. The Argus family lived a nomadic life, never staying too long in one area due to the usually chaotic nature of other demons, selling anything they found worth in, charging whatever they determined to be appropriate. Thresh himself enjoyed this somewhat peaceful life throughout his childhood and early adulthood, branching off from his family to go at it alone, with a few gifts from his family. He was fairly successful with his business, although he made quite a few enemies over the years, due to not being a fighter himself he failed to fend off anyone that attacked him, usually getting beaten till he lost consciousnesses. Due to the amount of times he was injured and robbed from these beatings he turned his attention to strengthening his body.
    This turned out to be more difficult than he first suspected due to the demon willing to train him asking for just about everything he owned in exchange for the training and living expenses; it took a few more highway robberies to finally convince him to pay his new master, Furio, to ready him for the roads ahead. Several years of general strength training and hand to hand combat passed before Thresh was able to fight on a satisfactory level, able to handle the common thief or upset drunkard with little to no difficulty; this is when his master taught him the art of deception, something the demon was familiar with when it came to making coin but not so much for hand to hand combat.
    Years passed and now Thresh was now a stable adult, able to fend for himself to an extent, and wanting to take his business to new heights in the mortal realm. He roams the demon realm, eventually finding someone who could forge a way to travel to the mortal realm, filled with wonder and excitement he boldly enters the world we know and love, integrating into society with a fair bit of difficulty, being a demon and all. He usually reacted with violence over a simple misunderstanding but overtime mellowed out and played off his demonic appearance and behavior as nothing more than an elaborate costume and act for the sake of advertisement. While he does miss his nomadic life from his days in the demon realm, he enjoys his new static life of providing goods to aspiring martial artists. However with success comes jealousy, he still has to fight off the occasional thief for troublemaker, using them to keep his strength up, along with the occasional trip to the gym or fight club to earn some extra coin.

    Personality (The soft fat on a strip of bacon, my personal favorite part): He is a man of many masks and prefers to be hard to read, one moment he’s the calm demon behind the counter trying to sell you an energy drink and the next he’s a con man trying to rob you of your shekels. When at his most honest he’s fairly blunt and crass, and selfish, helping others only when he sees a profitable result for himself.

    As for his fighting style he’s the kind of person to try and get underneath his opponent’s skin with underhanded actions and words to make them act without caution and leave them open for his own attacks.

    And as for clothing, he’ll usually wear a business suit but his demon’s realm best is a light colored shirt that hangs onto a single shoulder over a darker colored body suit and the baggiest of white pants, simple shoes to go along with it that resemble the kind namekians wear.

    As for his alignment he could be pegged as a lawful evil or chaotic neutral (if I were to go by dnd), as for the server he’d be considered evil or inbetween evil and neutral.

  • #34777

    Sir Shinobi
    Participant

    Thot Slayer Furio#9311 I forgot to post my discord onto it again so here you go.

  • #34797

    Luki
    Participant

    Are you still gonna let people in ,JamesCfer ?

  • #34823

    SonGino
    Participant

    Other Race with other story (Tell me which is better)
    Name:Tenzuki
    Age:10
    Race:Namek
    Gender:Male
    Apparence:Green and White (Well I will see which color I like the most) He wear a white pants and a Black suit with Black Eyes
    BackStory:When I was Child I live on a village but someday a Green man with a hair called Zarbon Attacked my village He killed all of them I started to do a fake death Like my dad tell me to do when a stronge enemy comes when I opened my eyes all villagers was death and I was desespered for one week He started to talk about suicide Tenzuki:I will kill myself I can’t live in this world… No I must avenge my Family,Friends! I will walk to find a village and training, I started to walk for 1 month without drink Water that was extreme I coulden’t live,One day I found a village with a guy called Nail I say Him h.e…l.lo sir c.c.can y.you A..a gu…y..s ca.l.l.ed zarbon killed all my family and friend and villagers He says Yes I Know you want to become stronger and I know what you feel,and He start to train me for 5 year That was hard No drinking,no stop,Anything only concentration and Meelee Someday I became stronger to protect the village but someday a guy called Frieza Comes to my village and killed my sensei nail But later a Namek absorbe him,but someday a Namek with a strange hood started to train me to become stronger to kill every bad guys I see,But someday somethings Bad happend Really,Really bad! (Tell me which is better and If I get denied tell me why ^^ have a nice day(Night)

    • #34845

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Please add more information. Good start tho.

    • #34857

      SonGino
      Participant

      Name:Tenzuki
      Age:10
      Race:Namekian
      Alignment:Good
      Gender:Male
      Apparence:Dark Green,White,Black (Well I will see which color I like the most) He have Black Eyes
      Fighting Style:He use Meelee and Sometimes Ki Attacks
      How he Act:He’s always Scared,and Naïve,He like to do Farm with his Friend or doning pranks
      What he wear:He wear Demonic Outifs (Gohan One) with a Cape
      BackStory:When I was Child I live on a village but someday a Green man with a hair called Zarbon Attacked my village He killed all of them I started to do a fake death Like my dad tell me to do when a stronge enemy comes when I opened my eyes all villagers was death and I was desespered for one week He started to talk about suicide Tenzuki:I will kill myself I can’t live in this world… No I must avenge my Family,Friends! I will walk to find a village and training, I started to walk for 1 month without drink Water that was extreme I coulden’t live,One day I found a village with a guy called Nail I say Him h.e…l.lo sir c.c.can y.you A..a gu…y..s ca.l.l.ed zarbon killed all my family and friend and villagers He says Yes I Know you want to become stronger and I know what you feel,and He start to train me for 5 year That was hard No drinking,no stop,Anything only concentration and Meelee Someday I became stronger to protect the village but someday a guy called Frieza Comes to my village and killed my sensei nail But later a Namek absorbe him,but someday a Namek with a strange hood started to train me to become stronger to kill every bad guys I see,But someday somethings Bad happend Really,Really bad Freeza started to attack the village again this time he killed no one He wanted the dragon balls The namekian how absorbed Nail started to fight freeza Then I helped him But he hited me and I was in the coma…

    • #35201

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      An interesting story, but it could have some more elaboration. Improving grammar and spelling a little bit in the areas where it is needed (you can just run it through a checker) will help as well.

      You make it seem like Namek was under attack for 5 years, but that simply isn’t the case in canon. You may want to alter that, so that it makes more sense in the time line. As of right now, we’re currently heading through the 7 year time skip before Majin Buu. Adding information detailing up to that point will help add content to make your story more filled out.

      Thanks, and have a nice day! (Sorry for how long it took to give you a reply, I saw you were missing one so I felt the need to respond.)

      Also, please include your discord so that we can contact you if you’re accepted in!

    • #35225

      SonGino
      Participant

      Sorry for my bad English Im french I will try to do better and Discord KawaiiPandix #6161

  • #35192

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    pls let me come back.I don’t care if I get my stats reset.I will nvr be rude again and I just wanna rp with you guys there are so many things I wanted to do

    • This reply was modified 1 month, 3 weeks ago by  God's Flame.
  • #35199

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    you know what don’t even unban me.I deserve it.I shouldn’t have treated amai that bad while shes been rlly nice to me and let mEcatch up to everyone else.I should’ve owned up to it and took my punishment.I understand you are fed up with me concerning my outburst and “trolling”.I understand this isn’t my first time doing something wrong. when I said “I was bored” that was me trying to stay cool about the situation.Now I realize that was a bad response.I understand you guys for perma banning me.I just hope you can find it in your hearts to forgive me one day

  • #35222

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    Name: Beat
    Age:14
    Race: 3/4 sayian
    Alignment: Good
    Apperance: Demon clan clothes with red hair(since android 16 was based in gero’s son and he had red hair so it might make sense for that to be gero’s original hair color)Teen Gohan hair and dark eyes
    Fighting style: Always trys to not kill an opponent but if they remind him of gero he will be merciless
    Personality: Hates seeing people die, Doesn’t like having friends due to the pain he felt when his first friend died, Peaceful and will only fight if threatened by someone or if the earth is threatened, Strong desire to get stronger so he can protect others so no one will die like his friend
    Backstory: Dr.Gero made a 1000 clones of Goku for the purpose of defeating Goku if his androids failed. Since Dr.Gero decided he only needed one clone of Goku due to the chance they could rebel, he made the clones kill each other until there was only 1 left. When Dr.Gero saw how strong goku became he decided to make 1 more clone with two new variables: Vegeta’s DNA and his own. He Implanted his intelligence inside of Beat as he was being created/cloned. Since the base where the clones were stored was in Antarctica, He was taken there through android 19 carrying his tank there. There were only 50 clones left and they all had a BP of 500B from killing each other so long and they would be stronger but they never had a chance to let there body’s refresh it self for them to have zenkai boost. In his first 10 years at the facility he had accumulated a BP of 1 trillion. Beat grew tired of killing the other clones when there was about 20 left. Beat had only found one friend among the clones and that was Goku-001.Goku-001 cloning tank was dropped on his trip to the artic making him think like a human not a bloodthirsty sayian. So Beat and Goku-001 planned to escape the facility. Since the facility had recorders everywhere, Dr.Gero sent Android 19 to stop them. So they tried to climb out the air vents, but android 19 had remote access to the cameras and found them trying to bust out through the vents. When Android 19 found them Goku-001 jumped at the android and landed a punch in it’s face. The androids face shattered into pieces when it got punched. Then Goku-001 hit Android 19 with a barrage of punches. Beat was still climbing out because it looked like his friend had it in the bag. But Android 19 caught one of Goku-001’s punches and started absorbing his energy.Goku-001 started to scream but by the time Beat looked to see what was going on, his friend was a burning corpse and fell to the bottom of air shaft. Beat was enraged at the android and what it had just done to his friend.
    “I’m going to kill you” Beat screamed and the air shaft exploded with golden light. Beat had become a super sayian . The android saw his BP with it’s built in scouter, then it started to tremble with fear. Beat flew at the android and ripped it’s head off. Dr.Gero who saw the whole thing decided that having clones of Goku was too dangerous and set the facility to self destruct. Beat was too blind in rage to notice what was going on. The facility exploded and Beat was knocked out of the facility. Since Future trunks found the files on the experiment from Gero’s base, he used his time machine to shut down the experiment before it ever happened. Trunks found nothing but bodies when he went in the base. Trunks then left to go back to his time machine to go back home,but he noticed a body laying in the snow. Trunks Rushed over to see if the person was okay but then saw a tail when he dug the body out. He realized he was the one of the clones and checked if was alive. Then he felt a very faint beat and knew if he let this clone live he could destroy everything but it he looked at beat again and saw he was just a kid. Since it was too dangerous to take beat to his timeline he dropped him off in the main timeline at kami’s lookout. He explained the situation to Dende and Dende put his hand on the unconscious boy’s head and felt that he had and very traumatized but good soul. He was fed a Senzu bean to help him heal and he had zenkai boost since his body was able to refresh it’s self that boosted his BP to 2 Trillion. When Beat woke up in bed at Kami’s lookout he wondered if god gave him another chance at life. Then Dende found him awake and told him that he could leave at any time he liked. Beat stayed there because he was finally somewhere he was at peace at.

    • This reply was modified 1 month, 3 weeks ago by  God's Flame.
  • #35227

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    he forgets the ssj skill

    • #35228

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      Alright, you were banned permanently. Do not post on here again, if you continue, you will just make yourself look worse and worse. This is final.

  • #35230

    God’s Flame
    Participant

    alex said I can come back if I make a new app do you want a screenshot?

    • #35232

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      I don’t care about what “Aex said”. We have made a decision as the STAFF of the server that you were permanently banned. He didn’t inform us of this for one, and I will not accept that any longer.

      Unless we are informed, and approve, nothing passes anymore.

      Got that?

  • #35231

    DaikoGdo
    Participant

    And this is something he did not discuss with staff, do not consider that decision final.

  • #35235

    SuperSandwich
    Participant

    Name: Icer

    Race: Arcosian (Freiza race)

    Age: 27

    Back-story: (the good stuff)

    Icer is a blind assassin sent to kill Saiyans and or namekians and it didn’t matter if they were innocent or not he would still brutally murder them. but it was with rage he didn’t know what he was doing he just thought he was doing justice to the races that killed his family. his family was killed by 2 saiyans and 1 namekian and it was for no reason. the namekian did a solar flare permanently blinding Icer but somehow he escaped and landed on planet namek were the freiza force found him and trained him to be the killing machine he is now. but he still has his flaws he can get too cocky at times which will get him stuck in situations that he cant help so he usually gets injured and escapes holding on to a strand of life. Icer has a lot of other weaknesses like his blindess if someone is too quiet they might be able to trick him. also ki blast are another weakness, he needs to train more on hearing than fighting so he can dodge and block better. but he does have super good sensing and smelling

    How he/she/it acts: cocky,smart and sometimes shy

    Fighting style: Blinded Blade Style

    Alignment: Neutral

    What they wear: baby battle armor

    (if i am denied i would like to know what i need to fix and maybe some other reasons why i was denied)

    • #35237

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      I won’t say you’re denied, but I would like to ask for you to improve on certain areas.

      The first area needing some improvement is the grammar department, as someone else on the staff team pointed out, this story has little room to breathe. You can just run it through a grammar checking website before you post it if you feel you can’t find the mistakes.

      The other area I would like to see improved is the amount of content. Maybe giving some more explanations of where he was, and what he was doing when he was attacked. Elaborate more on how he’s managed to get around ever since he got blinded. Maybe explain why the Solar Flare from that Namekian caused him to go blind.

      Explore the relationship with Freeza, and the Freeza force too. He obviously had to adjust to that life style while still being blind. Elaborate how he managed to learn to sense energy, since the Freeza force relied on scouters to detect opponents.

      I see a lot of potential in this story, and I hope to see you improve it! Also, if you do not mind, please provide your discord so that we may contact you if your character is approved. Thank you, and have a wonderful day!

    • #35238

      SuperSandwich
      Participant

      ok i will work on in right now and i hope i will get accepted with this edit!

    • #35239

      SuperSandwich
      Participant

      Name: Icer

      Race: Arcosian (Freiza race)

      Age: 27

      Back-story: (the good stuff)

      Icer is a blind assassin sent to kill Saiyans and or namekians and it didn’t matter if they were innocent or not he would still brutally murder them. but it was with rage he didn’t know what he was doing he just thought he was doing justice to the races that killed his family. his family was killed by 2 saiyans and 1 namekian and it was for no reason. the namekian did a solar flare permanently blinding Icer because he was looking directly at him and for too long trying to stop him from killing his parents, but somehow he escaped and landed on planet namek were the freiza force found him and brought him to Frieza’s spaceship and trained him to be the killing machine he is now. but he still has his flaws he can get too cocky at times which will get him stuck in situations that he cant help so he usually gets injured and escapes holding on to a strand of life. Icer has a lot of other weaknesses like his blindness if someone is too quiet they might be able to trick him. also, ki blasts are another weakness, he needs to train more on hearing than fighting so he can dodge and block better. but he does have super good sensing and smelling. he had more trouble than anyone else in the freiza force because of his blindness but he trained hard and got a lot stronger than anyone else on the Frieza force (except freiza himself) he also had to adjust to being a part of the freiza force instead of a normal family. freiza respects him but he is mostly “bullied” by the other members of the Frieza force when freiza isn’t looking or when they are in battle but icey just ignores it mostly, he learned to sense energy with a different training than others because freiza used scouters instead of actually sensing energy so icey was on his own and trained himself by starting with just a simple plant and moved up to other Frieza force members so when he finished his energy sensing training he went straight to physical training.

      How he/she/it acts: cocky, smart and sometimes shy

      Fighting style: Blinded Blade Style

      Alignment: Neutral

      What they wear: baby battle armor

      (if I am denied I would like to know what I need to fix and maybe some other reasons why I was denied)

    • #35240

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      Yo, we still need that Discord. We can’t accept your character without that.

    • #35264

      SuperSandwich
      Participant

      oh sorry here it is: SANDWICH#2384

    • #35266

      SuperSandwich
      Participant

      also, will I be notified if I’m accepted on discord or here?

    • #35268

      DaikoGdo
      Participant

      Discord, apologies for taking so long to respond.

    • #35269

      SuperSandwich
      Participant

      that is quite alright!

  • #35244

    James
    Participant

    Name: Uruzami Ryze (his name is Ryze and his last name if Uzuri – just using the Japanese name ordering)

    Race: Human (male)

    Age: 25

    Alignment: Neutral (fights for the sake of fighting or to get stronger)

    What they wear: He has long dark blue-grey hair as he has been living by himself in the wild for years training. He wears a gi given to him from King Kai. It is mostly composed of namekian style clothing. He asked King kai for them seeing them on a green man at the 23rd Strongest under the heavens tournament, as he liked the look of them. He also wears arm and leg waits to limit his strength. Only King Kai can remove them as otherwise he may become unstable. King Kai can remove them from afar (his planet) in certain circumstances as well. He carries a satchel on his belt all the time. He never removes it as it holds something important.

    Fighting Style: He fights up close and uses very minimal ki blasts. Likes to feel his opponent in pain and suffering.

    How he/she/it acts: Almost always acts almost emotionless (unless someone mentions his family, then he snaps and becomes enraged), begins to get upset when he unintentionally thinks about his family. Is a bit of a sadist and likes to watch his foes suffer.

    Back-story: When he was young Uruzami Ryze was trained by the crane-master. His father was also trained by the crane master. While weak, he had a good grasp of the basics of fighting, and knew how to control his ki a little bit. The red ribbon army hires Taopaipai to kill Ryze’s father, as he was getting in the way of their operations. Ryze parents are killed along with his little brother . He was forced to watch his brother be tortured by him, before being killed. He managed to escape. Over the next five years he trains to fight Taopaipai, becoming stronger and stronger. He manages to find him, but is beaten easily. Fueled by revenge, Ryze trains more and more throughout the next year. Through his travels he reaches the pole to Korin’s sanctuary. He climbs the pole easily and uses the flying technique to reach Kami’s lookout. He beats up Mr. Popo and finds Kami. Ryze finds the Hyperbolic time chamber and trains for two years inside of it. Ryze enters the 23rd Strongest under the heavens tournament. He learns that killing inside of the tournament so he forfeits and leaves. He sees Taopaiapai leaving in a stretcher and approaches. After knocking the two men carrying him away, Ryze pierces his chest with his hand. With his revenge complete Ryze walks away and flies back to kami’s lookout. Kami feels that Ryze is a threat to earth, so he and Mr. Popo double team him and manage to knock him out, then kill him. (he is 25 at this point). Ryze runs along the snake way for two years and reaches King Kai. He trains him reluctantly. After many years of training he grows 20-fold in strength (much stronger than king kai at this point – Power level is probably 7000 or 8000 at max?). Ryze remembers something that kami had told him about dragon balls and that they grant wishes. He tricks the All seeing crone to return him to earth for a day. She thinks that he is going to tell Goku that the saiyans are coming a month early. He gathers all of the dragon balls and wishes for another set of dragon balls. He uses these to bring himself back to life, then puts the balls into a satchel that he ties to his belt. He has not aged due to being dead so he is still 25 years old. He then trains as much as he can until he is asked by a strange man to help them fight… (setup for any battles if I get accepted!)

    Oh and just a few quick questions; If I don’t get accepted, please tell me what to improve/change. What are the required mods? Also is discord voice chat required?

    • This reply was modified 1 month, 3 weeks ago by  James.
  • #35246

    James
    Participant

    Oh and my discord is DefaultUsername123#8616 if i get accepted.

  • #35265

    James
    Participant

    EDIT:
    Name: Uruzami Ryze (his name is Ryze and his last name if Uzuri – just using the Japanese name ordering)

    Race: Human (male)

    Age: 25

    Alignment: Neutral (fights for the sake of fighting or to get stronger)

    What they wear: He has long dark blue-grey hair as he has been living by himself in the wild for years training. He wears a gi given to him from King Kai. It is mostly composed of namekian style clothing. He asked King kai for them seeing them on a green man at the 23rd Strongest under the heavens tournament, as he liked the look of them. He also wears arm and leg waits to limit his strength. Only King Kai can remove them as otherwise he may become unstable. King Kai can remove them from afar (his planet) in certain circumstances as well.
    Fighting Style: He fights up close and uses very minimal ki blasts. Likes to feel his opponent in pain and suffering.

    How he/she/it acts: Almost always acts almost emotionless (unless someone mentions his family, then he snaps and becomes enraged), begins to get upset when he unintentionally thinks about his family. Is a bit of a sadist and likes to watch his foes suffer.

    Back-story: When he was young Uruzami Ryze was trained by the crane-master. His father was also trained by the crane master. While weak, he had a good grasp of the basics of fighting, and knew how to control his ki a little bit. The red ribbon army hires Taopaipai to kill Ryze’s father, as he was getting in the way of their operations. Ryze parents are killed along with his little brother . He was forced to watch his brother be tortured by him, before being killed. He managed to escape. Over the next five years he trains to fight Taopaipai, becoming stronger and stronger. He manages to find him, but is beaten easily. Fueled by revenge, Ryze trains more and more throughout the next year. Through his travels he reaches the pole to Korin’s sanctuary. He climbs the pole easily and uses the flying technique to reach Kami’s lookout. He beats up Mr. Popo and finds Kami. Ryze finds the Hyperbolic time chamber and trains for two years inside of it. Ryze enters the 23rd Strongest under the heavens tournament. He learns that killing inside of the tournament so he forfeits and leaves. He sees Taopaiapai leaving in a stretcher and approaches. After knocking the two men carrying him away, Ryze pierces his chest with his hand. With his revenge complete Ryze walks away and flies back to kami’s lookout. Kami feels that Ryze is a threat to earth, so he and Mr. Popo double team him and manage to knock him out, then kill him. (he is 25 at this point). Ryze runs along the snake way for two years and reaches King Kai. He trains him reluctantly. After many years of training he grows 20-fold in strength (much stronger than king kai at this point – Power level is probably 7000 or 8000 at max?). Ryze remembers something that kami had told him about dragon balls and that they grant wishes. He tricks the All seeing crone to return him to earth for a day. She thinks that he is going to tell Goku that the saiyans are coming a month early. He gathers all of the dragon balls and wishes to be brought back to life. He has not aged due to being dead so he is still 25 years old. He continues his training for another few years, before feeling a large group of power levels that have gathered. Two of them are much higher than the others and seem to be flying towards the earth. Ryze, excited by the prospect of fighting someone stronger than him begins to fly over to it. But, as he flies the two incoming power levels stop, then vanish. He returns home slightly disappointed and continues his training. He sees someone called cell on TV and wants to enter the cell games. Ryze is stricken with illness after living in the wilderness for years on end, most likely due to malnutrition and infections. With the cell games on the hospital TV Ryze recovers slowly, only finishing his healing after the game is complete. He now continues his training…

    Hope this fixes the problems!

  • #35274

    Nova
    Participant

    I know full blood saiyans, or saiyans in general are hard to apply for but I figured I’d attempt to anyways. My discord is Nova#4647

    Name:
    Karot (Nicknamed Nova)

    Race:
    Saiyan

    Age:
    16
    Back-story:
    Nova was a Saiyan warrior living on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. His desire to protect the innocent conflicted heavily with his desire to fight which would make his job as a soldier incredibly difficult at times. This reputation of protecting the very people he is meant to kill made him a very controversial and even disliked figure in Saiyan society due to his tendency to fail missions purely due to his hatred of hurting the weak and innocent.

    As it turned out however, Nova’s protection of the innocent and weak was the very thing
    that saved him when Planet Vegeta was destroyed. Nova unwilling to destroy a race of beings known as the Yardrats was welcomed as a member of their race when he had heard of Planet Vegeta being destroyed due to his mercy and even helping them fight off an invading army of aliens. Ever since the destruction of Planet Vegeta, Nova has lived on Yardrat working as it’s protector
    and training with Yardrat warriors. But soon, Nova’s destiny will come and he will be forced to leave his home and friends to seek out the battles across the galaxy and the day will come where he will have to choose the path of Defender of the Weak or the God of War.

    How he/she/it acts: Karot is usually focused on protecting the innocent and can be stoic
    at times. Karot is however, a Saiyan which causes him to be blinded with his lust for fighting powerful opponents which can at times make him lose sight of protecting others.

    Fighting style:
    Preference for close-combat fighting. Uses a mixture of wide-sweeping movements and heavily direct assault attacks. Nova finishes his opponents off with extremely powerful wave-techniques.

    Alignment:
    Good (Chaotic, similar to Goku)

    What they wear:
    Nova wears a primarily blue gi with a grey bodysuit like undershirt. He wears on his hands a set of fingerless gloves and on his feet a pair of Saiyan-style white boots with yellow tips. Around his waist he has a belt of beads. Around his ankles he is wearing a set of blue leg-warmers.

    picture of clothes

    • This reply was modified 1 month, 3 weeks ago by  Nova.
    • This reply was modified 1 month, 3 weeks ago by  Nova.
    • #35279

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      2 things. 1st yardrat has already been destroyed. 2ed you need far far more information if your going for saiyan.

    • #35280

      Nova
      Participant

      Ah I see. I’ll edit it and give it another shot, thank you for the information.

    • #35281

      Nova
      Participant

      Name:
      Karot (Nicknamed Nova)

      Race:
      Saiyan

      Age:
      16

      Back-story:

      Karot was a Saiyan warrior living on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. His desire to protect the innocent conflicted heavily with his desire to fight which would make his job as a soldier incredibly difficult at times. This reputation of protecting the very people he is meant to kill made him a very controversial and even disliked figure in Saiyan society due to his tendency to fail missions purely due to his hatred of hurting the weak and innocent.

      Despite being born with a high power-level, Karot’s resistance to killing innocents has given him a low barely janitorial level of respect among his people and has destroyed any chances of friendship that he could have had with the other Saiyans on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. Due to Karot’s controversial stance on fighting, he remains a loner with no friends with his high born power-level and own talent at fighting being the only reason he was capable of surviving beatings from Saiyans from higher classes.

      It was a few years prior to Planet Vegeta’s destruction that Karot was assigned a solo mission to a Planet known as “Aldaria” which was famous for fighting off entire armies from the Planet Trade Organisation. Of course, this assignment was a suicide mission designed purely to get rid of the troublesome Karot who had caused the failure of multiple missions over the course of his life.

      As it turned out however, Karot’s protection of the innocent and weak was the very thing
      that saved him when he landed on Aldaria. As he was unwilling to kill the Aldarians who had never caused harm to beings with no just cause was the very reason why he had not died the very moment he entered an Aldarian city and the reason why their people came to the decision to take Nova as one of their own. To christen Karot’s new life as a member of the Aldarian race, he was gifted with the Aldarian name of Nova which was the name of an Ancient barbarian warrior who had founded the Aldarian’s dominant government, which is a monarchy-based government.

      Nova spent the next four years of his life on Aldaria, training as a knight in the Aldarian Army after serving as the squire of a Aldarian knight named Mos for one and a half years, becoming one of the fastest squire-to-knight promotions in the history of Aldaria.

      Upon his 16th birthday, Nova heard of the destruction of his home planet, Vegeta and was distraught at the knowledge that his entire people were destroyed. Despite all of their abuse of him and their violent ways, Nova felt the urge to leave his home and seek out survivors of his race. Bidding a farewell to the Aldarian people, Nova set out on a journey across the cosmos to find survivors. He will find survivors, but he will also find threats. Threats that Nova will have
      to fight to the death.

      As his journey continues, Nova will have to choose between his two sides. The Saiyan within him that seeks challenge no matter the costs? or The Aldarian Knight who seeks to protect the innocent and destroy all evil?

      How he/she/it acts:

      Nova when he still lived among his race, was infamous for his protection of those he deemed innocent or too weak to fight back, to the point that he had caused the failure of multiple planetary jobs by the age of 12 due to his interference with squad mates during missions. Due to this, Nova has alienated himself from the rest of his species and as such is a loner who maintains a stoic disposition when speaking to and dealing with others and avoided speaking to others as often
      as possible.

      After the betrayal of his race and his rebirth as a Aldarian on Aldaria, Nova was trained by the Aldarian Knight, Mos who instilled in Nova the discipline and work ethic needed
      to serve as a protector of the people and quickly learned the etiquette of Aldaria’s elites as to become a more charming diplomat. The result is that Nova as of now is a calm-minded
      and charming leader who emphasises on protecting innocent people. However, at times Nova loses control of himself when faced with extremely powerful challengers and has a tendency of losing
      sight of his work for the sake of fighting powerful opponents, putting even innocents at risk with his fighting. Nova when faced with powerful fighters would even forget about his surroundings, killing civilians and not even noticing the destruction his selfishness had caused.

      The more powerful Nova grows, the more excited he becomes when faced with powerful fighters and thus the more destructive and selfish he will be and eventually he will no longer be capable of protecting innocents, not with his violent and selfish behaviour.

      Fighting style:
      Preference for close-combat fighting. Uses a mixture of wide-sweeping movements
      and heavily direct assault attacks. Nova finishes his opponents off with extremely powerful wave-techniques.

      Alignment:
      Good (Chaotic, similar to Goku)

      What they wear:

      Nova wears a primarily blue gi with a grey undershirt. He wears on his hands a set of
      fingerless gloves and on his feet a pair of Saiyan-style white boots with yellow tips. Around his waist he has a belt of beads. Around his ankles he is wearing a set of blue leg-warmers.

    • #35282

      Nova
      Participant

      Name:
      Karot (Nicknamed Nova)

      Race:
      Saiyan

      Age:
      16

      Back-story:

      Karot was a Saiyan warrior living on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. His desire to protect the innocent conflicted heavily with his desire to fight which would make his job as a soldier incredibly difficult at times. This reputation of protecting the very people he is meant to kill made him a very controversial and even disliked figure in Saiyan society due to his tendency to fail missions purely due to his hatred of hurting the weak and innocent.

      Despite being born with a high power-level, Karot’s resistance to killing innocents has given him a low barely janitorial level of respect among his people and has destroyed any chances of friendship that he could have had with the other Saiyans on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. Due to Karot’s controversial stance on fighting, he remains a loner with no friends with his high born power-level and own talent at fighting being the only reason he was capable of surviving beatings from Saiyans from higher classes.

      It was a few years prior to Planet Vegeta’s destruction that Karot was assigned a solo mission to a Planet known as “Aldaria” which was famous for fighting off entire armies from the Planet Trade Organisation. Of course, this assignment was a suicide mission designed purely to get rid of the troublesome Karot who had caused the failure of multiple missions over the course of his life.

      As it turned out however, Karot’s protection of the innocent and weak was the very thing
      that saved him when he landed on Aldaria. As he was unwilling to kill the Aldarians who had never caused harm to beings with no just cause was the very reason why he had not died the very moment he entered an Aldarian city and the reason why their people came to the decision to take Nova as one of their own. To christen Karot’s new life as a member of the Aldarian race, he was gifted with the Aldarian name of Nova which was the name of an Ancient barbarian warrior who had founded the Aldarian’s dominant government, which is a monarchy-based government.

      Nova spent the next four years of his life on Aldaria, training as a knight in the Aldarian Army after serving as the squire of a Aldarian knight named Mos for one and a half years, becoming one of the fastest squire-to-knight promotions in the history of Aldaria.

      Upon his 16th birthday, Nova heard of the destruction of his home planet, Vegeta and was distraught at the knowledge that his entire people were destroyed. Despite all of their abuse of him and their violent ways, Nova felt the urge to leave his home and seek out survivors of his race. Bidding a farewell to the Aldarian people, Nova set out on a journey across the cosmos to find survivors. He will find survivors, but he will also find threats. Threats that Nova will have to fight to the death.

      As his journey continues, Nova will have to choose between his two sides. The Saiyan within him that seeks challenge no matter the costs? or The Aldarian Knight who seeks to protect the innocent and destroy all evil?

      How he/she/it acts:

      Nova when he still lived among his race, was infamous for his protection of those he deemed innocent or too weak to fight back, to the point that he had caused the failure of multiple planetary jobs by the age of 12 due to his interference with squad mates during missions. Due to this, Nova has alienated himself from the rest of his species and as such is a loner who maintains a stoic disposition when speaking to and dealing with others and avoided speaking to others as often as possible.

      After the betrayal of his race and his rebirth as a Aldarian on Aldaria, Nova was trained by the Aldarian Knight, Mos who instilled in Nova the discipline and work ethic needed
      to serve as a protector of the people and quickly learned the etiquette of Aldaria’s elites as to become a more charming diplomat. The result is that Nova as of now is a calm-minded
      and charming leader who emphasises on protecting innocent people. However, at times Nova loses control of himself when faced with extremely powerful challengers and has a tendency of losing
      sight of his work for the sake of fighting powerful opponents, putting even innocents at risk with his fighting. Nova when faced with powerful fighters would even forget about his surroundings, killing civilians and not even noticing the destruction his selfishness had caused.

      The more powerful Nova grows, the more excited he becomes when faced with powerful fighters and thus the more destructive and selfish he will be and eventually he will no longer be capable of protecting innocents, not with his violent and selfish behaviour.

      Fighting style:
      Preference for close-combat fighting. Uses a mixture of wide-sweeping movements
      and heavily direct assault attacks. Nova finishes his opponents off with extremely powerful wave-techniques.

      Alignment:
      Good (Chaotic, similar to Goku)

      What they wear:

      Nova wears a primarily blue gi with a grey undershirt. He wears on his hands a set of
      fingerless gloves and on his feet a pair of Saiyan-style white boots with yellow tips. Around his waist he has a belt of beads. Around his ankles he is wearing a set of blue leg-warmers.

    • #35283

      Nova
      Participant

      Name:
      Karot (Nicknamed Nova)

      Race:
      Saiyan

      Age:
      16

      Back-story:

      Karot was a Saiyan warrior living on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. His desire to protect the innocent conflicted heavily with his desire to fight which would make his job as a soldier incredibly difficult at times. This reputation of protecting the very people he is meant to kill made him a very controversial and even disliked figure in Saiyan society due to his tendency to fail missions purely due to his hatred of hurting the weak and innocent.

      Despite being born with a high power-level, Karot’s resistance to killing innocents has given him a low barely janitorial level of respect among his people and has destroyed any chances of friendship that he could have had with the other Saiyans on Planet Vegeta prior to it’s destruction. Due to Karot’s controversial stance on fighting, he remains a loner with no friends with his high born power-level and own talent at fighting being the only reason he was capable of surviving beatings from Saiyans from higher classes.

      It was a few years prior to Planet Vegeta’s destruction that Karot was assigned a solo mission to a Planet known as “Aldaria” which was famous for fighting off entire armies from the Planet Trade Organisation. Of course, this assignment was a suicide mission designed purely to get rid of the troublesome Karot who had caused the failure of multiple missions over the course of his life.

      As it turned out however, Karot’s protection of the innocent and weak was the very thing
      that saved him when he landed on Aldaria. As he was unwilling to kill the Aldarians who had never caused harm to beings with no just cause was the very reason why he had not died the very moment he entered an Aldarian city and the reason why their people came to the decision to take Nova as one of their own. To christen Karot’s new life as a member of the Aldarian race, he was gifted with the Aldarian name of Nova which was the name of an Ancient barbarian warrior who had founded the Aldarian’s dominant government, which is a monarchy-based government.

      Nova spent the next four years of his life on Aldaria, training as a knight in the Aldarian Army after serving as the squire of a Aldarian knight named Mos for one and a half years, becoming one of the fastest squire-to-knight promotions in the history of Aldaria.

      Upon his 16th birthday, Nova heard of the destruction of his home planet, Vegeta and was distraught at the knowledge that his entire people were destroyed. Despite all of their abuse of him and their violent ways, Nova felt the urge to leave his home and seek out survivors of his race. Bidding a farewell to the Aldarian people, Nova set out on a journey across the cosmos to find survivors. He will find survivors, but he will also find threats. Threats that Nova will have to fight to the death.

      As his journey continues, Nova will have to choose between his two sides. The Saiyan within him that seeks challenge no matter the costs? or The Aldarian Knight who seeks to protect the innocent and destroy all evil?

      How he/she/it acts:

      Nova when he still lived among his race, was infamous for his protection of those he deemed innocent or too weak to fight back, to the point that he had caused the failure of multiple planetary jobs by the age of 12 due to his interference with squad mates during missions. Due to this, Nova has alienated himself from the rest of his species and as such is a loner who maintains a stoic disposition when speaking to and dealing with others and avoided speaking to others as often as possible.

      After the betrayal of his race and his rebirth as a Aldarian on Aldaria, Nova was trained by the Aldarian Knight, Mos who instilled in Nova the discipline and work ethic needed to serve as a protector of the people and quickly learned the etiquette of Aldaria’s elites as to become a more charming diplomat. The result is that Nova as of now is a calm-minded and charming leader who emphasises on protecting innocent people. However, at times Nova loses control of himself when faced with extremely powerful challengers and has a tendency of losing sight of his work for the sake of fighting powerful opponents, putting even innocents at risk with his fighting. Nova when faced with powerful fighters would even forget about his surroundings, killing civilians and not even noticing the destruction his selfishness had caused.

      The more powerful Nova grows, the more excited he becomes when faced with powerful fighters and thus the more destructive and selfish he will be and eventually he will no longer be capable of protecting innocents, not with his violent and selfish behaviour.

      Fighting style:
      Preference for close-combat fighting. Uses a mixture of wide-sweeping movements and heavily direct assault attacks. Nova finishes his opponents off with extremely powerful wave-techniques.

      Alignment:
      Good (Chaotic, similar to Goku)

      What they wear:

      Nova wears a primarily blue gi with a grey undershirt. He wears on his hands a set of
      fingerless gloves and on his feet a pair of Saiyan-style white boots with yellow tips. Around his waist he has a belt of beads. Around his ankles he is wearing a set of blue leg-warmers.

  • #35284

    Nova
    Participant

    Woops, sorry there are so many duplicates. I think my internet was causing me to lag and it made copies.

  • #35285

    Phoenix C. Smith
    Participant

    hey was I ever accepted?

  • #35288

    Alex Flore
    Participant

    My discord : Cleric#1848

    Name: Tyler Aoto

    Race: Human

    Age: 15

    Back-story: In the small part of Japan,where the sun rarely shines,lives a simple boy,his name is Tyler Aoto,he is part of The Aoto Fammily,who runs a Dojo,in the village Tsurui,they live a decent life,his father is a student of the known deceased Master Mutaito, and his mother was a foreigner from America,but she died when she gave life to Tyler.He has a brother too,but he works in another city,so he is rarely home.Since he is the only child at home,his father spent time training him,in the arts of ki,he taught him everything he was taught,and because of that Tyler has knowdlege about fighting and ki.When Tyler was little,he enjoyed watching different martial arts tournaments,but that was one special tournament,he was,when he was little,he remebered it was a green man,a person with 3 eyes,and someone with an orange gi,who fought differently from the others,they fought faster than the eye could see,they could fly,and throw beam like energy from their hands,but when Tyler got older,he got an understanding of that art,the art of Ki.His father told him that,the beams were ki,and that every person could do that if they would control the ki inside them.But Tyler wondered if he could do that kind of thing someday,His father knew the desire of his kid,to be stronger,well he had knowdlege about ki,but not that much,since his master was very very old when he was trained,so he tought it’s better for Tyler to learn from someone,who can really teach him.So he said to Tyler if he really wanted to step in that world,the world of Martial Arts,he got the answer he expected,he gave Tyler a orange gi,some money,a katana,and he told him to follow his ambitions,he gaved him a reccomandation of a person,where he can learn more of the art of Ki,he told him about Muten Roshi,he told him where he could find him,and after that,he hugged Tyler and told him to go,and return home when he was satisfied with what he learned.Tyler was very happy,happier than the day he watched that tournament,now he had a chance to become like the fighters that he idolized that much.
    He travelled villages,cities,forest’s,mountain’s,island’s,he had a bad but still very good time ,he managed to go to the location his father told him about,but it was strange,it was only a house in the middle of the ocean,is that Muten Roshi’s house?He tought,well he will find out in Dragon Ball: Universal Warriors!

    Well,i have a request if i get accepted,can Tyler(me)start at Master Roshi?(optiona)

    How he/she/it acts:Tyler is an abitious person,his porpose is that to learn more about this fantastic art,he learned to not trust every person he meets,he thinks the worst case scenario when he meets a person,but when you get to know him,he is a kind hearted boy.When he fight’s someone he won’t use dirty tricks,and he won’t kill,only if he will need to.
    He has a calm temper,and doesn’t get in fights that easy,only if he or his friends are hurt.

    Fighting style: At the moment,close-combat,since he didin’t learned any ki based attacks,but if he learns he maybe will use some of the ki attacks in a battle,but in short,mostly close-combat.
    He is a person who doesn’t have an exact pattern,maybe he will use ki blast,maybe he will fight only with his fist’s,that what saved him in his battles,that and his will of not losing.

    Alignment:Good,since he was little,he didin’t liked bullying,let alone killing someone.

    What they wear:Well,he wears an orange gi,black boots and he has a Katana for weapon.He has brown hair and eyes.

  • #35293

    Im a no one
    Participant

    Name:Celal

    Race:Frost demon (arcosian)

    Age:16

    Back-story: Back in his early days, he was just a test subject, life stock, nothing more, nothing less… he had no family… one day… he just began to fight back, he didnt want to be life stock anymore. He wanted friends, and people to care for him. After that he left to earth… where he met Master Kori. Who thaught him kung-fu and Re:taekwondo

    How he/she/it acts:Doesnt talk much.

    Fighting style:Kung-fu and Re:Taekwondo

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:Demon Clothes. (the outfit kid gohan has)

  • #35294

    Im a no one
    Participant

    Name:Celal

    Race:Frost demon (arcosian)

    Age:16

    Back-story: Back in his early days, he was just a test subject, life stock, nothing more, nothing less… he had no family… one day… he just began to fight back, he didnt want to be life stock anymore. He wanted friends, and people to care for him. After that he left to earth… where he met Master Kori. Who thaught him kung-fu and Re:taekwondo. Yet he thinks he is nothing special and that he is the worst of the worst when it comes to potential.

    How he/she/it acts:Doesnt talk much.

    Fighting style:Kung-fu and Re:Taekwondo

    Alignment:Good

    What they wear:Demon Clothes. (the outfit kid gohan has)

  • #35317

    Lucy
    Participant

    Name: Android #1
    Race: Android
    Age: 18
    Back-story: Android #1 is the first android to be created by Dr. Gero. Her parents abandoned her in a desert when she was little. She was taken in by a old woman who took her to a village. She lived there peacefully for 6 years until a group of thugs attacked and looted the village. She was told by her adoptive grandmother to escape and run away. She was wandering through a wasteland when she was abducted by Gero. He made her into an android and was forced to commit crimes. She though it was wrong she had to do it so she wasn’t killed by Gero. She She has been asleep for 15 years now because she was too powerful. She attacked Gero and mortally wounded him, so he turned her off and is now in cryogenic staysis. She attacked him because she knew what she was doing was not right. After Dr. Gero was defeated she was automatically released and is now attempting to live a normal life. She is trying to learn about human society so she goes to a bar where she meets a woman with blue hair called Bulma. They become friends and see each other on a regular basis. She is asked by Bulma to help her friends fight a creature called Cell. She rejects this as she doesn’t want to fight anymore after her traumatising childhood. Bulma understands and tells her she won’t be around for a while as she will be helping her friends. One year has passed after Cell was defeated and #1 and Bulma are still friends. She was introduced to Krillin, Vegeta, etc. She thought they were a little odd, but enjoyed their company. This would be the first and last time she would talk to them, as after their meeting she decided she wanted to start training, so that what happened to her would never happen again.
    How she acts: Always tries to do the right thing, but has trouble recognising emotions as she hasn’t been alive since she was very young.
    Fighting style: Was never trained in martial arts, so she relies on brute force to hurt her opponents.
    Alignment: Good
    What they wear: She wears clothes she got from her favourite store most of the time.
    Discord: Lucy2010#6546
    If I need anything please tell me what to improve on!

  • #35361

    Alex Flore
    Participant

    Amm,could you tell me if i was accepted or denied?
    Im so eager to play with you guys ! 😀

    • #35396

      DaikoGdo
      Participant

      Hello there, apologies for the extremely late reply, anyways, let’s not stall this any longer, you are accepted!

  • #35393

    Brighton Pellegrin
    Participant

    Name: Zentiun

    Race: Demon

    Age: 457

    Back-story: Zentiun was once a fearful demon who terrorized the world. One day an Unknown figure took him down and he was never seen again. A stone figure of Zentiun was found by Icer in a cave 4 years ago and was freed to terrorize the world again. But this time he was bored, cold, empty. He didn’t know what to do until one day he zapped himself into the void for some alone time. He eventually wanted to try doing some good. He helped everyone that he saw and he fought evil for a change. He eventually met Goku and Co. They didn’t trust him at first but they learned to like him. A while later he eventually left them to face Icer. At first he thought Icer was a villain, but he soon later realized that Icer was good. They eventually became good friends.

    How he/she/it acts: Mysterious, Scary, Somewhat-Friendly.

    Fighting style: Magical.

    Alignment: Somewhat Neutral mostly good.

    What they wear: Nothing.

    P.S: I’m friends with Icer, A.K.A Supersandwich.

    P.P.S: My discord is MasterDragonJX #3820

    • #35395

      DaikoGdo
      Participant

      Hello, so, to start off, a demon applicant, nice! Points for picking that, anyways, about your character, while your backstory is ok grammar wise, your story is barren, we’d like to fix these problems in discord, so that we can elaborate more on what is needed, in a more detailed manner.

  • #35400

    Sir Shinobi
    Participant

    I was never informed on whether I was accepted or not.

    • #35401

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      I am so sorry, we had already planned to accept you. Most of us had forgotten to even reply, once again, I am sorry for making you wait!’

      I can’t seem to contact you on discord, so I’ll just leave mine so you can message me.

      Negative#1695

  • #35408

    Luigi Panfiloiu
    Participant

    My discord:Luigi#3888

    Name:Moebyus

    Race:Human

    Age:13

    Back-story:
    Moebyus was just a normal kid, nothing was really special at him.Only that he was an excellent fighter.Some people use fighting for making money,but he used it just because he liked it.Later, his favourite Martial Arts became the Kickboxing and the Greco-Roman Wrestling.He had a talent from the beginning, and he knew he needed to expand .
    So he searched and searched,until he found just the right person to tell him about a person who could expand it,it was the owner of the Mizaki Aoto,he told him everything he could about Master Roshi,Moebyus was glad that the old man helped him,he asked him if he could do anything to repay him,he told him that he has a son who went to Master Roshi too,.and he asked him if he could protect him,because he was a capable fighter,he agreed and then leaved in the search to Master Roshi,and a bit annoying in the search of Tyler Aoto.

    (I got Cleric’s approval to use those characters)

    How he/she/it acts:Moebyus is an ambitious person, wich acts friendly, but at the same time, he can become gelous to the ones wich surpassed him, making him more ambitious, and giving him more motivation to be better.He may also not be the best in the training, because he is affraid of injuries, but in a fight, he is a lot better than a normal person, because he knows the only thing he is fighting someone, is to win.

    Fighting style:Kickboxing and Greco-Roman Wrestling, he likes to use Close Combat, but at the same time, keep his oponent into his reach, and block all his defensive ways.

    Alignment:Good near to Neutral

    What they wear:A normal blue Gi, with dark boots, he has Brown to Dark hair, and brown eyes

  • #35420

    God’s Flame
    Participant

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  • #35422

    Nic
    Participant

    Name: Chard

    Race: Saiyan

    Age: 23

    Back-story: On Planet Vegeta, very few Saiyans are born with darker skin tones. These “Dark-Skinned Saiyans” Are normally not placed in battles and are mostly chefs and medics, except for a few. Chard is the son of a Dark-Skinned Saiyan by the name of Aikon. Aikon was one of the few Dark-Skinned Saiyans that were fighters. He wanted Chard to become a fighter just like him, and began to train Chard at a young age. Aikon brought Chard on a mission when he was only 14. Chard was brutally injured during that mission and once he fully recovered, he got his first Zenkai boost. After that, Chard never knew how to gain another one, though.

    He was 17 when Planet Vegeta exploded, he just completed a mission when he found out about his planet’s destruction. Chard, Aikon, and the other Saiyans that he was with went rogue and decided to travel the Universe together on their own terms, conquering planets. Chard was the weakest of his group and was constantly belittled by the leader (Arto). While they were busy conquering one planet, Arto indirectly killed Aikon. Chard, engulfed with rage managed to increase his power by tapping into his Saiyan Soul (What Vegeta used against Final Form Frieza), but was still no match for Arto. After the fight, Arto threw Chard into one of their Space Pods and told him to leave before he kills him. Chard just flew in a random direction, filled enraged that he couldn’t avenge his father. Chard landed on Earth and had a thought in his mind. If someone on the planet could best him in combat, then he’ll leave the planet peacefully. If they succeed he’ll attempt to team up with the Earthlings to fight the leader of the group of Saiyans. If not, he’ll attempt to destroy the planet.

    How he/she/it acts: Chard is very arrogant and aggressive. He tends to underestimate anyone who isn’t a Saiyan and doubts their abilities. Chard is very stubborn and attempts to distance himself from people.

    Fighting style: Boxing (Swarmer and Outboxer) Chard tends to attack rapidly once close, but mostly keeps his distance to avoid his opponents attacks. A bad habit of his is expending too much of his energy too quickly.

    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

    What they wear: Saiyan Battle armor with a black bodysuit underneath.

    I’d greatly appreciate it if you could let me know how to improve my character.

    My Discord: NicWest#1516

    • This reply was modified 1 month, 2 weeks ago by  Nic. Reason: Forgot to add my discord. Although, i'm not sure if i give it before or after i know if i'm accepted or denied
  • #35459

    6 Star Ball
    Participant

    Name: (Birth Name: Vacado)

    Race: Half-Saiyan

    Age: 23

    Back-story: He was born on Freeza Planet 4049, his Father, General Onio had been outcasted by the Saiyans after rumors surfaced of his affectionate encounter with a being of another race while off Planet, King Vegeta saw this as a disgrace to the pure lineage and unfitting of a Sayian of his rank and status. Instead of death he was shamed and forced to leave. He left the Planet merely days before it was destroyed and travelled to the last planet his love and been on. For 10 years he searched for her Planet after Planet until on day he stumbled upon a woman with light chocolate skin and crystal purple eyes, and snow white hair accompanied by a small boy with similar features looking about 10 years of age hiding behind her. This woman was not the one he met all those years ago but it was something about that child that peeked his interest! A Saiyan Tail! Onio approached the timmid child but was flung back by a shock wave by the woman, he looked closer and saw a symbol, this woman was apart of the Galactic Patrol. Thats bad news for Onio because of his unruly past as the General of a portion of the Saiyan army responsible for the elimination of multiple planets and races, there is a massive bounty on his head. But Onio didn’t put up a fight and peacefully went into costudy. Days after before being transported to a GP Base he was approached by the same female and was questioned thoroughly. He finds out that this woman isn’t the one he has been searching for, but she is her sister and that her sister spoke of a Saiyan matching his description and that the boy is indeed his. She also informed Onio that her sister died while protecting the child from Freeza’s men on Planet 4049. She decided that she won’t report her capture and lead the 2 to a space pod to get as far away from here as possible, her words were “He lost his mother, he can’t lose his Father too”.

    5 YEAR TIME SKIP

    Vacado, had been living on the move with his father. Not staying in one place too long. The timid child now grew colder because of seeing that everywhere they go they are treated with hostility for their race and the things associated with. The settled on a planet outside of the Freiza Empire and began to live. Vacado was highly intelligent as a young boy thanks to being taught by members of GP so survival was easy for him, but his father Onio grew sick and weak, even if they wanted to move planets they can’t. One day when Vacado was out hunting he was attacked! By an alien girl around his age, the two quickly fell inlove and over time he began to lose the cold heartedness he had aquired. She even asked to meet his father and offered to help care for him. So he brought her to the hut and realized they had a food shortage so he left her to go hunting.
    Something isn’t right, the air is cold and dense, *BOOOM!!!!!!* An explosion came from the direction of the hut. Vacado dashed back only to find a massive hole where his fathers body once laid in the hut, and a cold metallic object slide its way through his back, barely peircing his heart. It was her! The alien girl he fell inlove with, she explained that she works for a Bounty Hunter Organization and she came only for Vacado’s father, she has no reason to kill the boy. Then she vanished, Vacado lost consciousness left to bleed out. A broken, and dying soul, the trauma and the mental scars. He finally closed his eyes and accepted his end…

    6 YEAR TIME SKIP

    Vacado had been resued 5 years ago by Yardratians who was on planet at the time. They nursed him back to health. But when he woke he was a different person. He dedicated the rest of his life becoming more and more powerful in hopes that one day he will find that organization… He has a permanent non-chalant look on his face, always making sure to not get too attached to anything. He is not Evil nor will he be a Knight in shining armor, he only does what neccassary to further his goal.

    PRESENT DAY

    He as arrived on Earth, because of the talk of their being multi powerful beings in that planet. Maybe he’ll make allies, maybe he’ll make enimies, maybe this is where he dies. Either way his story continues.

    How he/she/it acts: Due to the many loses he suffered in his life in such a short span. He is highly intellegent but also he has become indifferent and rarely shows emotion.
    But whenever he does it an explosive but short outburst of power! Only the people he trust the most have seen the warmer side of him.

    Fighting style: Due to the many battles he has been in and the many different warriors he face he developed a Mixed and almost unpredictable fightstyle.

    Alignment: Neutral

    What they wear: Combat Blue jump suit (like Vegeta Jr. And Saiyan Armor, gloves and shoes like vegeta’s, he does wear Gi also.

  • #35725

    Joel Medina Morales
    Participant

    I don´t know if this is still active, but I hope so. Here I leave my character.
    Name: Toeru
    Gender: Male
    Race: Saiyan
    Age: 10 years
    Personality: The personality is normal, it can be serious and fun, but you can not mess with your loved ones, because it explodes in anger (Still can not be transformed into SSJ)
    Aspect: He looks like his father, Turles, in the physical aspect, His skin is like his mother’s, light color, not like his father’s that is dark, Dark hair. And a saiyan armor Aspect
    Fighting Style:He uses a kind of fight almost similar to that of Vegeta. The problem is he does not know any fighting style. Take it for a fight. He feels he looks cool as well. Maybe someone interacts with him to learn a fighting style.
    Alignment:He´s totally good, but can turn a little bit bad.
    Story: Toeru is the son of Turles. In the year 764 Toeru was born having 4 months of birth, at 5 months of age Turles left his house, since he mistreated the mother of Toeru and wanted to conquer planets, passed the time and the Day that someone destroyed the planet Kabocha where they inhabited, before this, Toeru’s mother quickly grasps it and puts it in a space capsule to escape to the earth, this happens in the year 757, in the year 759 Toeru turns 10 Years in the earth 1 year before the arrival of Raditz, its power of fight is of 4,500 goes by the earth exploring until finding someone with whom it becomes strong …
    Toeru is walking through the Garlick Jr Fortress (this one without knowing what the place was defined as Orange Sky) and sees 3 people fighting, a human and 2 greenish-skinned men null. Toeru knew he did not could stay in the place because he would die, but from fear he could not move, suddenly an expulsion of air suspends him through the air, and he reacts and leaves, since then he knew that he had to become strong to be rival with these people. Actually he travels in the time, Having 13 years and a half. He´s looking for a good trainning and a world without bad people.

    Discord: THJGames [Toeru]#3177

  • #35730

    Alex
    Participant

    I am sorry Joel Medina, but we are not accepting anymore Saiyans as we haven’t for a while. Nor Halflings, if you could come up with a different character that isn’t related to the main characters in anyway, that would be great for you to try again.

  • #35735

    DaikoGdo
    Participant

    Also, to add onto this, as a quick warning, we are currently in the Buu saga.

  • #35759

    Joel Medina Morales
    Participant

    Oh no problem. In fact this will be a new challenge for me, since I have not used other races more than the overrated Saiyan or Half-Saiyan. Good. I will change everything in my story. I hope you like it better 😉
    Name: Joeru (My real name in Japanese xD)
    Gender: Male
    Age: 15 years
    Personality: Personality: The personality is normal, it can be serious and fun, but you can not mess with your loved ones, because it explodes in anger (He has a transformation, is the “Kaioken” but it is different, as his eyes turn red and his teeth become pointy. I mean, there’s something inside him.
    Aspect: Normal Aspect
    Demon Aspect
    Race: Human with something inside
    Fighting Style: He uses a kind of fight almost similar to that of Vegeta. The problem is he does not know any fighting style. Take it for a fight. He feels he looks cool as well. Maybe someone interacts with him to learn a fighting style.
    Alignment: He´s totally good, but can turn a little bit bad.
    Backstory: When Joeru was a boy of 12 years and a half. He studied at a school near home. His family was a middle class. They could have money how could they not. One day when Joeru got up to go to his school (any normal day in life) his mother gave him his breakfast, and he went to his school. The hours passed and the school ended, went home and saw that police cars went where he was but at a great speed. Joeru was a little nervous. Suddenly he saw an ambulance go very fast, at that moment everything for Joeru turned in slow motion when he saw that truck. He quickly reacted and ran to his house. He came and sees everything covered in yellow tape. The cops tried to stop him but they could not, he was very fast. Once inside your house. He saw that his 2 parents were lying on the ground with a
    how many bullets in the bodies of the parents. Joeru was shocked. Quickly so that the thing did not worsen the police caught him so that he does not continue to suffer much more … The days went by Joeru was in depression .. (I did not ingest any drugs or drinks, do not worry xD) He was once watching Ghost Rider and saw when Johny calls Nephisto to make a pact. Everything to revive his father. Joeru does the same. He investigates everything possible with the Devil, everything to invoke and revive his parents and return to as it was before … He got it one day at 2:00 am at his house. Just obviously. Summon the Devil. Does not appear. Joeru loses hope but … A hand touches his shoulder. Joeru reacts and says.
    Joeru: WHO ARE YOU ?!
    The devil responds calmly and without any worry or anger.
    Devil: Who am I? You should know … Joeru.
    Joeru shocked, nor did he know what was happening.
    Joeru: Y-You Are you the devil?
    The Devil makes a silent and evil laugh.
    Devil: Huhuhu… CORRECT!
    Joeru: I guess you already know .. Why I called you. Right?
    Devil: Oh yeah … And yeah .. I can help you Joeru. But…
    Joeru: BUT WHAT ?! TELL ME, NOW!
    Devil: I want your soul …
    Joeru impressed.
    Joeru: Ugh …
    Devil: Huh? You do not want? Well, then I’ll g–
    Joeru: NO! I accept … I accept your agreement.
    Devil: Excellent! I guarantee that everything will be as before …
    The Devil makes an evil and silent laugh.
    Joeru wakes up in her bed as if nothing had happened. Slowly descend to the kitchen to see if everything is normal.
    Mom and Joeru are seen.
    Joeru’s Mom: A THIEF! A THIEF!
    Joeru’s dad shows up and tries to hit Joeru
    Joeru runs to the door of his house. And she escapes crying … From that moment Joeru realized that the Devil complied with his deal but … with something else in return … The memory of his parents … And shot … He took the soul of Joeru. But not his memory. (That’s why Joeru recognized his father and mother) Joeru became independent and did everything only from his 14 years … But he had a thirst for revenge towards the one who took everything … The Devil .. So Joeru decided to practice martial arts and to become stronger to go to the kingdom of the demons to finish with the Devil …
    Discord: THJGames[Joeru]#3177

  • #35771

    Joel Medina Morales
    Participant

    I was accepted? I’m anxious 😀

  • #36113

    justin9232
    Participant

    Name: Kolra

    Race: Saiyan

    Age: 23

    Back-story: Born on planet Vegeta, Kolra was raised as a normal saiyan child would be. Once she was only enough to… cry, she was sent out into the vacuum of space towards a planet to go conquer it for Frieza’s empire. She ended up landing on the dreamy shores of planet Maluha, a tropical resort of a planet. A kindly old Maluhan woman took in the crying infant despite knowing she was a Saiyan. Perhaps the old woman thought she could raise the sound Saiyan to be a kind, gentle protector of the people. She thought wrong, within ten years Kolra had destroyed the entire Maluhan government, enslaved the population, and cast the Maluhans into a perpetual state of fear.

    She spent the next four years living off the Maluhan’s “hospitality” until a set of saiyan pods washed up on shore one day. Three saiyans emerged from the pods, all donning armor and fierce grins. They introduced themselves as: Lemogras, Arlic, and Cado. They informed Kolra of her heritage, something she had wondered all her life, and started trying to convince her to join them on their exploits throughout the galaxy. About halfway through their attempt to persuade Kolra, a maluhan boy came out with a tray of what the Maluhan’s call “lausada.” Hungry as is typical of saiyans, the four saiyans devoured tray after trap of the lausada until the visitors decided they wanted to stay on the planet and enjoy the food for awhile.

    The three lived in relative peace for about six years years. They would eat, drink, terrorize the locals, and fight amongst themselves day-in and day-out. They established a clear hierarchy among themselves; Cado was the weakest and so was at the bottom, Lemogras and Kolra tied for the middle, and Arlic stood above them all. He was not a cruel leader though, he seemed to be almost uncommonly kind for a saiyan. He kept the other three from killing each other and made sure to teach the three how to fight, though his lessons were far from painless. Kolra learned a great deal about fighting from the three, probably enough to conquer Maluha three times over if she wished. She found that she was completely untalented with ki blasts. She could manage them but she lacked the natural saiyan aptitude for copying moves. She managed to learn how to make a little disc but stopped there in favor of learning better skills, like how to punch harder, take more hits, and move faster. She also learned how to fly because let’s face it, not even a saiyan can deny the ability to fly is amazing.

    One day the four noticed their meals were beginning to get smaller and smaller, the enraged and hungry saiyans asked “politely” why their slaves were holding back on food. The maluhans informed them that they had hunted the island’s animals to near-extinction and had picked the fields clean of crops. The shore was also bearing less fish due to all the noise the saiyans made. The four took a bit to process the news, and by process I mean they blew half the town up and decided to head off for a new planet in search of more food. News had recently spread about a planet called “Earth” that housed warriors that defeated The Saiyan Prince in battle. The four decided it’d be the perfect place to land, plenty of strong fighters to kill and an easy way to show up The Saiyan Prince. With that, the four entered their pods and headed to Earth.

    How she acts: She’s a typical saiyan; always hungry, itching for a fight, and looking to conquer something or someone. There’s three types of people in Kolra’s world: the people that are strong enough to earn her respect, herself, and the people who are weak enough to be her slaves. She typically shuns anyone weak but shows a bit more of an accepting side towards the strong. She has a strong code of saiyan honor and avoids breaking it at all costs.

    Fighting style: Kolra excels more in close combat. She tried to run around and dodge hits more than she likes blocking. She hates running and typically won’t do it even if her life depends on it.

    Alignment: Lawful Evil

    What they wear: She’s not picky, she’ll wear anything around that fits. That being said, she prefers saiyan attire over foreign clothing and armors.

    • This reply was modified 2 weeks ago by  justin9232.
    • #36117

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Honestly, the app was great and although I’m pretty sure the other staff haven’t read it yet, we are NOT accepting anymore half/saiyans. We’ve got an abundance as it is and they are all bothersome.

      Great app though, I personally like it.

    • #36120

      justin9232
      Participant

      You know, I was almost mad until I read through the other apps and realized the saiyan apps only stopped when you called them off. lol. Anyways, can I talk to someone from the server staff for questions about building my character? My discord id is 𝕿𝖍𝖊 𝕿𝖗𝖆𝖘𝖍 𝕸𝖆𝖓#2177 . I just need someone to ask general questions to so I can write a new character that is interesting to the server and isn’t boring to me. Any help is appreciated.

  • #36200

    Ojanguren1352
    Participant

    Name: Oozak (minecraft user: ojanguren)
    Race: Namekian
    Age: 18yrs old
    Back-story: Oozak was born on old namek and was a young teenager when Frieza first came to Namek. Oozak being from the warrior clan was noted to have an exceptionally high power level close to that of Nail. For this reason he was kept an eye on and taken away privately to be trained by Nail. But when news came later on the Nail had been supposedly killed (no one knew that he fused with piccolo) he decided with rage filling his heart that he would be the one to defeat Frieza, as he searched the planet he would pass one after another after another of destroyed villages with bodies scattering the plains. As Oozak continued to fly onward, he felt the energy and presence of Frieza close by. Suddenly Oozak fell to the floor as fear overtook him as he felt the energy of Frieza. Never had he felt such a powerful presence in his life. He decided to then meditate to calm his mind. As he did this a large explosion could be seen in the distance. This was ssj Goku fighting Frieza. Seeing the tremendous power of the other being who stood up to the tyrant a wave of courage engulfed Oozak, but then the earth around him began to shake, he flew up and went to go help the powerful saiyan only to be suddenly whisked away to earth. Shock and anger came over Oozak as he didn’t know what was going on and that he couldn’t help defeat the tyrant. Months passed and Frieza had been defeated. New Namek was then wished back and so Oozak was sent back to his new home. Years passed as Oozak trained and honed his body in order to be able to face a threat such as Frieza and to protect the ones he loves. This was because of his new found respect for the saiyan Goku and his drive to become as powerful as him. Many years had passed and Oozak was now considered a fighting prodigy being seen as one of their races strongest fighters. Oozak knowing that Namek could only get him so far with training by himself alone decided to leave the planet and travel to earth in order to hone his skills further and become stronger as he heard the saiyan who defeated Frieza had actually grown up and trained there. As he god into his ship a feeling of excitement overtook Oozak as he knew that earth would truly bring him great fortune and power.
    How he/she/it acts: Oozak is quite social for a namekian but still likes to meditate by himself and keep away from the general public. He is very proud of his race and their contributions leading to the defeat of Frieza. Unlike namekians like Piccolo he is actually quite friendly to be around but when the line is crossed he can come out being quite harsh.
    Fighting style: Ki martial artist preferring to keep a balance between ki blasts and short range fighting.
    Alignment: Good
    What they wear: Half torn red gi (Uub’s shirt), white trousers (Mr. Popo’s leggings) and traditional namekian shoes

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