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  • #36405

    JamesCfer
    Participant

    Hay everyone.
    My name is AlexCfer. Currently I have an rp going we just finished the Buu saga. We current;y have 13/25 players and we are hoping to get some more players.

    To join us this is the lay out your character submit must be.

    Name:

    Race:

    Age:

    Back-story:

    How he/she/it acts:

    Fighting style:

    Alignment:

    What they wear:

    Saiyans; The saiyan race, usually uses vegetable puns for names. We currently have 1 full saiyans, but please don’t flood us with low-quality applications. Of course all races will be able to transform, Saiyans have the primarily strongest forms, excluding SSJ3 Vs. Golden. (Hardest to get race)

    Half-Saiyans; The hybrids of saiyans and humans, or possibly other races (who knows?!). Half-Saiyans posses greater potential than a full blooded saiyan does, however most lack the will to fight. Of course just as strong as a Full Saiyan! We have 2 Half-Saiyans. (.1% easier than saiyans!)

    Humans; The most basic race of them all! They are well balanced and keep up with Saiyans in most places! We have 1 human. (Easiest alongside namekian!)

    Namekians; The people of Namek, strong willed and have two types. Dragon clan known for their ability to create dragon balls, and the warrior clan known for their great power. They are very powerful, especially in Ki. We have 1 namekian. (Easy as humans)

    Arcosian (Frost Demon); The people of Freeza’s race. They are generally a cold-hearted species (haha puns). They are very domination focused and tend to be fairly powerful. They are very few in known numbers. We have 1 arcosian. (About 10% Easier than a saiyan is to be).

    Majin (Boo race to be proper), however variants such as the Shadow Demons and such are also here); The Boo race, known for their extreme endurance and the ability to manipulate their shape. They are fast learners, but not generally the most intelligent. They are rather strong fighters. We have 1 Boo/Majin. (They are the same as arcosians in difficulty)

    Shinjin/Core People/Supreme Kai; These are the people coming from the world of the Kai’s. They are rather powerful, and very intelligent. Only 80 can live on a planet at a time. They are born from the golden Kaiju fruit. We currently have one Shinjin (me). (They are similar to Saiyans in difficulty).

    Demon (Dabura); People of the demon realm. Rule by Demon King Dabura, also features a large variety of special powers. They are adept at magic, and are decently powerful. We have 0. (About like Majins and Arcosians).

    Android; as you would expect a human who has been modified to posses unlimited ki. Such as android 18 and 17.(Around the same difficulty as a half saiyan.)

    You can create your own custom race, but you have to go into detail on its strengths and weaknesses.

    Please apply if you’re interested! We will help you if you need help forming your ideas, or fixing issues with yours! Thank you for reading!

    • This topic was modified 1 month ago by  JamesCfer.
  • #36407

    FlamesWrath
    Participant

    Name: Tomatil Revellian
    Gender: Male
    Race: Three quarters Saiyan (So 3/4ths Saiyan, 1/4th Human.) (I’ll use Half Saiyan as the race.)
    Age: 16
    Personality: Hard to bore and fun to be around, he generally tries to keep upbeat and enjoys making others laugh. He loves to fight and also loves to train, but most of all prefers to talk to others.

    General Appearance: He wears a white tracksuit. His eyes are a fire red with his hair being black. He generally likes to wear comfy and easy to use clothing.

    Backstory: Tomatil was born to Akorn and Tomata. Tomata died upon giving birth to Tomatil. This struck Akorn fiercely and he abandonded his child out of pure loathing and hatred. Tomatil was orphaned by a village on Planet Vegeta, essentially becoming a kind of town pet. He was raised with the other kids normally but had no home to go to. After a while however, sleeping on his own in the cold and the rain frustrated the child and he left.

    He wandered across planet Vegeta for almost 6 years, training and eating when he could. However, he’d found himself a space pod just lying out in the middle of the planet. He investigated it and soon sat down in it, bored of his homeworld, he pressed a big red display name that read as “Earth.” His pod whizzed off into outer space and onto his big journey.

    • #36435

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Unless you make a saiyan app that’s literally comparable to Moby Dick, you won’t be excepted because we don’t need anymore saiyans.

    • #36442

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Please add a lot more information and detail. To get in as a saiyan your character app has to be atleast 1000 words.

    • #36443

      FlamesWrath
      Participant

      .

      • This reply was modified 1 month ago by  FlamesWrath.
  • #36419

    KoolaidMan
    Participant

    How do your races like Buu, Android and Demon work? Do you have a side mod that codes in extra races or?

    • This reply was modified 1 month ago by  KoolaidMan.
    • This reply was modified 1 month ago by  KoolaidMan.
    • #36428

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      The player chooses human and we use plugins to modify their stats and other stuff for the race.

    • #36429

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      For buu we make them regen hp fairly quickly. Android have unlimited ki. Demon have access to a custom form.

    • #36431

      KoolaidMan
      Participant

      Interesting, I might check it out in the future

    • #36432

      KoolaidMan
      Participant

      I can’t seem to find your server in the servers list is there an exact name you can give or a link to the mods with an ip?

    • #36433

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      The server is private, which is why it requires you to submit a character sheet for you to join.

  • #36445

    FlamesWrath
    Participant

    Name: Notric Andarin

    Race:Majin

    Age: 35

    Back-story: Notric was formed 35 years ago and was raised by an old farmer who had a child. The child and Notric played together for a long while, however as the child began to age, he soon stopped playing with Notric. Notric got bored of his current abode and flew off to the wilderness. Soon after this, he found himself caught up in a gang of criminals who took him in. In return for him having fun and beating others up across the galaxy as well as a roof over his head, he’d be giving the gang an increased amount of loot and jewels.

    This continued for another 5 years. However, Notric soon grew bored of his lifestyle and found it too easy. He decided to enter a small martial arts tournaments but couldn’t resist the urge he’d gained due to his criminal past. He was DQ’d from the tournament after killing another opponent and had in was almost arrested if he hadn’t killed the people who had tried to arrest him. Notric realized he couldn’t go back to basic villainy, and friendly tournaments aren’t his thing. He set his sights upon destruction, death, and fun in order to fulfill his bloodlust. He soon started to wipe out a small town on a far-off planet. He destroyed and tore it to shreds in a way that pleased him deeply. He was around 23 when he’d started his hunt.

    More villages and cities were destroyed under his foot on the planet, and soon word had gotten out of a deadly majin sowing chaos across his world. People escaped the planet in a hurry, fearing for their lives. Due to this, he’d found there were no more people to kill, only buildings to destroy. Destroying the buildings helped no less with his bloodlust and only fueled his rage.His fury began to grow and intensify over the 4 years he’d spent stuck on this planet. He’d find the occasional poor soul who’d been unable to escape the world, but those numbers lessened and lessened as time went by.

    At his 27th year, he destroyed a building and found an interesting pod that seemed complex to him. He poked it and try to get it to open. He saw a remote to it and pressed a big red button, it turned on the nearby TV. He screamed in rage and threw the remote into the TV. He pulled out a weird looking blue paper and spent the next 8 years studying the blueprint in order to understand how the pod functioned. Then he managed to get it working and opened the pod door. He smiled happily and walked into the pod, ready to continue his crazy, unsustainable bloodlust.

    How he/she/it acts: Primal and angry, yet still sentient and able to think and speak properly.

    Fighting style: Hit it, shoot it or smash it till it dies.

    Alignment: Evil

    What they wear: Saggy trousers, two leather shoes and nothing else.

    • #36458

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      Hello, just gonna write a quick response to help detail where you need to improve, and what not. (Preferably you rewrite your story detailing this information, and not just respond to it like an q&a, thank you in advance!)

      1. Where did your character come from? How were they formed? Any specifics behind their formation, people, anomalies, etc…?

      2. Your character had traveled the galaxies, it seems, however later on he struggled to function a space pod? While it’d be easy to assume that Notric was just on the ship that was used (unless they actually didn’t travel, which would contradict the story itself), what were his specific roles?

      3. While your character does have a criminal past, his “unsustainable bloodlust” does cause me to wonder if there were any background events that caused this to form? I wouldn’t quite believe that being in a gang for a good 5 years would quite cause that. Was there some form of event, or chain of events that drove your character to madness, and eventually to this desire to simply kill?

      4. When he finds the interesting pod, and turns on the nearby TV, he has some form of fit of rage, seemingly without reason. Maybe elaborate on his anger, and maybe more on his past.

      5. While it is certainly an interesting concept to have a character who is just bent on killing, and important question to ask is, “Does this character have any other motives, besides killing?”. Right now, it doesn’t seem like it, but that’s not inherently a bad thing. However it does make it somewhat difficult to keep your character long term, since there is the constant risk of your death, where most likely you’d never be revived. I’d recommend potentially giving some form of goal for your character, beyond just killing. I.E. your character could be trying to become the strongest in existence, and chooses to kill anyone in their way in order to put themselves as the top of the food chain, or something like that.

      6. This isn’t something that is required to be fixed, however it is somewhat a nitpick for me. Your character is rather young for the Majin races. Characters like Buu have been around since time immemorial. This means he’s about as old as the universe itself, if not older (Somehow?). I’m not saying that Notric has to be that old, but it is generally common for the Majin race to be older than this.

      Thanks!

  • #36459

    KoolaidMan
    Participant

    Maybe I’ll think of something to write down for tomorrow as I get out of school early tomorrow and I think I’ll go with Demon as you don’t have any yet, thanks for your time! PS I’m not that creative of a person so it’ll be difficult for me to meet your standards while also making a good story.

    • #36460

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      I’d like to mention that the “updated info” really isn’t up-to-date.

      I’ll give a current numbers for each race.

      Human: 2 active humans, 1 partially active.

      Half-Saiyan: 3

      Saiyans: 3

      Namekians: 1 partially active

      Arcosian: 1 active, 1 partially active

      Majin: 1

      Demons: 1 & 1/2

      Shinjin: 1 inactive

      Regardless, it’ll be interesting to see what you write!

  • #36462

    KoolaidMan
    Participant

    IGN: xKevadox

    Contact: I’d prefer not to use my Discord but if you can would you mind sending a msg with Jins new pm system on the site?

    Name: Zeref Reficul

    Race: Demon

    Age: 3,782

    Story: Growing up in the Demon Realm was easy for me as I would take anything I wanted, if you defied me I would simply dual you. Throughout the years I’ve battled thousands to millions of my kind, I simply have never lost a single battle, most of the Demons who claim to be tough still were no match for me. If I ever were to be outmatched I would either do something dirty to gain the victory or I would outsmart them. I got bored of such weaklings fast so around age 2,087 I decided to challenge the Demon King himself, Dabura, I was actually holding my ground pretty well but he still got the best of me. He recognized my power and promised to give up his throne if I could manage to beat him one day. I would train everyday for the next 1,000 years, but on that day, 1,000 years later around age 3,087, An evil wizard invaded our realm and tried to take over, his underlings were childsplay, Yakon, Puipui, Spopovich, Yamu, were all no match for me, But he managed to tak over Dabura’s mind and curse him with the Majin, I was almost Dabura’s strength but the curse put him far above me, I agreed to take upon the curse too just so I could one day kill Babidi and his underlings, I couldn’t let Dabura go as I would have lost my chance of taking his throne one day if he left forever. Now I work as Babidi’s slave laying waste to anyone who gets in his way, waiting for the perfect opportunity to take him out.

    How he acts: He is a dirty man but you can’t expect much from the Demon Race, He’ll do anything yo get what he wants even if it means to kill, he wishes to take over the Demon Realm.

    Fighting Style: Full of cheap tricks ready to use whenever, doesn’t fight honorably

    Alignment: 100% Pure Evil

    Style: A red jacket (Unzipped), black sleeveless undershirt, Black pants, and black boots

    P.S: like I said, I’m not that good with creating characters so here’s the best I got XD

    • This reply was modified 4 weeks, 1 day ago by  KoolaidMan.
    • #36465

      KoolaidMan
      Participant

      Huh I can’t edit my post, well I’m gonna make a change in reply then

      Style: Basically Alucard’s clothes from Hellsing Ultimate

    • #36467

      KoolaidMan
      Participant

      Does it usually take this long to respond?

    • #36471

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Sorry. It can take up to a day to get a response. We need 3 members to review your character before it can be accepted.

  • #36464

    FlamesWrath
    Participant

    Name: Notric Andarin

    Race:Majin

    Age: 5253

    Back-story: Notric was formed from a dead Majin 5253 years ago. The dead Majin’s body was experimented on by a Demon magician who had escaped from the Demon Realm. The Magician wished to create a Majin who could follow his orders and make his life easier. Due to various mistakes by the Magician and several attacks by various galactic policing firms, Nortic had ended up on a random planet in a pod. The pod was found and the 500-year-old Majin (Who still looked like he was 3) was raised by an old farmer who had a child. The child and Notric played together for a long while, however as the child began to age, he soon stopped playing with Notric. Notric got bored of his current abode and flew off to the wilderness.

    Soon after this, he found himself caught up in a gang of assassins who took him in, they recognized that Majins are extremely good at killing due to their amazing adaptability and gave him several missions to carry out for them on the planet. Due to their small size, Notric never left the planet and as such, never learned how to fly spacecraft. The leader of this gang was, in fact, another Demon who had escaped from the Demon Realm. He’d recognized the Demon magic used upon the Majin and was happy to use him as he wished.

    This continued for another 5100 years. However, Notric soon grew bored of his lifestyle and found it too boring during the time he wasn’t fighting. He decided to enter a small martial arts tournaments under the idea that it was just fighting that he craved but couldn’t resist the urge he’d gained due to his past. He was DQ’d from the tournament after killing another opponent and had in was almost arrested if he hadn’t killed the people who had tried to arrest him. Notric realized he couldn’t go back to his old job, and friendly tournaments aren’t his thing. He set his sights upon destruction, death, and fun in order to fulfill his bloodlust. But another thing arrived to him. Being able to meet strong fighters and beat them down, slay them, destroy them, it made him feel stronger. The strong gave him excitement and slaying the strong gave him more. He knew if he killed enough people it’d help his bloodlust and make strong fighters appear to stop him. He set his sights upon slaying the villages that dotted his little cave he’d made in his free time and killed them.

    More villages and cities were destroyed under his foot on the planet, and soon word had gotten out of a deadly majin sowing chaos across his world. People escaped the planet in a hurry, fearing for their lives. Due to this, he’d found there were no more people to kill, only buildings to destroy. Destroying the buildings helped no less with his bloodlust and only fueled his rage.His fury began to grow and intensify over the 4 years he’d spent stuck on this planet. He’d find the occasional poor soul who’d been unable to escape the world, but those numbers lessened and lessened as time went by.

    At his 5245th year, he destroyed a building and found an interesting pod that seemed complex to him. He poked it and try to get it to open. He saw a remote to it and pressed a big red button, it turned on the nearby TV. He screamed in rage and threw the remote into the TV. He was furious! He thought it was the button for the space pod! He pulled out a weird looking blue paper and spent the next 8 years studying the blueprint in order to understand how the pod functioned. Then he managed to get it working and opened the pod door. He smiled happily and walked into the pod, ready to find the strongest people who could give him his strongest, deepest desire possible. A true, proper and testing fight.

    How he/she/it acts: Primal and angry, yet still sentient and able to think and speak properly.

    Fighting style: Hit it, shoot it or smash it till it dies.

    Alignment: Evil

    What they wear: Saggy trousers, two leather shoes and nothing else.

  • #36496

    KoolaidMan
    Participant

    IGN: xKevadox

    Contact: I’d prefer not to use my Discord but if you can would you mind sending a msg with Jins new pm system on the site?

    Name: Zeref Reficul

    Race: Demon

    Age: 3,782

    Story: When I was young I had a dream, a dream of obtaining power… My parents were weak and I couldn’t stand it, I hated weaklings, one night when they were asleep I ended them, from there I obtained a blood lust and a thirst for power, I would kill anyone who disrespected me or take anything I want, I was only 327 then though, I continued onto a spree and eventually was caught and locked up… Even in prison nothing could stop my blood lust I eventually killed an inmate and after that incident they stopped putting others into my cell, I was in this holding cell for 1,358 years, the guards had to take extreme precautions when giving me food or anything else, on they day of my release I took an advantage when all the guards had let their guard down I struck, everyone in that prison was as good as dead… At this point I was too powerful to be alive and was constantly hunted down, this goes on for the next 736 years until they gave up even sending assassin’s or the guards after me, at this point in my life I was age 2,421 yet my blood lust hasn’t calmed down yet, the only way I stopped is to be defeated… One day Dabura took it upon himself to end me, I was severely outmatched, yet I improved a lot as the fight went on, I got stronger during the battle and ended up still losing… I was almost strong enough to take on half his full power… That day he also personally locked me up because he saw that I was too good and had too much potential to be slaughtered but at the same time was too insane to let freely in the realm anymore. 127 years later and evil wizard known as Babidi came, he pretty much laid waste to the entire demon realm leaving only the strong so he can turn them him into his slaves, I was let out to help stop the wizard but before long Dabura was put under a curse known as “Majin”, and with Dabura under the wizard’s control he helped him hold me down until I too was under the wizard’s control… I swore to myself that one day I would kill the Wizard and Dabura and take the title “Demon King”. We traveled the universe taking in slaves and slaughtering millions from all over the universe. Each one we slaughtered was only power to fuel what the Wizard was stirring up for the universe. We traveled around like this for a total of 1,234 years until we reached the final destination, “E-arth” I think it was called but I may of been pronouncing it wrong. Little did we know this planet actually had the strongest fighters in the universe besides us at least, our only hope to overcome this planet and continue our conquest is to help Babidi revive his creation, even the name of this thing brought chills down the Kai’s spines… If I play my cards right I can get the strongest fighters killed and become the strongest alive myself and then not only ruler of the Demon Realm but ruler of the Universe! but as of now I go by Majin Zeref, my name will make you tremble one day, remember it…

    How he acts: He is a dirty man but you can’t expect much from the Demon Race, He’ll do anything to get what he wants even if it means to kill or trick the opponent.

    Fighting Style: Full of cheap tricks ready to use whenever, doesn’t fight honorably

    Alignment: 100% Pure Evil

    Goals: Wishes to be the ruler of the Demon Realm, Wishes to be the ruler of the Universe, Wants to be the strongest, Wishes to be so terrifying that even his name sends chills down anyone’s spine. Wants to obtain God Status power.

    Style: Alucard’s clothes from Hellsing Ultimate (If not I’ll think of something if I get on the server)

    Weapons: Has poison needs in his arms and legs (Like Frost), has a Demonic blade (Janemba’s sword).

    Techniques: Bloodlust Strike: A red beam that fires through the chest
    Karmic Distribution: Ultimate Attack; A supernova like attack.
    Karmonic Rage: A wave attack.

    P.S: Again not good with these kind of things but I hope this meets your expectations much better than the last!

  • #36529

    DankSpooderBoi
    Participant

    Name: Leith
    Race: Half-saiyan
    Age: 16

    Back-story: Goku wasn’t the first saiyans on earth. Victus was. A butcher on Planet Vegeta with a measly power level of 80, and a black sheep among his kin. Victus was a living contradiction, a pacifistic saiyan. He decided life on Planet Vegeta wasn’t for him.

    He was teased, disrespected and regularly treated with callous.

    That’s why, when Vegeta became dust, he didn’t cry, mourn or weep. He cheered. He had taken a ship to the furthest planet away from galactic council space. A place so backwards and primitive, that no one would be able to find him.

    That didn’t stop Freeza’s forces from trying.

    They had found and chased him. Across galaxies they raced, and for a time, Victus thought he was going to lose. They shot his ship, destroying the thrusters, and causing a collision with his chosen planet, Earth.

    He almost died.

    Almost.
    The near destroyed pod landed by a small village. So far from modern civilisation that the spacecraft was neither heard nor seen. Victus could barely breathe, every breath brought in more pain than the last, and he could barely feel his body.

    The sound of metal being torn stayed him. A beacon of light shone through his pod, and he looked up. The last thing he saw was the face of a woman.
    A very beautiful one if he had a say on the matter.

    It was also the last thing he would see for a while.

    ————————
    He woke up, looking around and wondering what happened. The women appeared and spoke to him. Telling him how she had pulled him out of the wreckage, and nurtured his wounds for months.

    Victus had the social skills of a rock, so all he could do was choke out his gratitude.

    The woman smiled, and that was the start to a beautiful relationship.

    She nurtured him for many more months, he had lost the ability to use an eye, leg and his left arm. He was weakened, but not dead, and that was good enough.

    As she nurtured him, they spoke and he learned about her. Each day they would know a little more, and fall a little more in love.

    It wasn’t too long before he learned he was going to become a father.

    It was the happiest day of his life.

    ————–
    Leith was a happy child, if not a bit too snarky and sarcastic.
    At age seven, he lived a simple, but content life. He didn’t have much, but he had his parents, and that was enough.

    Too bad it wasn’t meant to last.

    It was like any other day, but he had a bad feeling. The son was bright and the grass green, but he couldn’t shake it.

    He ran home, faster than any child had the right to be.

    Leith ran inside his home, and found something that shook him to his core. A bad man was on top of his mother, a bloody knife in hand, searching for something.
    He never found out what.
    The man turned around and ran to stab him, to kill the only witness.
    ——————————–
    He scarcely remembered that day, and did all he could to stop remembering it.

    After his father had come home, he had changed. His father used to be warm, loving and nurturing.

    That man had died with the mother of his child.

    His father started to train him, to hurt and to kill. He also taught Leith about his heritage, and where they came from.

    To say he was shocked would be an understatement.

    For every lesson of the body, he learnt too of the mind. Leith had never been too smart, but two lessons has stuck with him in the entirety of his father’s training.

    ‘Never fight fair.’
    ————————
    Leith was perceptive.

    He noticed the coughing fits his father had, and he noticed his body slowly withering away.

    His last piece of family was dying, and he couldn’t stop it.

    His death was sooner, rather than later.

    His father had one final message, one last dying request.

    ‘Destroy evil wherever you can, however you can.’

    How he/she/it acts: A snarky and sarcastic ass, throwing insults whenever he can. Irritating on multiple levels and unable to shut his mouth. Blunt, and has no tact with dealing with any type of situation.

    Fighting style: Krav maga esque. Very dirty fighting, and will always go for cheap shots.
    Alignment: Chaotic good.

    What they wear: A hoodie, long pants and normal sneakers.

    If i do get accepted, just dm me for the discord name.

    • #36600

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      Sorry, but to be accepted as a saiyan at this point you would need an amazing character. If your dead set on being a saiyan, you need to make it a story. It needs to be close to perfect. I would say go for human or another race.

    • #36602

      DankSpooderBoi
      Participant

      I shall make a better one.

  • #36536

    Fuckin’aDuck
    Participant

    This seems like it would be a fun RP server, but sadly my internet isn’t capable. Mainly because of the limited 15 gigabytes a month we get.

  • #36589

    DankSpooderBoi
    Participant

    You dudes still looking at this thing?

  • #36590

    Who version of DBC???
    and works in non-official minecraft???

    • #36598

      DaikoGdo
      Participant

      Hello! To answer both of your questions, we use the newest version of DBC,JRMC and Family C, and update whenever a new version comes out. Now, about the “Non-official Minecraft Version”, I’m gonna assume you mean a pirated copy of the game, in which case, no, we do not accept those with a pirated account, only those who have actually bought one.

  • #36591

    Name : Julio

    Race : Saiyan

    Age : 9

    Back-Story : Comes from the Universe 6 with your sister to stop Zamasu and Black Goku to kill all the humans.

    How he’s acts : Protect the World , gets angry easy and Love Genki-Damas.

    Fightng Style : like Son Goku.

    Alignment : Very Good

    What They Wear : Black Hoodie , Navy Blue Pants And Headphones.

    • #36595

      JamesCfer
      Participant

      You need way more information. That isn’t a backstory. It isn’t even good enough for a human… Please add more to all of it.

  • #36592

    Please Accept me

  • #36597

    Danny Garcia
    Participant

    What is the minimum word requirement for a human backstory?

    • #36599

      DaikoGdo
      Participant

      The minimum for a human to be considered is a paragraph consisting of at least 4-6 sentences, however, this is just to be considered, to be accepted, you’ll need more than 1 paragraph.

    • #36618

      Danny Garcia
      Participant

      Hm… now to make one or wait for it to begin at the first saga again.

  • #36808

    Tristan
    Participant

    Am I safe to presume that this is still open for application?

  • #36816

    Tristan
    Participant

    Name: Celestia

    Race: Human

    Age: Early twenties

    Personality: Celestia is a very arrogant person in the eyes of strangers, mostly due to her upbringing.Though there is a very kind and caring person below the cold exterior, if anyone would be able to crack that shell of hers.

    Fighting Style: She has a very aggressive fighting style, always seeking to end battles quickly unless it is very clear that she has a distinct advantage over her opposition in which case she will toy around with her opponent.

    Alignment: Neutral – though she is known to side with what would be considered “evil” over what would be considered “good”.

    Backstory: Celestia comes from a time in the very distant future, in this timeline, humans have been growing stronger – eventually building their own empire across the universe. All other races encountered were enslaved. Celestia is the daughter of the emperor, having the second highest status throughout the empire. Born a prodigy, by her late teens she had become the strongest in the empire, having dedicated herself to training and simply becoming more powerful. Eventually her training came to a stop, as there were no more strong opponents that were making appearances for her. So, thanks to Capsule Corporation, she got her hands on a time machine and decided to go back to a time before the empire, when people were much stronger.

    Age 767 – The Cell Games. Her time machine landed on Earth during the battle between Goku and Cell, these new energies around the Earth surprised her. She had heard legends of the saiyans of this era, but was even more amazed to be able to feel their energies. She decided to spend her time here scouting, hiding her energy and simply observing the Z Fighters in their endeavors.

    • #36823

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Alright so not to be mean but uh… PLEASE NO TIME TRAVEL, I myself am having Vietnam flashbacks because someone abused time travel so much. Aside from that though, the app is good but isn’t too special in terms of who you are.

      Please I know this sounds mean but please I encourage you to rewrite it to get that time stuff out, cuz that… is some scary stuff.

  • #36824

    Derek Wood
    Participant

    Name: Artik
    Race: Arcosian (Frost Demon)
    Age: 78
    Backstory: Born from an ancient tomb in a frozen planet reaching degrees below absolute zero, a demon soul entered the ancient tomb, giving life to the ultimate lifeform of all arcosians, Artik. He was guided away from the planet as the tomb launched him at speeds faster than light, landing at a nearby inhabited planet. As Artik grew he discovered his amazing powers by hunting day by day, eventually he discovered the ancient art of ki manipulation and could create many things like lasers and ki waves. As he turned to be 10 an old couple of a different species then Artik took him in. The husband was an legendary father who was said to be able to blow up planets, and the wife was a grand scientist who could invent some of the galaxy’s greatest inventions. Over time as he grew to be 14 he worked with his new father learning ancient combat methods that the saiyan race that one of Artik’s own destroyed, he was stricken in awe as he discovered they had very savage and non skilled fighting skills, and his father told him that at a planet called earth more saiyans lived. He then decided he would conquer over the saiyan race again, this time finished off the job that one of his own couldn’t do.
    20 years later…
    Artik grew into a grand fighter as he left the planet his adoptive parents lived to go explore and begin conquering the galaxy. He trained on his ship learning from his mother how to manipulate and train under extreme conditions of gravity, which he nicknamed “Gravity Training”. As he trained he learned stealthy methods of killing and began training under his own as a master how to become an assassin, as he thought, he would need some money before conquering the galaxy, so he became an assassin as he traveled the galactic area assassinating to make a great deal of money.
    Overtime he grew to the assassin game and had the great idea, instead of taking over the saiyans, he would just kill them off as an assassin. And that is what he trained to do. Eventually learning techniques like the separate forms he had no idea he would be able to achive.
    How he/she/it acts: Artik is confident in himself constantly, brave in situations that would cause him to get his hands dirty, and has a cocky side to him whenever he overpowers a person, leaving him open in the meantime and allowing a clean hit. He will always wish he was able to meet more of his race and strives to kill off the saiyan race.
    Fighting style: Artik has a very Hit like style in fighting minus the timeskip, he tends to use ki blasts in order to pick off his targets and always attempt to flank his opponents by jumping behind and hitting them clear.
    Alignment: To people who Artik is a target to he is evil, to his buyers he is good in there eyes, so you could place him as a neutral type, depending on his mood is when he acts evil or has a heroic style to his act.
    What they wear: Artik wears battle armor in his minimal to first form, then his armor shatters as soon as he ascends to his second to final forms. He also has a black, blue, and cyan color scheme to his natural arcosian colors.
    P.S. Discord is Papa SSuper#6965 if I get accepted, have a nice day and hope i get accepted 🙂

    • #36825

      DaikoGdo
      Participant

      Hello, overrall, this application seems to have potential, but it needs some clarification, like for example, how did his parents know about the saiyans, and why did he start training to be an assassin?
      Other than that, I would just like to let you know that an admin of our server has added you on discord.
      Thank you for your time

  • #36830

    Dominykas Gi
    Participant

    Name: Dominik

    Race: Half-Saiyan

    Age: 14

    Back-story: His father was hurt while fighting against Tufels and he was very hurt then Dominik wanted to have revenge and suddenly he got a huge power boost and fighted against tufles until he was very tired

    How he/she/it acts: He acts very mysterious and is very quiet and doesnt talk a lot of people.

    Fighting style: when fighting he thinks of strategies against the enemy.

    Alignment: Neutral

    What they wear: He wears Bardocks armor.

    • #36840

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Hey so a few things about your app:
      1: we aren’t accepting any more saiyans, including halfies as well.
      2: the back story lacks ALOT of detail about who you are, if you go look at the apps that have been accepted, then you’d see that there is detail and thought put into them.

      I suggest you rewrite yours since we’re not accepting saiyans anymore and it would need to fit your new character.

  • #36841

    Plamen Tsanev
    Participant

    Name: Unknown
    Race: Artificial-Human(Android)
    Age: Psychically 45, Physically 20

    Back – Story: He is a human who got kidnapped and turned into an android by Dr. Gero at the age of 20. His identity is unknown and he lost his memory so he is called Android X. He, like every other android, was programmed to kill Son Goku but because of an error while creating the control module doctor Gero scrapped the idea and left him unfinished. When the laboratory was destroyed by Krillin and Trunks his implemented alarm system was triggered and he woke up before the explosion and escaped. While being on the run he self taught himself a lot of survival tips and eventually removing his bomb and rebuilding his unfinished body-parts expect 1 of his eyes because it was too damaged. From there on he watched and analyzed every single fight that happened up to date. He was training and upgrading his body-parts again and again until he gets the perfect build to kill Son Goku but similar to android 16 he lost his interest in that so he isolated himself on an island and lived and trained there. When the events of the Buu came he was on whole other level than before but decided to see how the events turn out. When he decided to join in and help the Z-fighters, the Earth got destroyed before he could reach the battle field.

    How he acts: He barely got any contact with humans in his life and when he did he was shy and in the same way curious about them.

    Fighting Style: He relies on his unlimited KI to do large blasts which he was training on 70% of the time, the other 30% was muscle training. Being isolated for so long helped him sharp his instincts and his mind which makes him a fast thinker and a good strategist=

    Alignment: he went from evil with the objective to kill Son Goku to good with the soul purpose to help the living beings.

    What he wears: He is usually topless, without shoes, but with black jeans.

  • #36843

    Plamen Tsanev
    Participant

    P.S Discord is Plamen1235#1215 if I get accepted. Thanks for giving me the time

  • #36985

    GodSans
    Participant

    Discord name is Sans#8267
    Sorry for the LONG ASS App. Hope it gets accepted even though I didn’t really follow the format, if I can’t get accepted as LSSJ, I request I get accepted as Saiyan or smthn.

    Character’s Name:
    Bell “Sans” Valentine

    Alignment: Neutral (Can be converted to Good or Bad as the story goes on)

    Affiliations

    Universe: 6

    Titles:

    “Child of Prophecy” ~Rumours

    “Boy of Legends” ~Rumours

    “Saiyan with the power of a million men” ~Space Pirates

    Team: N/A

    Personal Info:

    Age: 15

    Race: Saiyan

    Gender: Male

    Height: 5’8″ (Grows to 6’4″ and up when transformed)

    Weight: 150 lbs

    Hair Color: Onyx Black (Green)

    Eye Color: Onyx Black (Green)

    Skin Color: A bit Tan

    Blood Type: O Positive

    Birth Date: Year ??? 13th of January

    Personality:

    For a Saiyan, Bell, or more commonly referred to as Sans, has had a strange personality, not caring for the so called “Saiyan Pride” of Universe 7, nor caring for the “Saiyan Peace” of Universe 6. For most of his life, he came off overall as a Neutral Individual, not particularly caring for anything or anybody else except for things that will benefit him. For example, friends, he has a special place in his heart for friends, one of his most notable traits being Loyalty, he does not tolerate betraying or being betrayed by former friends. To prevent this, he threatens his acquaintances by saying… “Betray me, and you shall soon repent.” This causes him to lack the presence of any friends, leading him to live a lonely life of solitude and lonesomeness. Not having to care about friends for the time being, he occupies himself with his training, his signature training place being the Vast Mountains on Planet Sadala. To sum it all up, Bell has a caring yet at the same time, non caring nonchalant personality.

    From birth, Bell always had a different side to his character, at some times, he could be seen as a calm and collected individual, and at others, he could be seen as a Raging Meteor ready to hit Sadala, exploding into a ball of flame and destruction. Due to this, many misjudged him to be bipolar, or having Multi Personality Disorder, this however, is not the case. These outbursts were caused by him being born with a very unique yet untapped Power, this power lead him to have an excessively violent and angry personality when triggered, this personality comes out at random, but is most commonly triggered by jealousy, sense of uselessness, or plain out rage. (This is just a side effect from being born LSSJ, and is not an actual transformation yet, will update when Transformation is achieved)

    Super Saiyan Berserker

    During his early childhood, Bell has entered this form but once, appearing as a tall bulky character, his personality takes a drastic change from the norm. He now appears more violent and extremely aggresive to those he has no met before, entering this state puts much pressure on his mental state, pushing him so as far as rendering him incapable of speech, expressing his feelings through facial features. Although being capable of causing much destruction with this form, he only ever entered it to save a life, not meaning to do any actual harm. The form was first accessed when the life of his mother was endangered, a multitude of space pirates having invaded Sadala, they set their sights on his village, right as his Mother was about to be shot down, he transformed.

    Super Saiyan (Controlled) ( Not Yet Obtained )

    Super Saiyan Berserker (Controlled) ( Not Yet Obtained )

    Appearance:

    Like many Saiyans, Sans has beautiful Onyx Black hair, and for some reason, also like many other saiyans, is always sticking upwards. He has tried to fix this weird looking trait on many occasions, but alas, he has yet to succeed. He is at most times seen in either a Gi, a robe, or just normal everyday clothing. He has a very lean build and appears weaker than the average Saiyan. He has onyx black eyes and posseses tender facial features, appearing as though a single punch could make the boy crumble into dust.

    Super Saiyan Berserker

    Having entered this form only once before, during his early child hood, Bell appeared as a tall bulky individual, his bicep weighing more than the average adult Saiyan, it seemed as though he could total a very large building in just a single punch. Whilst in this form, his pupils dissapear completely, and his hair grows greatly, also becoming increasingly spiky. Not to mention the sudden hair growth, it also changes in color, shifting to a light green color, the same going for his eyebrows. This appearance made his mother fear him, now being treated differently as a child, he grew annoyed and sometimes regretted what he did that day, although not remembering any of it.

    Super Saiyan (Controlled) ( Not Yet Obtained )

    Super Saiyan Berserker (Controlled) ( Not Yet Obtained )

    Biography:

    At birth, Bell had an extraordinary high power level, although being born a Low Class, his power level exceeded those above the Elites, and throughout the years, it just kept rising. Originally, his caretakers thought the BP Scanners to be malfunctioning, going out of their way to replace them multiple times, they soon came to learn that their theory was untrue. He later comes to know that he was being raised without an actual Father Figure to look up to or to learn from, this lead to him adapting to a trouble-maker personality, but also growing a great bond and care for his Mother. Growing up, many rumours began spreading around, about a Saiyan from planet Sadala born with power greatly rivalling the best of the best. This power was so high that a famous mobster made a quote, “This boy… This boy has the power of a thousand men- No… More than that… He has the power of a million warriors, theres no doubt about it. ” As he grew to the age of 6, he became more and more aware of these spreading rumours, the rumours spreading quickly around the galaxy, a greedy group of space pirates would soon come to know about this particular piece of information. Once informed of the rumours, the space pirates set out to planet Sadala, looking for a particular boy… Once arriving to the planet, they put their sights on a small rurale village. “Scower the village til’ you find the boy!” Shouted one of the captains, as he did so, the army of space pirates dispersed, destroying building after building, the child grew increasingly worried. He had not trained a day in his life, and now this happens. “It will be fine” Said the mother, tending to her fearful child, she craddled him in her arms, before setting him to bed. Hours have passed, and looking out his window, fire could be seen left and right, all that was left of the village was rubble, the whole entirety of it, ruined. Not so long after, a loud BANG could be hear coming from downstairs. Alarmed, he bursted through the stairs, going to meet his mother. But what he saw, was not his mother, but an army of Space Pirates waiting at his door, all armed. His mother rushed to his aid, as the pirates were about to shoot him down, getting in the trajectory of the bullets, she was soon killed. Dazed, Bell’s vision slowly went blurry, and he began to lose all feeling of what’s what. All he could sense was anger, rage, sadness… Tears dropped down his eyes, as suddenly, all the pirates’s scouters would burst into a ball of sparks and electricity. His power increased exponentionally in such a short amount of time, his power level spiking up near to 50 000, it kept rising. His hair glowed a fine green, and his pupils disappearing from sight. A thick green aura surrounded the boy, and he slowly began to levitate, the force of his power level sending all the pirates to their knee’s, the boy spoke slowly but firmly… “Can you feel it?… My animosity?…” With those words, his power level would now be at 60 000. Multiple spears could be seen forming behind him, each setting their sights on an individual Space Pirate, he would speak one last time. “Repent for your sins…” In an instant, the spears pierced each and everyone of the pirates, all of them falling down to the floor, a sea of blood could be seen protruding from his house, and outwards into the village. His power level began quickly decreasing down to 15 000, his large build returning back to normal, he lay on the ground unconscious, drained. 6 Years had passed, and he was now training daily, he lost all that he cared for, not having a dad or sibling to go to, he simply trained, day in, and day out. Before returning home, he turned vast mountains to rubble. In his mail, he got a letter from an anonymous sender, on it, read these words. ” Power levels are bullshit. ” He chuckled for a bit, before ripping the letter into pieces, throwing the bits into the trash. He now lives his life as any normal being should, training non stop and wandering the universe til their eventual death. (Even though he made full use of the Super Saiyan Berserker form, he passed out near the end, and has no knowledge of it. His only knowledge or hint about him being special being his abnormally high power level.)

    3 Year Time-Skip

    About 3 years had passed since he recovered from the incident, he is now 15 and has matured greatly. He plans on leaving Planet Sadala in the near future, so he could go about exploring the rest of the universe and train with new and exciting people. His first destination is planet Keman, a planet known for having squares that grant wishes. When he arrives there, he will train with multiple slug-like figures, and learn more about their culture. He plans on doing the same for every place he visits. Training with the Kemaniens, he finds himself learning brand new techniques, training his Ki Control and deepening his affinity to meditation, as his life goes on he will become a more spiritually connected individual, as he finds himself more in tune with the universe and life itself. After having trained with the Keman’s, he finds himself able to use Ki seemingly freely, not having to concentrate as the use of Ki now just comes naturally for him. Although now being able to fully utilize Ki, he still has a long way to go, he continues his journeys out in space, and he is amazed at how many cultures he has learned and become apart of so far.

    Power:

    From birth, Bell has abnormally high Power Levels, rivalling those at the Elite Class, he was born with a power level of near 10 000, unlike many other Saiyans, he is rumoured to be a child of Legends, having once taken on an entire army of space pirates on his own, though seemingly without his own knowledge. Growing up, he began developping his powers, growing stronger and stronger as the days went on. As of the age 12, he has shown capability of rendering an entire mountain to dust with a single or a series of punches. Many individuals also note that he grows increasingly stronger when he is angered or annoyed, though this has yet to be proven true, and may just be mistaken for him holding back at most times.

    Unlike most famous martial artists, Bell does not focus on a single style of fighting, instead, he considers himself an all rounder. Training his physical and mental condition fairly equally, he finds himself having an affinity for both his use of Ki and his body as a whole, finding ways to combine them into his fighting style.

    Techniques:

    Flight
    From birth, Bell has had the ability to fly and levitate from the manipulation of his own Ki.

    Ki Blast
    After extensive training and Ki Control, he developped the ability to fire waves and blasts from his palms, these projectiles obliterating almost anything in it’s path.

    Spears of Judgement
    This is his signature move, when used, multiple spears will be conjured, and soon sent into the enemies chest if aimed properly. If deemed Guilty, theses spears deal damage, and if deemed Innocent, the spears will instead grant the individual large amounts of energy.

    Full Power Energy Wave
    This is an enhanced version of Ki Blast, using his full strength, he fires off a large green beam of energy, this energy beam streams on until the user either runs out of energy or the opposing projectile/object overpowers them.

    Transformations

    Super Saiyan Berserker

    Having only used it once during his childhood, not much could be said about this transformation, other than that it resembles the power of a god in terms of strength. He also has no knowledge of this transformation whatsoever, and has yet to access it another time. (Will be able to access on occassion, either naturally or if informed about SSJ)

    Super Saiyan (Controlled) ( Not Yet Obtained )

    Super Saiyan Bersker (Controlled) ( Not Yet Obtained )

    • This reply was modified 1 week ago by  GodSans.
    • #36988

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      Alright so, this is honestly a rare case. Typically all Saiyan applications are denied instantly, however this one is way better than the norm. Just a question we’d like answered, and then something else.

      So, your character is from Universe 6, as stated in the application, but we’re not quite to the point of the multiple universes. We’d like to know either A.How are you getting to Universe 7? or B.What are your plans for this, if you can’t get to U7, how are you going to really join in?

      Besides that, we’re currently discussing the LSSJ/SSJ Berserker situation, we’ll get back to you once we’ve come to a conclusion.

      Thanks for your time!

  • #36992

    GodSans
    Participant

    A. My plans for joining Universe 7 might cause you to be skeptical but basically what happens or WILL happen is this, on another one of my travels, I stumble across a merchant, going by the name of Kit, little do I know, he doubles as a bounty hunter. This bounty hunter has much knowledge about the universe/multiverse, and is very aware of the current situation in Universe 7. Without my knowledge, he overpowers me and sends me to Universe 7, seeing as they need help with their current situation. I have no knowledge of this however, and still think I am in Universe 6, i.e my homeland, or home galaxy. Now I could either use this as a method to getting to Universe 7, or I could just change my Biography saying that I originate from Universe 7, but due to a random mutation lost to time long ago, my biology is different, in the matter that I lack a Saiyan’s iconic tail, and their so called Saiyan Pride.

    B.
    If I can’t get to Universe 7, I could find a way to RP properly, for example, my Character’s deal right now, is getting stronger and gaining more knowledge about the universe, unlike many characters should, he knows well about Space-Travel and is aware about how the universe words, but he is not aware about the existence of other universes, as he thinks another universe might just be HIS universe, but in another galaxy. But again I repeat, he wouldn’t know he’s in another Universe. Now as for joining Universe 7, I could train til I could speak to my G.O.D, requesting knowledge, for example, knowledge of multi-universes, or how to get to them. Then the Angel could probably transport me to Universe 7.

    That’s all I’v got for now, if you could hit me up on discord I could respond sooner btw. Also, on the topic of LSSJ/SSJ Berserker, I believe I could be a good addition to the story if I play my cards right, I know how to RP properly and ofcourse, I won’t start off with the form, or have any knowledge of it. As stated in my backstory, I accessed it once in a dire state, but suffered amnesia, and had no memories while inside the state.

    Thank you for taking the time to read this and my application.

    P.S: If this application seems a little rushed or isn’t good enough and gets denied, (considering i’m applying for LSSJ/SSJ Berserker), I could refine it further so it could be up to par/to your likings. Maybe then it could get accepted?

    • This reply was modified 6 days, 14 hours ago by  GodSans.
    • #36998

      Hirolka
      Participant

      Well we’ve been giving your application the look over, and it’s safe to say that’s really good for sure!

      But some us have been asking “What does Sans bring to the table for our RP”?

      As we are now, our players have fought plenty of battles against tons of enemies, including a couple Legendary Super Saiyans, and we’re gearing up to do Wraith of the Dragon next.

      However your character seems to be a bit out of the loop as is, and some staff have been wondering if it would be fun for you or the others to go through the info dump of explaining everything to you In Character.

      As it stands, your character feels like he might not offer anything unique to the story.

  • #36999

    GodSans
    Participant

    Thank you for taking the time to read my application and praise it.

    Everything you’ve said is probably true, in the sense that it might be boring for other players to explain the whole story to me In Character, and I myself admit it might be boring for them, but not for me.

    As for what my character has to offer, I honestly am at a loss for words right now, the character itself isn’t particularly special, except for the fact that it’s an LSSJ. The Character itself, just wants to train and find out more about the Universe he’s in. I was thinking he’d encounter the main characters, or the main villains, and be converted into whichever side converts him first. Or if that’s not an option, he could just stay neutral, and act as some sort of rival or something. And if none of these options appeal to you, or you can’t think of anything for my character to do, then I don’t know. As for if I will be applying for another character if this one is denied, probably, yes, but I’m not sure. Not many other races appeal to me. Contact me on discord if you want to talk more about this subject.

    Thanks for your time.

  • #37002

    GodSans
    Participant

    I have some idea’s to what I could add to the story, being from an entirely different Universe, if I AM Aware that I traveled from Uni 6 to 7 somehow, I could inform the main characters here about the different Universe, about my home planet, where I came from, etc. And maybe join them if the story takes that turn.

  • #37014

    Hiroki
    Participant

    Name: Hiroki.

    Race: Half-Saiyan ( Female.)

    Age:17.

    How She Acts: Well, As a First-Born Daughter, She is very shy, but, she’s a little angry in some cases, and very attentive, She likes to protect things that she likes, She hates to fight cause she is very ”feminine”.

    Backstory: She was a daughter from a Saiyan and a Human, the meeting of her parents happenend when a saiyan was sent to earth to destroy it, but he actually, stood in earth, when he met Hina, a human who had plans to be a scientist, and find the cure from all diseases, The unknow saiyan had a friendship with that human, that ended with the two married, with one little baby. One day, her parents were killed by a bio-android, in order to become more powerful, when that happened, she was saved by a human, whose name was Kami, he took care of her since she was 10 year old, the year that she solved to run a little farm and live by herself, meanwhile, some ”saiyan resistance” was hunting her, cause they thought that half-saiyans was a disrespect to the warrior race, then all those ” nature fails” deserved to die. When they arrived on her farm, two saiyans tried to kill her in sight, but she managed to kill one with a ”ki blast” , the other saiyan, escaped, and she was feeling a discomfort to be there, so she fled, and started to live with Kami, till the 17 age, now she has to decide what she will do.

    Fighting Style: As a non experienced melee fighter, her combat is very weak, and she can be defeated with a ” fews melee damage” , but in ki, she is very ”strong”, her ki a hidden potential that has been passed by her father, she can cast a few ki blasts, and can support using her energy for a ”very long time”, The results of training with kami had given her a kamehameha skill.

    What she wears: Clothes similar to Chi Chi’s one, and sometimes, a Turtle ”School” gi, similar to Goten’s.

    Her alignment: She is good.

    Her Apparence:

    She has a ”snow white ” hair, merged with black, so its a Very Light Gray.

    She has wine red eyes.

    Her height is 1.55.

    She has a tail. ( and she hates her tail. )

    Well, that’s it!, i really wish that my character is well-built. Sorry for any errors, my native language isn’t english.

    • #37092

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Okay so despite being a female, which for some reason, under the staff team that’s something worth noting but other than that, your saiyan app lacks a lot of detail of who your character is, not to mention we’re not accepting saiyans who don’t write a lot of detail in their backstories and their personalities.

      I suggest changing up your race and stuff because, well there’s not enough detail to really accept you.

    • #37113

      Hiroki
      Participant

      Oh, okay! Thanks for the repply! , i will work on a better application now!

  • #37054

    Daniel
    Participant

    Name:Daniel
    Race:Human
    Age:21
    Back-story: He grew up simply average, If you wanted to describe him to someone, he would be that person who sat behind them in class. His life changed during the buu saga, when majin buu came to west city to destroy it.
    Majin buu would be hovering above west city with his mouth open ready to turn them all into candy. Daniel was shocked at first, so shocked that when his girlfriend Trina tugged on his arm while she was being sucked up into buu he did nothing.The secret was that Daniel wanted something like buu destroying the city to happen for a long time because he really was unhappy with how boring his life was and he was shocked that his wish came true. At the last minute before he was going to be sucked up, he grabbed onto a buildings window edge with litte reason he had and waited for it to be over. He wasn’t thinking about the other innocent people who were eaten, since he was still in his adrenaline rush. When it was over, he stood in a destroyed west city and he was looking up at buu with awestruck eyes. He saw that buu was about to fly away and he knew that he should just let him fly away but something inside him made him yell to buu in the sky.
    “How did you do it?!” He would say extremely curiously. Buu would hear him and come flying down and point at the destroyed west city.
    “Oh this? Buu just did…..why should I tell you this and not just eat you?”.Daniel would start to panic for his life but he weakly handed buu his backpack.Buu would empty it out and find pudding.”This sweet?” Buu would ask Daniel.
    “Um yes please don’t kill me.”
    Buu would taste the pudding and would lay down on the ground and would make a sound of satisfaction. Daniel who saw his chance here asked the question again “How did you do this?”.
    “Buu used his ……Power!” And buu would go back to eating pudding. Daniel who wasn’t feeling very afraid of buu anymore, plopped down next to him.
    Daniel would start having a casual conversation with and would be asking what this power was. Buu would get tired of all the questions and would put his hand to Daniel’s forehead.” Why don’t buu just show you!” and he would start getting knowledge of ki but buu would accidently give Daniel too much knowledge and he would know how to naturally use ki and have whoever fought him before he destroyed the city’s fighting style and he would have a addiction to sweets.
    “Buu go now!” And buu would fly away.
    He would stand in the devestation of west city with a smile on his face.But then Daniel would realize what just happened and he would feel ashamed of himself and how he let all those people die and didn’t try to avenge them against that monster named buu.He flew onto a rooftop with his newly found flight abilities and just sat there for a few days straight. He took a very long nap on the rooftop and woke up to see the city put back together and everyone walking around like everything was cool.He tried to levitate and to make sure it wasn’t all a dream and to his success, he knew it wasn’t.He would have one objective in his mind and that would be to find out how all those people got revived and what happened to the monster named buu.How he/she/it acts: He trys to act the best person he can be but he will often put himself over others. He is very smart and keen to details and since buu gave him the knowledge to naturally use ki, he can now naturally do a technique after he sees it like a majin can. He randomly gets a urge to eat candy every now and then. He is very hotheaded and headstrong and won’t do things except on his own time.
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    What they wear: Earthling clothes

  • #37055

    Daniel
    Participant

    discord:Ethos
    #4362

  • #37062

    Daniel
    Participant

    Name:Daniel
    Race:Human
    Age:21
    Back-story: He grew up simply average, If you wanted to describe him to someone, he would be that person who sat behind them in class. His life changed during the Buu saga when Majin Buu came to the west city to destroy it.
    Majin Buu would be hovering above the west city with his mouth open ready to turn them all into candy. Daniel was shocked at first, so shocked that when his girlfriend Trina tugged on his arm while she was being sucked up into but he did nothing.The secret was that Daniel wanted something like but destroying the city to happen for a long time because he really was unhappy with how boring his life was and he was shocked that his wish came true. At the last minute, before he was going to be sucked up, he grabbed onto a buildings window edge with little reason he had and waited for it to be over. He wasn’t thinking about the other innocent people who were eaten since he was still in his adrenaline rush. When it was over, he stood in a destroyed west city and he was looking up at but with awestruck eyes. He saw that but was about to fly away and he knew that he should just let him fly away but something inside him made him yell to but in the sky.
    “How did you do it?!” He would say extremely curiously. Buu would hear him and come flying down and point at the destroyed west city.
    “Oh, this? Buu just did…..why should I tell you this and not just eat you?”.Daniel would start to panic for his life but he weakly handed but his backpack.Buu would empty it out and find pudding.”This sweet?” Buu would ask Daniel.
    “Um yes please don’t kill me.”
    Buu would taste the pudding and would lay down on the ground and would make a sound of satisfaction. Daniel who saw his chance here asked the question again “How did you do this?”.
    “Buu used his ……Power!” And but would go back to eating pudding. Daniel who wasn’t feeling very afraid of Majin Buu anymore plopped down next to him.
    Daniel would start having a casual conversation with and would be asking what this power was. Buu would get tired of all the questions and would put his hand to Daniel’s forehead.” Why don’t buy just show you!” but would use babidi’s magic and put his own natural knowledge of ki control in Daniel’s head along with the fighting style of whoever fought him before he destroyed the west city. Daniel who had never felt magic before went unconscious for a long time. When he woke up, he felt different and he saw that Majin Buu was gone. He went away to an abandoned warehouse that was 100 miles from east city to train himself because he wanted to keep this ‘different’ feeling and not go back to being weak and unimportant like he was for most of his life by perfecting the fighting style that buu implanted in his head. He started to live in the warehouse and he only went outside of it to pick up food from destroyed grocery stores and books about training his body effectively. But sometime in the middle of his training, he felt kid Buu’s evil energy through his developing ki sense, he was petrified for 2 days and stopped training from all of that evil energy he sensed. He sometimes thought of how the world was over and he would never see another living being again but he put those thoughts out of his head since he thought it was probably going to resolve itself like the cell situation. But then he started to feel depressed because he started to think about his parents when his birthday rolled around and how he wish he had someone to celebrate with.So then he drew a picture of his mom and dad with crayon and duct taped it to a wall and started talking to it.Little did he know that the humans had all been revived by this time and he didn’t bother to check west city for other people. Him talking to the picture of his parents didn’t last long though and he started to get angry at the fact he let Majin but kill all of the people that could talk to him and he was too weak to do anything about it.He marched off into the woods and he started to murder animals and act like a wild animal.Acting crazy soon lost it’s rush to him and he started to just to feel sick.He resolved to just kill himself since the sickness he had from killing animals was going to kill him anyway and he wanted to see people again wherever he went when he died, so he walked to the nearest town and tried to go up the nearest skyscraper. He heard voices when he entered the town but he ignored them and just saw it as more proof he was going crazy.He would walk into a hotel and get on the elevator and would not notice there would be power since he would be focused on getting out of this cursed world.He would be on the roof standing on the rails looking ready to die.Then He would feel a hand grab his shirt from behind.
    “Sir step away from the rails” A cop would say
    “you’re real?HOW?!” He would get in the cop’s face and would be spitting onto the cop’s face and the cop would panic and take him. He would wake up at his parent’s house and he would have a heartfelt reunion with them. He would go into his childhood bathroom and see he had a beard and he curiously lifted his shirt and saw he had abs. He would know then why the cop tased him since he looked an insane homeless man. He would shave and get his credentials in order and would buy an apartment in the west city since he didn’t feel that east was safe anymore and made money by doing gambled fights and arm wrestling. He would wonder who killed buy and how everyone came back alive and he decided to make that a low priority in his eyes since he was alive and now and around people. He eventually got a job at capsule corp since he had a degree in coding and engineering and he found some monks to train his ki with. Overall, His life seemed like it was going pretty well at least for now.Where rp begins for daniel
    he/she/it acts: He trys to act the best person he can be but he will often put himself over others.Example of this is when he let trina die. He is very smart and keen to details.An example of this is when he tried to bargain for his life with his backpack. Sometimes he randomly gets a urge to eat candy every now and then. He is very cocky like he’s above other’s since he isn’t a normie anymore and headstrong and won’t do things except on his own time.
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    What they wear: Earthling clothes

    • This reply was modified 3 days, 21 hours ago by  Daniel.
  • #37064

    Daniel
    Participant

    Name: Daniel
    Race: Human
    Age:21
    Back-story: He grew up simply average, If you wanted to describe him to someone, he would be that person who sat behind them in class. His life changed during the Buu saga when Majin Buu came to the west city to destroy it.
    Majin Buu would be hovering above the west city with his mouth open ready to turn them all into candy. Daniel was shocked at first, so shocked that when his girlfriend Trina tugged on his arm while she was being sucked up into but he did nothing. The secret was that Daniel wanted something like but destroying the city to happen for a long time because he really was unhappy with how boring his life was and he was shocked that his wish came true. At the last minute, before he was going to be sucked up, he grabbed onto a buildings window edge with little reason he had and waited for it to be over. He wasn’t thinking about the other innocent people who were eaten since he was still in his adrenaline rush. When it was over, he stood in a destroyed west city and he was looking up at but with awestruck eyes. He saw that but was about to fly away and he knew that he should just let him fly away but something inside him made him yell to but in the sky.
    “How did you do it?!” He would say extremely curiously. Majin Buu would hear him and come flying down and point at the destroyed west city.
    “Oh, this? Buu just did…..why should I tell you this and not just eat you?”. Daniel would start to panic for his life but he weakly handed but his backpack.Majin Buu would empty it out and find pudding. ”This sweet?” Majin Buu would ask Daniel.
    “Um yes please don’t kill me.”
    Buu would taste the pudding and would lay down on the ground and would make a sound of satisfaction. Daniel who saw his chance here asked the question again “How did you do this?”.
    “Buu used his ……Power!” And but would go back to eating pudding. Daniel who wasn’t feeling very afraid of Majin Buu anymore plopped down next to him.
    Daniel would start having a casual conversation with and would be asking what this power was. Buu would get tired of all the questions and would put his hand to Daniel’s forehead.” Why don’t buy just show you!” but would use babidi’s magic and put his own natural knowledge of Ki control in Daniel’s head along with the fighting style of whoever fought him before he destroyed the west city. Daniel who had never felt magic before went unconscious for a long time. When he woke up, he felt different and he saw that Majin Buu was gone. He went away to an abandoned warehouse that was 100 miles from east city to train himself because he wanted to keep this ‘different’ feeling and not go back to being weak and unimportant like he was for most of his life by perfecting the fighting style that Majin Buu implanted in his head. He started to live in the warehouse and he only went outside of it to pick up food from destroyed grocery stores and books about training his body effectively. But sometime in the middle of his training, he felt kid Buu’s evil energy through his developing Ki sense, he was petrified for 2 days and stopped training from all of that evil energy he sensed. He sometimes thought of how the world was over and he would never see another living being again but he put those thoughts out of his head since he thought it was probably going to resolve itself like the cell situation. But then he started to feel depressed because he started to think about his parents when his birthday rolled around and how he wish he had someone to celebrate with. So then he drew a picture of his mom and dad with crayon and duct taped it to a wall and started talking to it. Little did he know that the humans had all been revived by this time and he didn’t bother to check west city for other people. Him talking to the picture of his parents didn’t last long though and he started to get angry at the fact he let Majin Buu kill all of the people that could talk to him and he was too weak to do anything about it. He marched off into the woods and he started to murder animals and act like a wild animal. Acting crazy soon lost it’s rush to him and he started to just to feel sick. He resolved to just kill himself since the sickness he had from killing animals was going to kill him anyway and he wanted to see people again wherever he went when he died, so he walked to the nearest town and tried to go up the nearest skyscraper. He heard voices when he entered the town but he ignored them and just saw it as more proof he was going crazy. He would walk into a hotel and get on the elevator and would not notice there would be power since he would be focused on getting out of this cursed world. He would be on the roof standing on the rails looking ready to die. Then He would feel a hand grab his shirt from behind.
    “Sir step away from the rails” A cop would say
    “you’re real? HOW?!” He would get in the cop’s face and would be spitting onto the cop’s face and the cop would panic and take him. He would wake up at his parent’s house and he would have a heartfelt reunion with them. He would go into his childhood bathroom and see he had a beard and he curiously lifted his shirt and saw he had abs. He would know then why the cop tazered him since he looked an insane homeless man. He would shave and get his credentials in order and would buy an apartment in the west city since he didn’t feel that east was safe anymore and made money by doing gambled fights and arm wrestling. He would wonder who killed buy and how everyone came back alive and he decided to make that a low priority in his eyes since he was alive and now and around people. He eventually got a job at Capsule Corp since he had a degree in coding and engineering and he found some monks to train his Ki with. Overall, His life seemed like it was going pretty well at least for now. This is Where RP begins for Daniel
    he/she/it acts: He try’s to act the best person he can be but he will often put himself over others. Example of this is when he let Trina die. He is very smart and keen to details. An example of this is when he tried to bargain for his life with his backpack. Sometimes he randomly gets a urge to eat candy every now and then. He is very cocky like he’s above other’s since he isn’t a normal person anymore and headstrong and won’t do things except on his own time.
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    What they wear: Earthling clothes

  • #37075

    maddane3
    Participant

    Name:Retismo (Android 32)

    Race:Android

    Age:27

    Back-story:The story of Android 32 begins with an adult, originally going by the name of Retismo, unfortunately for this guy, he got zapped into a story he wasn’t willing to participate in, a dangerous one at that. Twas’ a smoggy night, roaming around the streets aimlessly, Retismo went late night shopping and club hopping, hoping to finally meet the girl of his dreams while drunk. Little did he know, he met someone who was far from the girl of his dreams…

    Stumbling around an alleyway, a drunk Retismo was met with a strange old man, with a strange glint in his eye… “Oiiii~ Who th- Hiccup Hell- hiccup Are you?…”…. “H-Heh… Hehehe… Hahahaha! You could call me… You’re creator…”…. “My wha-?” Before finishing his sentence, his vision blurred, before eventually darkening completely.

    Upon waking up, the ex-human saw only darkness, not that he had gone blind…he hoped, but it was pitch black. He was lying down on a metal… thing, and upon moving around a little bit, he felt metal on all sides around him. It was like he was in a tiny metal casket. A light turned on, visible through the glass in front of him. It was a computer screen showing… his vitals, something about modules, processors, and the two biggest words on there- Status: Concious

    After what seemed like hours of waiting, Retismo almost passed out again, this time from exhaustion. Then, a light turned on in the distance. He couldn’t quite make out what it was, as he was confined to the pod he was inside of of the metal tube, but he did manage to see a humanoid figure… Probably the guy that kidnapped him. He banged on the pod, yelling to be let out. The stange old guy said something that ret couldn’t hear before flipping a switch, causing everything to go black for Retismo… Unconcious again.

    This time when he woke up, he felt like he didn’t have any arms…or legs… he felt like just a head. “SON OF A BITCH STOLE MY BODY! IF I WASN’T LOCKED IN THIS COFFIN I-” He stopped as he looked down, seeing he still had a body… And it was still fully functional. Really, really weird. He tried to punch through the metal, and he did. Awesome! He was nowhere near being able to do that before!

    He looked around the room, seeing his captor coming down the stairs. He ran over to him, trying to punch him into a wall. His body then froze, and he found himself unable to move or talk. The old man picked him up and shut his eyelids, all while whistling to himself… like this was normal to him.

    When he finally got control of his bod back, he was in a large room, filled with large white tiles. Something came over the microphone. It was the old man. “Hello there, Android 32… this is your first combat test. You are going to learn to control your energy today.” Whatever that meant, he was going to do it, and use it to kill this son of a bitch.

    After several failed attempts and terrible explanations by the doctor, Retismo was starting to lose hope. “Nonono! Not like that! You literally have a generator inside you! Tap into that energy and throw it from your hands!” He yelled through the microphone, slightly irritated. Retismo, or Android 32 did as he was told. This time, however, he managed to actually produce some form of energy blast. He shot the light orange blast at wall, causing some shards to fly off in a decently large explosion.

    “Good job 32!” He hated that name. Reduced to a number like he wasn’t human. Well, technically he wasn’t anymore. But still. “Now move on to melee combat. To utilize your endless energy source, I presume you would want to go for a style that includes keeping opponents at a distance.” The professor explained as a robotic test dummy appeared from the ground, already in a combat-ready stance.

    32 ran towards the robot, which instantly struck at his stomach, causing the android to spit up a bit of blood. He powered through the pain, grabbing the bots arm, trying to throw him to the side. He failed. Miserably. The bot was heavier than he expected, faster too. It threw another punch to 32’s head, which landed. The android was sent flying into a wall, causing some more shards to fly around… He blacked out to the sound of the scientist being dissapointed in him.

    He woke back up in the same room, robot still there. “Terrible. Go again!” This time the robot came at him, sending a punch to his gut. 32 grabbed the punch this time, softening the damage taken. He dodged the second punch to the head, using the momentum to get behind the bot. He tried to use his energy thing, and succeeded, causing both him and the combat bot to go flying. The bot and him jumped off the walls, sending them flying towards each other.

    The bot struck for his face, while 32 went for the chest, energy ball in hand. Both attacks landed, causing 32 to go flying backwards into the wall, and the bot to explode. This time, as he recovered, a two bots came from the floor at once. They both rushed at him, one firing energy at him, the other trying to punch him. 32 jumped upwards to dodge the blasts, jumping off the ceiling towards the blasting one. He was intercepted by the other one, which he grabbed, flipped around him, and continued falling towards the other one. Upon reaching it, he slapped a blast away from him, sending a punch to its gut, throwing it’s body at the other one before firing a full fledged beam of energy at the two, causing them to explode.

    He felt limp, but his limbs locked up as he went unconcious once again… He awoke on a platform, easily 100 feet above a white tile floor. The speaker spoke again. “Ok, now I am going to teach you how to fly… You sense your energy in your core? Use it to coat all around you, and make that energy lift into the air. Simple!” As the mic cut out, 32 was hesitant to step off the platform, as most of his life, that type of fall killed people.

    After a few seconds of mentally preparing himself, he stepped off the platform, and began to fall to the ground. After about 20 feet, his fall began to slow. As he was about to hit the floor, around 90 feet down, he began to hover. He didn’t see it, of course, as his eyes were closed, but he did notice the lack of wind flow. He opened his eyes and began to slowly fly around the testing room. “Well done, 32! Now, it’s time for the next test…” He said, pressing the button to knock the android out… but it didn’t work. “What the?!”

    32 had risen to the bulletproof glass that housed his ‘creator,’ raising a single hand, energy already in his palm. The professor logically jumped from his chair, exiting the observation room and slamming the metal door… Just as 32 fired a beam at the glass. The glass gave after a few seconds, sending shattered glass all across the room. He flew into the room, kicking the door open with ease. He continued down the hallway ahead, blasting and punching through every blast door and guard bot in his way.

    He eventually reached the final door- the exit of the facility. His captor was there, trying to desperatly remember the door’s passcode. 32 charged a blast, aiming it at the scientist, who froze in terror. “Y-you wouldn’t. You don’t have the guts to kill me!” he said, terror in his voice.

    “That’s where you’re partly right, doctor. I don’t have guts. And I don’t plan on killing you. Not directly at least…” He said, raising his hand, aiming instead at the walls around them. He fired a beam at them, and multiple walls in each direction were demolished. The roof began to collapse, and the scientist was crushed first. 32 laughed, raising his hand to blow open an exit for him to escape from. And he would have succeeded, if a collapsed building hadn’t fallen onto his head. He wasn’t killed, he was far too strong and well built for that. Instead, he was knocked unconcious, something that was happening a lot recently, and his memory storage was wiped almost completely…

    He awoke in the rubble, not remembering a thing, except his combat training, and the name Android #32…

    How he/she/it acts:Tends to leave things and people alone, as long as they don’t mess with what he’s doing or plans on doing… And if they’re involved in those plans, he makes them… cooperate

    Personality: Android 32 often comes off as nonchalant, not really caring about the well being of anyone else. He does whatever he decides will be fun, no matter what he has to do to achieve that, or who his acts will affect.

    Fighting style:Fighting style: Retismo, taking full advantage of his trait of Infinite Energy, utilizes his Ki to the fullest, weaponizing it in every way. Due to having unlimited access to Energy, his Ki Blasts are noticeably stronger than most, due to this, he chose to excel in the usage of Ki, and see’s no importance in the use of Fisticuffs. Although showing little to no attention to his physical condition, he still acts as if it is there, training himself everyday so he can stay in shape.

    Alignment:Chaotic Neutral

    What they wear:Retismo is almost always seen wearing a pair of red converse, blue jeans, a Dark Grey Jacket, and a Black Shirt. Unlike most people, this is his only piece of attire, seeing as he is an android, he does not secrete sweat, or any type of chemical that could cause body odor. Retismo appears as an everday Citizen would, his only notable difference being his metal infused body, and his out of the norm speech pattern.

    • #37076

      maddane3
      Participant

      My Discord: Autismo, Lvl117 Communism Wizard#8857

  • #37100

    OTGamer
    Participant

    name is toshi rukawa

    age is 19

    race is half sayian

    has a white hair because of stress and pain and doesn’t have a tail and has red eyes

    back story: born in universe 6 he was hated because he was a hybrid. humans kept punching him and bullying him because he isn’t supposed to exist. his dad was the king of sayian in planed sedela but he was killed by a mysterious person. he lived with his mom for 13 years until that fateful day. majin buu of universe 6 had come to destroy cites in earth. after all the chaos that happened he woke up after a rock hit him. he was the only survivor. he cried after seeing his mother laying in the ground dead. toshi after crying for hours went out for vengeance, and then found a space ship. it was a pod from sayian when they tried to help the earth from getting destroyed. almost all humans have died and he had no choice but to go to the sayian planet. but the sayians were also dead in their planet. toshi walked around the cites of planet sedela. but then… he saw majin buu walking around bloodthirsty. toshi in a moment of anger ran towords majin buu in an attempt to kill him but failed missrebly as buu broke both of his arms. then… a sayian came running and kicked buu stunning him and grabbed toshiro and ran away. that man was the kings student himself. broodal. he healed toshi with a bean that’s like Senzu bean. broodal told toshi to use the pod and escape to another planet. but toshi begged broodal to train him. broodal refuses to train him until toshi tells him he’s a prince. broodal accepts the training but he said it will be harsh. toshi assured that it’s okay as long as he gets strong. the training has begun and he trained for 6 years until he was strong enough. but unfortunately buu found them and killed broodal with one shot. toshi, unable to accept what just happened, became so angry that he became a super sayian. killing buu finally. now toshi had fulfilled his wish he goes to universe 7 with ultimate intent transmission (a strong version of instant transmission from broodal. now he finds himself on earth and promises to destroy it so everyone can suffer his pain

    clothes: any clothes that are black or red or both

    acts calm and smart and patient

    powers : doesn’t use ki prefers using fist but sometimes uses weak ki attacks on weak people and uses ultimate instant transmission

    alignment: evil

    discord: yeet#5713

    I hope this gets accepted because I spended alot of time writing this ;-;

    • This reply was modified 2 days, 2 hours ago by  OTGamer.
    • This reply was modified 2 days, 2 hours ago by  OTGamer. Reason: grammar mistakes forgot to add some stuff
    • #37114

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Denied, were not accepting any saiyans that lack detail. Basically we’re looking for saiyans who can write something equilvant to Moby Dick.

  • #37110

    TheDakotaSpider
    Participant

    Name: Terret

    Race: Half-Saiyan

    Age: 10

    Back-story: Terret was born from a low-class saiyan outcast. His father, Deelus,was seperated from his friends and squadron, due to low numbers on other planets. After trying to go against his superiors orders to be with his faithful allies, Deelus was beaten to near death. Shortly after he was arrested and brought into a healing pod, Deelus escaped using a spare pod, after removing multiple functions that would allow the pod to be traced or controlled. Right before the space pod kicked into space, Deelus passed out from exhaustion (he was only in the healing pod for a matter of minutes).Crash landing on Earth, he awoke from his sleep and stumbled out into a world, unknown to him. He stumbles upon a farm owned by a woman, who-although startled from this bleeding stranger- cared to his wounds, and falling in love. Years go by and the couple have a son on the date of a Solar Eclipse. The first thing the newborn saw was the sky, dyeing his eyes a orange/yellow. They name the baby Terret. Days later, the father brings his son over to where his pod once crash landed. After hearing a strange sound coming from the crater, Deelus hid the baby in an empty tree stump. Moments later, a fight breaks out feet away from where the baby is hiding. From the sound of it, Deelus was no more. A swarm of feet rush past the stump, towards the house. Hours later, a strange figure picks up the baby, sleeping peacefully. The figure- a talking white cat, takes the baby to the house in the sky to the Earth guardian, hoping for the guardian to train the infant.

    How he/she/it acts: Very energetic but can also sleep basically anywhere, likes to push himself and push others past their limits.

    Fighting style: Spiritualist

    Alignment: Good

    What they wear: Red Gi with black pants, no shoes.

    • #37115

      TDS Odyssey
      Participant

      Denied, we’re not accepting any saiyans that lack detail in their backstory. So I suggest writing up a new one with a new race or just trying really really hard for a new saiyan app.

    • #37118

      TheDakotaSpider
      Participant

      What other details are you guys looking for? Or should I just read the saiyan apps tha got approved and learn from there? Really wanting to get on? Been craving a good RP server

  • #37111

    LOL WTF

  • #37121

    TheDakotaSpider
    Participant

    Name: Terret

    Race: Half-Saiyan

    Age: 13

    Back-story: Terret was born from a low-class saiyan outcast. His father, Deelus,was seperated from his friends in the squadron due to low numbers of warriors on other planets. After trying to go against his superiors orders, Deelus was beaten to near death.
    Shortly after, he was arrested and brought into a healing pod. After awaking shortly after being in the healing tank, Deelus broke out of the tank and rushed to the escape pods. Having barely escaped using one of the spare space pods, Deelus removed multiple functions that would allow the pod to be traced or controlled. Right before the space pod launched into outer space, Deelus passed out from exhaustion (he was only in the healing pod for a matter of minutes).
    Crash landing on Earth, he awoke from his sleep and stumbled out into a world, unknown to him. He wanders upon a farm owned by a woman, who – although startled from this bleeding stranger – cared to his wounds, and falling in love. Years go by and the couple have a son on the day of a Solar Eclipse. The first thing the newborn saw was the sky, dyeing his eyes a orange/yellow.
    They name the baby Terret. Days later, the father brings his son over to where his pod once crash landed. After hearing a strange sound coming from the crater, Deelus hid the baby in an empty tree stump. Moments later, a fight breaks out feet away from where the baby is hiding. From the sound of it, Deelus was no more. A swarm of feet rush past the stump, towards the house. Hours later, a strange figure picks up the baby, sleeping peacefully. The figure- a talking white cat, takes the baby to the house in the sky to the Earth guardian, hoping for the guardian to train the infant.
    As the child went through his first years of training, he showed signs of respiritory problems. The guardian, Kami, could not figure out how to fix his breathing problems, no healing medicine worked. To try and work around this barrier, Terret builds up his stamina constantly. Once he turned 8, Terret’s training under Kami became more intense, as of his own request. Terret grew up fast in his harsh training conditions, but Kami loved him like his own and hoped he would grow up to be one of his strongest pupils ever. Although he is pushed through rough conditions in his training, Terret remains a friendly and kind person to those who are good. He wishes to find a rival one day to motivate him even more in becoming one of the strongest. Even though he hopes the day never comes, Kami contacted King Kai in the Otherworld and asked him to train his pupil Terret, when he were to die. After King Kai denied, he watched Terret train, then told Kami he would train him until he was ready to return to the overworld.

    How he/she/it acts: Terret likes to push himself daily to build up his power. However, being very energetic with lung problems, it is too easy for him to over-do himself and drain his energy. He likes fighting alongside his friends, as teamwork is key to take out a superior enemy/threat.

    Fighting style: Martial Artist

    Techniques: Energy Wave – basic green energy wave, uses this ki attack the most
    Negative Buster- Last resort attack, 100% power
    Nano Beam- A quick laser to catch opponents off-guard

    Alignment: Good

    What they wear: Red Gi with black pants and no shoes. Teen Gohan (custom hair preset 6) hair colored a very light cyan. Orange eyes

    I hope this one is better!

    • #37124

      NegativeBoom
      Participant

      Alright so, its been a while since I’ve replied to an application, and I noticed that while you did improve your application, and you’re definitely showing that you want to get in, there’s one major issue.

      This isn’t inherently your fault, but essentially the issue with your application (and pretty much a majority of all half saiyan applications) is that it is pretty much the cliche half-saiyan.

      Parent 1 (Saiyan) comes to earth to either 1. destroy it or 2. flee from others or 3. both?
      Parent 1 meets Parent 2 (earthling)
      They fall in love
      Typically either Parent 1, or both, end up dead.

      This is a general issue for all half-saiyans, and while I understand that it is the most logical way to make a half-saiyan, I think it’d be best to take some creative liberties. Allow yourself to create something more interesting, bring out your creativity. Try to think of a character that can really make a big impact on a story. Of course, try your best to stay within lore, but if you want to stray out of the lore, you can do it, if you do it well.

      Your application, as it is, isn’t a low-quality one. However it doesn’t stand out much. Your character seemingly has nothing special to offer, and is fairly common. Please don’t take this the wrong way, I’d definitely like to see what you can do while giving yourself some liberty to stray from the norm. Also, on a side note, Half-Saiyan doesn’t mean Half-Saiyan and Half-Human, it only specifies one half. You don’t have to be a half-human.

      Your other option is to choose another race, but you don’t have to.
      If you have more questions, just contact me on discord
      Negative#1695

      Thanks for applying, I hope this helped!

  • #37137

    Dannyboom41
    Participant

    Name: Danny

    Race: Human

    Age: About 25

    Back-story: he lived at a Dojo in the middle of a forest somewhere on Earth. he was brought there when he was very young by my parents but then they left without a word. the Dojo is owned by my Grandpa who is an Elite fighter who can match even Mr Satan’s fighting power but of course when the World fighting Tournament came along when i was 10 (ish) i saw fighters who could fly and shoot beams of light out there hands and even the demon king piccolo was bested by someone who is unbelievably strong then at the age of 16 i took off in search of the same kind off fighting ability’s of the warrior named Son Goku and after a 2 years of finding differnt teachers to help me become as strong as Goku i finally found Korins Tower i managed to clime it Somehow and found the Cat named korin who trained me in the art of Ki teaching me all that he can in 5 years time i was far stronger than i had ever been before then i took of in search of Goku the strongest warrior that ive ever seen helping anybody i find on my journey.

    How he acts:He is a Naive individual who pretty much too friendly with other people. no matter what other people have endured in there past He will try to find the Goodness in everybody even if they killed his family or loved ones. he also loves sparing with other People no matter how strong they are even if there god level he will always wants to have a good time fighting.

    Fighting style: mainly uses fists to take out strong fighters. doesn’t use Ki attacks that much likes to get up and close to see if they can match his punches

    Alignment: Good likes to help if able to

    What they wear: has light blue Shirt with White pants and no shoes

    Discord: Dannyboom41#8975

  • #37140

    Dannyboom41
    Participant

    if i were to chose a different name for my character it would be Hiei or something

  • #37142

    TheDakotaSpider
    Participant

    Name: Terret

    Race: Half-Saiyan (Half-Android)

    Age: 13

    Backstory: Terret was born from a low-class saiyan professor. His father, Deelus, was – although not a popular scientist – extremely smart in the field of biotechnology. Having to study through his whole life, Deelus possessed profound knowledge in combining robotics to organic matter. Working up from crickets, chickens, cows, and the most recent- a yardrat, he felt like it was finally time to test his skills on something big. His greatest creation- his son.

    Terret grew up motherless. His mother died during his own birth, due to being unable to respire properly. Never seeing what she looked like, Terret has no memory or thought of his mom. During his first few years of life, Terret isolated himself from his father and training mates, as he felt he had no reason to even socialize with them. Then one day, his father called him down to his workplace.

    It took Deelus a bit to convince Terret to become his science experiment. After Terret struggled to put himself onto the lab table, his father induced him into a medical coma to start the procedure. Once Terret woke up, Deelus brought him through training procedures and protocols. For the next month, the two worked on improving the android tech that needed to be work on. Once Terret started training more, one of his lung compressors started acting up. When Terret got back to the shop, he told his father about his breathing and they got to work right away on a fix.

    Once they engineered the updated lung compressor, Deelus put Terret to sleep so he could start the procedure. Just as he began to work, one of Terrets training mates – who considers androids and anything that’s not a saiyan inferior – broke in the window and shouted ” Android scum! Perish!” just before launching a ki blast at one of the gas canisters keeping Terret asleep. Once the ki blast hit the container, the lab exploded in a fiery mushroom, destroying everything, the attacker and the android upgrade. As others came to the scene, they only found Terret in a pile of rubble, saved only by the android technology his father bestowed him with. For fear that the child would turn evil and exact revenge, they locked him up in a space pod and sent him into outer space, where he would be thought to be killed due to starvation.

    Hurling through space unconscious, Terret had no idea where his fate was leading him. A being on a planet called Earth wakes up from his nap, due to him feeling a very young energy way out space that had incredible potential. The being called Kami, sent his helper – Mr. Popo – into space to retrieve the child so they can train him in hopes of defending the planet. Once he returns, Kami awakens the child to embark him on the journey of his life, unaware of the android technology Terret had in his body.

    As the child went through his first years of training, he showed signs of respiratory issues. Mr. Popo nor Kami could not figure out how to fix Terrets breathing problems. Unaware of the kids other half genetics, they tried numerous healing medicines, all to no avail. Nothing worked. To try and work around this limit, Terrets other training partners started to aid him with training to build his stamina strong. Unknown to kindness, Terret starts coming out of his shell and starts socializing with the others more. Once he turned 8, Terrets training under Kami became more intense, as of his own request.

    Terret grew up fast in his harsh training conditions, but Kami loved him like his own and hoped he would grow up to be one of his strongest pupils ever. Although he is pushed through rough conditions in his training, Terret remains a friendly and kind person to those who are good. He wishes to find a rival one day to motivate him even more in becoming one of the strongest. Even though he hopes the day never comes, Kami contacted King Kai in the Otherworld and asked him to train his pupil Terret, when he were to die. After King Kai denied, he watched Terret train, then told Kami he would train him until he was ready to return to the overworld.

    When Terret turned 12, he awoke in a place he has never seen before. Getting up off the ground, his eyes focused on a familiar silhouette a couple dozen feet away. Terret says quietly “Dad..?” before stepping a few feet closer, exposing his aged father’s face into the light. “How did I get here? How did you get here? I thought you died!” Deelus was bombarded with questions as he smiled, seeing how his son has grown. Deelus kneeled down to his son and explained how he escaped the attack in the lab. “Just before the blast connected, I dropped down an emergency shoot, which led me out the back and I was able to isolate myself from the whole planet. Aren’t you ready to go home son? Aren’t you ready to take out your anger on those who drove us out of our homes?” Just as those words left his father’s mouth, he slowly backed up, getting more and more tense. “You’re not my father.”

    Just as he spoke, Deelus smacked Terret across the floor and he crashes into a wall. “How dare you talk to me like that. After all I’ve done for you, you can’t man up and kill the people who sent us away? You’re 12 now boy, you should be killing by now. I’m sure all your mates at your school are already out in the army. You will do as I say, or I will destroy you. I can make a new son that will obey me.” Terret stands and powers up, prepared to fight for what he thinks is the right choice, regardless of who it is.

    After an extensive and bloody fight, Terret counters a punch from his father, and forms a ki blade, which cuts off Deelus’ main arm. After stumbling back onto his knees, Deelus realizes it is his time, and he needs to die of a clear conscious. “ Terret… I killed your mother.” His eyes start getting fazed.
    “Wh-what?” Terret stuttered while breathing hard.
    “ I killed your mom. No matter how much I tried to convince her, she would not let me edit your DNA to make you what you are today- an android. Come to think of it.. I have been the play of my own downfall… I should of just offed you as well when I killed your mother.” Deelus softly chuckles out.

    After Terrets power seems to start multiplying, his pupils disappear and his aura turns yellowish. Not fully undergoing the transformation, Terret was a False Super Saiyan. Walking up to his father and executing him without another word, Terret reverts back to normal, and desperately tries to contact Kami through his mind. After returning to the lookout, Terret refuses to say anything about his disappearance. His new motive was to protect those who would otherwise suffer under the minds of those who were like his father.

    How he/she/it acts: Terret likes to push himself daily to build up his power. However, being very energetic with lung problems, it is too easy for him to over-do himself and drain his stamina. He likes fighting alongside his friends, or even fusing with them if possible, to take out the enemy. He knows when he can’t beat someone, which only results in him realizing his own limits and what he can and can’t do.

    Fighting style: Martial Artist

    Alignment: Good

    What they wear: Red Gi with black pants and no shoes. Teen Gohan (custom hair preset 6) hair colored a very light cyan. Orange eyes

  • #37145

    Dannyboom41
    Participant

    also i have a question is time travel a thing like someone could make a character that exists in future trunks timeline and come back to say when goku met Raddits but alters that timeline so they nether existed in that timeline

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