April 28, 2018 at 18:14 #40688
I want invite you all to amazing RolePlay Dragon Block C Server.
Theres a lot of fun and amazing characters you can play with.
If you are interested to join please make application.
-Your Character Name.
-Your Character Age.
-Your Character Race. Theres Saiyan, Half-Saiyan, Namekian, Arcorsian, Human, Majin, Android,
Appule, Demon and we are keep adding new. Each race have their own special ability, for
example Majin’s can absorb people.
-How your Character is.
-How your Character looks like.
-Your Character Backstory (minimum 250 words).
-Your Discord Name and ID.
I hope you will join us 🙂
Also we have many custom forms like Ultra Insticnt. (Jin’s mods aren’t edited)
April 28, 2018 at 20:12 #40689
Miguel is a strong woman she enjoys spending time alone she holds honor and loyalty above all else.
Miguel has very light pink hair that falls down her back with a black bow holding it in place. Her eyes are also pink however they are a darker shade Miguel has a range of different types of clothing ranging from battle armor to training clothes always look good and ready for combat or a formal event.
At a young age Miguel was raised in a city apartment building with her mother and father.
Miguel’s father worked at a million dollar company a simple office job he was a simple man with simple needs.
Her Mother was a stay at home mom which spent her time looking after Miguel.
Miguel grew up during the time of Cell being defeated she watched her favorite show which started Hercule her idol she wanted to grow up to be him so at a very young age Miguel trained to become a student of Hercule. When Miguel got to the age of 16 she was strong enough to par take in the World Martial Arts Tournament which she could finally meet her idol the fights she fought in the tournament was long and hard being it only happens once a year and hundreds to thousands of people the first fighter she was up against was tall and slender fast upon his feet Miguel wasn’t as fast as the fighter but she could hold her own barley winning with a power of a hit towards the fighters chin the victory was won with her durability and strength only to move onto the next fight which was even stronger then the last.
Winning her first fight gave her a confidence boost which allowed her to win two more only to lose on the third by a green skinned human like being which she knew nothing about wearing purple clothing some type of alien. Ashamed at her lost and disappointed that she could never see her idol she was forced to continue to watch the tournament which she was so easily taken out by this mysterious fighter. finally that day went to an end and the second half of the tournament would be fought the next day. Miguel walked round the grounds late at night she stood in the ring and began to train punching the air at intense speed with a quick kick only to have the mysterious fighter which took her out of the tournament the fighter approached. Miguel ready herself planting her feet firmly into the ground raising her arms defending her upper body only to have this fighter do nothing expect tell her that there fight was well thought and one day her dreams will come true once he finished the fighter flew away. Miguel was then inspired to train the hardest she could ever until the present day.
April 28, 2018 at 22:14 #40697
April 28, 2018 at 21:46 #40694
Like 8 months.
Majin (Citrus Majin)
Zesty is happy-go-lucky, is honest, is ignorant, is kind of dumb, and really likes to fight!
He’s a light yellow, skinny majin with squinty eyes, two antennae, an orange gi with two Rabbit Style symbols on it, brown pants, and blue-green shoes.
Zesty Pu was created when a citron fruit’s seed that was pooped out by Majin Buu, was hit by Buu’s Love-Love Ray by accident when it missed and ricocheted into a toilet bowl, creating a Citrimajin (Citrus Demon Person), Zesty Pu. Zesty doesn’t know who is parents were, though. When the toilet was flushed, he entered the sewer and explored it. He simply wandered a bit, thinking of a good idea for a laugh until he found a ladder. Curious, he climbed up and out of the sewers. He found Pupu, a living piece of poop who just so happened to know martial arts. He called his style the Rabbit Style for some unexplained reason. They quickly became friends, and Zesty mastered the style. He learned to control his Ki very well and the Lucky Rabbit Ray technique from him, and it became his signature attack! The Lucky Rabbit Ray is a powerful nonlethatal technique that uses Lucky Rabbit Energy to force the enemy back. However, one day Master Pupu died from “Bum Cancer.” Zesty, who was pretty much a child in the world, now roamed the world in search of strength because, after all, he only knew of fighting, and he thought it was really fun!
In his travels he came across two Metamorans named Scar and Zure who were self proclaimed elite members of Froze’s army. Zesty had no clue who “Froze” was, but he knew the two were pretty strong. Zesty, eager to test his fighting skills, fought the duo after Scar said he would take control of the Earth in the name of Lord Froze, easily knocking away Zure, who was the brains of the duo, and having an almost one-sided fight with Scar. Scar was desperate, so he called to Zure to use their hidden technique. Zure told Zesty that he can have a better fight if he gives Scar a second, so Zesty, of course, takes the bait. The two then do some strange kind of posing, and then there’s a flash of light! In their place was a new fighter who called himself Scazure, the Fusion of Scar and Zure! Zesty was able to remember the poses, so he learned Metamoran Fusion. Scazure then had a fair fight until Zesty unleashed his Lucky Rabbit Ray! The Ray easily forced Scazure through a tree in the forest they were fighting in. Scazure then dashed towards Zesty and said he was going to use his ultimate attack, the Twin Star Burst! Scazure flew into the air, completely bewildering Zesty, and then charged at him with a powerful, red and blue aura, but before the move could connect, Scazure defused into Scar and Zure. Zesty was confused, but he beat the two up anyways. Scar sucked up his pride and asked the yellow thing to spare him. Zesty didn’t know what “spare” meant, but he let them go since that Scazure guy was so strong! The two then escaped in an escape pod.
Zesty then stayed in the forest that he fought against Scazure in for four months, just training, wandering about, and appreciating nature. Then, out of nowhere, a huge spaceship appeared. Zesty, who had no clue what it was, decided to look at it curiously. Then a white lizard-looking thing with a bit of blue on him emerged from the ship. The alien was Froze! However, Zesty forgot about the whole “Lord Froze” thing from Scar and Zure. Zesty wanted to become his friend since he seemed so strong and he was lonely. The two were pretty much polar opposites, but they became really good friends that would stick up for each other when the time comes.
Pierce The Redstoner
EXTRA STUFF: He knows temporary absorption, the Mind Control Technique (the user forces Ki from their own head into another person’s head through the ears and controls them by sending signals to the target’s brain), and the Lucky Rabbit Ray. After long periods of time he becomes an evil, white version of himself who is addicted to absorbing people. He is called “Zesty Blanco” or Blanco for short. Also, Zesty literally does not have a brain. He can somehow think through magic.
- This reply was modified 4 months, 4 weeks ago by Zesty-Pu. Reason: I forgot to say he was honest XD
April 28, 2018 at 21:59 #40696
So am I accepted? XD
April 28, 2018 at 23:35 #40701
Personality:calm and sometimes hot headed
Apperance:Red hair that looks emo and a brown tail
April 28, 2018 at 23:49 #40704
make it better
April 28, 2018 at 23:42 #40702
Smart, informed, serious but can crack a few jokes sometimes.
White, with blue spots
Froze is the son of Cooler, Was trained by him and given two metamorans. Has first mission was to inslave a planet called Sadala. He completed his mission and enslaved the inhabitants. Cooler’s brother frieza hated him, so he started a war with him. During the heat of the war Froze freed the people, He inslaved and freed them. He ran to a emergency space pod.
During his time in space, he saw stars die and made. planets destoryed and found. He started to land on earth and he saw two other space pods.
After emerging from his space pod. He met a yellow person named Zesty, and quickly became friends with him even though they are polar opposites. He doesn’t know where his two metamorans are, and hasn’t found them.
EXTRA STUFF: Knows 5th form but can’t control it
April 28, 2018 at 23:48 #40703
April 29, 2018 at 04:39 #40710
Smart,Care Free,Tries To Avoid Fights As Much As Possible And Get’s Serious If The Time Ever Calls For It
Blue Skin Tone, White Long Hair, Halo Is Wrapped His Hair Which Puts It Into A Pony Tail, Mainly Wears Clothing With Black As It’s Primary Color And White As Secondary, Body Type Is That Of Whis, Looks Very Young
Yin is a the son of Whis, He was trained by him and after Whis believed the time was right for him he sent him off to Earth. He was also given a mission to project the Earth,The Galaxy, and it’s Universe from threats that are to strong for any mortals to handle. He was always been able to beat the threat has appeared but he realizes he can’t continue to do it alone. So he sets out on a journey to find people to train to be able to protect this Universe with him.
During his journey he managed to find two Organisms that had quite a lot of potential. From that point forward Yin was looking over them until the time they would eventually grow strong enough to be taught by him.
EXTRA STUFF: Most of the angels hate him for being so weak
April 29, 2018 at 10:44 #40715
ugh theres no that race yet
but for now lets say Accepted
April 29, 2018 at 04:56 #40711
Name:Jason “Snow” Tiaken
Personality: He’s nice and a bit shy. He does not focus on fighting just like most Half-Saiyans. He rather focuses on his booming singing career, but will fight if he needs to.
Appearance: He is black, has brown eyes, and has gray and black clothes.
Backstory: His shy mother was a human that fell in love with a Saiyan that was a bit of a punk one day when he started to flirt with her out of the blue. They never officially married, but they had a kid, Jason. Their mother wanted him to be named Jason Tiaken, a human name, but his father wanted to name him Snow, a Saiyan name. They decided to call him both, but his father usually wasn’t around since he was always training. Then when he was only three years old, their father left to try to kill the person who was taking control of his home planet, Sadala. He, however, never saw or heard from their father again. He never learned that he was killed by the Metamoran, Scar. Even more sad, in four years his mother died from the Heart Virus. He was then orphaned and soon adopted by a single mother.
Jason always missed his mom, but did not remember his dad, so he resented his new mother. However, the seven year old Saiyan never showed it and instead decided to care for her. He became quite attached to her, and when she married, his new, caring father started to teach him martial arts. He was pretty weak until one day when he was 14 years old, he released a bit of a strange energy. This energy, he found out, was Ki. He decided to use his “Ki” to his advantage in fights. One day he even knocked his dad out cold, which angered his mother a bit, but they forgave him. He was told by his adopted parents after the incident that he was actually the son of a member of a powerful alien race called the Saiyans. He was shocked by this, understandably, and wondered what his dad was like. When he was 17, he started a band with a few friends from his school and they became a town known hit, so instead of training, he focused his time on becoming a better musician. He was also a very good student with mostly straight A’s.
- This reply was modified 4 months, 4 weeks ago by cadynbadboy.
April 29, 2018 at 10:44 #40716
April 30, 2018 at 08:15 #40727
-ace has split personality due to trauma.
but most times hes very nice and always cares for the anials he sees, he often stares off into space remembering his future and zones far out of reality.
-light blue hair wide eyes.
-erin an interdimensional time traveler from the time force sigma, he was sent back in time as a punishment and his own protection for abandoning his post, the high time elders saw a great destiny for him and a dark fate that would come upon them shortly, so in n attempt to save the future, they sent him back in time but ddnt tell him about his mission because they knew he wouldn’t want to leave if they told him the truth, so instead they “banished” him…just before he was sent back, there was an attack on his base and he experienced all his friends and loved ones die in a firey infero he swore to himself that he will continue to train and get even stronger so that when that time comes again he will be strong enough and ready to protect his people, nothing will stand in his way. At times he snaps out of reality and his persona changes completely to something tandom, this is caused by his trauma inflicted from losing his future, it was in that moment he achieved his supersaiyan form, he however doesn’t know how to access it…he lives on in todays society fighting gathering allies getting stronger in preparation for his past future…
- This reply was modified 4 months, 4 weeks ago by aKuMaXDA.
April 30, 2018 at 12:03 #40729
April 30, 2018 at 14:56 #40730
April 30, 2018 at 15:38 #40733
Can i Be an enemy?
April 30, 2018 at 19:28 #40738
yeah, make your “enemy” app xd
May 1, 2018 at 22:40 #40778
Personality:calm and sometimes hot headed
Apperance:Red hair that looks emo and a brown tail
Backstory:In the future Goten and Valese got married and produced a child together. At a young age the child saw what power his
grandpa possed and was inspired to become as strong as him. One night the child asked his father what was
grandpa like which the responses was unexpected for it was that grandpa was a teacher like the childs uncle,
the father then carried on by saying his level of power was among the level of Gods which he then told about the time
he onced saved the world the child looked at his father with a certain look upon his eyes thinking of how great his
father is. A few years later the child began to look for a man known as trunks to ask for his aid to assit in the boys training to become
just like his father however Trunks couldnt train the boy for Trunks was working with the Time Patrol so the boy
looked for Trunks father Vegeta which Vegeta did accept the boy and began training him which he taught
the boy a move know as galic gun which was learned rather easily for the child for this child was part saiyan
he was taught by Vegeta in the way of a true Saiyan warrior which was honor strengh and bravory the child
learnt very quickly for his potential was shown in every stage of his training for each new height the boy achieved
Vegeta would bring a even higher height for the boy to unlock which soon molded the boy to the man he is today
a brave noble warrior of Saiyan background.
May 1, 2018 at 22:43 #40779
i guess i shall accept this xd
May 2, 2018 at 01:31 #40781
May 2, 2018 at 09:15 #40786
May 2, 2018 at 12:58 #40790
Half-Saiyan (50% Saiyan, 25% Human, 25% Demon)
Caine is Serious, Disciplined, and well trained in Survival Tactics. But he has an eminence angry deep inside.
Short Charcoal/Black Hair, Crimson Eyes, and Pale Skin. Energy Color: White
Once there was a Saiyan by the name of Bishop. He was a Brave and Mighty Saiyan Warrior. He was known for his many triumphs on the Battle Field. But much like many warriors of his stature it wasn’t long till he found the one person he couldn’t kill. And her name was Valari. She was from a small village in the Mountain on the Planet Earth. They fell in love right way and a couple years down the road they even had a Child named Caine. All his life Caine was a small boy. All he ever wanted in life was to be like his father.. A Great an Mighty Warrior! As soon as he reached an age of 6 yrs old his Father final agreed to train him. So for the next 9 yrs they trained to hone Caines skills in Survival, Combat, Tactics, and Ki Manipulation/Concentration. But on the day of Caine’s 15th birthday. His father Bishop was called upon for a mission. An on that day Caine’s life changed forever. As Bishop was ordered to kill Valari and her Evil Spawn.
The day after Caine’s Birthday his father came home to say good. As he was force to ignore his orders and kill the men who issued the Original Kill Order. Bishop refused to kill his love and his own child. It was on that day Bishop learned the dark truth of his Love. Valari wasn’t infact a human. She was Half-Human Half-Demon. Bishop was devastated by the truth of the fact. He choose not to tell his son as He feared what destruction a child of Saiyan and Demon Lineage could/would cause. He decided the less his Caine knew the better. And after learning that knowledge Bishop left his Son and Wife forever. 3 yrs later on the day of Caine’s 18th birthday his mother told him the truth. As she was tired of all the lies. Caine wanted to believe she was lying to him. But he knew all along. He could always feel an Deep Anger inside him. Thirsting for bloodshed. Trying to drive him into darkness. He feared it. He was ashamed of it. Ashamed of himself. On that day he made up his mind.. He was gonna get stronger. He was going to come that power before it would control him. And then 2 yrs down the road it happened. He lost control. His mother died and he went into a Beserkish Rage. As his hair began to flow up into spikes and glow golden. He was lost.. He had no control nor did he want control. All he cared about was destruction. All he wanted was to make people pay for abandoning his mother during her time of need. 5 days later he woke up washed up on a beach 5 miles outside of his home village. As he ventured back home he was shocked to find that the mountain that his home village was on had disappeared. And all that remained was a massive crater. It was nearly 5 months later when he finally figure it out. That he destroyed his own village.
He was his own worst kind of Monster. As he had no memory of the bloodshed he caused. He feared that he would do so again. Therefore he Started training even harder for the Next 6 yrs till he could hold off these strange Transformations he would go through.
Too this day he fears that if he’s not concentrating enough he could kill those closest to him. Therefore he has chosen to stir clear of other people so he can never get close to anyone. And hurt anyone ever again.
May 2, 2018 at 18:13 #40795
Name: Potota (potato pun)
has to personalities: the good one: playfull like to tell jokes and make fun of people until they punch him
and the bad one: the worst side of him which is the ooposite of him, likes to hurt people enjoys torturing them. when he comes back he is very sorry about what he did but usually no one is around to see it.(will be explained in the backstory).
Apperance: wears a normal saiyan battle armor has the normal black hair.
Potota was born on planet vegeta before it exploded. as a baby it had a big power level of 5000 wich was an extraordinary PL. when he was 2 and rumors of frieza coming to destroy the planet his father paragos (the father of broly) sent both him and his younger brother broly to space.
when he crash landed on a planet in the galaxy a few people attacked and tortured him untill he got crazy, and then suddenly he transformed into the legendary super saiyan. when he came back to senses the whole planet was destroyed. since then he has been traumatized and had a second personality. him being lonely only made it worse. the major personality when he is a normal person is mostly in control but when someone is hurting him or just at random oocasions when he remembers his father he can switch personality to the second ruthless one. after a few years on space he encountered frieza force soldiers and gone mad. this time he didnt go back to his normal self and he is going around the universe in his second personality. if someone pushes him off he transforms into the legendery super saiyan and destroys the planet. he then went to earth and the rest will be RP.
P.S if super saiyan still isn’t a thing i could start with out it.
amit #1607 .
May 2, 2018 at 18:16 #40796
but as you said, i wont give you ssj on start xd
May 2, 2018 at 18:40 #40797
Personality: Serious and raged sometimes , other he is pretty funny
Apperance: Turtle Hermit Gi with King Kai Symbol (Same as goku) , Light Blue and Cyan , brown hair (Hair Style of Teen Gohan) And a Brown Tail
Backstory: Julio is a half saiyan from the future and other dimension, Son of Goku, He lives as a time patroller, He sometimes can be evil, other, good, He wants the death of Arcorsians, like Frieza, He is friendly, He have SSJ and Kaioken (my max is kaioken x20), He trained like 16 years to get SSJ, He already died (1 Single time :P), He hates the Giant Monk- I mean Great Ape form, He is a Brave Hearted Hero, sometimes, Black Hearted Evil. His family is : Son Goku, Chi-chi, Goten and Gohan.
He needs master the SSJ form. If you want, he accepts friends. He lived on Planet Vegeta, he destroyed at least 3 planets with powerfull attacks, His Techniques are : Flight, Kamehameha, Galick Gun, Solar Flare, Kaio-Ken x1 – x20, SSJ, High Speed Rush and Zenkai Boost.
He tries break his limits every day, He wants destroy everyone that kills / hurts your familly and friends.
His favorite food is : Dinnosaur Meat.
Friends : Only Prince Vegetable And “Julio’s” familly.
Z Soul : “You’ll Pay For That!!!”
Alignment : Good / Evil (Neutral)
Discord:Julio The Time Patroller#1940
Extra Stuff : Android is better than Apple (For Me)
May 2, 2018 at 18:42 #40798
May 2, 2018 at 18:43 #40799
May 3, 2018 at 01:54 #40802
I do not want to know about roleplay AAAAHH !!
May 5, 2018 at 00:40 #40835
May 3, 2018 at 06:48 #40804
Name: Victor Sloan
Race: Half Saiyan
Personality: Brave and Determined
Appearance: Blue Hoodie with Black shirt underneath, Black Pants, Sneakers, Brown Hair and Blue Eye.
Backstory: Born from a Saiyan who escaped Planet Vegeta and made his way to Earth. His Saiyan Father’s name is Kabocha and he lived among the Humans. His Father met a Woman named Veronica and they Married soon after. 3 years later Victor was born and lived a normal life til he was 17 and left over Frieza Force members came down to try and kill his Father to get rid of the Saiyans on Earth. When they burst into the house and Victor was the only one there they tried to kill him. His Father rushed inside and attacked the Frieza soldiers getting their attention and Victor ran outside to his Mother. His Father was thrown outside against the car bloody and battered and his Mother told him to run as she tried to get his Father up. He ran not looking back as he heard the screams of his parents as the Frieza soldiers finished them off and went after him. He quickly made his way to Satan City and accidentally got the Frieza Soldiers to attack the city and Gohan as Great Saiyaman showed up to take them down. Victor ran into Videl as Great Saiyawoman and told her what happened to his parents. He started crying and Videl comforted him and promised him that he can stay here in Satan City and will be protected. He thanked her and she got her dad to get him some Zeni to start off with and an Apartment to live in. He now lives in said Apartment and has become good friends with Gohan and the rest of the Z Fighters. He has also started training with Goku and Piccolo so nothing like what happened to his Parents will happen again.
Discord: Nora (Dallaslaser5)#8400
June 5, 2018 at 21:21 #41528
Heya everyone! Just wanted to say that I’m a helper on the server now, so I’ll be able to approve and deny character applications! Also, the rp has been paused for a few weeks, so I’m sorry about that. One last thing, try to make your character original. Don’t just make a Saiyan that’s somehow related to one of the main characters that is serious and generic (I see a lot of those). Zesty out!
June 6, 2018 at 00:47 #41530
Name: Bastian, Eidorian
Personality: Is a good person with a pure heart, with a little malice like that of any normal person, sometimes it is kind of inconvenient and makes jokes in unnecessary moments.
Apperance: Blue eyes, Green hair like Gohan Adult’s hair, possesses a tail of normal color like any pure saiyajin: “Goku Super Gi Chest” “Black Goku Pants” “Goku Super Gi Boots” “BodySuit 5#(Color: Gray)”
Backstory: A child who one day saw the Z warriors fighting, after that fight view began to train martial arts, but did not develop KI, even training for almost all of his childhood until he was 11, after noting that he could not develop KI, gave up trying , until he found that he accidentally found “DRAGON’S SPHERES”, as he studied Z Warriors very much knowing that Goku and Vegeta were Saiyan’s and about everything that happened, he also knew how to summon Shenlong, after Summoning, asked to be a Saiyan , and managed to, with this managed to dominate KI, had to give a good explanation to his mother and father, saying having to travel with his group of friends, when in fact went to train for a year.
Discord: SrTigraoBRSL #3131
I’m Brazilian but I loved the idea, please let me play?
June 6, 2018 at 19:18 #41537
Personality: Dio is sadistic, calm, ruthless and agressive. He is also very smart and strong. He will do anything to achieve his goals. He mostly is like this because of his bad past.
Appearance: Blonde hair and red eyes. Hes tall and pretty buff.
Backstory: Dio is the kid of a Half Saiyan dad and a Human mom and was born being very powerful. His dad didnt like his power and didnt like his son. He treated him like shit and one day when he was 5 years old, he went into a rage and accidentally killed his mom. Ever since that day, his dad hated him, treated him even worse and tried to kill him multiple times. One day, when he was 8 years old, his dad realised his mistakes. He apologised to Dio for everything he did. Then out of nowhere, he stabbed Dio with a sword. He wasnt apologising at all, he wanted to kill him again. Dio was furious, became a super saiyan, and after a long fight he killed his dad, but his memories got erased during the fight.
He then got adopted by a man called Dan Speed. He was poor and lived in poverty, and Dan only drank alcohol and beat his wife and Dio up when he was home. Dio was 9 years old at the time and 10 years later, his dad was horribly sick and his other mom had passed away. The reason why his dad died was because Dio fed him poison and he got sick. He then left his home, with his goal being to become the strongest person ever, and to take over the world he hated and change it. He doesnt care about anyone in his way and is working as an assasin to get stronger, get better at fighting and earn money.
He became a dangerous criminal and one of the best hitmans in the world, ruthlessly killing anyone in his way. When he was 20, his memories of his saiyan dad started to come back. He hated his saiyan dad, and didnt want to use Super Saiyan because it reminded him of his dad. One year later, Dio got captured and handed to the police by friends of someone he killed. He then was put in prison for life and this caused him to hate the world even more. After that, he escaped the prison and continued being a hitman. With a crew of other strong criminals his plan is finally starting to work. His plan to conquer the world.
June 7, 2018 at 02:43 #41550
Dang this one’s great! It’s totally original and it’s great how you made your character a bad guy! Not a lot of people really do that for some reason. Also, (this is pretty biased, but) I really like sadistic characters for some reason. I’d be pretty dumb if I didn’t do this, so you’re accepted! Just one thing though. It seems like he can use Super Saiyan whenever he wants to but he doesn’t, but either way, no one can start out with Super Saiyan (unless MrCinekPl says otherwise).
June 18, 2018 at 02:59 #41791
Hey there, I’d like to point out that one of the characters you approved is a complete rip of an existing character from another franchise. “Boi Boi”‘s character “Dio” is a near carbon copy of a character known as Dio Brando from Jojo’s Bizzare adventure. In Jojo’s, Dio Brando has blonde hair (gaining the red eyes later via vampirism) and was born to an abusive father, who drove Dio’s mom to death. Dio later then POISONED his father, and can be best described as Rutheless, cold, and intelligent. He want’s to be Number one.
If you want more info, here’s a link to the character’s wiki page.
Just thought I’d let you know how unoriginal this character you approved really is.
June 18, 2018 at 03:07 #41792
Thanks for pointing this out! I did realize that a bit after I accepted the application, so I’ll try to be more careful next time. I never watched Jojo’s and I didn’t really look at the name, so I didn’t catch on. It’ll be up to MrCinekPl to decide what to do about it, though. Sorry about that!
June 8, 2018 at 04:08 #41566
Dio has been Zesty Approved!
June 17, 2018 at 21:28 #41786
Visgath is pretty cold to strangers and does not really like to talk to them too much. He normally keeps to himself but has a soft spot for people who show respect and courtesy towards him and others so he will attempt to befriend, although he isn’t too great at communication.
Visgath is a tall well built namekian standing at about seven foot and weighing around two hundred and twenty pounds. His eyes are a dark crimson red which can be quite scary when Visgath stares deep into your soul. He has a small jet black mask, covering the bridge of his nose down to his chin, that wraps around his neck connecting just below where an average human’s hair line would stop. Under his gi he wears a skin tight navy latex suit which his well built muscles can be easily seen through. His gi sits comfortably on his shoulders and is comprised of a few different colors: The most prominent colour is a charcoal grey which covers the majority of the gi. The secondary color is his golden highlights which cover from his sides down to just below his knee caps. The tertiary color is a dark yellowy brown that follows the charcoal grey around the gi.
Visgath is a Namekian born into the warrior clan that was pushed and trained by his father, a village elder named Kori, every single day so he could become something that Kori had wanted since it was a child: A guard of the elder. Because he is a son of a village elder his power level at birth was quite a bit higher than others in the village but this wasn’t enough according to his father. They would take long camping trips to the emerald fields of planet Namek where Visgath would be rigorously trained both physically and mentally. His fists becoming as strong as steel and his mind as tough as tungsten.
He was raised like this for five years taking multiple of these grueling trips annually. This was until the village was raided by the demon clan. Kori sent Visgath to live with his friend in the mountain until it passed by. The village was tortured and destroyed for weeks on end until Kori stepped up to fight the demon clan namekians. It was a five versus one, the odds were not in Kori’s favour, and each one of the demon clan’s power was equal to him. He knew this and all he had was one chance to win this… self destruct. As this was happening Visgath was watching down over the village as he sensed six great powers coming from it. As Visgath climbed to the top of the mountain which shadowed the village he saw his father become engulfed with a bright white ki which expanded and expanded as he poured is life energy into it.
Bang! A thundering boam darted down the valley as Visgath watched in compleat horror. All Visgath could see was a bright, luminescent light shine from the Village. The rocks he sat upon became incandescent from the pure heat that the explosion gave off. Tentatively, Visgath walked down into what once was a village with all of his memories rushing back to him as he strolled through the streets.
After a while Visgath arrived at the town center where he saw something led on the ground. He walked over cautiously but as he got closer he saw it… His dad. The young Visgath dashed over as quickly as he could then holding his near dead fathers head up as tears rolled down Visgath’s checks. His dad would cough as he smiled up at Visgath with orchid purple blood dripping off of his forehead and arms.
“Don’t worry my son..” He muttered “I shall live on forever in here..” He said as he points towards Visgath’s heart.
Visgath’s tears kept streaming down his face as his father rubbed the top of his head.
“I’m sorry… we didn’t get to bond like other families.” He says as he coughs up some blood and tears start to form in his eyes. “I… i’m lucky you’re my boy…” As he says this his eyes closed. “Goodbye… my son.” He said as his head drops to the side.
The death of his father inspired Visgath to train harder than ever before and accomplish his father’s dream…
For years Visgath trained and trained in solitude whilst he was set up in the furious mountains of Namek and would only visit the neighbouring village every so often to search for opportunities to make himself stronger and more skilled. He continued to do this year after year until something showed up: A trip to the planet Earth to visit it’s guardian. Visgath happily took this opportunity and left for Earth in the coming months.
Whilst travelling through the sea of stars Visgath still trained day and night getting the most out of this time he had completely to himself. Finally, after a few weeks of traveling the blue planet Earth was in his sights. As he landed he was greeted by Earth’s Guardian, they talked and talked until the Guardian decided it was time to train. Visgath took a liking to the Guardian because of his respect and courtesy, these qualities reminded him of his late father more and more until he nearly fell under the impression that he was actually his father.
Visgath stayed on Earth for six months constantly training and then decided it was time to go. He traveled back to his ship and as he sat down in the cockpit to launch it he couldn’t. Not because of any technical fault it was that he didn’t want to… He thought about it, what did he have on namek that he doesn’t on Earth: Nothing. There was no reason to leave this place as his only real friend, the guardian, also lived here. So Visgath decided to stay and he set up base in the rocky mountains creating a house and a memorial grave for his father so they could be together for the rest of Visgath’s life.
June 17, 2018 at 22:14 #41787
I really liked this one! It was well detailed and original! However, there are two problems. Firstly, why did the Demon Clan attack? That’s not too important, but it could add even more detailed. Secondly, if someone else made their character the guardian of earth, then you would have to know each other at the beginning of the rp. For now, I’ll say you’re accepted! I’ll send you the link to the Discord soon!
June 17, 2018 at 23:07 #41788
Alright thanks 🙂
June 17, 2018 at 23:26 #41790
Visgath has been Zesty Approved!
June 23, 2018 at 03:39 #41905
BTW sorry if my background is too long
Personality:Emotionless, Doesnt talk much, doesnt like much(aside from fighting people of similar strength) Doesnt show pain.
General Appearance: Black hair and eyes, little symbol on left eye(permanent spell that makes it blind) Animal ears, also black, blue hoodie with a white shirt under it, black cargo shorts.
Background: Shorune was originally a Shinjin born from a corrupted golden fruit. The other Shinjin’s decided to keep him alive and see what was corrupted about him. He was raised like a normal Shinjin would. When he was 2700 years old, The Shinjin decided to have him go to another plant and watch over it. He watched the planet and its inhabitants evolve and learn. After 2 million years of evolution and learning the inhabitants learned to travel through space. That is when, He(shorune) fell in love with on of the inhabitants. The other Shinjins learned about this event and placed a spell on Shorune, One the blinded his left eye. After that, they killed the woman Shorune fell for. He was locked up in a cell for another 200 Years. When he was left out he teleported using the skill he learned from the Yardrats. The Shinjin forgot about shorune 70000 years after he left. He transported to a random planet that he could sense ki on. For the Humans, it was in the 1300’s. He was deemed an alien intruder and put in a jail cell(doesnt have the will to fight currently). About 700 years later an unknown adventurer found him. The adventurer made the claim to the government, they deemed him as a mummy to the public. They forged a fake mummified corpse to hide his discovery.
Discord Sho–bō #3393
June 23, 2018 at 03:53 #41907
I like Shorune’s cool personality and his kinda sad backstory, but what happened after he was found? How did the government treat him? Was he able to train or just have a life of his own? I found your application very original, but for some reason, his backstory didn’t seem to have a satisfying ending. Also, I don’t think there’s any sort of government in the rp, so you might want to have him escape in your backstory. I would like for you to improve on it, but you can leave it off like that if you tell me and I will accept you. But for now, I’ll wait for your response.
Again, you can tell me that you do not want to improve it, but I would recommend that you do. Just tell me that you want to use this character application, and I’ll happily accept it.
June 23, 2018 at 06:36 #41911
ignore this comment and go to next please.
June 23, 2018 at 06:38 #41912
After he was discovered he was taken to a special jail unknown to the public for about 10 years for intense questioning. After not answering most of the questions, he decided to escape and use illusion magic to change what he looked like. He was able to escape to a foreign country. India, one of the largest populated places in the world, in order to hide his identity, and to train. For the next 8 years, he mindlessly trained. Every few years he would sense a large source of Ki, but decided not to intervene. Until he was teleported to what was known as “Kami’s lookout”, the home to this planets “God”. There was a giant Dragon, seemingly sprouting from nowhere. There are many people who seem to have teleported with him. The dragon said “Your wish has been granted, Farewell”, then he seemingly got absorbed into these orbs and sent into different directions. After that the clouds seemed to clear up, and the light from the star revealed other beings. They asked for help, to correct what evil was on this world. To make this world a peaceful place. Shorune denied, knowing where this was going. He did not want history to repeat itself. The people insisted and insisted, to the point of it being angering. Shorune remained with a “pokerface” but turned around and started to walk to the edge. But was stopped once more by one of the people seeming to speed up drastically in his direction. He snap-vanished behind them and chopped their side just below the ribs. But was then attacked by others who did not share his views. That was then that he noticed something. This history was different from what he experienced before. There was never a force this powerful in his recalling of history. He was hesitant, but finally decided to join forces.(This is when the time goes to present.)
I might not be able to respond soon though, as i have a swim meet tomorrow. After the meet i will be coming home and checking if you responded.
June 23, 2018 at 17:44 #41929
Alright, that’s a bit better. For now I’ll say you’re accepted.
June 23, 2018 at 19:49 #41930
Ok if you change your mind just reply to this and i will check it some time later.
June 23, 2018 at 19:54 #41931
Oh, I won’t change my mind. I already sent you a direct message with the Discord server! You actually applied at a very good time since the server’s about to reopen very soon! 🙂
June 23, 2018 at 20:03 #41932
If you didnt copy and paste my name, it probably didnt work, since it has the dash above the O
June 23, 2018 at 20:05 #41933
Oh alrighty! I’ll send it to your Discord account rather than your JinGames account then! Sorry about that!
June 23, 2018 at 20:05 #41934
Oh, i thought you were trying to send to my discord lol sorry, i didnt think you would send it through jin’s website
June 24, 2018 at 03:59 #41947
Personality:Smart, Strong, Persistent, Serious. Happy to meet new people unless they are threats to his existence.
General Appearance: Xeno is a young looking Saiyan with White Hair. His Clothing Consist’s of a Pearly White Fabric that takes up most of the Clothing along with a Golden Cloak. And a Blue Hoodie with Silver highlights
Backstory:Xeno is a Young Saiyan who was born in universe 15 on a planet named Cryaton. The Planet was Huge around the Size of Jupitar in Universe 7. The Planet had Mythical Creatures From Phoenix’s to Dragons, The Planet was Rules by a King
Named Gento a Saiyan who was thought of as a God on our Planet. Many Challenged him many died, He would usually pick people from Village’s on the Planet to fight in the war that was going happening in another Galaxy.
The Member’s who were picked suffered day after day, night after night to prepare for battle. They were know as the Divine Order. Little did they know was that there Pain and Suffering would come to a Unpredicted end…
Year: 2314, January 1
(Our story takes place with a couple who lived in the Village of Accon. The 2 Had their own seperate roles on this planet. Ento who was a Soldier of the Divine Order who Barely was on the Same Planet as Violet, who was saw as the smartest Female on the Planet)
I was birthed on January 1, 2314 by my Parents Ento, and Violet. We stayed in a Little Cottage outside of town for 9 Years Were my mom and my dad taught me since the age of 3, It started of hard for me at a young age with a dad who wanted me too be the strongest
man possible, and a mother who wanted me to be the smartest man in the universe.
Year: 2323, November 26
I was doing what i usually do in early mornings, Train. I was on my one thousand, seven hundred twenty-eighth push-up when i felt this Aura…i ignored it thinking it was the Divine Order training again then everything got unpleasently quiet. Shortly after my mom
rushed to the backyard were i was training and said: XENO! YOU HAVE TO GO NOW!! I Replied: Why what’s going on.
My dad landed on the ground with a Violent Force as if it was Urgent. I shouted: WHAT IS GOING ON!! MOM?!, DAD?! My dad struggling to catch his breath replied: Their Dead…All of them and were next. I felt a aura like no other. Something Demonic that send Chills
down my Spine. My dad Grabbed me and Mom and teleported us to a place that was filled with ships. Mom then darted to a ship with a Phoenix Symbol on it and ferocious started typing on the side panel of the ship.
Dad then said to me: Son…I know you have alot of Question’s about what’s going on. But sadly i cant answer them it seems that there’s not enough time. Just remember 1 thing…Everything me and your mother taught you…
Mom then shouted: Its ready!. My dad placed me inside the Spacecraft and locked me in. I banged on the glass with tears pouring down my eyes shouting: MOM!!! DAD!!!! Repeatedly. They were saying something it seemed, as if they were saying they Loved me….
The ship then took off at unfathomable speed’s in the blink of a eye i was peering into my old planet. From the distance i could see a Golden wave spread through the planet like a Uncontrollable disease then it exploded…
As soon as i saw the Explosion of my planet i Cried in Agony wishing that it was a dream, that my parent’s were alive, Unfortinetly it was not a dream.
Year: 2323 December 3
After sitting in the ship for 7 days peering into the endless space passing solar system’s every 5 Minutes i decided to explore the vast ship. I entered the sliding doors that leaded into a Corridor with a sliding door at the end of it, I walked through the corridor into the
door that didn’t slide open automatically. On the wall to the right of the corridor was a panel, across the panel in a giant font it said: State your idenity. I figured it was a code that was only accessible by entering a name, i then entered Xeno the password was denied.
I entered every passcode possible before giving up and going back to the Cockpit of the ship and sitting in the Chair thinking. Then. i saw a duffle bag stuffed under the control panel of the ship. I grabbed the heavy bag out of curiosity and opened it up, Inside the bag was clothing
with a note on top of it. It said:
If your reading this it must meen that the time has come…
for you to grow up. I know you must have question’s about what’s
going on but it’s best if you dont know. What matter’s must is
that you know that me and your father love you honey. Don’t forget
what we taught you, But you must teach yourself. Read the books
In the room down the Corridor behind the Cockpit, And don’t forget to train
to be as strong as your father in the Corridor to the left of the Living room
You wont get lost since i labeld everything. I love you…Never Forget that my
As i looked through the bag i saw a Device that had a yellow glass connected to a white device with a note attached to it reading: SCOUTER
Inside it was a Cape it was extremely heavy but i could manage to pick it up it also had a note attached to it reading: 10 Ton Weighted Cape.
After emptying the entire bag i cried…for a long time. After i recuperated from the sorrow i traveled back to the password protected door once again and tried random codes that my mom would use then. It hit me! mom made this ship for me, so the password would be what she called me
I thought then i remembered that she called me Golden Phoenix. I entered that code in a rush to see if it worked. The door then opened letting out a breeze of air. I entered the pearly white room were there was a bed, book shelfs that seemed to reach to heights of 10 feet and 3 more doors.
The First Labeled: Training Chamber, Second Labeled: Kitchen, The final Door was Labeled: Bathroom. I immediently entered the Kitchen to eat something, Later i begined my daily routine…
(The Child Trained for 6 Years)
Xeno: Well now that im done with my Training i should Check on the control panel to see how far i am from the planet i was sent too. Huh it says im 3 Minutes away?!
WHAT WAS THAT?!
System: Entering earth’s atmosphere, Brace for Impact.
Xeno: Ow, Well seems like i arrived at the Planet earth. Guess i should get dressed and get off this ship, FINALLY!.
TO BE CONTINUED
XD i got bored and tried my best Discord: Xeno#7827
June 24, 2018 at 21:24 #41976
Hmm, I haven’t read the whole backstory yet, but I can already say this… first Xeno isn’t really a Saiyan name (they’re are vegetable puns) unless Universe 15 Saiyans have those kind of names and your backstory is way too long… can you please shorten it and, while you’re at it, fix some grammar errors? I’d suggest removing the exact dialogue/quotes and putting them inside of the story and getting rid of spaces between the paragraphs. Also, can you create Xeno’s appearance in Minecraft? You made it really specific, so I’m worried if you can create that pretty cool sounding look. We are using Armourer’s Workshop if you want to make some of your clothes in that. When you do that, I’ll take a closer look at Xeno.
June 24, 2018 at 21:27 #41977
You could also make a basic summary of the backstory to make it shorter; I think that’ll be a surefire way to being accepted.
June 24, 2018 at 22:42 #41979
Personality:Smart, Strong, Persistent, Serious. Happy to meet new people unless they are threats to his existence.
General Appearance: Xeno is a young looking Saiyan with White Hair. His Clothing Consist’s of a Pearly White Fabric that takes up most of the Clothing along with a Golden Cloak. And a Blue Hoodie with Silver highlights
Backstory: Xeno is a Universe 15 Saiyan born on a Planet the size of Jupiter named Cryaton that was ruled by Gento the “God” of Cryaton. He lived with his mother Violet the smartest saiyan on the planet, and his father Ento a member of the Divine order who were considered the strongest men on the planet. Xeno trained Day in and Day out mentally and physically until one day in the middle of his training he felt a Massive Ki on the planet that he had never felt before, seconds later his mom rushed into the backyard telling him that the planet was under attack and he had to leave xeno was stubborn and wouldn’t go without answers until his dad crashed into the backyard swooping him and his mother up and taking them to the planet’s escape bunker his mom designed. Quickly putting Xeno in the ship after telling him that he would be going to another universe far away to a planet called earth.
If my name’s still a problem i can fix it.
June 24, 2018 at 22:44 #41980
June 24, 2018 at 22:47 #41982
Alright this one’s pretty good! You’re accepted! Lucky for you, the server’s starting soon! https://www.timeanddate.com/countdown/generic?iso=20180624T2230&p0=633&msg=rp+will+start+in&font=cursive See you there!
July 7, 2018 at 05:29 #42167
July 8, 2018 at 17:24 #42177
June 25, 2018 at 03:43 #41992
Name:Retismo (Android 32)
Back-story:The story of Android 32 begins with an adult, originally going by the name of Retismo, unfortunately for this guy, he got zapped into a story he wasn’t willing to participate in, a dangerous one at that. Twas’ a smoggy night, roaming around the streets aimlessly, Retismo went late night shopping and club hopping, hoping to finally meet the girl of his dreams while drunk. Little did he know, he met someone who was far from the girl of his dreams…
Stumbling around an alleyway, a drunk Retismo was met with a strange old man, with a strange glint in his eye… “Oiiii~ Who th- Hiccup Hell- hiccup Are you?…”…. “H-Heh… Hehehe… Hahahaha! You could call me… You’re creator…”…. “My wha-?” Before finishing his sentence, his vision blurred, before eventually darkening completely.
Upon waking up, the ex-human saw only darkness, not that he had gone blind…he hoped, but it was pitch black. He was lying down on a metal… thing, and upon moving around a little bit, he felt metal on all sides around him. It was like he was in a tiny metal casket. A light turned on, visible through the glass in front of him. It was a computer screen showing… his vitals, something about modules, processors, and the two biggest words on there- Status: Concious
After what seemed like hours of waiting, Retismo almost passed out again, this time from exhaustion. Then, a light turned on in the distance. He couldn’t quite make out what it was, as he was confined to the pod he was inside of of the metal tube, but he did manage to see a humanoid figure… Probably the guy that kidnapped him. He banged on the pod, yelling to be let out. The stange old guy said something that ret couldn’t hear before flipping a switch, causing everything to go black for Retismo… Unconcious again.
This time when he woke up, he felt like he didn’t have any arms…or legs… he felt like just a head. “SON OF A BITCH STOLE MY BODY! IF I WASN’T LOCKED IN THIS COFFIN I-” He stopped as he looked down, seeing he still had a body… And it was still fully functional. Really, really weird. He tried to punch through the metal, and he did. Awesome! He was nowhere near being able to do that before!
He looked around the room, seeing his captor coming down the stairs. He ran over to him, trying to punch him into a wall. His body then froze, and he found himself unable to move or talk. The old man picked him up and shut his eyelids, all while whistling to himself… like this was normal to him.
When he finally got control of his bod back, he was in a large room, filled with large white tiles. Something came over the microphone. It was the old man. “Hello there, Android 32… this is your first combat test. You are going to learn to control your energy today.” Whatever that meant, he was going to do it, and use it to kill this son of a bitch.
After several failed attempts and terrible explanations by the doctor, Retismo was starting to lose hope. “Nonono! Not like that! You literally have a generator inside you! Tap into that energy and throw it from your hands!” He yelled through the microphone, slightly irritated. Retismo, or Android 32 did as he was told. This time, however, he managed to actually produce some form of energy blast. He shot the light orange blast at wall, causing some shards to fly off in a decently large explosion.
“Good job 32!” He hated that name. Reduced to a number like he wasn’t human. Well, technically he wasn’t anymore. But still. “Now move on to melee combat. To utilize your endless energy source, I presume you would want to go for a style that includes keeping opponents at a distance.” The professor explained as a robotic test dummy appeared from the ground, already in a combat-ready stance.
32 ran towards the robot, which instantly struck at his stomach, causing the android to spit up a bit of blood. He powered through the pain, grabbing the bots arm, trying to throw him to the side. He failed. Miserably. The bot was heavier than he expected, faster too. It threw another punch to 32’s head, which landed. The android was sent flying into a wall, causing some more shards to fly around… He blacked out to the sound of the scientist being dissapointed in him.
He woke back up in the same room, robot still there. “Terrible. Go again!” This time the robot came at him, sending a punch to his gut. 32 grabbed the punch this time, softening the damage taken. He dodged the second punch to the head, using the momentum to get behind the bot. He tried to use his energy thing, and succeeded, causing both him and the combat bot to go flying. The bot and him jumped off the walls, sending them flying towards each other.
The bot struck for his face, while 32 went for the chest, energy ball in hand. Both attacks landed, causing 32 to go flying backwards into the wall, and the bot to explode. This time, as he recovered, a two bots came from the floor at once. They both rushed at him, one firing energy at him, the other trying to punch him. 32 jumped upwards to dodge the blasts, jumping off the ceiling towards the blasting one. He was intercepted by the other one, which he grabbed, flipped around him, and continued falling towards the other one. Upon reaching it, he slapped a blast away from him, sending a punch to its gut, throwing it’s body at the other one before firing a full fledged beam of energy at the two, causing them to explode.
He felt limp, but his limbs locked up as he went unconcious once again… He awoke on a platform, easily 100 feet above a white tile floor. The speaker spoke again. “Ok, now I am going to teach you how to fly… You sense your energy in your core? Use it to coat all around you, and make that energy lift into the air. Simple!” As the mic cut out, 32 was hesitant to step off the platform, as most of his life, that type of fall killed people.
After a few seconds of mentally preparing himself, he stepped off the platform, and began to fall to the ground. After about 20 feet, his fall began to slow. As he was about to hit the floor, around 90 feet down, he began to hover. He didn’t see it, of course, as his eyes were closed, but he did notice the lack of wind flow. He opened his eyes and began to slowly fly around the testing room. “Well done, 32! Now, it’s time for the next test…” He said, pressing the button to knock the android out… but it didn’t work. “What the?!”
32 had risen to the bulletproof glass that housed his ‘creator,’ raising a single hand, energy already in his palm. The professor logically jumped from his chair, exiting the observation room and slamming the metal door… Just as 32 fired a beam at the glass. The glass gave after a few seconds, sending shattered glass all across the room. He flew into the room, kicking the door open with ease. He continued down the hallway ahead, blasting and punching through every blast door and guard bot in his way.
He eventually reached the final door- the exit of the facility. His captor was there, trying to desperatly remember the door’s passcode. 32 charged a blast, aiming it at the scientist, who froze in terror. “Y-you wouldn’t. You don’t have the guts to kill me!” he said, terror in his voice.
“That’s where you’re partly right, doctor. I don’t have guts. And I don’t plan on killing you. Not directly at least…” He said, raising his hand, aiming instead at the walls around them. He fired a beam at them, and multiple walls in each direction were demolished. The roof began to collapse, and the scientist was crushed first. 32 laughed, raising his hand to blow open an exit for him to escape from. And he would have succeeded, if a collapsed building hadn’t fallen onto his head. He wasn’t killed, he was far too strong and well built for that. Instead, he was knocked unconcious, something that was happening a lot recently, and his memory storage was wiped almost completely…
He awoke in the rubble, not remembering a thing, except his combat training, and the name Android #32…
How he/she/it acts:Tends to leave things and people alone, as long as they don’t mess with what he’s doing or plans on doing… And if they’re involved in those plans, he makes them… cooperate
Personality: Android 32 often comes off as nonchalant, not really caring about the well being of anyone else. He does whatever he decides will be fun, no matter what he has to do to achieve that, or who his acts will affect.
Fighting style:Fighting style: Retismo, taking full advantage of his trait of Infinite Energy, utilizes his Ki to the fullest, weaponizing it in every way. Due to having unlimited access to Energy, his Ki Blasts are noticeably stronger than most, due to this, he chose to excel in the usage of Ki, and see’s no importance in the use of Fisticuffs. Although showing little to no attention to his physical condition, he still acts as if it is there, training himself everyday so he can stay in shape.
What they wear:Retismo is almost always seen wearing a pair of red converse, blue jeans, a Dark Grey Jacket, and a Black Shirt. Unlike most people, this is his only piece of attire, seeing as he is an android, he does not secrete sweat, or any type of chemical that could cause body odor. Retismo appears as an everday Citizen would, his only notable difference being his metal infused body, and his out of the norm speech pattern.
June 25, 2018 at 04:15 #41993
At first I was just gonna ask you to edit it just because of how long it was, but when I read the first paragraph of the backstory, I decided to read the whole thing because I thought it was funny how you made him drunk. I was then hooked into reading the entire thing, and throughout the whole thing I thought Retismo/32’s story was truly amazing! I loved how you showed his training process and his back stab at the end of the story. Also, by not saying who the professor is, the story in game can be more flexible because the backstory of the rp might be that scientists were experimenting with robots/androids and creating their own Saiyans, but they turn on the scientists and kill off most of the world. We may use your character as one of those experiments since he fits in with the story so well. Also, I really appreciate how you said you focused in Ki attacks as Zesty, my character, also used to do the same thing. Because of all of this it would be a crime if you were not… so you are accepted!!!
June 25, 2018 at 04:18 #41994
Android 32 AKA Retismo has been Zesty Approved!
June 26, 2018 at 04:26 #42013
Name: Levin Dames
Race: half Sayian
[Brief explanation about the looks of said character]
He is a Skinny 6’9 but he is still growing weighting only 210 pounds his hair is natural Black but dyes it from time to time and has some Marks on his face from “stuff”
[Characteristics of said character]
He is very Charismatic and is Very Very cocky he will never back down from a conflict he tho is very weak hand to hand so he loses most fight
He is a Range shooter had The BEST aim from were he lives and if you try to neutralize his ranged ki blast beams and stuff he had loads of ki and stamina so his hits might not have hurt first but over time it will hurt
Back story : he comes from a broken family his day is of a unknown race and his mom is blind so she was very lazy and she would make he do every thing for her so he ended up as a very fast mined person which gave faster reactions on everything at the age of only 12 his mom died of heart cancer so he just ran he lived in the woods for 4 years just trying survive and stealing books from stores one day he found a pod in his backyard of the house he built it was empty he found books and he just red the the books and he found out why he had a tail so now he is trying to find more saiyans…
My Dicord is ColdSamaaa
June 27, 2018 at 04:47 #42029
Sorry I got to this so late! Anyways, you have a bit of things to fix.. First, your application isn’t in the format, second, it doesn’t really have good grammar, and third, your story has to have a minimum of 250 words I believe. Good luck!
July 4, 2018 at 01:46 #42135
July 5, 2018 at 16:56 #42138
Backsotry:Netsui was the son of kuriza, but his father was never present. Therefore, he always stayed with his grandfather, coldness, that provided resistance training. Netsui could not take it, so one day he ran away from home, going to planet earth,for know than 5 saiyans be attacking:vegeta whit nappa and Hogo whit Waru and Surudan.He found 3 of this saiyans: Waru, Hogo and Surudan. He saw the fighting power of each of them in the scouter, and was impressed to know that the fighting power whas 100.But the power of Netsui was only 50. Without doubt, he had no chance, but he would not let the human beings suffer what he suffered, he would fight without fear against them. He used everything he learned in his training with coldness, but nothing was enough. One hour, he was on the verge of death, and then he began to scream, and his fighting power increased as his body grew larger and larger: he was much larger, with huge horns and recovered. had time to think in that way: He had to fight immediately. with Surudan who opened the guard of fear, sending him into space using a burst of ki. The other two immediately attacked him, knowing that his powers together was superior. Without doubt, Netsui was losing his fight. But a human tried to help He gave him a senzu beam and said, “Eat.” He ate without thinking and was healed. Upon seeing this, Hogo threw a ki stroke at this human, making him faint. Netsui was so angry that he went straight to his final form,using 100% of his power, but hid not have the same cold fatigue,being 300 of power level. He fainted both with just one blow, threw them to the ship and progamated her to go on another planet, a stranger a long way away.
Personality:Want to help all him friends,and protect him planet
Apparence:Like frieza,but whit different colors:At the local from white,red,at purple,yellow,etc…
Discord:I Pass it if i be accepted
- This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by Son Netsui Surudan.
July 5, 2018 at 19:13 #42145
Ooh, the son of Kuriza!? This’ll be interesting! So he’s like Frieza’s grandson and King Cold’s Great Grandson! That would make you kind of like the nephew of another player on the server named Froze XD! Sounds original! Alright, so, his grandfather’s name is Coldness?… Do you mean Frieza? Second, Frieza thinks training is beneath him, so he wouldn’t force Netsui to do it. Third, during the fight against the Saiyans, why didn’t he just use his final form from the start. Arcosians created weaker forms to hold back their full power because it’s too staining for them to hold. He could have easily wiped the floor with them from the beginning. Fourth, why did he even stop the Saiyan invaders anyways? He doesn’t seem to have any motivation for doing so unless he was simply mad at Coldness/Frieza, so he decided to mess with his plans, which would probably get him killed. Fifth, and this is a big one, why DOES Netsui want to protect the planet. He just got there and doesn’t really have any attachment to that planet in particular.
I’d suggest changing it so he doesn’t want to protect Earth, but rather just wants to get revenge on his own family because of their absence and their torture. That could make for a more interesting character and cause conflict in the story. Right now, you are denied, but DO NOT GIVE UP. Just make a few changes! Your character has a lot of potential and it would be a waste if you didn’t make a few changes. All you have to do is make a few changes to make your story make a bit more sense. Also, I saw in a post that you are Brazilian, so it’s okay that you can’t speak English too well. Just make a few changes.
July 5, 2018 at 19:29 #42146
OK.First:Frieza see Netsui like weak,so make him train for be like him ,kuriza,king cold and cooler,But this training are like frieza use kis attack at him.Yea,frieza are him grandma.Netsui not have control from him forms.They are saiyans and be destroying the planet.And,for the trianing then Frieza make him pass,he not want than no one suffer what him suffer at this training:Pain.
- This reply was modified 2 months, 3 weeks ago by Son Netsui Surudan.
July 6, 2018 at 00:44 #42153
But why did he want to stop Frieza’s Saiyans and why does he want to protect the Earth? He’d be given pain to the Saiyans if you said pain is the reason why.
July 6, 2018 at 20:46 #42160
Like you can see,he not kill they,obviously if they want he can kill(Only one then they not be choice),and he not likes frieza and the saiyans be destroying the planet.The earth are a weak planet,but not are bad (Reverse Zamasu),so he need of a person to defend him.
July 8, 2018 at 20:18 #42187
The planet earth has weak inhabitants, although they are not evil, and as we know, Goku and his friends are not known by him, so he thinks that this planet is uncaring and is willing to help him
July 8, 2018 at 20:31 #42188
Backsotry:Netsui was the son of kuriza, but his father was never present. So he always stayed with his grandfather(Frieza) who provided resistance training. Netsui could not stand it, so one day he ran away from home, going to planet Earth, knowing that 5 saiyans attack: Vegeta with Nappa and Hogo with Waru and Surudan.Vegeta and Nappa worked for Frieza, but Hogo, Waru, and Surudan acted on their own way.He found 3 of these Saiyans: Waru, Hogo and Surudan. He saw the fighting power of each of them in the scouter, and was impressed to learn that the fighting power was 100. But Netsui’s power was only 50. No doubt he had no chance but he would not let the beings humans suffer what he suffered, he would fight without fear against them. He used everything he learned in his training with coolness, but nothing was enough. One hour he was on the verge of death, and then he began to scream, and his fighting power increased as his body grew larger and bigger: he was much larger, with huge horns and recovered. He had time to think this way: he had to fight right away. with Surudan who opened the guard of fear, sending him into space using a burst of ki. The other two immediately attacked him, knowing that their powers together were superior. Undoubtedly, Netsui was losing its fight. But a human tried to help. He gave him a bundle of senzu and said, “Eat.” He ate without thinking and was healed. Seeing this, Hogo gave a ki stroke on this human, making him faint. Netsui was so angry that it went straight to its final form, using 100% of its power, but it did not have the same cold fatigue, being 300 of power level. He fainted both with just one blow, threw them on the ship and progressed to go to another planet.
Personality:Want to help all him friends,and protect him planet
Apparence:Like frieza,but whit different colors:At the local from white,red,at purple,yellow,etc…
Discord:I Pass it if i be accepted
- This reply was modified 2 months, 2 weeks ago by Son Netsui Surudan. Reason: Google Translator miss ;---;
July 12, 2018 at 18:56 #42248
OK,New character,now i not want be arcosian xD
Backstory:One day a very evil saiyan was trying to destroy the land. But he was stopped by 2 brave heroes who turned just one: Goku and vegeta, who became Vegetto. However, Goku, with his personality, wanted an opponent the height, then asked the dragon balls to reincarnate him, as a good person and as a saiyajin. But one thing that Goku had not expected: The evil saiyan was still inside the new saiyan. Thus, the weak and kindly Netsui usually dominates his personality, but he can sometimes borrow his alternative personality (Black), in return for getting a little of his personality, thus having the possibility of Black dominating his body. One day, Netsui went to Kami-sama to train, but there was an inconvenience: Upon entering the room of time, he found one of the most powerful enemies ever faced in history: Cell! Netsui obviously had no chance against him, so he found himself only with one option … . He asked for all the power he could Goku and Vegeta felt the evil ki of Black. As they were without their earrings potara did it, and it fulfilled, but in return of this its body had become Black again! It defeated cell, but, when leaving the room of the time, Goku and Vegeta felt the malignant ki of Black. the metamoru merger, and managed to defeat him, thus making Netsui go back to normal.
Personality:When are like Netsui,good and protector,but,like black,Arrogant and Evil
Apparence:Like Goku,but whit a diferent hair
Discord:I pass if i be accepted
July 12, 2018 at 19:05 #42250
Sorry for bad english ;-;
July 5, 2018 at 20:20 #42148
Hi everyone! I will no longer be admitting people into this server because I was banned from the Discord for sticking up to the owner. For anyone applying to this server, I have a warning. If you dare make him mad, even if you are right or are even his friend, you will most likely get banned. Unless I’m let back in or I join or even make another rp, this is farewell! For anyone applying, good luck! For both getting accepted AND dealing with Cado.
July 6, 2018 at 00:42 #42152
jk lol, I lost a bet to boi boi who owned a different server, so I had to say that horrible stuff. I’m back to accepting applications now though
July 7, 2018 at 05:18 #42164
Im now accepting application’s!
July 7, 2018 at 05:24 #42166
I lied but do send me your apps if you need help because you know…Im Xeno
July 8, 2018 at 03:47 #42175
You guys still accepting apps?
if so, here’s mine.
Race: Half saiyan, quarter Kai, quarter Demon
Personality: For the most part extremely polite and civilised, but when she gets serious in a fight, she is quite sadistic…
Apperance: Blue skin, slightly pink hair, a pink tail and wears the black kai outfit
Backstory: Kasumi was the daughter of a demon/kai hybrid called aether, who fought in the demon war 500 years ago and later had a child with a powerful saiyan who had caught her fancy. She was raised for the first 20 years of her life doing nothing but training, and as a result, she is quite powerful. On her 20th birthday, there was an assassination attempt on her because an enemy faction of demon rebels left over from the war saw her as a weapon that could be used to change the demon realm again. After this, Aether decided that it was not safe for Kasumi to stay in the demon realm any longer, and sent her out of the realm on a primitive planet. for 3 years she built a spaceship and eventually left the planet, stealing better ships and gaining a reputation as a space pirate. She became extremely intelligent after reading entire libraries worth of books stolen from ships, so her ki attacks became stronger as a result of her expanded mind. Eventually, she came across a planet called earth, and settled there until now…
July 8, 2018 at 14:55 #42176
oh, side note i forgot to mention, Kasumi has legendary, but only because for her it’s a blend of kai potential, demon potential and saiyan potential.
July 8, 2018 at 17:36 #42178
Alright! Sooooo, I already said I had a bias towards sadistic characters for some reason, so that’s a plus. I like how Kasumi is a hybrid of an kai-demon and a saiyan; that’s pretty creative. Also, it’s pretty cool how she became a space pirate for a bit. All and all, I thought Kasumi was a pretty creative character, so you’re accepted!
July 8, 2018 at 17:42 #42179
Kasumi has been Zesty Approved!
July 11, 2018 at 20:06 #42238
Name: Akeno Nishikata
Personality: Akeno is a devoted school student who is very curious about his abilities, sometimes he compares himself to a superhero, because he grew up reading comic books about heroes who risk their lives for the safety of the people.
Appearance: Akeno wears his school uniform with a very un-school like purple tie that he’s luckily being allowed to wear, since purple his is favorite color
Backstory: ever since Akeno can remember, his father, Terret, has been abusing him for his weakness and lack of motivation to fight which is common for someone who rather be studying than fighting. Because of all the countless verbal abuse that Terret gave his own son. One day while Terret was gone, he started training until he had passed out because he wanted to prove he has strength, what Akeno forgot was that his father would come back eventually and mistake his exhaustion for being lazy and lacking motivation to fight, this is usually something that he would have to look out for. That same night Terret came back home really late and drunk, he was at a local bar with his work friends watching a tournament that was going on, Terret started hitting Akeno and insulting him about how he’s worthless and that he was the reason why his mother had left his father. Akeno though did not let any of these insults really get to him because he was studying hard for a test that was really important for him, his father Terret had other plans. Terret had decided to hit Akeno which caused him to pass out and made him miss the test, so when Akeno woke up, he was at a control state of anger that he knew he wouldn’t win a fight with his father so he waited until midnight and ran away from home, finding a suitable place to hide and study for school. Now while Akeno is glad to be far away from his father, he still trained although it would be something he’d be doing right at this very moment even with his father. Despite that though he was still devoted to school and also trained on his own time.
Discord if I get accepted?: Justinstbh is okay#7774
July 11, 2018 at 21:44 #42239
i think ill accept
July 12, 2018 at 03:09 #42243
Is it OK if I don’t have a discord, I’m new
August 7, 2018 at 00:42 #42439
Sorry it took so long to see this! The server’s actually gonna be up again in a week, but you might need Discord to see if anyone else is on or if you want to talk to anyone from the Discord server outside of Minecraft, but I don’t think you need it. It would help a lot though.
July 12, 2018 at 05:03 #42244
Personality:quite,acts strong,opens up to people only when he trusts them(like vegeta)
Appearance:has black hair teen Gohan style, (early) vegeta saiyan armor but with bagy pants, average face shape, has red tale
Backstory:he is the son of King vegeta’s sister, he was born with a PL of 3000 and was prince vegeta’s rival, when he was 13 his dad inviteted him to a bar and a saiyan coverd in blood comes in (bardock) and said that Frieza was going to destroy The planet, everyone laughed but Mato, who was suspicious of Frieza for a long time believed the saiyan, he forced a Frieza soldiers to set up a pod to escape the doomed planet, and then he set of for space for new adventures to come, eventually reaching his peak at ssj4 (not god, there were no saiyans left that he knew of).
August 7, 2018 at 00:57 #42442
I kinda liked this one at first, since his actions made sense with his personality, as he seems to be a very non-trusting person and he’d be waiting for some excuse to get away from Frieza as he did not trust him. However, at the end, you say he eventually goes Super Saiyan 4. There are two problems with that; first, people can’t start out with Super Saiyan, so Super Saiyan 4’s definitely out of the question, and second, you don’t say how he got Super Saiyan in the first place. Another problem with this one is that you say he’s quiet, but he also acts strong. A quiet person wouldn’t really act strong, and a person who acts strong wouldn’t be quiet about it. So please consider revising this, as it seems to have some potential, and we’re about to start again next week.
July 13, 2018 at 21:36 #42257
Personality: intelligent,helpful, persistent, impulsive, doesn’t like to lose,loves training, fighting and learning from others, friendly, doesn’t like to be alone
Appearance: Purple Gi (like teen gohan) goku’s hairstyle, blue eyes, no tail, Scar on his right eye (like Kakashi from Naruto basically,his eye is completely fine tho its just the skin) Black hair,
Backstory: Kaito has no family, he only briefly recalls his fathers face and his mother trying to kill him (he doesn’t remember his family much due to trauma), hence the scar on his right eye, to this day he still wonders where his parents are, all he has left is his fathers sword (brave sword). Kaito’s quick learning abilities and intelligence have given him the chance to survive in the wild for the past 8 years. Now Kaito tries to integrate himself into the little bit of society he was able to find, not knowing anything and being alone he has to start from 0 learning how things work. Kaito used to have a lot of pent up aggression when he lived in the wild and was not a really good person, being alone for so long and having no one there for him when he needed it took its tole on him and made him lash out using small outer colonies as a means to make himself feel better but after discovering himself he tries to leave that horrible past of himself behind and now fights for whats right while forever trying to atone for the things he has done. the rest of his story to greatness has yet to unfold…
( please tell me if there’s something im missing, i love RP but im not good at character sheets, ive been at this for two hours and any help would be appreciated)
August 7, 2018 at 01:12 #42444
Jeez, two hours!? Holy cow, that’s a lot! Alright, so I figure your dad is Kid Trunks (well not a kid because he has a kid xD) since he has the Brave Sword and that your mom’s Mai because Trunks has a crush on her in Super, so why would Mai try killing him? She doesn’t seem to be the kind of person who would do that. Then again, really young kids usually exaggerate things a lot if they don’t understand them and I assume he was a kid when that happened. Also, you should probably think of what happened to Kaito before he lost his memory, so something cool like your memory gradually coming back or we can even make a side-plot or something about you recovering your memory by putting in hints for you. Overall, you are accepted! I would strongly suggest that you tell one of the staff what happened, so it can be more fun! The server’ll be up next week, so I’ll see you there!
August 11, 2018 at 18:50 #42502
Server will come back in couple of days so prepare for it! lol
August 22, 2018 at 01:19 #42627
Race: Full Saiyan
Personality: Bi-Sexual, Messy, Flirty, and Over Protective, Loner, and love training by himself
Appearance: Brown Skin, Black Hair, Messy short hair
Backstory: Son of Totoma(Female) and Lantain(Male) they were the Last one to leave Planet Vegeta and Lantain was almost Dead and Tomtoma was Injured With Acroso inside of her and they pick any planet that look liked Planet Vegeta and they did “Planet Earth” while we landed at earth Father was dead already mom was at her last peak to death Some human boy help my mom out of the Saiyan pod and took her to the Hospital where she gave birth and named him then died nobody didn’t know whos going to be his new parents so he went to a orphanage where kids like him were their but one man who got him a home she looked like a human but she had powers, so she trained me to become stronger than ever!!!!]
August 29, 2018 at 03:01 #42686
I’m not even sure this is still active, but whatever, worth a shot.
Late 20s-Mid 30s, doesn’t matter much.
Selleri is arrogant to the bone, she’s arrogant and won’t take no for an answer if she wants something. She was constantly praised when growing up for being stronger than most people, this led to her developing a superiority complex, she thinks she’s owed everything, and is overall spoiled as hell.
As a saiyan, even though she was raised in a different culture, she doesn’t care for romance, really mostly caring about her own being.
She has black medium length hair, wears black leggings and a brown top, she carries a small pocket knife with her at all times.
Selleri was born on planet Vegeta, of course, however, she wasn’t born with an exactly high power level. Her parents were extremely disappointed, to the point of disgust, they were both at least respectable warriors, but her daughter had been born weak compared to them. This disgust led them to send her to a planet in the same solar system as Vegeta, a planet Zeiep considered not worthy enough to trade or populate, so much so the saiyans never made the effort to colonize it.
She landed in the middle of a small city, highly advanced despite their size, the locals knew at least a minimal amount of info on saiyans, and they knew what they had right there was one. They debated on whether to kill Selleri or simply leave her be. That is until one of the elders decided to take her in. She grew up in the village worshipped as almost a god, considering that even if she was weak compared to her parents, a peaceful race such as the Zeiep couldn’t stand up to her.
As an adult, she got bored of all the pampering. “Oh great Selleri, what would you like today?” a small female asked her, the boredom and the Zeieps willingness to serve her so easily got on her nerves slowly, even though she was not raised a saiyan, she knew she was one and that they were a warrior race, that’s what the locals told her. This got to her head, and seeing a species so willing to give in made her angry.
“I wanna get off this hell hole of a planet!” She snapped back at the tiny alien, “I’m bored, I wanna get stronger, become something worth a damn! I don’t want to die here, in this mud of a planet!” She continued.
“W-well, I’m sorry, but the only place nearby that could offer that was your home planet, Vegeta… And according to o-our astrologists, it’s been destroyed.” Selleri grew increasingly angry, clenching her fists and punching the wall of a house.
“Then show me some place that has a decently strong life form!” She shouted at the alien, making it cower in fear. The alien guided her to the observatory and showed her a hologram of a planet named “Terra 2764”. The average power-level wasn’t all that to celebrate, but it was at least higher than Zeiep’s. “This will do. Get me a ship, set coordinates for there, I’m going there and no one’s stopping me.”
The locals complied, probably wanting to get rid of the aggressive saiyan. They stocked up the place with food and weights for her to train with in her trip and bid her farewell. She is now en-route to Earth, training to prepare herself.
As you can imagine, she has near to no skill with ki, and is weaker than the average saiyan. She has a tail, but due to the planet’s moon almost always being obscured by a heavily-clouded sky, she’s never seen a full moon, thus she doesn’t know about Oozarus.
(Honestly kinda want her to only achieve SSJ at most, so if that’s possible.)
August 29, 2018 at 15:05 #42691
Personality: Is generally nice to others. Dosen’t like fighting but doesn’t hate it and will stick up for others around him. He doesn’t like seeing people hurting since that makes him remember what happened to his mother and father.
Apperance: Esta has black hair and yellow eyes. Esta wears whatever he feels like, but usually a shirt and some jeans. Backstory: Esta’s father was a Saiyan named tomoto. Tomoto survived the destruction of planet vegeta by pure coincidence, since he was going out on a mission at the time. His ship was knocked by the explosion on the course of earth. His ship crash landed and left him in critical condition. Esta’s mother, Shina, saw the crash from her home and went to check it out, only to find tomoto bleeding out inside of the ship.Shina took Tomoto to her home and nursed him back to health. Tomoto eventually woke up in a bed.Tomoto learned what had happened from the women and was surprised how strong she was compared to the other humans. Tomoto knew she was strong since he attacked her when he first woke up and the fight ended in a draw. Tomoto and Shina eventually fell in love out of their mutual interest for getting stronger. Shina became pregnant and had a child named Esta. Esta was born in the wilderness, so he did woodwork with his father, which built his muscles. By the age of 5, he was capable of lifting a tree. Esta was home schooled by his mother so he knew how to read and write. Since both of his parents were fighters, they sparred with him and taught him how to fight. Esta truly loved his parents but he didn’t see any reason to get stronger needlessly. One day, while Esta and his Father were out fishing, his mother was killed by bandits. Esta and his father found her remains in the house. Esta screamed and cried for hours while his father was quiet about it,almost like it was too much for him to let out. Life went on after that, albeit sadder than before. Esta missed his mother and missed how his father used to be happy. When Esta was sleep one night, his father left in the middle of the knight and never returned. Esta searched frantically but couldn’t find his father. Esta was all alone now and tried to pretend like things were how they used to be until he couldn’t take it anymore. Esta grabbed his mother’s sword and left home. He didn’t know if he was going to find his father, but he knew life had to change.
August 29, 2018 at 15:19 #42694
Personality:Is generally nice to others. Dosen’t like fighting but doesn’t hate it and will stick up for others around him. He doesn’t like seeing people hurting since that makes him remember what happened to his mother and father.
Appearance: Esta has short black hair and yellow eyes. Esta wears whatever he feels like, but usually a shirt and some jeans. Esta has a belt which he has sword hanging from.
Backstory:Esta’s father was a Saiyan named tomoto. Tomoto survived the destruction of planet vegeta by pure coincidence, since he was going out on a mission at the time. His ship was knocked by the explosion on the course of earth. His ship crash landed and left him in critical condition. Esta’s mother, Shina, saw the crash from her home and went to check it out, only to find tomoto bleeding out inside of the ship.Shina took Tomoto to her home and nursed him back to health. Tomoto eventually woke up in a bed.Tomoto learned what had happened from the women and was surprised how strong she was compared to the other humans. Tomoto knew she was strong since he attacked her when he first woke up and the fight ended in a draw. Tomoto and Shina eventually fell in love out of their mutual interest for getting stronger. Shina became pregnant and had a child named Esta. Esta was born in the wilderness, so he did woodwork with his father, which built his muscles. By the age of 5, he was capable of lifting a tree. Esta was home schooled by his mother so he knew how to read and write. Since both of his parents were fighters, they sparred with him and taught him how to fight. Esta truly loved his parents but he didn’t see any reason to get stronger needlessly. One day, while Esta and his Father were out fishing, his mother was killed by bandits. Esta and his father found her remains in the house. Esta screamed and cried for hours while his father was quiet about it,almost like it was too much for him to let out. Life went on after that, albeit sadder than before. Esta missed his mother and missed how his father used to be happy. When Esta was sleep one night, his father left in the middle of the knight and never returned. Esta searched frantically but couldn’t find his father. Esta was all alone now and tried to pretend like things were how they used to be until he couldn’t take it anymore. Esta grabbed his mother’s sword and left home. He didn’t know if he was going to find his father, but he knew life had to change.
September 10, 2018 at 02:17 #42785
Is it possible for a moment of purity and anger to count as a reason to become super saiyan, like vegeta when he realized he couldn’t beat goku in the meteor planet or when gohan realized nobody will protect him anymore in the time chamber. You could also say that toriama described super saiyan as a necessity, kind of how if an animal gets cornerd, adrenaline kicks in, so that to.
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September 16, 2018 at 02:35 #42836
-Half Saiyan Half Demon (If that’s allowed)
-Pure Hearted, Always excited for a fight… always joking around and teasing people. He also acts goofy around everyone. He hates killing (Which is Ironic… You’ll see why.)
-He has Spikey/Curley hair (Hard to explain). He’s black and always wears a grey rug given to him by his o’ so mysterious parents.
–Backstory of the Backstory
Torrack’s Story starts on a planet named Logitec… however we’re going all the waaaay back to the beginning of the beginning. This all properly started on planet Vegeta when Bardock went running around screaming that Frieza was going to destroy the planet. No one believed him, or so he thought. Bardock had convinced the Saiyans that Frieza’s intensions weren’t good at all, so about 130 – 150 Saiyans formed a small force, they got into space pods and fled. Frieza, not being an idiot, knew exactly that the saiyans weren’t all going to die with planet Vegeta, so he send massive forces of platoons to track and kill them all. Nappa was with Vegeta, so he was allowed to continue living. Raditz was on a different planet, finishing his mission, presumed dead… up until Vegeta and Nappa found him rummaging around for food and recruited him. The 150 Saiyans that fled’s numbers were reduced to 100, then 50, then 30… the 30 saiyans that lived managed to stay hidden and escape Frieza’s wrath onto a Barron planet formally named Escanor, which they renamed to Dalas. They spent years building up their empire… looking up to the hope of the Super Saiyan which was legend. Years passed and the Saiyans still roamed oblivious… about Frieza’s death, his resurrection, about the Tournament of Power, the near destruction of the entire universe.
This brings us to Age 785. Frieza decides to create an heir or heiress to take over the rule of the Frieza force one day. In Age 786, Arctic is born, with more power than Frieza had on Namek. His power was immense at the newborn stage of his life, with a power level of 3,000,000 in his 1st Form. By Age 795, Arctic created his own army… the Arctic Army, after his father, Frieza went missing… inheriting his soldiers and other features. He quickly became the most feared being in the universe (under Lord Beerus of course). This was the problem to the saiyans. The remaining 30 Saiyans that survived multiplied into 50 Saiyan adults, and 20 Saiyan infants and children. With Ijen becoming the new King of the Saiyans. He had a son in age 799 named “Rodack” (But for the Sake of the RP He’s just Saiyan #1). By age 806 “Rota” (Saiyan #2), his younger sister was born. Meanwhile at the lowest of the low ranks, a Saiyan named Celrus (Saiyan #3) was born and was a strong boy. He was a bodyguard to the two siblings (Born in age 801). That brings us to our main Saiyan… Torrack. A young woman (about 5’4, Saiyan dark skin) met this strange presence by the side of a lake while getting water… (actually, If I’m going to make a fan manga I’m not disclosing this info xP) But yeah, Torrack was born in age 805, he was a young boy who always outdid himself day in and day out, becoming the “Saiyan with great potential”. His mother gave him a grey rug when he was born, she told him to treasure it, and he did. Age 812 Arctic’s Army found Planet Dalas, they tried to kill all the Saiyans, but in a last ditch effort, all the Adult Saiyans put their young ones on a ship gave them a chance to escape and live. (Here’s where it gets brutal)
The Saiyans were all killed. All 50-60 adults died. Even the elders. 10 of the children were sent to a place the Arctic Army could not reach as of yet… The planet Logitec. It was too far out of the frieza force’s reach, it was on the edge of Universe 7, almost into universe 6. When the saiyans landed, the ship was too heavy for some of the rocks it landed on, tipping half the ship into a pool of acid, killing all but 4 of the Saiyan Children Survivors. About a year of surviving off of the Logitecians went by and their normal Morning hunting session ended with Success when it happened. A ship closely resembling Freiza’s or Arctic’s (Exactly the same thing sooo) but smaller landed by the horizon. They went to check it out and found that there were Arctic Soldiers. One in particular called Bitt, who they fought and lost against. But they didn’t die…
They were all forcefully recruited into the Arctic Army, they all were given special training for several weeks… until they were ready. They all had almost the same power level, 35,000 or above.
Their first mission was on the planet Zootan. They had a rough time with the spells and stuff they casted, but they beat them surely enough. All that they were told to do was “Place the Beacon down in the Ground and leave” so they did that. A good 80KM away from the planet, and in a flash of light… the planet’s whole surface was wiped. They had to fight because if the planet’s total power level is above 100,000 then its’ impossible to do. After that first mission, they decided to all split up and fight on their own, come back in 2 years and have a Saiyan tournament.The other 3 while fairing well in the first 5 months got stronger, as Torrack was struggling. It was his pure nature. It held him back from wiping the planets he cleared. 2 Years go past. They all meet at Arctic’s Army HQ. It’s now Age 815, They’re all here but the 3rd Saiyan?
Celrus was missing, everyone made it back but him. They checked where he was after 2 days of his no return… it turns out he met his end on a planet named Earth. The 3 trained for about a year and set off to Earth with intensions to kill. Rodack let it slip that the planet Earth and a planet named Namek were rumoured to have Dragon Balls, Gather all 7 and you get 3 wishes. They could bring Celrus back that way. 6 months. It took them 6 months to get to planet Earth by space pod. When they got there, news reporters surrounded the whole area. Rodack blew them all away. They used their scouters to track down the strongest powers as they were the ones who probably killed Celrus. They found themselves staring down 2 pathetic Earthlings with a powerlevel of 8,000 and 9,000. Takato and Knicker where they. Saiyans being Saiyans decided to fight 1 at a time. Takato and Knicker both fought Rodack at once with the Turtle Hermit style that they had studied under, Raising their power levels to 60,000 and 70,000. It still proved no match against Rodack. Rodack was about to kill Knicker, but someone came in and stopped him. Someone strong, unexpected, but most of all fast. A black guy with a spiky hightop, wearing the same turtle hermit outfit that Takato and Knicker wore had stepped in.
(I’m gonna stop here lmao but there’s so much more if this is good and you actually read it then I guess I’ll proceed with making the novel/fan manga in more depth)
Also for the Sake of this RP I’ll Say this: instead of this Celrus going to Earth… Torrack does. He fights the Earthlings and gets knocked unconscious by all 3 Humans and loses all of this memories of everything except from his fighting experience.
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